Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WAV8ZMXSTNHJXNCWR5RWV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000793
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the entrance hummed its usual thin electric note into the London drizzle, and Silas Blackwood sat in his usual booth with a glass of whisky he had not touched in twenty minutes. The Raven's Nest had emptied out after the football match, leaving behind a trail of ashtrays and wet footprints on the floorboards. He turned the silver signet ring on his right hand, round and round, the way he did when his knee ached and the rain pressed low against the windows. The bell above the door rang once. A man stepped in, shaking water from a coat that cost more than the bar made in a week. He was thinner than Silas remembered, or perhaps the coat just hung better than anything he used to wear. His hair had gone steel at the temples and he'd trimmed it close, the way men do when they've decided vanity is no longer worth the effort. Silas did not move. He watched the man's eyes sweep the room — the old maps pinned to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of places most people would never visit — and land on him with the particular stillness of recognition. "Silas Blackwood." The voice carried a Welsh flatness that had not changed, though everything around it had. Owen Pryce stood at the edge of the booth, rain beading on the shoulders of his coat, a smile pulling at one corner of his mouth as though he'd found a coin in the pavement. "Owen." Silas raised his glass an inch and set it down again. "Sit." Owen slid onto the bench opposite, his knees brushing the edge of the table. He pulled off his gloves finger by finger, deliberate, the way a man does when he wants to control the pace of something. A wedding ring left a pale band on his left hand. "You still haunt this place," Owen said, glancing at the ceiling where a water stain spread like a continent none of the maps depicted. "I don't haunt anything. I own it." "That's what haunts do." Owen flagged down the bartender with a nod. "Whisky. Whatever he's having." Silas waited until the glass arrived before he spoke again. "Six years. Maybe seven. Prague was — when was Prague?" "The spring of 2017." Owen lifted the glass and drank half of it in one motion. "You'd think I'd have forgotten by now. Turns out the things you bury deepest are the ones that surface when you least want them." Silas said nothing. He looked at Owen's hands — manicured now, no calluses, the nails clipped close. The hands of someone who sat behind a desk or held a pen rather than a weapon. The ring on Owen's left hand caught the low light. "I heard you opened a bar," Owen continued, running his thumb along the rim of his glass. "When I heard, I thought — of all the things Silas Blackwood could do with his retirement, a bar. Suits you, though. You always did prefer the role of the man who watches rather than the man who acts." "You act plenty," Silas said. "You always did." Owen's smile tightened. He set the glass down and folded his hands on the table. "I'm in finance now. Asset management. Boring work, but it pays for the coat." He nodded down at himself as if to confirm the evidence. "Moved to Zurich in 2019. Anna and I — my wife — we've got a daughter. She's four. Her name's Cerys." "Good name." "A Welsh name for a girl who'll never learn the language." He said it lightly, the way people do when the lightness is the only thing holding them upright. "That's the part that gets me, actually. Not the language. The fact that I left and never looked back, and nobody down there even noticed." "You didn't come back for Dai's funeral." The words landed between them and stayed. Owen looked at the tabletop, at the ring of condensation his glass had left, and nodded once. "No," he said. "I didn't." Silas leaned back against the booth's worn upholstery. The old photographs on the wall behind Owen showed a city street at night, a man in a doorway, the blur of a car pulling away. He had hung them there himself years ago, from a file he should have destroyed. "Dai would have understood," Owen said. "He always said I was the one who'd get out." "Getting out isn't the same as disappearing." "Isn't it?" Owen's eyes came up, bright and hard. "You tell me, Silas. You pulled yourself out of Prague and limped into a bar in Soho and called it living. What's the difference between that and a man in Zurich buying property he doesn't need?" "The difference is I didn't tell myself a story about why I left." Owen exhaled through his nose — not quite a laugh, not quite agreement. He reached for his glass and finished it. The bartender appeared without being asked and set down a fresh one. "You look well," Silas said, and meant it, though the words came out flatter than he intended. "I look like a man who's gained stone and lost his accent." Owen rolled his shoulders. "Anna says I've become English. I told her that was the most insulting thing anyone had ever said to me, and she didn't understand why." "She wouldn't." "No. She wouldn't." Owen paused. "How's the knee?" "Rainy days, mostly. Today counts." "You should see someone about that." "I saw someone in Prague. That's precisely the problem." Owen nodded slowly, the way a man does when he recognizes a door he has no key for. The neon sign outside flickered once, casting green across the wet window, and for a moment both of them sat in its light without speaking. A couple at the far end of the bar argued in whispers. Somewhere a glass clinked against a counter. "I found your address through Eva," Owen said at last. "She didn't give it easily. She wanted to know what I wanted." "What did you tell her?" "I told her I owed you an apology and I didn't know how else to deliver it." He rubbed his thumb against the side of his glass. "She said you'd hear it if I came in person. Then she hung up." Silas turned the signet ring once more. The metal had grown warm against his skin. "You don't owe me an apology, Owen." "I owe you a conversation. Six years of one. The apology is just the entry fee." He leaned forward, forearms on the table. "I heard about what happened — not just Prague, but after. The knee. The retirement. The way they eased you out of the service like you were a pair of shoes that had worn through. And I thought — he was my friend, and I let him go without saying a word." "You were my friend," Silas corrected. The silence that followed had weight to it — the kind that presses against the ribs and makes breathing feel deliberate. Owen looked down at his hands, at the wedding ring, at