Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WEZG4NRBDKK1C6R7SH2YR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.002064
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate to the deer park had been chained when Rory arrived, so she climbed the fence near Petersham and dropped into the bracken on the other side. Her delivery bag stayed on the bike. She'd locked it to the railing with the key in her pocket, and the key now tapped against her thigh with every step through the dark. She followed the pendant. It hung at her collarbone on its silver chain, and it pulled warmth toward the northwest like a compass needle made of blood. Every hundred paces it grew a shade hotter against her skin. She held it between finger and thumb and felt the little crimson stone shiver. "Right," she said to nobody. "Northwest." Richmond Park swallowed sound. She'd walked it before, in daylight, with Eva, both of them complaining about the hills. But at night the bracken stood taller than her waist and the oaks arranged themselves into corridors she didn't recognise. Her phone's torch caught fern tips and beetle shells and the pale discs of mushrooms. She checked the time. 23:41. She had told Silas she'd be back before last orders, which was a joke they'd both understood as a lie. The standing stones appeared without warning. Not stone — oak. Nine trunks of ancient oak, thick as cars, arranged in a ragged ring, their bark black and seamed like burned meat. The wildflowers grew right up to their roots: foxglove, harebell, something white with petals like peeled fingernails. In late October. Rory stopped at the gap between two trunks and looked at her phone. No signal. The time read 23:41 still, which meant it had frozen. She locked the screen and the darkness pressed in at once, huge and breathing. "Isolde?" she called. Her voice left her mouth and kept going, too far, as if the grove stretched it. "It's Rory. Carter. We spoke on Tuesday." The wildflowers turned their faces toward her. She knew they did no such thing. She looked at the ground instead, at the crush of stems where someone had already walked in — the same width as her own boots, the same tread pattern, worn at the outer heel. Her own footprints, arriving before her. The pendant throbbed once. A pulse, like a heart remembering its job. She stepped between the oaks. The air changed texture. It carried smell now: turned earth, wet fur, the mineral tang of a cave. Underneath that, something floral and rotten, like a bouquet left in a vase past its death. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere inside the ring, white and violet and a red she couldn't name. Dew clung to them despite the dry week. She'd come because of the note. A folded square pushed under her flat door, no stamp, no name. Inside, a single line in a hand that leaned hard to the right: *Ask the Heartstone what it opens. Come to the grove where the oaks stand. Midnight.* "I'm early," she said into the ring. "So if you're the type to make an entrance, take your time." Nothing answered. Somewhere beyond the oaks a fox screamed — that ragged, saw-toothed cry that always sounded like a woman. Rory had heard it before. She set her shoulders and let the sound pass through her. The pendant had gone quiet. Cool silver and a dead stone. She walked the ring's edge. Counted the oaks. Nine outside; inside, there were ten. She stopped and counted again, finger raised, and got ten both times. The extra trunk stood in the middle of the clearing, and it wasn't oak. Its bark had a wet shine. It was narrow, pale, and it leaned at an angle no tree would choose. Rory did not walk toward it. She took out her phone and photographed it with the flash. On the screen, the pale trunk had a seam running up its length. She looked up from the phone. The seam was not on the tree. She took another photo. This time the picture showed only the ring's far edge and the black gap between oaks, because the middle of the grove was empty. "Fine," she said. "Fine." Her phone chose that moment to give her 23:41 again. She put it away. The wrongness had weight now. It sat on her shoulders and filled her shoes. Every instinct she'd built in eighteen months of navigating London with an ex who kept finding her new addresses said the same word: leave. She'd learned to listen to that word. She'd also learned the difference between a danger that chased you and a door that only opened once. She touched the stone. Cold. "What do you open?" she asked it. Warmth flooded her palm. Not faint. Not the shy pulse of before. It climbed her wrist to the crescent scar and kept going, a heat with direction, and the direction was down. The pendant pointed her gaze at the base of the pale trunk. Rory's breath came out in a white rag. It had been twelve degrees when she'd left the flat. Her breath should not have smoked. From beyond the oaks came the fox again. Closer. Except foxes didn't travel in pairs and cry in sequence, one to the left, one to the right, and then both together in a chord that had too many notes in it. "Isolde," she said. Louder this time. "I came alone, like you said. I don't have anything worth taking." The wildflowers nearest the pale trunk bent flat to the soil. The ones by her feet bent the opposite way, away. She thought about Eva's sofa and the flat above Silas' bar and the Golden Empress's warm kitchen, the wok fire breathing up against Yu-Fei's calm face. She thought about her father's voice on the phone last week asking why she'd stopped answering. Home arranged itself behind her like a lit window. The pendant burned. Something moved along the outer ring. It passed between two oaks at a height of about five feet and it took the gap faster than a person could take a gap — one moment the black space held a shape with a suggestion of shoulders, the next the space was black again and the fox-cry came from directly behind her, wet and close, with a sound underneath it like a mouth full of water forming words. Rory turned. She turned slow and she kept her hands where she could see them. The ring behind her held the same oaks, the same flowers. Her footprints in. Nothing else. Her heart banged at her ribs so hard she felt it in her teeth. "Say it properly," she said. "Whatever you want me to do, say it like a person." The extra trunk in the middle of the grove shifted its lean by a degree. It did it the way a sleeper shifts, without waking. Bark groaned along the seam that wasn't there in her photos. The pendant pulled her another step forward. Her phone buzzed against her thigh. She grabbed it. The screen showed a call coming from Eva, at 23:41, and under it the network name read *HEARTH*. Her thumb hovered. The ring waited. Somewhere past the ninth oak, past the fence and the locked gate and the bike chained to the railing, a fox screamed a fourth time in a voice that had started to get the vowels right. Rory thumbed the call open and raised the phone to her ear. "Eva," she said. "Eva, listen—" The line held a breath. Not her own. Then a voice leaned hard to the right and said, "You're early, Rory Carter. Step to the heartwood."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:19:58.346Z" 9/23/2026, 10:19:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"a voice leaned hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"throbbed"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"navigating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords16
totalWords1272
ratio0.013
matches
0"Ask the Heartstone what it opens. Come to the grove where the oaks stand. Midnight."
