Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WHVR039B66318MRZ59DWQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.002181
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened three inches before the chain caught. Rory's eyes adjusted to the amber glow of the hallway, to the charcoal wool of a coat she hadn't seen in five months, to the crooked ivory handle of a cane planted against the landing floor. "You move flats often." Lucien tilted his head. One amber eye, one black. Both fixed on her. Rory pulled the chain off without breaking his stare. She leaned against the doorframe and folded her arms over her chest, blocking the gap. "There's a restaurant on Brick Lane that gives out my address?" "Eva is generous with information when fed." "She's allergic to shellfish. Not to you, apparently." Lucien's mouth twitched. He stood in the narrow hallway above Silas' bar with the late-October rain darkening the shoulders of his coat. Water dripped from his hair into his collar. The hair was still slicked back, platinum and severe, though a strand had broken loose and curled against his temple. "Can I come in? Or would you prefer I deliver this to you while I contract pneumonia on your landing." Rory studied him the way she'd study a contract clause she didn't trust. His knuckles whitened around the cane's handle. A muscle in his jaw shifted. She hadn't remembered that about him — how he held himself so tight you could hear the effort in his silence. "You have three minutes." She stepped back. Lucien crossed the threshold and ducked beneath the low beam. The flat smelled of cold noodles and the ginger tea Rory had forgotten on the counter. She kicked a stack of Yu-Fei's unclaimed delivery receipts under the armchair and stood in the middle of the room, arms still crossed. Ptolemy wove between Lucien's legs. He crouched and scratched behind the tabby's ears with his free hand, slow and careful, as though the animal were made of paper. "You kept the cat." "Eva's cat. Eva's in Cardiff. Temporary arrangement." Rory jerked her chin at the door. "You said three minutes. Talk." Lucien straightened. He drew an envelope from his coat — cream, heavy stock, sealed with dark wax. He held it between two fingers and placed it on the edge of the kitchen counter without letting go. "I need you to look at this." "I'm not in the business anymore." "You delivered a parcel to my building on Tuesday. You're in plenty of business." Rory's stomach tightened. She'd made that drop at midnight, face hidden under a hood, hands shaking because the client had been Lucien's and Lucien had made it very clear eight months ago what he thought of her ability to survive in a room where the walls had teeth. "That was a job. I handed off the package to whoever was at the door. It wasn't you." "It was my man, Baptiste. He described the woman who refused to come inside. Black hair. Blue eyes that looked like she wanted to set fire to the hallway." "That's everyone's eyes in November." Lucien let go of the envelope. He straightened his cufflinks, one at a time. The gold caught the lamplight. "I have a problem. A contract on someone I cannot afford to lose. The language is in old Breton and a dialect of Enochian. You read both." "You have four languages. Figure it out." "Four living languages." His heterochromatic gaze settled on her mouth before dropping to the crescent scar on her left wrist, the one that peeked past her sleeve. "You are being difficult." "I'm being careful. There's a difference." Rory picked up the envelope. The wax seal cracked under her thumb — a grotesque face with a single eye. She'd seen the symbol before, stamped into the corner of a page in one of Eva's scrolls. "Who wants you to sign this?" "That is the part I cannot say yet." "Then you can take it back." She held the envelope out. Lucien didn't move to take it. Rainwater pooled at his feet from his coat. The flat felt smaller with him in it — the low ceiling pressed down, and the bookshelves crowded in, and Ptolemy had gone to sleep on Lucien's cane as though the object were a branch. "Rory." He said her name the way he always had, the R soft and French and too familiar. "I came here because you are the only person in this city who will read it and tell me what it costs. Not what it pays. What it costs." Something turned over in her chest. She set the envelope on the counter and stepped back. "Sit down." Lucien lowered himself onto the armchair. He rested the cane across his thighs and leaned forward with his elbows on his knees. Without the tailored coat, the tension in his shoulders showed through his shirt. He'd lost weight. The charcoal waistcoat hung loose at the ribs. Rory filled the kettle and set it on the hot plate. Her hands moved through the familiar things — two mugs, the tin of loose tea, the strainer with the bent handle. She did not look at him. "You left the note on my desk." Lucien's breath caught, a sound so small she might have imagined it. "You told me to walk away from this city. From all of it. You put a plane ticket and a note and six months' rent in an envelope and you signed it 'A.L.C.' like I was a business contact." She gripped the edge of the counter. The crescent scar on her wrist pulled tight. "Then you disappeared." "I did not disappear. I was in Marseille." "You were in Marseille. For five months. Without a word." "My father died." The kettle clicked off. Rory didn't move. "Your father — " "Died. In Avaros. I went to close the estate. The house, the debts, the things he owed to things I cannot name." Lucien turned the cane in his hands. The ivory handle caught a groove where his thumb rubbed it, back and forth, a wound he'd worried into the surface over years. "I could not call you. The wards in that house swallow signals. And when I returned you had gone. No forwarding address. No message with Eva. Nothing." Rory poured the water. Steam climbed past her face. She measured her voice before she used it. "You left me a plane ticket to Dublin. Not a plane ticket to you." "I left you a way out." "Everyone leaves me ways out. That's not what I wanted." The words came out rougher than she intended. She turned around with the mugs in her hands and caught the look on Lucien's face — open, wrecked, stripped of every careful thing he wore like armour. His black eye seemed to pull the light out of the room while the amber one burned. He stood. The cane clattered against the floor and Ptolemy shot under the sofa. "Then