Run: 2026-09-23-01M36W53F1R2HVRCESC41W540X

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.000592
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The service entrance behind the old Camden Town lock-up had been chained shut for years, but someone had cut through it clean and hung the chain back up like it belonged there. Quinn ducked under the padlocked links and descended the concrete steps into the dark, her torch cutting a narrow beam through the air thick with the smell of damp earth and rust. A DC named Rees waited at the bottom, yellow tape already strung across the tunnel mouth. "Detective. Down here." She stepped over the tape and into what had once been a platform. Tiled walls curved overhead, half the posters torn away, the rest sun-bleached to nothing. But somebody had done more than squat here. Market stalls lined the length of the platform — rough timber and tarpaulin, arranged in two rows with enough space between for a crowd to move through. Empty crates stacked at their bases. Faded price tags nailed to the wood with no prices written on them. "You said a body," Quinn said. "That's the thing." Rees shifted his weight, hands stuffed in his jacket pockets. "There is a body. But nobody knows whose it is." They walked further down the platform. The torch beam caught on shopping bags, a fold-out table, tarpaulin weighted with bricks. Someone had knocked over a stall on their way out. Dried herbs scattered across the tiles. Then she saw it. A man lay on his back near the far end of the platform, arms spread, legs straight. He wore a grey suit that looked expensive until you saw the mud on the cuffs. His shoes were clean — not scuffed, not dusty — as though he'd never walked on any surface rougher than carpet. His face was calm, eyes shut, mouth slightly open. Quinn knelt beside him. The air here was colder. She could see her breath. "Time of death?" "Pathologist puts it at four to six hours ago. But get this — no wounds. Not one. No bruising, no ligature marks, no defensive injuries on the hands." Rees crouched on the other side, careful not to touch anything. "Heart stopped, they said. That's all they could tell me. Heart stopped and he's just… here." Quinn leaned closer to the man's left wrist. A watch — not his own. The leather band was old, tooled at the edges, and it sat loose on a wrist too narrow for it. She lifted the dead man's hand gently. His fingers were calloused at the tips, like a tradesman's. "Whose watch is that?" "Working on it. No ID on him, no phone, no wallet. Just the watch." Rees rubbed his jaw. "I ran it through forensics. They found a partial print on the clasp that doesn't match him." "So somebody put it on him after." "That's what I'm saying." Rees stood and looked up at the tunnel ceiling. "Place like this — an abandoned station, nobody around, no CCTV. Whoever did this wanted him found but didn't want to be found doing it." Quinn straightened up. She walked the length of the platform, her torch swinging across the stalls. Something caught the beam — a small brass object sitting on top of a crate, half-hidden under a fold of canvas. She pulled the canvas back. A compass. Palm-sized, its casing greened with verdigris, its face etched with markings she didn't recognise. The needle sat perfectly still, pointing not north but directly at the dead man. She picked it up. The casing was warm in her palm, warmer than the air around it. "Rees." He came over, looked at what she held. "That's not his either. Forensics didn't bag anything like that." "Did anyone bag it?" "No. It wasn't there when we arrived. I checked." Quinn turned the compass over. On the back, scratched into the metal, were three words: *Shade-made, Camden.* She held it up to the torch. The needle twitched — just barely — and then settled back to point at the body. "Someone dropped this after your team swept the scene." "Or someone moved it." Rees took a step back. "Quinn, I've been down here two hours. Nobody's come through that entrance. I would've seen them." She looked at him. His face was the colour of the tiles behind him. She handed him the compass. "Hold this." He took it, held it at arm's length like it might bite. Quinn crouched beside the dead man again. The leather watch on his wrist caught the torchlight. She unclasped it carefully, turned it over. Engraved inside the band — tiny letters, almost worn away: *M. Morris, 2004.* Her stomach dropped. She kept her face still. "M. Morris," she said. "Anyone we know?" She closed her fingers around the watch. Three years. Three years since DS Morris went dark on that case in Deptford and never came back, and the file said missing, presumed deceased, and nothing after that. She'd read the file enough times to know every word by heart, and nowhere in it had she seen a leather watch. "My old partner," she said. "Or his." Rees blinked. "Morris is the one who—" "I know who he is." She slipped the watch into an evidence bag from her pocket, sealed it, and looked at the body again. The man's suit was expensive but the shirt underneath was threadbare at the collar. His nails were clipped short, squared off. A builder, maybe. Or a man who'd had money once and spent it. "Run him through missing persons. Grey suit, forty-five to fifty-five, no ID." "We've already put out a call." Rees paused. "What about the compass? Those symbols — you know what they are?" "I don't." "Because I asked the lab tech upstairs, and she said they're not standard forensic marks. She said they looked older." Quinn took the compass back from him. The needle still pointed at the dead man. She turned a full circle — the needle followed the body, locked onto it regardless of orientation. "That's not how compasses work," she said. "No." She placed the compass on the crate where she'd found it, but this time she watched. The needle drifted — slow, almost imperceptible — and settled pointing down the tunnel, past the body, toward a section of wall where the tiles had crumbled away to bare brick. "Shine your torch there." Rees did. Behind the broken tiles, a gap opened into the wall — wider than a crack, wide enough for a man to slide through sideways. The air that came out of it was colder than the platform. Nobody had searched behind those tiles. The scene log on Rees's clipboard didn't mention it. "The tech who bagged the body — did she sweep the walls?" "No. We focused on the platform." Quinn pulled on a glove and pressed her hand to the brick. It hummed, faintly, like a struck tuning fork. The compass on the crate behind her spun once, fast, and stopped. She looked at Rees. "Get on the radio. Tell them we need this tunnel sealed and nobody else comes down until I say so." "Sealed? Quinn, it's a dead end behind there—" "Seal it." He held her gaze for a moment, then clipped the radio to his collar and walked back toward the entrance. His footsteps echoed up the stairwell. Quinn stayed beside the body. The compass sat on its crate. The dead man's clean shoes pointed at the wall, and she knelt again and ran her torch along the floor between his heels and the broken tiles — not a mark, not a scuff, not a single drag mark on the dusty concrete. He hadn't walked there. He hadn't been carried there. She looked at the leather watch sealed in the bag, at the name inside it, at the dead man's untroubled face. Somebody had arranged all of this. The man, the watch, the compass left where forensics hadn't yet looked. A trail laid out for her — but she couldn't tell if she was the detective or the one being tested.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"perfectly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"stomach"
3"standard"
4"footsteps"
5"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1343
ratio0.004
matches
0"Shade-made, Camden."