the pale line where a watch used to sit before he'd replaced it with something quieter. "I know," Owen said. "That's the part I can't fix." Silas picked up his whisky. The ice had melted into the amber, diluting it to almost nothing. He drank it anyway and set the glass back down with a sound that rang louder than it should have in the empty bar. "Cerys," he said. "Is she Welsh-looking?" Owen's face changed — the guardedness went slack, and something raw and unpracticed took its place. "She's got Anna's blonde hair and my father's jaw. When she frowns, she looks exactly like him. Anna's terrified she'll be stubborn. I told her that's the good part." "Your father was stubborn enough for a village of ten." "He was." Owen's voice caught on the word and he covered it with a drink. When he set the glass down, his hand trembled slightly against the wood. "He died in 2020. Pneumonia. I couldn't — the borders were shut. I watched it happen over a screen, Silas. My father died and I watched it through a laptop." Silas reached across the table and touched the edge of Owen's wrist — once, brief — and pulled back. "I know what that's like," he said. "Not the same way. But I know it." Owen swallowed and straightened. He reached into his coat and produced a folded piece of paper, which he set on the table between them. "My address. All of them — Zurich, the flat I keep in Cardiff for when we visit my mother. Phone numbers, email, everything. If you want to reach me, you don't have to go through Eva." Silas looked at the paper but did not pick it up. "And if I don't?" Owen held his gaze. "Then I'll know I came all this way for nothing, and I'll deserve it." The rain thickened against the windows. The green neon buzzed its thin note into the dark, and the old photographs watched from the walls — men in doorways, streets at night, cars pulling away — and neither of them reached for the paper.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:17:42.951Z" 9/23/2026, 10:17:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.373
leniency0.746
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"precisely"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1553
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount934
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Owen"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Owen"
discoveredNames
London1
Silas14
Blackwood1
Raven1
Nest1
Welsh1
Pryce1
Owen25
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Pryce"
5"Owen"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.162
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a laugh, not quite agreement"
1"not quite agreement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.644
wordCount1553
matches
0"not just Prague, but after"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean27.25
std21.73
cv0.798
sampleLengths
087
172
241
32
450
513
648
724
87
916
1020
1140
1244
1356
148
1561
162
1754
187
1924
205
2149
2216
237
2445
2513
2633
2717
2841
292
308
315
326
339
3462
3522
365
3741
3815
397
4075
416
4248
4310
4441
456
4645
4710
4858
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences108
ratio0.065
matches
0"He watched the man's eyes sweep the room — the old maps pinned to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of places most people would never visit — and land on him with the particular stillness of recognition."
1"He looked at Owen's hands — manicured now, no calluses, the nails clipped close."
2"Owen exhaled through his nose — not quite a laugh, not quite agreement."
3"The silence that followed had weight to it — the kind that presses against the ribs and makes breathing feel deliberate."
4"Owen's face changed — the guardedness went slack, and something raw and unpracticed took its place."
5"Silas reached across the table and touched the edge of Owen's wrist — once, brief — and pulled back."
6"The green neon buzzed its thin note into the dark, and the old photographs watched from the walls — men in doorways, streets at night, cars pulling away — and neither of them reached for the paper."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount926
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"usual thin electric note"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.032397408207343416
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004319654427645789
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean14.38
std10.35
cv0.72
sampleLengths
036
122
229
37
419
519
627
74
837
92
1015
1135
1212
131
1414
1523
1611
1724
187
1912
204
2110
2210
2316
2424
253
2614
2717
2810
2917
3039
315
323
333
3412
3525
3621
372
3829
3925
407
417
4217
433
442
458
4626
4715
486
4910
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2962962962962963
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners32
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Somewhere a glass clinked against"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences63
matches
0"He turned the silver signet"
1"He was thinner than Silas"
2"His hair had gone steel"
3"He watched the man's eyes"
4"He pulled off his gloves"
5"He looked at Owen's hands"
6"He set the glass down"
7"He nodded down at himself"
8"He said it lightly, the"
9"He had hung them there"
10"He reached for his glass"
11"He rubbed his thumb against"
12"He leaned forward, forearms on"
13"He drank it anyway and"
14"He reached into his coat"
ratio0.238
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences63
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"The Raven's Nest had emptied"
2"He turned the silver signet"
3"The bell above the door"
4"A man stepped in, shaking"
5"He was thinner than Silas"
6"His hair had gone steel"
7"Silas did not move."
8"He watched the man's eyes"
9"The voice carried a Welsh"
10"Owen Pryce stood at the"
11"Silas raised his glass an"
12"Owen slid onto the bench"
13"He pulled off his gloves"
14"A wedding ring left a"
15"Owen said, glancing at the"
16"Owen flagged down the bartender"
17"Silas waited until the glass"
18"Owen lifted the glass and"
19"Silas said nothing."
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Owen Pryce stood at the edge of the booth, rain beading on the shoulders of his coat, a smile pulling at one corner of his mouth as though he'd found a coin in …"
1"The silence that followed had weight to it — the kind that presses against the ribs and makes breathing feel deliberate."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Owen continued (continue)"
1"Silas corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.407
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.068
82.0680%