Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WE3NES1604F3P7R84P6VB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.002179
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement off Old Compton Street and turned the neon into smeared paint on black tarmac. Quinn ran. Her shoes slapped puddles, her coat dragged water at the hem, and thirty metres ahead a figure in a grey hood cut left down an alley between a shuttered kebab shop and the Raven's Nest. The bar's green sign buzzed above her as she passed, throwing her shadow long and thin across the brick. "Halt! Police!" The words tore out of her. The hood didn't slow. It vaulted a stack of crates, sent bottles skidding across wet stone, and vanished around the far corner. Quinn hurdled the crates and landed hard, one palm slapping brick to keep her balance. Her watch caught on the mortar and the old leather strap snapped. She heard it ping off the wall behind her and did not stop. 'Stop or I'll put you on the ground!' Her voice echoed off fire escapes and drainpipes. Ahead, the alley spat the suspect out onto Charing Cross Road. Brake lights flared. A horn blared long and angry. The hood slid across the bonnet of a black cab, boots scraping paint, and kept moving south. Quinn burst into traffic after it. Tyres shrieked. She slapped a palm on the cab's wing mirror and spun around the front, feeling heat from the grille against her soaked trousers. 'Bloody lunatic!' The cabbie leaned on his horn again. She pointed her warrant card at him without breaking stride. 'Police! Call it in—grey hoodie, male, heading toward Camden Road!' The cab's reply was another blast of horn. Quinn was already past. The suspect had a decade on her at least, maybe two, and it showed in the way he moved: raw sprinting power without technique, arms chopping the air, coat flaring behind him. He looked back once. She caught a flash of white face and wet eyes under the hood before he put his head down again. Rain came harder. It turned the street into a river of reflected reds and ambers and made every step a gamble. Quinn's lungs burned. Eighteen years on the job and her knees kept a ledger of every chase, every stairwell, every wrong turn. She ignored them. The suspect was flagging. His stride shortened near the Tube entrance at Camden Town, where the stairs dropped underground behind black iron railings. He took the steps three at a time and disappeared into the dark. Quinn pulled up at the top. Rainwater ran down her neck, under her collar, cold as river water. Her hand rested on the butt of her extendable baton. Down there, the ticket hall lights flickered, out of sync with each other, throwing the stairwell into strobe. Her earpiece crackled. 'Ma'am, units are six minutes out. What's your twenty?' 'Camden Town. Suspect's gone down the station.' 'Station's closed for engineering works. Hold position and we'll—' The line dissolved into static. Quinn thumped the earpiece with a knuckle. Static. She pulled it out and dropped it in her coat pocket. She looked down the stairs. The suspect had not come back up. Somewhere below, metal screamed on metal, the sound a train makes on a bad curve, except there were no trains running tonight. She descended. Her hand trailed the rail, cold and gritty under her palm. Twenty-two steps. She counted them out of habit, the way Morris had taught her, because numbers kept the fear from talking. At the bottom, the ticket hall yawned empty. Turnstiles stood open. A poster on the wall advertised a show that had closed two years ago, its paper peeling in long wet tongues. A trail of wet footprints crossed the tiles toward the northbound platform. Quinn followed them past a barrier strung with hazard tape and a sign that read CLOSED – RAIL REPLACEMENT WORKS in letters someone had crossed out with a marker and written NOT FOR YOU over the top. The platform air hit her first. It smelled of ozone and turned earth and something else, something sweet and vegetal, like flowers left too long in standing water. The tunnel ahead held a glow that no maintenance lamp had any business making. Amber. Uneven. Firelight. She drew her baton and flicked it open. The click echoed down the tunnel and came back to her twice. Her feet took her along the platform edge. She stepped over the yellow line without thinking, then stepped back. Old habits. Down here, where nothing ran on schedule, the yellow line still felt like the only law left standing. The glow grew. So did the noise. Voices, layered and strange. Some pitched too low to belong to a human throat. Some laughing in patterns that never quite resolved into human rhythm. She heard glass, coin, the wet slap of something being weighed on a scale. The tunnel opened. Quinn stopped at the threshold and her hand tightened on the baton until her knacks ached. An abandoned Tube station stretched before her, its vaulted ceiling lost in shadow, its platform packed shoulder to shoulder with stalls. Canvas awnings dripped rain that had seeped down from the city above. Lanterns hung from wires and burned without flame. On trestle tables, jars of black powder sat beside bundles of dried herbs, racks of knives with blades that moved on their own, cages of birds with too many eyes. A woman with hands like pale spiders haggled over a stack of yellowed maps. Something tall and stooped counted coins onto a table, its fingers two joints too many. Every head near the entrance turned toward her. The chatter did not stop. It changed register. She felt the change in her sternum, a vibration like standing too close to a generator. A boy no older than twenty stepped out of the crowd and blocked the archway. He wore a heavy coat with bone toggles and had a Saint Christopher medallion hanging at his chest, the silver worn to pale gold at the edges. 'You don't have a token, love.' 'Out of my way. Metropolitan Police.' 'Wrong currency down here.' His hand came up, not aggressive, just held out flat at chest height, palm scarred with a long ridge of white tissue along the forearm. Warm brown eyes watched her without blinking. 'I'm pursuing a suspect. Grey hoodie, mid-forties, came through here thirty seconds ago.' 'Nobody came through here.' 'I watched him come down those stairs.' 