Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WTD215HN0Y1588W98NJ45

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.000850
Provider:
Xiaomi

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts, in the order Eva had taught her — top, middle, bottom, each one a small percussive argument — and the chain, and still Rory stood with her hand on the knob and said, "I can hear you breathing, Lucien." Nothing but the fat, contented breathing of Ptolemy, who had taken the arm of the sofa as his own and was washing a paw with theatrical indifference. Beyond the window, Brick Lane hissed with late rain. Downstairs, the curry house was closing; a smell of cardamom and scorched onion had worked its way up through the floorboards and settled into everything — the books, the scrolls, the coat draped over the back of a chair, the air itself. Then, softly: "You always were too clever for your own good." Rory undid the chain and opened the door. He looked worse than she had braced for. Not badly — Lucien Moreau had never been capable of looking badly, not with that face and that tailoring — but the charcoal suit was damp through at the shoulders, and his platinum hair, usually slicked back with such architectural certainty, had come loose over one brow. He leaned on the ivory-handled cane as though it were load-bearing rather than decorative, and his weight was wrong on his left leg. The amber eye found hers. The black eye, that void where an iris should have been, found it a half-second later, as it always did, like a light coming on in an empty room. "Aurora," he said. He had never called her that. He had called her *Rory*, and once, in a low restaurant in Soho, *ma chère* — and she had let him, which was its own kind of mistake. "It's two in the morning." "I know what time it is." "You've been standing there long enough to ring the bell." A flicker of something — not quite a smile, the ghost of one, pressed flat. "I was working out whether I deserved to." She did not step aside. That was the thing about history: it taught you exactly where to put your feet. "Eva's not here." "I didn't come for Eva." Ptolemy, traitor that he was, had abandoned the sofa. The tabby threaded himself between Rory's ankles, then proceeded down the hall and out through the open door, where he wound around Lucien's shins with a sound like a rusty hinge. Lucien looked down. The hard line of his mouth did something complicated. "He usually hates me," Lucien said. "He hates everyone. He has principles." Rory stepped back. It wasn't forgiveness; it was gravity. "Get in before Eva's neighbours decide you're a dealer." He came in. Up close he smelled of rain and cold stone and something underneath both, something faintly sulphurous that she had once asked about and immediately wished she hadn't. He had to pass her in the narrow hall — the flat was a one-bedroom, and a cramped one, every shelf and table colonised by Eva's research until only a channel remained — and he stopped, because stopping was the only way they both fit. He stopped. She didn't move. His sleeve brushed her wrist, and the old scar there — the small crescent, childhood's souvenir — tightened the way it did in cold weather, in weather like this, in weather that had nothing to do with the temperature. "Your leg," she said, before she could decide not to. "A disagreement. It's nothing." "You're putting eighty percent of your weight on it." He looked at her, surprised, and she watched the surprise become something else — an old, involuntary warmth, quickly banked. "Still counting." He said it quietly. "You used to do that. Count things. Coins in a jar, stairs on the tube, the seconds I was late." "You were always late." "I was always exactly late enough for you to look." He said it lightly, and then seemed to hear how it landed, and looked away, toward the living room and its avalanche of paper. "*Merde*. That came out wrong." "No," Rory said. "It came out exactly right. That's the problem." She went into the kitchen — two rings, a sink, a window onto a black alley — and filled the kettle because filling the kettle was something to do with her hands. He followed as far as the doorway and stood in it, one hand resting on the head of his cane, the amber eye catching the weak bulb above the cooker. "Cardamom," he said. "From downstairs. And beeswax. Eva's been burning candles again, the ones with the sigils in the wax." He inhaled. "Bergamot. You're using the soap in the bathroom that smells like bergamot." "You've been in Eva's bathroom." "I have an excellent memory and a very specific grievance against that soap." He paused. "It suits you." Rory set two cups on the counter without asking whether he wanted tea, which was its own admission. "Why are you here, Lucien?" The kettle began to build toward its boil. Rain tapped the window. Ptolemy had come back inside — of course he had — and was now sitting in the hall with the particular expression of a cat preparing to judge. "Three weeks ago," Lucien said, "I sold a name." "You sell names. It's what you do." "You misunderstand. I sold *a* name. A specific one." He turned his wrist, and the ivory handle of the cane caught the light — and she knew, because she had once seen him open it in a cellar in Bermondsey, that the blade inside was thin as a whisper and twice as final. "Evan Price." The kettle clicked, but neither of them moved for it. The flat went very still, the way a room goes still when something old and heavy is lifted off the floor. "Say that again," Rory said. "Evan Price," he said, in careful, level English, as though handling something that might cut him, "is looking for you. Or he was. He is no longer in a position to look for anyone." A beat. "The details I will spare you, unless you ask." Rory's hand had found the edge of the counter. She looked down at it — at the crescent scar, white against her skin, at the knuckles going pale — and made herself let go. "Why?" "Why did I sell the name, or why did I come here?" "Both. Start with the first and don't lie to me, because you were always a mediocre liar when you wanted something." He almost smiled at that. Almost. "I sold it because I heard it in a room I was being paid to stand silently in, and because I know precisely what that name