Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WRYG0KKFJ2BG0FAD9DMD8

Run Details

Duration:
3m 5s
Cost:
$0.004078
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone shifted against Rory's sternum and bloomed like a coal. She stopped on the path and pressed two fingers to it through her jacket. "Warm." "Warm means open." Nyx stood at the edge of the clearing with their back to her, a cut-out of night against the lantern-lit bracken. "Something on the other side breathes hard enough to push its heat through the seams." Isolde drifted ahead of them both. She set her palm against the space between two dead oaks and the space answered — a shiver, a curvature, the world folding like a spoon left in hot tea. "A door remembers every hand that closed it." She turned, and those pale lavender eyes caught the last of the London dusk. "This one was shut in anger, and it has not forgiven." "That tells me nothing useful." Rory shrugged the delivery bag higher on her shoulder out of habit, then unhooked it and set it by the roots. She patted the Fae blade where it sat against her ribs. "Nyx. You've crossed tears before. What's the drop like?" "Less a drop than a wrong step in a dark room. Your stomach keeps walking when your body has stopped." "Great. Hold onto something." Nyx's silhouette stretched and thinned. A hand of black mist settled on the oak's bark. "After you, Carter." Rory gripped the moonsilver hilt and walked into the bend. The cold took her first — a sheet of it, edge to edge, drinking the warmth out of her teeth and fingertips. Then sound snapped back. Then colour. She stood on a terrace of pale stone and the sky above her burned amber, thick as honey poured over glass, no sun in it and no clouds. Just a low furnace glow that fell on everything and cast nothing that resembled a shadow. Behind her the rift hung in the air like a wound in a painting, and on this side it shimmered in colours that hurt to name. Below the terrace the land fell away in ribbons. Vineyards the shade of old wine. Orchards with fruit so heavy the boughs dragged the grass. Gardens laid out in whorls and spirals toward a horizon that smouldered. The air sat on her tongue. Sweet. Yeast and roasting fat and cut herbs and something floral underneath, thick enough to chew, the kind of sweetness that made her jaw ache behind the molars. Nyx came through and did not stop. Their shape ran over the stones like spilled ink and re-gathered at the balustrade. Violet eyes caught the amber light and gave none of it back. "Hel," they whispered. "Dymas." Isolde stepped through last. Silver hair lifted in a wind Rory couldn't feel. Her bare feet touched the stone and left nothing behind. "The golden maw. Belphegor's table, set and never cleared." "People down there." Rory leaned on the balustrade. Figures moved between the vine rows — bent, small, deliberate. They carried baskets on their backs and walked in lines, and where the lines turned they turned together. "Are those—" "Bound." Nyx's whisper flattened. "Contracted souls. Chefs, vintners, gardeners. They sign for years and pay in decades." One figure stopped mid-row and straightened. It stood motionless while the others flowed around it, then folded back into place. "They don't look chained." "That is the arrangement. Their hands remember the work and the rest of them comes along." "Move." Isolde set two fingers between Rory's shoulder blades. "The terrace is a mouth and we stand on the lip." Steps spiralled down the cliff face, cut into the rock and worn hollow at the centre by centuries of feet. Rory counted them until counting stopped meaning anything. Halfway down the smell changed. Fat rendering over open flame. Bread torn from the oven. Cinnamon and hot oil and the sour-sweet of fermentation rolling out of tall clay jars stacked against the wall. Her stomach turned over. She swallowed and kept walking. A colonnade opened at the base of the steps. Pillars of dark wood rose to a ceiling of woven vine, and between the pillars, tables stretched into the amber distance. Every surface groaned. Roasts glistened under lacquered skins. Fruit stood in towers. Bowls held things that moved, things that shone, things that breathed colour she had no word for. Nothing steamed and yet everything glistened, as if the food had been set out an hour ago and would still glisten a century from now. Nobody sat at the tables. "Where's the feast?" Her voice rang off the ceiling and came back to her wrong, half a beat behind her mouth. Nyx's silhouette thinned along the floor, testing the edges of the room. "It has not begun. Or it has not stopped. Time moves strange in the golden maw." "Time is a guest here," Isolde said. "Guests are fed until they stop counting courses." Rory ran her thumb over the Heartstone. It pulsed against her skin in time with nothing she could see. A sound carried from deeper in the colonnade. A wet, arrhythmic thudding. Chopping, she thought, and then discarded the thought. Chopping had a rhythm. She drew the Fae blade. Cold bit her palm and stayed. In this light the moonsilver did not glow so much as refuse the amber, holding a sliver of moon in its length. "Left or right?" Nyx's eyes tracked the colonnade to the dark at its far end. "The noise is ahead. The food is behind us. In Hel, walk toward the