Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WQPZNVWEJHKR93QZ2FHS3

Run Details

Duration:
7m 10s
Cost:
$0.012067
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned mean and sideways, hammering the awning of The Raven's Nest in bursts. Rory sat at the end of the bar with her delivery bag on the floor by her feet and the smell of five-spice still clinging to her jacket. The lunch crowd had gone. A grey afternoon in November pressed against the windows, catching on the edges of old maps — Paris, Prague, Marrakech — that papered the walls alongside black-and-white photographs of people whose names no one remembered. Silas had disappeared behind the bookshelf door an hour ago. The bar was hers. She'd just reached for the bottle when the door swung open and the bell above it rang once. A woman stepped in from the rain, folding an umbrella with quick, exact motions. She wore a long charcoal coat — expensive, tailored, the kind of thing that got dry-cleaned rather than washed. Leather gloves went into one pocket. Her hair was dark and cut at the jaw in a line so precise it looked measured. A thin gold chain caught the light at her throat. She stood with one foot angled toward the door, the way she'd always stood at parties. Rory's hand froze on the bottle. "Eva?" The woman turned. For a moment neither of them moved. The rain beat the awning. A tap dripped behind the bar into the quiet. "Rory?" Eva's voice caught on the name. She crossed the room and stopped close enough that the small changes accumulated — the fine line between Eva's brows, the way Rory's black hair fell past her shoulders now, the pale crescent scar on Rory's left wrist catching the dim light. "Christ. Rory. It's really you." "You live in a bar." Eva looked at the maps, the photographs, the empty stools. "Upstairs. The commute's a killer." Rory poured two whiskies without asking. She slid one across the bar. "Sit down." Eva sat. She unbuttoned her coat with one hand and draped it over the stool beside her. Underneath: a silk blouse the colour of bone. She picked up the glass but didn't drink. Her thumb moved along the rim — once, twice — then stopped. A new habit. The Eva she remembered had fidgeted with her hair, her sleeves, anything loose. This Eva held herself like she'd been assembled in a wind tunnel. "You look—" Eva stopped. "Like someone who sleeps above a pub." "No." Eva turned the glass. "You look like yourself. Which is strange. I expected—" She shook her head. "I don't know what I expected." "Someone better?" Rory leaned against the bar. Her reflection in the mirror behind the bottles showed her the way she was: hair too long, jacket too big, delivery bag on the floor like a dog that had given up. "Someone different." Eva sipped. Her eyes stayed on Rory over the rim. "You were going to be a barrister." Rory ran a thumb along the bar's edge. The scar on her wrist shifted. "I was going to be a lot of things." The words landed in the space between them. Eva set the glass down and pressed both palms flat against the counter. The gold band on her left hand caught the neon glow from outside — green, the colour of the Nest's sign. "You're married." "Three years. James. He works in finance." Eva paused. "Don't." "I didn't say anything." "You were going to." Eva's jaw tightened and then loosened. "I'm at the QEII Centre for a conference. Two days of slides about corporate restructuring and men who say 'leverage' like they coined the word. My firm sent me." "Which firm?" "Whitmore and Hale." Eva said this to the counter. "Partner. Eighteen months." "At your age, that's—" "Fast. Everyone says fast." Eva looked at the mirror behind the bottles and found her own reflection and looked away. "It's just work, Rory." "Just work." Rory let that sit. "You used to have red hair and you broke a window at the Students' Union because someone said Thatcher wasn't that bad." "I was twenty." "You were fearless." "I was drunk." Eva almost smiled. Her mouth shifted and then settled back to where it had been. They looked at each other. The photographs on the walls held their silence. The tap behind the bar dripped. "What happened to you, Ev?" Eva's thumb found the rim of the glass again. Once, twice. Then stopped. "People grow up." "That's not what I asked." Something opened behind Eva's face and closed again. Rory watched it happen — the way Eva's shoulders shifted and her gaze moved to some middle distance and then came back and she was still sitting on the stool but some other version of her had stepped to the side. "I tried to ring you," Eva said. "After you left. A few times." "I know." "You never called back." Rory traced the wood grain on the bar. Long, straight lines running the length of it. She'd done this before — on nights when the flat above felt too quiet and the city outside had nothing to say. "Everything I had was broken," Rory said. "You drove me to Paddington at three in the morning and you didn't cry and I thought — she's fine. She's always fine. She doesn't need me." Eva's hand curled around the glass. "I wasn't fine, Rory." The words sat between them. Dense. Small. "I know that now." "No." Eva looked up. Her grey-blue eyes — the same eyes from the shared flat in Cathays, from hungover mornings at the greasy spoon on City Road, from that terrible Christmas in the pub in Pontypridd when they'd sung carols off-key until closing — held something very still and very deep behind them. A room with the door shut. "You don't know. Because I never told you." Rory reached across the bar. Her fingers stopped an inch from Eva's hand. "Ev—" Eva stood. Her coat came off the stool and onto her shoulders and she was buttoning it before Rory found the next word.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:24:44.539Z" 9/23/2026, 10:24:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silk"