means to you, and because there are things I will burn the world's oldest alliances to the ground to keep true." He met her eyes — amber first, black after. "And I came here because you should hear it from me and not from Eva's notes, and because I am told your new flat has excellent security and I wanted to see whether the rumours about three deadbolts were true." "They're true." "They're not enough. Not for what's out there. Not for what I am." The words came out plainer than he intended, and she watched him register it. He switched to French without meaning to — "*C'est tout. Il n'y a rien d'autre*" — and stopped, jaw tightening. "Don't do that," Rory said. "Do what." "Fall back on a language I don't speak when you're about to say the thing you actually mean." He was quiet for a moment. Then, in English, roughened at the edges: "The last time I stood in a doorway and told you the truth, you left. And you were right to. I had let you believe I was only a man with a cane and a price list, and you packed a bag in under four minutes and you did not look back, and I have counted those minutes ever since — every hour of them — which I appreciate is an embarrassing thing to admit for someone who claims to deal only in leverage." "You are only a man with a cane and a price list," Rory said, and hated how her voice came out. "You're a man with a cane and a price list who also happens to be — " "Half of something that doesn't belong here." He said it without self-pity, which was worse. "Yes. And you have your own reasons to be careful around anything that comes from Avaros, and I will not ask you to set them aside." The kettle had gone cold-ish in its silence. Rory picked it up, poured the water anyway — the steam rose between them, fogging the space where his face was — and carried the cups to the small table, pushing aside a stack of Eva's research notes on demon trafficking routes to make room. She sat. He did not. "Sit down, Lucien. You're swaying." "I am not *swaying*." "You're swaying the way a mast sways. Sit." He sat, unfolding himself with the particular grace of a man who had decided, in a first-floor flat above a curry house, to accept being told what to do. She pushed a cup toward him. He wrapped both hands around it, and she noticed then that they were not quite steady — that the fingers were white-knuckled, that something in him was running on fumes. "You could have sent word," she said. "Through your channels. A message, a name, anything." "I could have." He looked up. Amber, then black. "But then I wouldn't have got to hear you tell me to sit down." She laughed — a small, involuntary sound she would deny later — and Ptolemy, from the floor, made a noise of opinion. Outside, the rain thickened against the glass. Rory looked at the man across the table: the loose hair, the wrong leg, the ivory handle catching light, the four languages he had and the one he kept failing to use. "Evan," she said. "Tell me the rest of it. All of it. And don't translate anything." "*D'accord*," he said, and then, catching himself, corrected in English: "All right." She held out her hand, palm down, on the table between them — not taking his, only offering the geography of it. He looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar, for longer than the detail warranted. Then he set his cane against the chair, and turned his hand over, and did not close the distance. He waited, which — she thought, watching him, watching the rain, watching the amber and the black — might have been the bravest thing he had done all night.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:26:12.681Z" 9/23/2026, 10:26:12 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.032
82.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1755
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
2"lightly"
3"very"
4"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1755
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicker"
2"warmth"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen89
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords14
totalWords1789
ratio0.008
matches
0"Rory"
1"ma chère"
2"Merde"
3"a"
4"C'est tout. Il n'y a rien d'autre"
5"swaying"
6"D'accord"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1162
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Rory13
Ptolemy4
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien5
Moreau1
Soho1
Bermondsey1
English3
French1
Amber1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Amber"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
3"Bermondsey"
4"English"
5"French"
globalScore0.941
windowScore0.833
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile, the ghost of one, pressed flat"
1"as though handling something that might cut him, A beat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1789
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"knuckled, that something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean30.32
std27.45
cv0.905
sampleLengths
041
178
211
38
4112
537
65
76
810
923
1023
115
1252
136
1424
1575
1644
1710
184
199
2046
214
2239
2311
2462
2534
265
2718
2823
2940
309
317
3255
3331
345
3545
3635
3712
3821
39102
402
4147
425
432
4418
4597
4638
4741
4858
495
92.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"been, found"
1"is lifted"
2"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was washing"
1"was closing"
2"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount29
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences116
ratio0.172
matches
0"Three deadbolts, in the order Eva had taught her — top, middle, bottom, each one a small percussive argument — and the chain, and still Rory stood with her hand on the knob and said, \"I can hear you breathing, Lucien.\""
1"Downstairs, the curry house was closing; a smell of cardamom and scorched onion had worked its way up through the floorboards and settled into everything — the books, the scrolls, the coat draped over the back of a chair, the air itself."
2"Not badly — Lucien Moreau had never been capable of looking badly, not with that face and that tailoring — but the charcoal suit was damp through at the shoulders, and his platinum hair, usually slicked back with such architectural certainty, had come loose over one brow."
