Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WPHKNH2RD1EDMDVYCPJYJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.000527
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hit Harlow Quinn in sheets as she burst through the side door of the chemist's, her boots slamming against wet pavement. The suspect was thirty meters ahead—a wiry figure in a gray hoodie, arms pumping, sneakers splashing through puddles that caught the amber bleed of streetlights. He glanced back once. Dark eyes. Young, maybe early twenties. Mouth open like he'd forgotten how to breathe. Quinn didn't shout. She didn't waste the oxygen. She'd spent two decades learning which corners of London held their secrets tight, and Camden after midnight was one of them. The suspect turned left onto Hawley Crescent, and she matched the angle, her leather watch catching light as her arm swung. Eighteen years of chasing men across this city had trained her legs to read the geometry of a sprint—where to cut, when to anticipate, how much distance a person gained on a diagonal. He was fast. She'd give him that. "Police!" The word left her mouth anyway, flat and automatic. Wind swallowed half of it. He vaulted a low railing into the park entrance. Quinn followed, her knee complaining on the landing. The man in gray crashed through a gap in the fence at the far end, wire groaning behind him. She squeezed through the same gap, the metal catching her jacket and tearing a clean line down the left shoulder. She kept moving. They hit the high street. Late-night foot traffic scattered at the sight of them—a woman clutching a paper bag, a group of boys who yelled something she didn't process. The suspect crossed recklessly, headlights from a minicab swerving to miss him. Quinn waited half a beat for a gap and crossed too. "He's heading for the tube," she muttered into her radio, though the channel crackled with static and no reply came. She could see the entrance up ahead—the shuttered station with its roundel sign, the one that should have been locked. Should have been. The metal shutter had been cut, peeled back just enough for a body to slip through. Fresh tool marks. That meant preparation. He'd planned this route. The suspect dropped down onto the concrete platform and vanished into the tunnel mouth on the far side. Quinn grabbed the shutter's edge and lowered herself in, dropping the last two feet onto the platform. Her boots struck tile. The station smelled of old rainwater and rust, the fluorescent tubes overhead humming and flickering in a stutter that made the walls pulse. A broken clock face above the defunct ticket booth read 1:47, hands frozen. She followed the tunnel. The light thinned with every twenty meters. The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead—irregular, scraping, the sound of someone who'd stopped caring about quiet. Quinn drew her torch and clicked it on. The beam cut through dark and revealed brickwork streaked with mineral deposits, the floor littered with old tickets and crushed cans. Graffiti covered one wall: a crown rendered in spray paint, half-effaced by something that looked almost like scorching. Then the tunnel widened. She stepped out into a space that shouldn't have existed—a vaulted chamber, maybe fifty meters across, with the ribbed ceiling of a Victorian reservoir. And it was alive with noise. Voices. Dozens of them. The clink of glass. Music from somewhere she couldn't pinpoint, something slow and stringed, the notes bending out of tune. Quinn killed her torch. The chamber opened onto a market floor carved into old maintenance rooms and service corridors. Tables lined both sides, draped in dark cloth and stacked with goods she couldn't immediately name—vials of liquid that caught light and held it wrong, bundles of dried herbs tied with red thread, rings that seemed to shift size when she looked at them directly. Lanterns hung from hooks, burning with flames that gave no heat she could feel. People moved between the stalls. Hooded figures. Faces painted with symbols. A vendor with silver in her teeth shouting prices in a language Quinn's ear couldn't place. The smell hit her—incense, copper, something sweet and rotting underneath. She pressed herself against the tunnel wall and watched. The suspect in gray had stopped. He stood ten meters away, chest heaving, and pulled the hood down. Young face. A tattoo crawling up the left side of his neck—a spiral of dark ink. He looked left, right, then pulled something from his pocket. A disc of bone, pale as old ivory, about the size of a coin. He held it up toward a figure standing beside a table draped in velvet. The figure was tall and thin, draped in a long coat that might have been leather or something older. He took the bone disc, turned it over in long fingers, and nodded. Then he gestured behind him—a bookshelf, freestanding against the far wall, incongruous among the brick and pipework. The books leaned at angles that suggested they hadn't been read in decades. The suspect moved toward it. Quinn's hand rested on her hip where her holster sat. She'd followed men into places like this before—or places that felt like them, back alleys in Elephant and Castle, a decommissioned warehouse in Deptford where the floor gave way to black water below. But this was different. The geometry of it was wrong. The