1"HEARTH"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1187
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Petersham1
Richmond1
Park1
Eva3
Silas1
October1
Heartstone1
London1
Warmth1
Louder1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Warmth"
places
0"Petersham"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a woman"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1272
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29.58
std21.95
cv0.742
sampleLengths
061
14
248
36
479
551
639
726
854
912
105
1157
1246
1319
1436
1511
1660
1717
1826
1928
204
2114
2263
235
247
2544
2624
2741
2818
2921
3051
313
3276
3315
3430
3516
3636
377
3869
3912
405
418
4218
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"been chained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences125
ratio0.04
matches
0"Not stone — oak."
1"She looked at the ground instead, at the crush of stems where someone had already walked in — the same width as her own boots, the same tread pattern, worn at the outer heel."
2"Somewhere beyond the oaks a fox screamed — that ragged, saw-toothed cry that always sounded like a woman."
3"Nine outside; inside, there were ten."
4"It passed between two oaks at a height of about five feet and it took the gap faster than a person could take a gap — one moment the black space held a shape with a suggestion of shoulders, the next the space was black again and the fox-cry came from directly behind her, wet and close, with a sound underneath it like a mouth full of water forming words."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02869757174392936
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033112582781456954
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.18
std9.06
cv0.89
sampleLengths
028
17
226
34
423
511
614
75
81
94
1015
1120
1215
134
141
1520
166
174
1821
1917
203
2113
222
2310
2414
253
2616
277
287
297
3034
316
324
338
345
354
3614
3716
3815
398
406
4112
4219
438
441
457
4612
472
4818
495
53.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3709677419354839
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners46
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the oaks a"
1"Somewhere past the ninth oak,"
2"Then a voice leaned hard"
ratio0.029
39.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences104
matches
0"Her delivery bag stayed on"
1"She'd locked it to the"
2"She followed the pendant."
3"It hung at her collarbone"
4"She held it between finger"
5"she said to nobody"
6"She'd walked it before, in"
7"Her phone's torch caught fern"
8"She checked the time."
9"She had told Silas she'd"
10"She locked the screen and"
11"Her voice left her mouth"
12"She knew they did no"
13"She looked at the ground"
14"Her own footprints, arriving before"
15"She stepped between the oaks."
16"It carried smell now: turned"
17"She'd come because of the"
18"she said into the ring"
19"She set her shoulders and"
ratio0.452
51.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences104
matches
0"The gate to the deer"
1"Her delivery bag stayed on"
2"She'd locked it to the"
3"She followed the pendant."
4"It hung at her collarbone"
5"Every hundred paces it grew"
6"She held it between finger"
7"she said to nobody"
8"Richmond Park swallowed sound."
9"She'd walked it before, in"
10"Her phone's torch caught fern"
11"She checked the time."
12"She had told Silas she'd"
13"The standing stones appeared without"
14"The wildflowers grew right up"
15"Rory stopped at the gap"
16"The time read 23:41 still,"
17"She locked the screen and"
18"Her voice left her mouth"
19"The wildflowers turned their faces"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Inside, a single line in a hand that leaned hard to the right: *Ask the Heartstone what it opens."
1"Except foxes didn't travel in pairs and cry in sequence, one to the left, one to the right, and then both together in a chord that had too many notes in it."
2"Bark groaned along the seam that wasn't there in her photos."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She thought, the wok fire breathing up against Yu-Fei's calm face"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a voice leaned hard (lean)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.563
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
87.0011%