3"He had called her *Rory*, and once, in a low restaurant in Soho, *ma chère* — and she had let him, which was its own kind of mistake."
4"A flicker of something — not quite a smile, the ghost of one, pressed flat."
5"It wasn't forgiveness; it was gravity."
6"He had to pass her in the narrow hall — the flat was a one-bedroom, and a cramped one, every shelf and table colonised by Eva's research until only a channel remained — and he stopped, because stopping was the only way they both fit."
7"His sleeve brushed her wrist, and the old scar there — the small crescent, childhood's souvenir — tightened the way it did in cold weather, in weather like this, in weather that had nothing to do with the temperature."
8"He looked at her, surprised, and she watched the surprise become something else — an old, involuntary warmth, quickly banked."
9"She went into the kitchen — two rings, a sink, a window onto a black alley — and filled the kettle because filling the kettle was something to do with her hands."
10"Ptolemy had come back inside — of course he had — and was now sitting in the hall with the particular expression of a cat preparing to judge."
11"\"You misunderstand. I sold *a* name. A specific one.\" He turned his wrist, and the ivory handle of the cane caught the light — and she knew, because she had once seen him open it in a cellar in Bermondsey, that the blade inside was thin as a whisper and twice as final."
12"She looked down at it — at the crescent scar, white against her skin, at the knuckles going pale — and made herself let go."
13"\"I sold it because I heard it in a room I was being paid to stand silently in, and because I know precisely what that name means to you, and because there are things I will burn the world's oldest alliances to the ground to keep true.\" He met her eyes — amber first, black after."
14"He switched to French without meaning to — \"*C'est tout. Il n'y a rien d'autre*\" — and stopped, jaw tightening."
15"Rory picked it up, poured the water anyway — the steam rose between them, fogging the space where his face was — and carried the cups to the small table, pushing aside a stack of Eva's research notes on demon trafficking routes to make room."
16"He wrapped both hands around it, and she noticed then that they were not quite steady — that the fingers were white-knuckled, that something in him was running on fumes."
17"She laughed — a small, involuntary sound she would deny later — and Ptolemy, from the floor, made a noise of opinion."
18"She held out her hand, palm down, on the table between them — not taking his, only offering the geography of it."
19"He waited, which — she thought, watching him, watching the rain, watching the amber and the black — might have been the bravest thing he had done all night."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1140
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.039473684210526314
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011403508771929825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean15.42
std14.52
cv0.942
sampleLengths
041
127
29
342
411
58
68
747
823
95
1029
113
126
1328
145
156
1610
1715
188
195
2015
213
225
239
2431
253
269
276
289
296
309
313
3227
3345
342
353
3639
3710
384
399
4020
416
4220
434
4434
455
463
478
4832
4930
61.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4224137931034483
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then, in English, roughened at"
1"Then he set his cane"
ratio0.03
13.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences66
matches
0"He looked worse than she"
1"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
2"He had never called her"
3"He had called her *Rory*,"
4"She did not step aside."
5"It wasn't forgiveness; it was"
6"He came in."
7"He had to pass her"
8"She didn't move."
9"His sleeve brushed her wrist,"
10"she said, before she could"
11"He looked at her, surprised,"
12"He said it quietly"
13"He said it lightly, and"
14"She went into the kitchen"
15"He followed as far as"
16"He turned his wrist, and"
17"he said, in careful, level"
18"She looked down at it"
19"He almost smiled at that."
ratio0.515
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"Nothing but the fat, contented"
1"Downstairs, the curry house was"
2"Rory undid the chain and"
3"He looked worse than she"
4"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
5"The amber eye found hers."
6"The black eye, that void"
7"He had never called her"
8"He had called her *Rory*,"
9"A flicker of something —"
10"She did not step aside."
11"That was the thing about"
12"Ptolemy, traitor that he was,"
13"The tabby threaded himself between"
14"Lucien looked down."
15"The hard line of his"
16"Rory stepped back"
17"It wasn't forgiveness; it was"
18"He came in."
19"He had to pass her"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Nothing but the fat, contented breathing of Ptolemy, who had taken the arm of the sofa as his own and was washing a paw with theatrical indifference."
1"He leaned on the ivory-handled cane as though it were load-bearing rather than decorative, and his weight was wrong on his left leg."
2"He had called her *Rory*, and once, in a low restaurant in Soho, *ma chère* — and she had let him, which was its own kind of mistake."
3"His sleeve brushed her wrist, and the old scar there — the small crescent, childhood's souvenir — tightened the way it did in cold weather, in weather like this…"
4"Rory set two cups on the counter without asking whether he wanted tea, which was its own admission."
5"He sat, unfolding himself with the particular grace of a man who had decided, in a first-floor flat above a curry house, to accept being told what to do."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.5857%