Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WGZRETAKVW0Z6K7CKZPNY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.000765
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed its usual tired hum as Rory pushed through the door, still wearing the dust of a long delivery route through Soho. She had stopped by Yu-Fei's restaurant for the lunch run and ended up walking three blocks past her own building on purpose, though she'd never admit it to anyone. The bell above the entrance gave a thin, crooked note, and the man behind the bar looked up from a rag he'd been twisting between his fingers. Silas Blackwood set the rag down. His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter than she remembered, and the beard had crept heavier along his jaw than it used to sit. He leaned against the bar, weight shifting to his right leg, the left one hanging loose and barely touching the floor. "I know that look," he said. "You walked past your own front door to end up here." Rory dropped onto a stool at the far end. The wood was cool against her forearms. She pulled her straight black hair behind one ear. "You kept the same rag." "I keep everything the same. That's the point of this place." He poured without asking — a neat whiskey, no ice. He slid it across the bar, and his silver signet ring caught the low light from the map behind her. Old maps, black-and-white photographs of people who looked like they'd been forgotten by the century that took them. "Word is you moved in upstairs," he said. "Two months ago." "Two months and you never come down until now." "I come down plenty. I just come down after closing, when you're already gone." Silas limped to the other end of the bar, checked a bottle he didn't need to check, and came back. The knee injury from Prague followed him like a second shadow, never quite caught up but always trailing. "Aurora Carter, delivering Chinese food in Soho, living above a retired spy's bar." "You sound like my mother." "Your mother called last week, actually." Rory's glass stopped halfway to her mouth. She set it down. "Why would my mother call you?" "I've known your father since before you could hold a fork. Brendan's an old friend. He worries." "He doesn't worry. He waits for me to come home." "That's the same thing with people like Brendan. He just puts a better word on it." Rory rubbed the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist without thinking. The gesture had its own life now, more automatic than any habit she'd tried to break. "When did you last see me?" she asked. Silas thought about it. His hazel eyes moved to the photographs on the wall, then back. "Cardiff. Your father's chambers, maybe. You were fourteen, maybe fifteen. You sat on the floor reading something thick and legal while the adults argued about a case." "You remember what I was reading?" "I remember you read it without looking up once. Not once. Brendan said you were going to be a barrister just like him. You didn't look up then either." Rory turned the glass in slow quarter-turns on the bar. "That was a long time ago." "It was." Outside, a siren wound itself down the street and released. The neon sign flickered once through the window and held. "I went to Cardiff University," she said. "Pre-Law. Two years." "I know. Brendan told me." "What else did he tell you?" Silas poured himself the same measure. He didn't drink it yet, just let it sit. "He told me you left. He told me you were in London and he didn't know the details and he'd prefer it that way." Rory nodded once. She drank. The whiskey moved down warm and slow. "Evan," she said. Silas didn't react. He'd been in rooms where people said worse names with less warning. "He's gone," she continued. "I came here. Eva helped me get settled, and then you offered me the flat upstairs and I took it, and that's the story." "That's the version." "It's the one I've got." Silas lifted his glass. The signet ring caught the light again. "I was in Prague in ninety-three," he said. "Botched an operation that shouldn't have been botched. The knee went, and with it the rest of it. I told myself I'd come back to field work after the surgery. Six weeks, I said." He drank. "That was thirty years ago." Rory watched his hand on the bar. The knuckles were thicker than they'd been in the photographs she'd seen of him younger, a man who ran and climbed and never thought about stairs. "You stayed because of the knee." "I stayed because the knee reminded me what happened the last time I said I'd come back to something." The words hung there, neither of them reaching for them. Rory traced the rim of her glass. "I told myself I'd go back to Cardiff. After London, after everything, I told myself it was a stop. Eva's place, then back. Then Yu-Fei offered me the deliveries and the hours were flexible and I thought — six weeks, I said." Silas looked at her. His expression didn't change, but something behind it shifted the way a room changes when someone opens a door in another building. "We're a matched pair," he said. "We're two people who ran into the same wall." "Same wall, different rooms." He gestured at the photographs behind her. "Every person on that wall believed they were passing through. The bar was a front. The life was temporary. Nobody plans to end up in a photograph." Rory turned on the stool to look. A young man with sharp eyes and a narrow jaw stood between two men she didn't recognize, all of them leaning into a