1"M. Morris, 2004." 1/1/2004, 12:00:00 AM
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.08% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1020
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rees"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rees"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Town1
Rees11
Quinn10
Morris2
Deptford1
persons
0"Rees"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Deptford"
globalScore0.961
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.745
wordCount1343
matches
0"not north but directly at the dead man"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean22.02
std19.77
cv0.898
sampleLengths
064
116
23
381
46
523
636
74
863
914
103
1155
1251
134
1435
157
1638
1742
1830
1917
201
2118
224
239
2440
259
2625
2719
282
2912
3036
318
324
333
3458
357
367
375
3853
3912
4020
412
4220
4332
447
451
4647
474
4838
4915
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences95
matches
0"been chained"
1"were calloused"
2"were clipped"
3"been carried"
4"being tested"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences125
ratio0.088
matches
0"Market stalls lined the length of the platform — rough timber and tarpaulin, arranged in two rows with enough space between for a crowd to move through."
1"His shoes were clean — not scuffed, not dusty — as though he'd never walked on any surface rougher than carpet."
2"A watch — not his own."
3"Something caught the beam — a small brass object sitting on top of a crate, half-hidden under a fold of canvas."
4"The needle twitched — just barely — and then settled back to point at the body."
5"Engraved inside the band — tiny letters, almost worn away: *M."
6"She turned a full circle — the needle followed the body, locked onto it regardless of orientation."
7"The needle drifted — slow, almost imperceptible — and settled pointing down the tunnel, past the body, toward a section of wall where the tiles had crumbled away to bare brick."
8"Behind the broken tiles, a gap opened into the wall — wider than a crack, wide enough for a man to slide through sideways."
9"The dead man's clean shoes pointed at the wall, and she knelt again and ran her torch along the floor between his heels and the broken tiles — not a mark, not a scuff, not a single drag mark on the dusty concrete."
10"A trail laid out for her — but she couldn't tell if she was the detective or the one being tested."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1011
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03461918892185954
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006923837784371909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.74
std7.99
cv0.744
sampleLengths
032
132
216
33
413
514
68
727
86
913
106
1113
1210
136
1414
1510
166
174
1817
1916
2021
219
224
235
245
253
2639
2716
288
296
3020
317
3210
334
3418
3517
367
3713
3825
393
4013
4121
425
432
4414
4514
464
4713
481
498
68.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.432
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners54
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.012
69.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences85
matches
0"She stepped over the tape"
1"They walked further down the"
2"He wore a grey suit"
3"His shoes were clean —"
4"His face was calm, eyes"
5"She could see her breath."
6"She lifted the dead man's"
7"His fingers were calloused at"
8"She walked the length of"
9"She pulled the canvas back."
10"She picked it up."
11"He came over, looked at"
12"She looked at him."
13"His face was the colour"
14"She handed him the compass."
15"He took it, held it"
16"She unclasped it carefully, turned"
17"Her stomach dropped."
18"She kept her face still."
19"She closed her fingers around"
ratio0.376
30.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences85
matches
0"The service entrance behind the"
1"Quinn ducked under the padlocked"
2"A DC named Rees waited"
3"She stepped over the tape"
4"Rees shifted his weight, hands"
5"They walked further down the"
6"The torch beam caught on"
7"Someone had knocked over a"
8"A man lay on his"
9"He wore a grey suit"
10"His shoes were clean —"
11"His face was calm, eyes"
12"Quinn knelt beside him."
13"The air here was colder."
14"She could see her breath."
15"Rees crouched on the other"
16"Quinn leaned closer to the"
17"A watch — not his"
18"The leather band was old,"
19"She lifted the dead man's"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rees shifted, hands stuffed in his jacket pockets"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1700%