Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VRB8ZX5G5F4043RJNJKFD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.000630
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stone between her ribs had been pulling for three days. Not a tug, not a pulse — a lean, the way a compass needle drifts toward something it wants to find. Rory had ignored it through two shifts at the Golden Empress, through a delivery run to Canary Wharf where the silver chain had gone hot enough to brand her sternum, through a night of lying flat on her back in the dark above Silas' bar pressing her palm over the pendant and feeling it hum against her skin like a trapped fly. Tonight it pulled her east. She'd mapped the pull the way she mapped any problem: starting with what she knew. The Heartstone sat under her collarbone, thumb-sized and deep crimson, and it warmed when the Hel portals breathed open. Whatever existed on the other side of that warmth, it lived in Richmond Park — specifically in the pocket of ancient oak that stood sentinel along the western boundary, trunks so thick she'd once rested her spine against one and felt the bark flex like skin. She crossed the park's perimeter at half past midnight. No gate. No ticket booth. Richmond after midnight existed in a different register than Richmond after nine — the car parks gaped empty, the ponds held nothing but black, and the only sound was her trainers on gravel and the tick of the pendant's chain against her collar. Ten minutes in, she heard the creek. Not the water of Petersham or the pond runoff — something wetter, something that moved with a rhythm that didn't match gravity. It came from her left, behind a stand of hawthorn. She stopped. The sound stopped. She checked her phone. 12:47 a.m. One bar of signal. The map showed her two hundred metres from the oak boundary she'd been walking toward since crossing the fence. The pendant went cold. That was wrong. The pendant did two things: it pulsed warm near Hel portals, or it did nothing at all. Cold meant — she pressed two fingers to it through her shirt. Not cold. Absent. The gemstone felt like a hole cut in her chest, like something had hollowed it out and left the silver chain dangling from an empty socket. She walked faster. The oaks announced themselves before she saw them: six trunks, maybe seven, planted in a rough circle with enough space between them to step through. Wildflowers crowded the ground at their base — yarrow, foxglove, clover — all of it in full bloom under a sky that carried no moon. That was the Grove's trick, the thing everyone who'd been here warned about. Light had no clock here. Rory stopped at the outermost tree and pressed her palm flat against the bark. It breathed. The surface expanded under her hand, then contracted, and the texture beneath her fingers shifted from fissured grey wood to something smoother and warmer. She pulled her hand back. A pale line remained where her palm had pressed — not a mark, an absence, as if the tree had inhaled her and kept the shape. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She turned her head left. Nothing between the oaks but the flowers and the dark and the trees themselves, which stood exactly where they'd stood a second ago. Except — one trunk sat at an angle she didn't remember. Not fallen, not tilted. Angled inward, the way a person leans toward something they're listening to. "You're not supposed to see that." The voice came from behind the farthest oak. Female. Low. The kind of voice that used the word "you" the way a lock uses a key. Rory faced the tree. "Who's there?" The pendant revived — a single hard thump against her ribs, like a second heartbeat trying to join hers. Nothing answered. The flowers along the ground trembled once, though the air hadn't moved. She stepped between the two nearest trunks and entered the clearing proper. The ground here was soft, a bed of moss and root that absorbed her footsteps entirely. The silence deepened in a way that felt structural — not an absence of noise but a wall built around it, thick enough to press against her eardrums. The pendant thumped again. Warmer now. Steady. The clearing held nothing. No stones beyond the oaks, no altar, no pool, no light source — yet she could see. The wildflowers threw a faint luminance upward, each petal carrying its own small ember of green-white that pooled around her ankles and threw her shadow in four directions at once. Her shadow. She looked down. The light came from below, from the flowers, which should have thrown her shadow upward and behind her. Instead four versions of her shape stretched outward from her feet: one long and thin toward the north tree, one squat and doubled toward the south, one crisp and sharp toward where she'd entered, and one — she stopped breathing — one was standing. Not stretching. Standing. Arms at its sides. Angled toward the tree where the voice had come from. Rory looked away. She fixed on the pendant, the crimson stone pulsing now in rhythm with the warmth, and she counted the pulses. Four per second. Steady. Whatever the