'Then you watched wrong.' Behind him, the market churned on. A jar lid unscrewed itself. Coins changed hands in a dozen currencies, none of which she recognised. Somewhere deeper in, something breathed in wet, slow rhythm and made the lanterns sway. Quinn looked past the boy's shoulder. Fifty metres in, near a stall draped in black silk, the grey hood moved through the crowd. It paused. It turned. The white face looked back at her across the packed platform and the boy did not move an inch to let her through. 'Your lot took my licence,' the boy said. 'Treated one of theirs at the wrong hour and the papers had it out for me. So no. Not tonight.' 'I'm not here for your licence. I'm here for him.' 'That's a you problem.' Quinn weighed it. The station behind her was empty, dead, sealed by tape and lies. Backup sat six minutes out and her earpiece had gone to static the moment she crossed the threshold. This crowd had numbers she could not count and rules she did not know. She could see the exits, three tunnels branching off the platform, and she could see that every single one of them was full of bodies watching her with interest. She thought of Morris. Three years cold in the ground and the file still open, the last night still black on the page, and the only witness a stain on the wall that no lab had been able to name. She pushed the baton closed and slid it into her coat. 'Fine. What's a token cost?' The boy studied her face. He reached into his coat and produced a small white disc, flat and smooth, the size of a coin and carved from something dense. 'Costs more than your salary. Tonight it costs you that.' He pointed at the worn leather strap dangling from her left wrist, the watch itself gone, snapped off in the alley in Soho. Quinn looked at the broken strap. She unthreaded it from the buckle loop and held it out. The boy took it, weighed it in his scarred palm, and nodded toward the arch. 'First stall on your left sells time. Don't take any.' She stepped past him into the Veil Market. The sweet rot smell closed around her like a held breath. The grey hood slipped behind the black silk and she followed, one hand loose at her side, eyes tracking the sway of lanterns and the turn of heads as the crowd folded shut behind her.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:19:29.844Z" 9/23/2026, 10:19:29 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1492
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1492
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"churned"
count1
5
word"silk"
count2
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"flicked"
3"resolved"
4"churned"
5"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1492
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1346
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Old2
Compton1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Camden2
Tube2
Town1
Suspect1
Hold1
Morris2
Saint1
Christopher1
Quinn12
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Suspect"
2"Morris"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Quinn"
6"Market"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
3"Charing"
4"Cross"
5"Road"
6"Camden"
7"Tube"
8"Town"
9"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the only law left standing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1492
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"see that every"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean28.69
std22.94
cv0.8
sampleLengths
074
12
228
340
48
545
631
79
820
968
1069
1113
1246
1312
147
159
1624
1734
1866
1949
2045
2120
2239
2346
243
2516
26100
278
2824
2942
306
316
324
3332
3413
354
367
374
3837
3950
4028
4110
424
4376
4440
4511
465
4729
4833
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"being weighed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs227
matches
0"was flagging"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences145
ratio0.014
matches
0"Call it in—grey hoodie, male, heading toward Camden Road!'"
1"Quinn followed them past a barrier strung with hazard tape and a sign that read CLOSED – RAIL REPLACEMENT WORKS in letters someone had crossed out with a marker and written NOT FOR YOU over the top."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount142
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.014084507042253521
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.29
std8.27
cv0.804
sampleLengths
018
12
235
319
42
56
64
718
815
912
1013
118
128
1311
143
156
1617
176
182
1923
209
2110
221
239
248
254
2632
274
2820
293
3018
313
3219
333
344
3519
3613
376
3812
3910
4018
413
426
433
442
455
465
474
485
497
72.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4689655172413793
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners68
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Somewhere below, metal screamed on"
1"Somewhere deeper in, something breathed"
ratio0.019
90.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences108
matches
0"Her shoes slapped puddles, her"
1"It vaulted a stack of"
2"Her watch caught on the"
3"She heard it ping off"
4"Her voice echoed off fire"
5"She slapped a palm on"
6"She pointed her warrant card"
7"He looked back once."
8"She caught a flash of"
9"It turned the street into"
10"She ignored them."
11"His stride shortened near the"
12"He took the steps three"
13"Her hand rested on the"
14"Her earpiece crackled."
15"She pulled it out and"
16"She looked down the stairs."
17"Her hand trailed the rail,"
18"She counted them out of"
19"It smelled of ozone and"
ratio0.324
52.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences108
matches
0"Her shoes slapped puddles, her"
1"The bar's green sign buzzed"
2"The words tore out of"
3"The hood didn't slow."
4"It vaulted a stack of"
5"Quinn hurdled the crates and"
6"Her watch caught on the"
7"She heard it ping off"
8"Her voice echoed off fire"
9"A horn blared long and"
10"The hood slid across the"
11"Quinn burst into traffic after"
12"She slapped a palm on"
13"She pointed her warrant card"
14"The cab's reply was another"
15"Quinn was already past."
16"The suspect had a decade"
17"He looked back once."
18"She caught a flash of"
19"Rain came harder."
ratio0.815
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A poster on the wall advertised a show that had closed two years ago, its paper peeling in long wet tongues."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Call it in—grey hoodie, male, heading toward Camden Road"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.3508%