doorway in what could have been any city at any hour. "That's not you," she said. "That's the version of me that still thought he was leaving." He refilled her glass. She let him. "Evan called last month," she said. "He got the new number through someone. He didn't say much. He said he hoped I was doing well. That's all." Silas set the bottle down. "And?" "And I didn't say anything back. I listened, and then I hung up, and I went upstairs and sat on the floor of my flat for an hour." "An hour." "I timed it." "You timed how long you could sit on the floor." "I timed how long it took me not to dial back." Silas rubbed his thumb across the face of the signet ring. "You're not going back to him." "No." "You're not going back to Cardiff either." Rory picked up the glass. "No." "Then what?" She looked at the green neon bleeding through the window and painting the edge of the bar in a thin line of light. Yu-Fei's restaurant was six blocks south. Her flat was one floor up. Silas was right here. "I don't know yet," she said. "Good answer. Anyone who's got an answer already at twenty-five is either lying or hasn't been paying attention." "You had an answer at twenty-five." "I had a direction. Different thing." Rory finished the whiskey. The glass touched the bar with a small, decisive sound. "I'm going to need another one of those." Silas reached for the bottle. "Before you do," she said, "tell me the truth about Prague. Not the version Brendan's heard. The one you've been sitting with." He paused, bottle in hand, ring catching the light one more time. "You sure you want that while you're still on the clock tomorrow?" "I'm off tomorrow." "That's what the last person said before they stayed until closing." He poured. He didn't answer yet, just set the glass down and leaned back against the shelf behind him, arms folded, the limp visible even standing still. "Ask again after the second one," he said. Rory wrapped both hands around the glass. The neon hummed its tired note through the window. Somewhere downstairs, a pipe settled in the wall.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:21:04.147Z" 9/23/2026, 10:21:04 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1336
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount685
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory12
Soho1
Yu-Fei2
Blackwood1
Silas11
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.624
windowScore0.667
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they'd been forgotten by the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1336
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean16.1
std14.88
cv0.924
sampleLengths
086
150
217
325
45
511
648
78
83
99
1014
1138
1213
135
146
1517
1617
1710
1816
1927
208
2116
2227
236
2429
2516
262
2720
2810
295
306
3115
3224
3312
343
3515
3628
373
385
3953
402
415
4233
436
4419
4510
4649
4726
486
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been forgotten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences124
ratio0.008
matches
0"He poured without asking — a neat whiskey, no ice."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount691
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.024602026049204053
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001447178002894356
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.77
std8.38
cv0.778
sampleLengths
030
129
227
36
423
521
66
711
89
97
109
115
1211
1310
1420
1518
168
173
189
1914
2020
2118
2213
235
246
257
264
276
2817
2910
3016
3111
3216
338
344
3512
3627
376
3829
3910
406
412
4210
4310
447
453
465
476
486
499
44.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29838709677419356
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners37
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Somewhere downstairs, a pipe settled"
ratio0.018
93.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences57
matches
0"She had stopped by Yu-Fei's"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"He leaned against the bar,"
3"She pulled her straight black"
4"He poured without asking —"
5"He slid it across the"
6"She set it down."
7"His hazel eyes moved to"
8"He didn't drink it yet,"
9"He'd been in rooms where"
10"His expression didn't change, but"
11"He gestured at the photographs"
12"He refilled her glass."
13"She let him."
14"She looked at the green"
15"Her flat was one floor"
16"He paused, bottle in hand,"
17"He didn't answer yet, just"
ratio0.316
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences57
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She had stopped by Yu-Fei's"
2"The bell above the entrance"
3"Silas Blackwood set the rag"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"He leaned against the bar,"
6"Rory dropped onto a stool"
7"The wood was cool against"
8"She pulled her straight black"
9"He poured without asking —"
10"He slid it across the"
11"Silas limped to the other"
12"The knee injury from Prague"
13"Rory's glass stopped halfway to"
14"She set it down."
15"Rory rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
16"The gesture had its own"
17"Silas thought about it."
18"His hazel eyes moved to"
19"Rory turned the glass in"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Old maps, black-and-white photographs of people who looked like they'd been forgotten by the century that took them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.197
leniency0.394
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.03
88.0288%