tunnel she'd entered through curved somewhere behind her in a way she couldn't trace back, and the way sound traveled in the vaulted space made it impossible to pin down where anything originated. Her radio sputtered. She pulled it close to her mouth. "Quinn. I'm below Camden station. Sub-level. I have eyes on the suspect." Static. Then a voice, broken: "—not on any schematics, Quinn, there's no—" The line died. She shoved the radio back into her jacket. The suspect slipped behind the bookshelf. She caught the flash of it swinging on hinges before it closed tight, revealing nothing but a wall of brick and a row of jars that held things suspended in amber-colored fluid. Objects she didn't want to identify. Quinn looked down the length of the market. Tables and bodies in every direction. A lantern above her flickered, casting her shadow long across the stone. A vendor three stalls over had stopped arranging bottles and turned his head slowly in her direction. He had no eyebrows. His gaze held hers for a beat too long before he looked away. She could go back. Retrace the tunnel, get above ground, call in the uniformed response, seal the entrance, wait for daylight and a warrant and a team with proper equipment. That was the play. That was the play any commander would order if she reported in—assuming her radio worked long enough to reach one. But the man with the bone token was gone. Behind a bookshelf. Into a room within a room within a place that didn't appear on any map. And the spiral tattoo on his neck matched a fragment she'd pulled from a case file three years ago—the same case that had swallowed DS Morris whole and left her with questions that never resolved into answers. She'd read the file so many times she could recite the parts that didn't add up. A sound reached her—not footsteps but the creak of leather and the soft mechanical click of the bookshelf swinging back on its hinges. Quinn stepped away from the tunnel mouth and moved along the wall, keeping the crowd between her and the shelf. She stopped behind a stall where a woman sold jars of blue powder that pulsed with a faint inner light. The woman glanced at her and said nothing, her fingers tightening around the jar. The bookshelf opened again. The suspect in gray stepped out, hood back up, and moved in the opposite direction—toward a stairwell at the far end of the chamber where stone steps descended further into darkness. He wasn't looking behind him now. He'd stopped checking. Quinn watched him descend until only the tips of his sneakers disappeared. She stood at the junction between the tunnel behind her and the market ahead, the rain from above a distant memory, her torn jacket hanging open, the watch on her wrist ticking against her pulse. One way back to familiar streets. One way down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"pulse"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"could feel"
5"velvet"
6"flickered"
7"resolved"
8"mechanical"
9"pulsed"
10"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1367
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1348
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
London1
Camden1
Hawley1
Crescent1
Wind1
Victorian1
Elephant1
Castle1
Deptford1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Wind"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Hawley"
2"Crescent"
3"Elephant"
4"Deptford"
globalScore1
windowScore1
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"rings that seemed to shift size when she looked at them directly"
1"felt like them, back alleys in Elephant"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.732
wordCount1367
matches
0"not footsteps but the creak of leather"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean35.05
std26.14
cv0.746
sampleLengths
066
18
275
37
415
559
652
720
849
918
1057
114
1269
134
1454
154
1674
1737
189
1972
2062
215
2287
2310
2412
2512
263
278
2844
2960
3054
3164
3216
3323
3454
354
3640
3712
3844
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"been locked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs231
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences113
ratio0.142
matches
0"The suspect was thirty meters ahead—a wiry figure in a gray hoodie, arms pumping, sneakers splashing through puddles that caught the amber bleed of streetlights."
1"Eighteen years of chasing men across this city had trained her legs to read the geometry of a sprint—where to cut, when to anticipate, how much distance a person gained on a diagonal."
2"Late-night foot traffic scattered at the sight of them—a woman clutching a paper bag, a group of boys who yelled something she didn't process."
3"She could see the entrance up ahead—the shuttered station with its roundel sign, the one that should have been locked."
4"The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead—irregular, scraping, the sound of someone who'd stopped caring about quiet."
5"She stepped out into a space that shouldn't have existed—a vaulted chamber, maybe fifty meters across, with the ribbed ceiling of a Victorian reservoir."
6"Tables lined both sides, draped in dark cloth and stacked with goods she couldn't immediately name—vials of liquid that caught light and held it wrong, bundles of dried herbs tied with red thread, rings that seemed to shift size when she looked at them directly."
