Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VT53SYQMF70BE4K4GXD88

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.002172
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck before it turned. Rory put her shoulder into the door and felt the frame give, and the landing light caught a charcoal sleeve, an ivory cane head, and a face she had scrubbed out of her memory in every way except the important ones. Lucien filled the narrow doorframe of Eva's flat like he owned the corridor behind him. "Before you close it." He raised one hand, palm out, rings catching the light. "Five minutes." "You get two." She kept her hand on the edge of the door. "How did you find this address?" "I find things. It's the whole trade." His eyes moved past her shoulder into the flat — the stacks of books eating the sofa, the scrolls weighted down with mugs, Ptolemy stretched across a pile of research notes like he was guarding state secrets. One amber eye, one black. Both settled back on her. "You cut your hair." "Eva's asleep. Keep your voice down." "Eva is in Prague. She left on the 7:40 from Paddington, standard class, window seat, and she took the Cabal letters with her." Lucien shifted his weight onto the cane. "Which means you are here alone with a cat and three deadbolts that wouldn't stop a determined child." Rory felt the flat behind her change shape. She leaned against the door and studied the way his knuckles sat on the ivory handle — white at the joints, no tremor in him, none at all. "You counted my friend's locks." "I counted everything. Old habit." He smiled with half his mouth. "You look well, Carter." "Don't." "Rory." "You don't get that one either." She held out her hand and caught Ptolemy, who had wound himself around her ankle with a chirp that made Lucien's mouth twitch. She shut the door on that twitch and left it on the latch so Eva's third lock stayed useless. Inside, the curry smell from the shop below had worked itself into the pages again. Lucien stepped in and the flat shrank to a cupboard. He touched nothing. His gaze tracked along the desk — Eva's diagrams, the red string, the photograph of the Marseille waterfront that Rory had turned face-down the week after she met him and had not turned back over. He turned it up with one finger. "I want that flat on the table and nowhere else," she said. "It was a good night." He released the photograph. "You danced with a waiter and told him your real name." "You told me afterwards that he reported to the Congregatio. That you'd known for six weeks." "Four." "Four." She set Ptolemy on the armchair. The cat circled twice and dropped. "You let me walk into a room full of people who wanted to know where the Carter girl had been living, and you watched me hand out my name like sweets." "And I got you out." "After." She pressed her thumb into the crescent scar on her left wrist, the way she did when a room got loud inside her head. "After I had already told them everything except where my parents live. You got me out after you used me to find out who in the Congregatio wanted me, and you didn't tell me until the taxi." Lucien's jaw set. He leaned the cane against the bookshelf and stood without it, both feet flat on Eva's rug, and he looked younger when he did that and she hated that she noticed. "You were bait." He said it the way a man states a price. "Yes. You were the cleanest bait I had, and I took it, and I would do it again because you are breathing and they are not." "You don't get to make that trade for me." "No. I don't." He looked at the desk again, at the notes, and she watched him read them the way other people breathe. "This is why I'm here. The Congregatio lost its file on you in February, and someone picked it up on Tuesday, and by Thursday it had been copied twice. One copy is in this building." The flat went quiet in a new way. Ptolemy's ear rotated toward the window. "You could have sent this." "I sent nothing. I came." "Then you're an idiot." She moved to the window and put the curtain an inch aside. Brick Lane ran wet under the lights, a man in a red jacket walking a dog he didn't have on a leash. "Who has the copy?" "A woman who calls herself Hélène. She works out of a shop on Fashion Street and she owes me money instead of favours, which is worse, because favours expire." Lucien crossed the flat in three steps and stood close enough that she caught his cologne — bergamot, and something underneath it that no human skin made. "She has photographs of you. Cardiff ones. Your mother's car. Your father's chambers." Rory let the curtain fall. Her reflection looked back at her in the dark glass, and behind it Lucien's, and the two of them stood framed together like something she had drawn badly in a notebook at seventeen and burned. "If you're here to trade me again—" "I'm here because I read the file she made and I found your father's address in it." His voice dropped. "And I drove here instead of to Cardiff. Two hours past my exit. My driver has been circling Bethnal Green since half eleven." She turned