2"silence"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1007
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount763
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
November1
Paris1
Prague1
Marrakech1
Eva23
Rory14
Cathays1
City1
Road1
Christmas1
Pontypridd1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Paris"
1"Prague"
2"Cathays"
3"City"
4"Road"
5"Pontypridd"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1007
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean20.14
std22.29
cv1.107
sampleLengths
098
118
282
36
41
53
621
754
815
919
1073
114
127
1324
1439
1519
1614
179
1842
192
2010
214
2239
232
2412
254
2624
2728
283
293
3018
3119
325
3313
343
355
3649
3713
382
394
4038
4134
426
434
447
454
4667
4713
481
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"been assembled"
89.81% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was still sitting"
1"was buttoning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences103
ratio0.078
matches
0"A grey afternoon in November pressed against the windows, catching on the edges of old maps — Paris, Prague, Marrakech — that papered the walls alongside black-and-white photographs of people whose names no one remembered."
1"She wore a long charcoal coat — expensive, tailored, the kind of thing that got dry-cleaned rather than washed."
2"She crossed the room and stopped close enough that the small changes accumulated — the fine line between Eva's brows, the way Rory's black hair fell past her shoulders now, the pale crescent scar on Rory's left wrist catching the dim light."
3"Her thumb moved along the rim — once, twice — then stopped."
4"The gold band on her left hand caught the neon glow from outside — green, the colour of the Nest's sign."
5"Rory watched it happen — the way Eva's shoulders shifted and her gaze moved to some middle distance and then came back and she was still sitting on the stool but some other version of her had stepped to the side."
6"She'd done this before — on nights when the flat above felt too quiet and the city outside had nothing to say."
7"Her grey-blue eyes — the same eyes from the shared flat in Cathays, from hungover mornings at the greasy spoon on City Road, from that terrible Christmas in the pub in Pontypridd when they'd sung carols off-key until closing — held something very still and very deep behind them."
98.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount758
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04221635883905013
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean9.78
std9.17
cv0.938
sampleLengths
016
128
25
335
410
54
618
714
819
96
1017
1110
1216
136
141
153
167
175
189
197
2042
215
2215
2311
246
252
262
2715
288
298
3012
313
3213
3312
344
357
365
3713
386
397
4032
414
428
437
448
456
469
478
4813
4921
65.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.39805825242718446
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences63
matches
0"She'd just reached for the"
1"She wore a long charcoal"
2"Her hair was dark and"
3"She stood with one foot"
4"She crossed the room and"
5"She slid one across the"
6"She unbuttoned her coat with"
7"She picked up the glass"
8"Her thumb moved along the"
9"She shook her head"
10"Her reflection in the mirror"
11"Her eyes stayed on Rory"
12"Her mouth shifted and then"
13"They looked at each other."
14"She'd done this before —"
15"Her grey-blue eyes — the"
16"Her fingers stopped an inch"
17"Her coat came off the"
ratio0.286
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences63
matches
0"The rain had turned mean"
1"Rory sat at the end"
2"The lunch crowd had gone."
3"A grey afternoon in November"
4"Silas had disappeared behind the"
5"The bar was hers."
6"She'd just reached for the"
7"A woman stepped in from"
8"She wore a long charcoal"
9"Leather gloves went into one"
10"Her hair was dark and"
11"A thin gold chain caught"
12"She stood with one foot"
13"Rory's hand froze on the"
14"The woman turned."
15"The rain beat the awning."
16"A tap dripped behind the"
17"Eva's voice caught on the"
18"She crossed the room and"
19"Eva looked at the maps,"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A grey afternoon in November pressed against the windows, catching on the edges of old maps — Paris, Prague, Marrakech — that papered the walls alongside black-…"
1"She wore a long charcoal coat — expensive, tailored, the kind of thing that got dry-cleaned rather than washed."
2"Her reflection in the mirror behind the bottles showed her the way she was: hair too long, jacket too big, delivery bag on the floor like a dog that had given u…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.9251%