noise and away from the meal." "Sound logic." "There is no other kind here." They moved between the tables. Rory's hip brushed a platter and something under the glaze shifted. She stepped wide and kept walking. Twice the fruit towers breathed and shed a skin of sweetness so thick she tasted it at the back of her throat. The thudding grew teeth. Then it stopped. Silence sat in the colonnade like poured wax. Isolde tilted her head toward the dark. "Behind the last pillar. Past the ninth table." "How do you know it's the ninth?" "The first eight are set for guests who arrive hungry. The ninth is set for a guest who arrives owing." Nyx drifted ahead of them both and folded into the pillar shadow. Rory followed with the blade low and the Heartstone hot against her breastbone. Past the ninth table the colonnade turned and opened. A kitchen. Cathedral-wide and hollow as a drum. Stoves stood in ranks down both walls, iron mouths open and breathing orange, and not one of them had a cook before it. Worktables ran the length of the floor, dusted with flour and scarred by blades, and along every table the knives moved. Blades rocked on the boards. Chopped, minced, scored. Cleavers came down on jointed meat in the same staggered pattern that had reached them in the colonnade. No hands guided them. Sleeves hung empty at the ends of the benches where aprons sat tied around nothing, and the empty sleeves twitched with the work. Rory stopped walking. "On the boards," she said. "Look at the boards." Flour dust stood up in ridges along each tabletop. Left by fingers. Small. Countless. Pressed into the flour in a repeating shape, one after another after another, the size of a child's hand. Isolde looked at the prints and said nothing at all. Nyx's whisper came thin and low over the noise of the knives. "Those are not contracts."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:25:24.999Z" 9/23/2026, 10:25:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"maw"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
2"shimmered"
3"maw"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount989
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Rory11
Isolde6
London1
Fae2
Silver1
Figures1
One1
Steps1
Nyx8
Flour1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Figures"
4"Steps"
5"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Flour"
globalScore0.944
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean23.38
std18.47
cv0.79
sampleLengths
025
11
239
336
433
546
620
74
818
910
1028
1170
1237
1334
1433
153
1633
1738
1817
1920
204
2116
2220
2362
249
2584
265
2721
2828
2915
3019
3124
3233
333
3432
352
366
3744
384
393
408
4115
427
4320
4434
4552
4653
473
489
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
71.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences120
ratio0.025
matches
0"She set her palm against the space between two dead oaks and the space answered — a shiver, a curvature, the world folding like a spoon left in hot tea."
1"The cold took her first — a sheet of it, edge to edge, drinking the warmth out of her teeth and fingertips."
2"Figures moved between the vine rows — bent, small, deliberate."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.01917255297679112
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean10.33
std7.13
cv0.69
sampleLengths
011
114
21
324
415
56
630
722
811
926
1011
119
1220
134
145
1510
163
1710
1822
194
202
2128
2216
2326
249
256
2610
2712
286
291
3027
317
3214
3312
343
355
369
3710
389
398
4010
4118
422
434
4413
456
4614
474
4816
499
96.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6416666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners77
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then sound snapped back."
1"Just a low furnace glow"
2"Twice the fruit towers breathed"
3"Then it stopped."
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences88
matches
0"She stopped on the path"
1"She set her palm against"
2"She turned, and those pale"
3"She patted the Fae blade"
4"She stood on a terrace"
5"Their shape ran over the"
6"Her bare feet touched the"
7"They carried baskets on their"
8"It stood motionless while the"
9"Her stomach turned over."
10"She swallowed and kept walking."
11"Her voice rang off the"
12"It pulsed against her skin"
13"She drew the Fae blade."
14"They moved between the tables."
15"She stepped wide and kept"
ratio0.182
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Heartstone shifted against Rory's"
1"She stopped on the path"
2"Nyx stood at the edge"
3"Isolde drifted ahead of them"
4"She set her palm against"
5"She turned, and those pale"
6"Rory shrugged the delivery bag"
7"She patted the Fae blade"
8"Nyx's silhouette stretched and thinned."
9"A hand of black mist"
10"Rory gripped the moonsilver hilt"
11"The cold took her first"
12"She stood on a terrace"
13"Vineyards the shade of old"
14"Orchards with fruit so heavy"
15"The air sat on her"
16"Yeast and roasting fat and"
17"Nyx came through and did"
18"Their shape ran over the"
19"Violet eyes caught the amber"
ratio0.773
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Yeast and roasting fat and cut herbs and something floral underneath, thick enough to chew, the kind of sweetness that made her jaw ache behind the molars."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.057
93.1889%