Run: 2026-09-23-01M36W6SX6XKER99F0GBEJ11YX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.000571
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs down from the surface had no railings. Detective Harlow Quinn counted fourteen steps before the last one dropped away into black, and she stood on the lip of it with her torch beam cutting ahead through a throat of tiled brick, the walls sweating something that smelled like old copper and wet stone. Camden had turned out an unremarkable Tuesday above — market stalls half-packed, a dog barking at a bicycle — but beneath it the tunnel opened into a platform she'd never logged, never mapped, never seen in any survey of the Northern line's abandoned sections. DS Patel waited at the bottom, hands in the pockets of his coat, his face pale in the spill of a battery lantern. "You're sure this is where he was found?" Quinn asked. "That's what the uniforms logged. Body's ten metres along." Patel swung his lantern toward a side corridor, its mouth framed by a steel arch with the old roundel sign pried clean off, leaving four bolt-holes in the brick. "They brought him up about twenty minutes ago." Quinn descended the last step. The air changed as she reached the platform floor — thicker, warmer, carrying a sweetness underneath the copper that she couldn't place. She followed Patel's light into the corridor and found the area taped off in blue-and-white chevrons, the floor swept with the kind of care that forensics reserved for scenes they understood. The body was gone, but the marker remained: chalk outline, evidence numbers, a small stand of collection bags. She crouched beside the outline and let the beam travel along it. "DS Harwood. Twenty-nine. Plain clothes, off duty, a call came in from his mobile at 2:40 this morning." "His own phone called dispatch?" "Pocket dial, probably. The call log shows three seconds, then open line, then a crash. When patrol arrived, he was already dead." Patel pulled out his notebook, glanced at it, put it away again. "Pathology will confirm, but prelim says blunt force trauma to the back of the skull. Something heavy. Could be a mugging gone sideways — this area's seen worse." Quinn didn't answer. She was looking at the floor around the chalk outline. The dust on the platform was uneven — a fine layer of it everywhere except in a rough circle maybe a metre wide, centred on where Harwood's head would have been. Clean. Almost swept. She moved her beam along the edge of the circle and found it wasn't circular at all: it had edges, straight edges, a pattern of angles like something had been drawn and then the drawing had been scuffed away, leaving only the ghost of it in the dust. "You see this?" Patel stepped closer and looked down. "Someone knelt there. Probably the first responder." "There are four responders. Four sets of boot prints, all outside the tape line. No one came inside until the body was documented." She pointed with her chin. "Look at the prints nearest the outline. Heel-to-toe, clean tread — that's a standard-issue patrol boot, size ten. One pair, straight line in, straight line out. Whoever knelt here wasn't wearing those boots." Patel's jaw tightened. He didn't say anything. Quinn rose and walked further down the corridor. The tunnel curved gently to the left, and around the curve the brickwork changed — older, rougher, with patches of mortar that looked wet and fresh in places. Her torch caught something on the wall at eye level: a thin groove, scored into the brick, running horizontally for about a foot before it stopped. She traced it with a gloved finger. "Not damage," she said. "Too clean. Cut with something sharp, drawn in one stroke." "Could be old. Decades of this place sitting under Camden—" "Look at the mortar above it." She angled her beam up. The mortar was crumbling in fine crumbs, but directly above the groove it was intact, undisturbed, as though whatever had made the cut had protected it from whatever had eroded everything around it. "That's fresh. Weeks at most." She continued along the corridor. Two more grooves appeared on the opposite wall, lower down, near knee height. Then a third set, higher. She stood back and looked at all three together. The angles were different — the first nearly horizontal, the second at maybe thirty degrees, the third steep. From a distance, stepping backward until her shoulders touched the wall, the three cuts formed a shape. A partial one. Incomplete. "The Veil Market." The words left her mouth before she had finished thinking them. Patel's expression went blank. "The what?" "Black market. Sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information. Runs out of abandoned Underground stations." She kept her eyes on the wall. "Moves locations every full moon. The last report put it under Camden." "We've had no credible intel on any such thing." "No? Maybe your informants don't pay in bone." Quinn reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small object she'd been carrying for months — a disc of yellowed bone the size of a two-pound coin, smooth on both sides, warm to the touch. She held it up between her thumb and forefinger. "I found one of these at the Morris scene. Three years ago. Kept it because the evidence log had no classification for it." Patel stared at the token. "Quinn—" "DS Harwood was assigned to Financial Crimes. Nothing in his caseload touches Camden, touches the underground, touches anything worth killing him for on a Tuesday night." She tucked the bone back into her pocket. "But he's found at the doorstep of a market that sells secrets and moves on the full moon, and the floor around him shows evidence of a ritual someone tried to wipe clean, and there are marks on the walls that follow a pattern I've only seen once before." She met his eyes. "Once. At the scene where Morris died." Patel exhaled through his nose. "You're connecting this to Morris." "I'm connecting the *location* to Morris. The evidence tells me this isn't a mugging. No wallet taken — he still had three hundred quid in his coat. Phone undamaged. No defensive wounds." She counted them off on her fingers. "The clean circle on the floor. The scored grooves on the walls. The warmth in this corridor — it's fifteen degrees warmer down here than the surface, and the ventilation's been sealed since the sixties." "That could be a gas pipe. A water main—" "Then it would smell like a water main." She crouched again by the chalk outline and swept her beam low across the floor, just above the tiles. The dust stirred, and beneath it — just at the edge of the clean circle — she saw it. A faint discoloration, darker than the surrounding brick, arranged in a line that continued under the tape. She lifted the edge of the tape carefully and followed the discolouration with her light. It curved around the outline in a wide arc, almost completing a ring before it vanished into the wall where the corridor curved. "Someone drew a circle around him," she said. "On the floor. Then tried to erase it. But the brick absorbed the pigment where the dust didn't, and whatever