7"The smell hit her—incense, copper, something sweet and rotting underneath."
8"A tattoo crawling up the left side of his neck—a spiral of dark ink."
9"Then he gestured behind him—a bookshelf, freestanding against the far wall, incongruous among the brick and pipework."
10"She'd followed men into places like this before—or places that felt like them, back alleys in Elephant and Castle, a decommissioned warehouse in Deptford where the floor gave way to black water below."
11"Then a voice, broken: \"—not on any schematics, Quinn, there's no—\""
12"That was the play any commander would order if she reported in—assuming her radio worked long enough to reach one."
13"And the spiral tattoo on his neck matched a fragment she'd pulled from a case file three years ago—the same case that had swallowed DS Morris whole and left her with questions that never resolved into answers."
14"A sound reached her—not footsteps but the creak of leather and the soft mechanical click of the bookshelf swinging back on its hinges."
15"The suspect in gray stepped out, hood back up, and moved in the opposite direction—toward a stairwell at the far end of the chamber where stone steps descended further into darkness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.022435897435897436
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005341880341880342
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.1
std9.2
cv0.76
sampleLengths
023
125
24
32
44
58
63
75
821
921
1033
113
124
1310
145
159
168
1719
1820
193
205
2124
2212
2311
2420
2520
263
2716
283
293
304
3118
3217
334
3423
3513
364
377
3815
398
4021
4118
424
4324
446
451
463
474
4816
494
42.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3185840707964602
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners36
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then the tunnel widened."
1"Then he gestured behind him—a"
2"Then a voice, broken: \"—not"
ratio0.028
96.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences107
matches
0"He glanced back once."
1"She didn't waste the oxygen."
2"She'd spent two decades learning"
3"He was fast."
4"She'd give him that."
5"He vaulted a low railing"
6"She squeezed through the same"
7"She kept moving."
8"They hit the high street."
9"she muttered into her radio,"
10"She could see the entrance"
11"He'd planned this route."
12"Her boots struck tile."
13"She followed the tunnel."
14"She stepped out into a"
15"She pressed herself against the"
16"He stood ten meters away,"
17"He looked left, right, then"
18"He held it up toward"
19"He took the bone disc,"
ratio0.308
39.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences107
matches
0"The rain hit Harlow Quinn"
1"The suspect was thirty meters"
2"He glanced back once."
3"Quinn didn't shout."
4"She didn't waste the oxygen."
5"She'd spent two decades learning"
6"The suspect turned left onto"
7"He was fast."
8"She'd give him that."
9"The word left her mouth"
10"Wind swallowed half of it."
11"He vaulted a low railing"
12"Quinn followed, her knee complaining"
13"The man in gray crashed"
14"She squeezed through the same"
15"She kept moving."
16"They hit the high street."
17"The suspect crossed recklessly, headlights"
18"Quinn waited half a beat"
19"she muttered into her radio,"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The suspect was thirty meters ahead—a wiry figure in a gray hoodie, arms pumping, sneakers splashing through puddles that caught the amber bleed of streetlights…"
1"Late-night foot traffic scattered at the sight of them—a woman clutching a paper bag, a group of boys who yelled something she didn't process."
2"The station smelled of old rainwater and rust, the fluorescent tubes overhead humming and flickering in a stutter that made the walls pulse."
3"The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead—irregular, scraping, the sound of someone who'd stopped caring about quiet."
4"Graffiti covered one wall: a crown rendered in spray paint, half-effaced by something that looked almost like scorching."
5"Tables lined both sides, draped in dark cloth and stacked with goods she couldn't immediately name—vials of liquid that caught light and held it wrong, bundles …"
6"The figure was tall and thin, draped in a long coat that might have been leather or something older."
7"She caught the flash of it swinging on hinges before it closed tight, revealing nothing but a wall of brick and a row of jars that held things suspended in ambe…"
8"And the spiral tattoo on his neck matched a fragment she'd pulled from a case file three years ago—the same case that had swallowed DS Morris whole and left her…"
9"She stood at the junction between the tunnel behind her and the market ahead, the rain from above a distant memory, her torn jacket hanging open, the watch on h…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, though the channel crackled with static and no reply came"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
77.1436%