Heartstone was calibrated for, it had found it. The fourth pulse came a fraction late. Then again. Late. Then again, and the warmth stuttered, and the stone's glow dimmed to the color of old blood. She backed up one step. Her heel found a root that hadn't been there a moment ago — or had been there all along, arranged precisely under the spot where she'd been standing since she crossed the circle. The root curled around the back of her ankle. Not tight. Present. The way a hand rests on a shoulder. "That's enough testing." The voice again, closer now, from the space between two trunks where the flowers had bent flat to the ground in a perfect semicircle. "You shouldn't have come alone." "I didn't come for you," Rory said. She kept her voice level. Pre-Law had trained her for rooms full of hostile questions; a dark clearing in a Fae pocket was just a different kind of deposition. "The pendant pulls toward Hel portals. I followed it." Silence. The flowers in the semicircle lifted, then flattened again, in the cadence of breathing. "It doesn't pull toward portals," the voice said. "It pulls toward whatever it was given to find." The pendant spiked hot — a sudden burn against her sternum that made her suck air through her teeth. She gripped the chain through her shirt. The gemstone felt alive, writhing under her fingers, its glow surging and collapsing like something in cardiac arrest. Around her, the four shadows shifted. Three of them stayed connected to her feet. The fourth detached. She watched it peel away from her like a second skin lifting, sliding across the moss toward the oak where the voice lived, and she watched it arrive at the trunk and press flat against the bark, and the bark closed over it the way water closes over a stone dropped into a pond. Rory's left wrist throbbed. The crescent scar — the one from a childhood accident she never talked about — pulsed with a heat that matched the pendant beat for beat. "Where am I?" she asked. "You know where you are." The voice sounded amused now, or the shape of amusement. Something shaped like a mouth around a word it didn't fully understand. "You've been here before. Not in this body." The pendant's glow steadied. Warm. Constant. Pointing — she realized — not outward toward a portal or inward toward her chest, but toward the seventh tree, the one she hadn't seen until now, standing alone at the far edge of the clearing where the light from the flowers didn't quite reach. The trunk bore a shape pressed into its bark. Not a mark. An absence. The same hollow she'd left in the first oak with her palm — except this one was larger, deeper, and formed in the exact outline of a person standing with their arms at their sides. The pendant thumped once and went still. Rory stood in the center of the clearing, four shadows absent and one missing from her feet, and she looked at the empty shape in the seventh tree, and the shape looked back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"calibrated"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"sentinel"
3"pulsed"
4"trembled"
5"footsteps"
6"silence"
7"calibrated"
8"perfect"
9"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1404
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1324
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Canary1
Wharf1
Tonight1
Heartstone2
Hel2
Richmond3
Park1
Petersham1
Grove1
Rory7
Fae1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"Canary"
2"Hel"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a hole cut in her chest, like"
1"quite reach"
57.55% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.425
wordCount1404
matches
0"not an absence of noise but a wall built around it, thick enough to press against her ea"
1"not outward toward a portal or inward toward her chest, but toward the seventh tree, the one she hadn't seen until now"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.87
std23.7
cv0.793
sampleLengths
094
15
280
39
448
57
637
729
84
961
103
1168
1214
132
1455
158
1655
176
1826
196
2019
2114
2263
2351
242
2565
2617
2737
287
293
3017
3158
3232
3345
3415
3517
3644
3717
3854
3930
405
4135
4251
439
4440
457
4633
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"was calibrated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences118
ratio0.153
matches
0"Not a tug, not a pulse — a lean, the way a compass needle drifts toward something it wants to find."
1"Whatever existed on the other side of that warmth, it lived in Richmond Park — specifically in the pocket of ancient oak that stood sentinel along the western boundary, trunks so thick she'd once rested her spine against one and felt the bark flex like skin."
2"Richmond after midnight existed in a different register than Richmond after nine — the car parks gaped empty, the ponds held nothing but black, and the only sound was her trainers on gravel and the tick of the pendant's chain against her collar."
3"Not the water of Petersham or the pond runoff — something wetter, something that moved with a rhythm that didn't match gravity."
4"Cold meant — she pressed two fingers to it through her shirt."
5"Wildflowers crowded the ground at their base — yarrow, foxglove, clover — all of it in full bloom under a sky that carried no moon."
6"A pale line remained where her palm had pressed — not a mark, an absence, as if the tree had inhaled her and kept the shape."
7"Except — one trunk sat at an angle she didn't remember."
8"The pendant revived — a single hard thump against her ribs, like a second heartbeat trying to join hers."
9"The silence deepened in a way that felt structural — not an absence of noise but a wall built around it, thick enough to press against her eardrums."
10"No stones beyond the oaks, no altar, no pool, no light source — yet she could see."
11"Instead four versions of her shape stretched outward from her feet: one long and thin toward the north tree, one squat and doubled toward the south, one crisp and sharp toward where she'd entered, and one — she stopped breathing — one was standing."
12"Her heel found a root that hadn't been there a moment ago — or had been there all along, arranged precisely under the spot where she'd been standing since she crossed the circle."
13"Pre-Law had trained her for rooms full of hostile questions; a dark clearing in a Fae pocket was just a different kind of deposition."
14"The pendant spiked hot — a sudden burn against her sternum that made her suck air through her teeth."
15"The crescent scar — the one from a childhood accident she never talked about — pulsed with a heat that matched the pendant beat for beat."
16"Pointing — she realized — not outward toward a portal or inward toward her chest, but toward the seventh tree, the one she hadn't seen until now, standing alone at the far edge of the clearing where the light from the flowers didn't quite reach."
17"The same hollow she'd left in the first oak with her palm — except this one was larger, deeper, and formed in the exact outline of a person standing with their arms at their sides."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount112
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.017857142857142856
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean11.9
std12.16
cv1.022
sampleLengths
011
121
262
35
415
519
646
79
82
93
1043
117
1222
1310
142
153
164
172
184
1919
204
213
2217
2312
242
251
2626
273
2825
2925
3013
315
3214
332
3424
355
3626
378
385
3923
4011
414
4212
436
448
451
461
4716
484
492
58.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3813559322033898
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners45
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Instead four versions of her"
1"Then again, and the warmth"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences87
matches
0"She'd mapped the pull the"
1"She crossed the park's perimeter"
2"It came from her left,"
3"She checked her phone."
4"She walked faster."
5"She pulled her hand back."
6"She turned her head left."
7"She stepped between the two"
8"She looked down."
9"She fixed on the pendant,"
10"She backed up one step."
11"Her heel found a root"
12"She kept her voice level."
13"She gripped the chain through"
14"She watched it peel away"
ratio0.172
63.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences87
matches
0"The stone between her ribs"
1"Rory had ignored it through"
2"Tonight it pulled her east."
3"She'd mapped the pull the"
4"The Heartstone sat under her"
5"Whatever existed on the other"
6"She crossed the park's perimeter"
7"Richmond after midnight existed in"
8"It came from her left,"
9"The sound stopped."
10"She checked her phone."
11"The map showed her two"
12"The pendant went cold."
13"That was wrong."
14"The pendant did two things:"
15"The gemstone felt like a"
16"She walked faster."
17"The oaks announced themselves before"
18"Wildflowers crowded the ground at"
19"That was the Grove's trick,"
ratio0.793
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Whatever existed on the other side of that warmth, it lived in Richmond Park — specifically in the pocket of ancient oak that stood sentinel along the western b…"
1"Not the water of Petersham or the pond runoff — something wetter, something that moved with a rhythm that didn't match gravity."
2"Wildflowers crowded the ground at their base — yarrow, foxglove, clover — all of it in full bloom under a sky that carried no moon."
3"The ground here was soft, a bed of moss and root that absorbed her footsteps entirely."
4"The silence deepened in a way that felt structural — not an absence of noise but a wall built around it, thick enough to press against her eardrums."
5"Her heel found a root that hadn't been there a moment ago — or had been there all along, arranged precisely under the spot where she'd been standing since she c…"
6"The pendant spiked hot — a sudden burn against her sternum that made her suck air through her teeth."
7"The gemstone felt alive, writhing under her fingers, its glow surging and collapsing like something in cardiac arrest."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.7387%