around. The flat kept its distance, all those books leaning away from them in their towers. "Two hours past your exit," she repeated. "I know what the exit looks like. I take it every month." "You've never taken it." "I have taken it every month since June." He held her gaze and did not blink, and the black eye gave nothing back while the amber one burned. "I sit in the car at the end of your parents' road and I make sure no one sits there longer than I do, and then I go back to London and I do not knock on their door because that is not mine to do." Rory's chest did something she refused to name. She picked up a scroll and put it down again and swept Eva's notes into a stack with the edge of her hand. "You don't get to tell me you were outside my mother's house for eight months and call that—" "It's not a claim on anything." "It's worse than a claim." She looked at him and the words came out thin. "A claim I could have refused." Lucien reached past her and turned the photograph face-down again. His sleeve brushed her wrist, at the scar, and he stopped there with his hand over the picture and did not move it away. "You can still refuse this one." "Which one is that?" He didn't answer. Down on the street, the man with the invisible dog passed the curry house again, the same direction, and Ptolemy stood up on the armchair with his tail thick and low.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:08:35.967Z" 9/23/2026, 10:08:35 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"weight"
2"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1180
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount664
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Ptolemy5
One1
Rory5
Lucien8
Marseille1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"One"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1180
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.11
std20.74
cv0.826
sampleLengths
048
115
216
319
458
56
648
736
85
915
101
111
1248
1363
147
1512
1620
1716
181
1944
205
2162
2234
2339
249
2558
2614
275
285
2942
3069
3140
327
3343
3418
357
3612
374
3874
3931
4018
416
4221
4334
446
454
4634
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was guarding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences79
ratio0.051
matches
0"\"I find things. It's the whole trade.\" His eyes moved past her shoulder into the flat — the stacks of books eating the sofa, the scrolls weighted down with mugs, Ptolemy stretched across a pile of research notes like he was guarding state secrets."
1"She leaned against the door and studied the way his knuckles sat on the ivory handle — white at the joints, no tremor in him, none at all."
2"His gaze tracked along the desk — Eva's diagrams, the red string, the photograph of the Marseille waterfront that Rory had turned face-down the week after she met him and had not turned back over."
3"\"A woman who calls herself Hélène. She works out of a shop on Fashion Street and she owes me money instead of favours, which is worse, because favours expire.\" Lucien crossed the flat in three steps and stood close enough that she caught his cologne — bergamot, and something underneath it that no human skin made."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount662
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.027190332326283987
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0015105740181268882
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.94
std12.24
cv0.819
sampleLengths
07
141
215
314
42
513
66
744
85
95
104
116
1230
1318
148
1528
165
1711
184
191
201
2129
2219
2315
2410
253
2635
277
2812
299
3011
3116
321
337
346
3531
365
3725
3837
393
4031
4113
4226
439
4423
4535
468
476
485
495
62.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4177215189873418
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences45
matches
0"He raised one hand, palm"
1"She kept her hand on"
2"His eyes moved past her"
3"She leaned against the door"
4"He smiled with half his"
5"She held out her hand"
6"She shut the door on"
7"He touched nothing."
8"His gaze tracked along the"
9"He turned it up with"
10"He released the photograph"
11"She set Ptolemy on the"
12"She pressed her thumb into"
13"He leaned the cane against"
14"He said it the way"
15"He looked at the desk"
16"She moved to the window"
17"Her reflection looked back at"
18"His voice dropped"
19"She turned around."
ratio0.556
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck before"
1"Rory put her shoulder into"
2"Lucien filled the narrow doorframe"
3"He raised one hand, palm"
4"She kept her hand on"
5"His eyes moved past her"
6"Both settled back on her."
7"Lucien shifted his weight onto"
8"Rory felt the flat behind"
9"She leaned against the door"
10"He smiled with half his"
11"She held out her hand"
12"She shut the door on"
13"Lucien stepped in and the"
14"He touched nothing."
15"His gaze tracked along the"
16"He turned it up with"
17"He released the photograph"
18"She set Ptolemy on the"
19"The cat circled twice and"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.08
81.3010%