they used to clean it — it didn't work on the tile, only on the loose dust on top." Patel crouched beside her. He was quiet for a long moment. "Prelim on cause of death said blunt force trauma. Back of the skull." He looked up at her. "But if someone drew a circle around him and stood outside it—" "Then the blow came from someone standing at the edge of that ring, reaching in." Quinn traced the arc with her torch. "Radius of roughly half a metre. The attacker needed a reach of exactly that distance. Either they were tall — very tall — or they used a tool. A long one." She paused. "Harwood's phone log. The three-second call. Crash." She stood up. "He wasn't pocket dialing. He was calling for help and something broke the line." The corridor held its breath. Somewhere deep in the tunnel, water ticked against stone in a rhythm that didn't match anything else Quinn could hear. "Get forensics back down here," she said. "I want every square centimetre of this platform photographed before anyone touches it. And pull everything the Met has on a location called the Veil Market — if it doesn't exist, I want to know that too." She walked back toward the main platform, her beam sliding across the walls as she passed the three grooves again. This time she noticed something she hadn't seen on the first pass — between the second and third cut, half-hidden by a patch of old efflorescence, a symbol pressed into the mortar. Not scored. Pressed. Carved with a tool small enough to fit between two bricks.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.905
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.048
89.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"carefully"
2"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"traced"
2"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1479
ratio0.001
matches
0"location"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount859
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Patel"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Patel"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Tuesday1
Northern1
Patel10
Harwood1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Patel"
3"Harwood"
places(empty)
globalScore0.918
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like old copper and wet stone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1479
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.07
std28.51
cv0.79
sampleLengths
099
123
210
346
458
530
618
75
862
913
1082
113
1213
1361
147
1562
167
1714
1810
1949
2067
214
2214
236
2434
259
2677
276
2894
2910
3074
319
3263
3338
3447
3511
3630
3779
3825
3944
4066
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"was gone"
1"been drawn"
2"been scuffed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was looking"
1"was crumbling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences90
ratio0.089
matches
0"Camden had turned out an unremarkable Tuesday above — market stalls half-packed, a dog barking at a bicycle — but beneath it the tunnel opened into a platform she'd never logged, never mapped, never seen in any survey of the Northern line's abandoned sections."
1"The air changed as she reached the platform floor — thicker, warmer, carrying a sweetness underneath the copper that she couldn't place."
2"The dust on the platform was uneven — a fine layer of it everywhere except in a rough circle maybe a metre wide, centred on where Harwood's head would have been."
3"The tunnel curved gently to the left, and around the curve the brickwork changed — older, rougher, with patches of mortar that looked wet and fresh in places."
4"The angles were different — the first nearly horizontal, the second at maybe thirty degrees, the third steep."
5"\"No? Maybe your informants don't pay in bone.\" Quinn reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small object she'd been carrying for months — a disc of yellowed bone the size of a two-pound coin, smooth on both sides, warm to the touch."
6"The dust stirred, and beneath it — just at the edge of the clean circle — she saw it."
7"This time she noticed something she hadn't seen on the first pass — between the second and third cut, half-hidden by a patch of old efflorescence, a symbol pressed into the mortar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount855
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03391812865497076
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007017543859649123
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean16.43
std13.12
cv0.799
sampleLengths
09
146
244
323
410
538
68
75
822
931
1018
1112
1218
135
1434
1528
163
1710
1831
191
202
2148
223
236
247
2528
2633
273
284
298
3028
3126
327
334
3410
3510
3611
3733
385
395
4013
415
429
4318
4417
453
461
4714
484
492
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then a third set, higher."
1"Somewhere deep in the tunnel,"
ratio0.035
58.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences57
matches
0"She followed Patel's light into"
1"She crouched beside the outline"
2"She was looking at the"
3"She moved her beam along"
4"She pointed with her chin"
5"He didn't say anything."
6"Her torch caught something on"
7"She traced it with a"
8"She angled her beam up"
9"She continued along the corridor."
10"She stood back and looked"
11"She kept her eyes on"
12"She held it up between"
13"She tucked the bone back"
14"She met his eyes"
15"She counted them off on"
16"She crouched again by the"
17"She lifted the edge of"
18"It curved around the outline"
19"He was quiet for a"
ratio0.404
3.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences57
matches
0"The stairs down from the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn counted fourteen"
2"Camden had turned out an"
3"DS Patel waited at the"
4"Patel swung his lantern toward"
5"Quinn descended the last step."
6"The air changed as she"
7"She followed Patel's light into"
8"The body was gone, but"
9"She crouched beside the outline"
10"Patel pulled out his notebook,"
11"Quinn didn't answer."
12"She was looking at the"
13"The dust on the platform"
14"She moved her beam along"
15"Patel stepped closer and looked"
16"She pointed with her chin"
17"Patel's jaw tightened."
18"He didn't say anything."
19"Quinn rose and walked further"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn counted fourteen steps before the last one dropped away into black, and she stood on the lip of it with her torch beam cutting ahead thro…"
1"She followed Patel's light into the corridor and found the area taped off in blue-and-white chevrons, the floor swept with the kind of care that forensics reser…"
2"The tunnel curved gently to the left, and around the curve the brickwork changed — older, rougher, with patches of mortar that looked wet and fresh in places."
3"The mortar was crumbling in fine crumbs, but directly above the groove it was intact, undisturbed, as though whatever had made the cut had protected it from wha…"
4"A faint discoloration, darker than the surrounding brick, arranged in a line that continued under the tape."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.5305%