what did you want?" Rory set the mugs down. Tea sloshed over the rim and soaked into the counter. She crossed the space between them in two steps and put her hand flat against his chest — the shirt was damp and warm and his heart hammered against her palm like it wanted out. "You know what I wanted." "I know what I wanted. I do not presume to know yours." He covered her hand with his own. His fingers were cold from the rain and they curled around hers without permission. "You left Cardiff with nothing. You slept in Eva's spare room for a month. You took a job delivering noodles because it kept you moving and no one could follow you. I looked at that and I saw myself ruining it." "You don't get to make that decision for me." "I made every decision wrong where you were concerned. Every single one." His voice dropped into the register she remembered from the dark room in his office, the night he'd told her the truth about his father and she'd stayed anyway. "I sent you away because I could not think of another way to keep you breathing. And then I spent five months in a dead man's house wondering if you would ever look at me like this again." "Like what?" Lucien's jaw flexed. He leaned down until his forehead almost touched hers. "Like you want to hit me and kiss me in equal measure." Rory laughed. It came out strangled and thin and surprised her with how much it hurt. "You are an impossible man." "I am aware." His thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist. "Did he do this?" "Evan? No. That was a garden gate when I was nine." "I know. Eva told me." Lucien's mouth curved. "I wanted to hear you say it." "You wanted to make me angry." "I wanted to hear your voice. Anger works." Rory pulled her hand free and picked up the mug of tea. She pressed it into his chest until he took it, both cold hands wrapping around the ceramic. "You're staying for the tea. Then you're explaining this contract. Then — " She stopped. "Then?" "Then we see." Lucien lifted the mug and drank. He watched her over the rim, one eyebrow raised, and the rain drummed against the window behind them. "Then we see," he repeated. "I can work with that."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:21:32.81Z" 9/23/2026, 10:21:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.033
96.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"familiar"
3"tension"
4"weight"
5"measured"
6"traced"
7"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1557
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount934
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
One1
Water1
Lucien17
Rory13
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
Ptolemy3
French1
persons
0"One"
1"Water"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Eva"
6"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.59
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1557
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"made that drop"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean21.63
std19.62
cv0.907
sampleLengths
045
117
224
311
47
58
650
720
847
97
1049
1128
124
1319
1436
157
166
1714
1848
1918
2029
215
2219
2327
247
2531
2649
278
286
2954
3047
3116
322
3346
3438
357
3612
3757
388
3910
403
417
424
4379
4417
4514
466
4710
4853
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences128
ratio0.055
matches
0"She hadn't remembered that about him — how he held himself so tight you could hear the effort in his silence."
1"He drew an envelope from his coat — cream, heavy stock, sealed with dark wax."
2"The wax seal cracked under her thumb — a grotesque face with a single eye."
3"The flat felt smaller with him in it — the low ceiling pressed down, and the bookshelves crowded in, and Ptolemy had gone to sleep on Lucien's cane as though the object were a branch."
4"Her hands moved through the familiar things — two mugs, the tin of loose tea, the strainer with the bent handle."
5"She turned around with the mugs in her hands and caught the look on Lucien's face — open, wrecked, stripped of every careful thing he wore like armour."
6"She crossed the space between them in two steps and put her hand flat against his chest — the shirt was damp and warm and his heart hammered against her palm like it wanted out."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount625
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.0128
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean12.16
std9.82
cv0.807
sampleLengths
09
136
28
35
44
59
615
711
87
98
103
1119
128
1320
1420
1513
167
176
1821
197
2010
2116
2223
235
2423
254
2614
275
282
2915
3019
317
326
3314
343
3545
3618
3729
385
396
408
415
4227
437
4427
454
4611
4715
4817
496
45.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2734375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences77
matches
0"She leaned against the doorframe"
1"He stood in the narrow"
2"His knuckles whitened around the"
3"She hadn't remembered that about"
4"She stepped back"
5"She kicked a stack of"
6"He crouched and scratched behind"
7"He drew an envelope from"
8"He held it between two"
9"She'd made that drop at"
10"He straightened his cufflinks, one"
11"His heterochromatic gaze settled on"
12"She'd seen the symbol before,"
13"She held the envelope out."
14"He said her name the"
15"She set the envelope on"
16"He rested the cane across"
17"He'd lost weight."
18"Her hands moved through the"
19"She did not look at"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences77
matches
0"The door opened three inches"
1"Rory's eyes adjusted to the"
2"Lucien tilted his head"
3"Both fixed on her."
4"Rory pulled the chain off"
5"She leaned against the doorframe"
6"Lucien's mouth twitched."
7"He stood in the narrow"
8"Water dripped from his hair"
9"The hair was still slicked"
10"Rory studied him the way"
11"His knuckles whitened around the"
12"A muscle in his jaw"
13"She hadn't remembered that about"
14"She stepped back"
15"Lucien crossed the threshold and"
16"The flat smelled of cold"
17"She kicked a stack of"
18"Ptolemy wove between Lucien's legs."
19"He crouched and scratched behind"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He crouched and scratched behind the tabby's ears with his free hand, slow and careful, as though the animal were made of paper."
1"The flat felt smaller with him in it — the low ceiling pressed down, and the bookshelves crowded in, and Ptolemy had gone to sleep on Lucien's cane as though th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.033
80.6250%