| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "their whisper drifted back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1591 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1380 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae | 1 | | One | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.775 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like jokes" | | 1 | "something like a kitchen at full rush, the o" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1591 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 28.93 | | std | 23.75 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 73 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 53 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 76 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 73 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 67 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 99.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "been turned" | | 1 | "were rolled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "Twenty feet ahead the air between two standing oaks bent the way a spoon bends in a full cup — everything behind it doubled, then slid." | | 1 | "She stood on a hill of dark loam that smelled of crushed fruit and warm bread, and the air pressed against her bare arms the way bathwater presses — thick, sweet, weighted." | | 2 | "Fat fruit hung in clusters, each one the size of a plum, and none of them the same colour — one bruised purple, one the yellow of egg yolk, one pale and clear as a glass of water with a seed floating at its centre." | | 3 | "Their voice flattened against the loam where their bare feet touched, and the soil held no print at all — not Isolde's, not Nyx's." | | 4 | "Flies — or things shaped like flies, too large, with wings that clicked rather than buzzed — worked the decay in a slow orbit." | | 5 | "They moved in that fast lockstep of people who have cooked together for years — one turned a spit, one basted, one bent to the flame with a handful of something that threw green sparks." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed once against Rory's palm — one thick beat — and settled." | | 7 | "Roads of pale dust threading between gardens where the colours ran wrong — silver-leafed, black-flowered, one whole field of green so bright it rang." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1377 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.021060275962236745 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0014524328249818446 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 12.43 | | std | 9.02 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 86.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.5625 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 68.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Only Rory's boots left marks," | | 1 | "Somewhere a crowd roared and" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped walking and pressed" | | 1 | "She stood on the path" | | 2 | "She did not smile when" | | 3 | "She never smiled at the" | | 4 | "their whisper drifted back" | | 5 | "She stood on a hill" | | 6 | "Their shadow smeared outward, north," | | 7 | "It resisted her, then tugged," | | 8 | "She took her finger away" | | 9 | "She touched the clear one" | | 10 | "They went down the hill" | | 11 | "They had gone thin again," | | 12 | "Their voice flattened against the" | | 13 | "She walked faster to keep" | | 14 | "It had stopped pulsing." | | 15 | "It sat against her palm" | | 16 | "She walked the cutting's lip" | | 17 | "They came out of the" | | 18 | "They moved in that fast" | | 19 | "Their sleeves were rolled." |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 73.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone had turned hot" | | 1 | "She stopped walking and pressed" | | 2 | "Heat pulsed back, slow as" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice arrived on a" | | 4 | "She stood on the path" | | 5 | "She did not smile when" | | 6 | "She never smiled at the" | | 7 | "Rory pulled the pendant out." | | 8 | "The crimson stone threw a" | | 9 | "Nyx moved first." | | 10 | "The shadow stretched, thinned to" | | 11 | "their whisper drifted back" | | 12 | "Rory set her teeth and" | | 13 | "The sky was amber, low" | | 14 | "She stood on a hill" | | 15 | "Nyx gathered back into a" | | 16 | "Their shadow smeared outward, north," | | 17 | "Rory reached out and caught" | | 18 | "It resisted her, then tugged," | | 19 | "Isolde stepped through and stood" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood on a hill of dark loam that smelled of crushed fruit and warm bread, and the air pressed against her bare arms the way bathwater presses — thick, swee…" | | 1 | "Below her the land fell away in long green combs: vineyards stitched in rows, orchards knotted with heavy crowns, garden upon garden climbing toward a horizon t…" | | 2 | "They moved in that fast lockstep of people who have cooked together for years — one turned a spit, one basted, one bent to the flame with a handful of something…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |