| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0.038 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |
| 82.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1755 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1755 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 89 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1789 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "ma chère" | | 2 | "Merde" | | 3 | "a" | | 4 | "C'est tout. Il n'y a rien d'autre" | | 5 | "swaying" | | 6 | "D'accord" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1162 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 13 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Moreau | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Bermondsey | 1 | | English | 3 | | French | 1 | | Amber | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moreau" | | 5 | "Amber" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "Bermondsey" | | 4 | "English" | | 5 | "French" |
| | globalScore | 0.941 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile, the ghost of one, pressed flat" | | 1 | "as though handling something that might cut him, A beat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1789 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "knuckled, that something" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 30.32 | | std | 27.45 | | cv | 0.905 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 112 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 102 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 47 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 97 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 58 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 92.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "been, found" | | 1 | "is lifted" | | 2 | "being told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "was washing" | | 1 | "was closing" | | 2 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 29 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.172 | | matches | | 0 | "Three deadbolts, in the order Eva had taught her — top, middle, bottom, each one a small percussive argument — and the chain, and still Rory stood with her hand on the knob and said, \"I can hear you breathing, Lucien.\"" | | 1 | "Downstairs, the curry house was closing; a smell of cardamom and scorched onion had worked its way up through the floorboards and settled into everything — the books, the scrolls, the coat draped over the back of a chair, the air itself." | | 2 | "Not badly — Lucien Moreau had never been capable of looking badly, not with that face and that tailoring — but the charcoal suit was damp through at the shoulders, and his platinum hair, usually slicked back with such architectural certainty, had come loose over one brow." | | 3 | "He had called her *Rory*, and once, in a low restaurant in Soho, *ma chère* — and she had let him, which was its own kind of mistake." | | 4 | "A flicker of something — not quite a smile, the ghost of one, pressed flat." | | 5 | "It wasn't forgiveness; it was gravity." | | 6 | "He had to pass her in the narrow hall — the flat was a one-bedroom, and a cramped one, every shelf and table colonised by Eva's research until only a channel remained — and he stopped, because stopping was the only way they both fit." | | 7 | "His sleeve brushed her wrist, and the old scar there — the small crescent, childhood's souvenir — tightened the way it did in cold weather, in weather like this, in weather that had nothing to do with the temperature." | | 8 | "He looked at her, surprised, and she watched the surprise become something else — an old, involuntary warmth, quickly banked." | | 9 | "She went into the kitchen — two rings, a sink, a window onto a black alley — and filled the kettle because filling the kettle was something to do with her hands." | | 10 | "Ptolemy had come back inside — of course he had — and was now sitting in the hall with the particular expression of a cat preparing to judge." | | 11 | "\"You misunderstand. I sold *a* name. A specific one.\" He turned his wrist, and the ivory handle of the cane caught the light — and she knew, because she had once seen him open it in a cellar in Bermondsey, that the blade inside was thin as a whisper and twice as final." | | 12 | "She looked down at it — at the crescent scar, white against her skin, at the knuckles going pale — and made herself let go." | | 13 | "\"I sold it because I heard it in a room I was being paid to stand silently in, and because I know precisely what that name means to you, and because there are things I will burn the world's oldest alliances to the ground to keep true.\" He met her eyes — amber first, black after." | | 14 | "He switched to French without meaning to — \"*C'est tout. Il n'y a rien d'autre*\" — and stopped, jaw tightening." | | 15 | "Rory picked it up, poured the water anyway — the steam rose between them, fogging the space where his face was — and carried the cups to the small table, pushing aside a stack of Eva's research notes on demon trafficking routes to make room." | | 16 | "He wrapped both hands around it, and she noticed then that they were not quite steady — that the fingers were white-knuckled, that something in him was running on fumes." | | 17 | "She laughed — a small, involuntary sound she would deny later — and Ptolemy, from the floor, made a noise of opinion." | | 18 | "She held out her hand, palm down, on the table between them — not taking his, only offering the geography of it." | | 19 | "He waited, which — she thought, watching him, watching the rain, watching the amber and the black — might have been the bravest thing he had done all night." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1140 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.039473684210526314 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011403508771929825 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 15.42 | | std | 14.52 | | cv | 0.942 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 61.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4224137931034483 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, in English, roughened at" | | 1 | "Then he set his cane" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 13.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked worse than she" | | 1 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 2 | "He had never called her" | | 3 | "He had called her *Rory*," | | 4 | "She did not step aside." | | 5 | "It wasn't forgiveness; it was" | | 6 | "He came in." | | 7 | "He had to pass her" | | 8 | "She didn't move." | | 9 | "His sleeve brushed her wrist," | | 10 | "she said, before she could" | | 11 | "He looked at her, surprised," | | 12 | "He said it quietly" | | 13 | "He said it lightly, and" | | 14 | "She went into the kitchen" | | 15 | "He followed as far as" | | 16 | "He turned his wrist, and" | | 17 | "he said, in careful, level" | | 18 | "She looked down at it" | | 19 | "He almost smiled at that." |
| | ratio | 0.515 | |
| 13.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Nothing but the fat, contented" | | 1 | "Downstairs, the curry house was" | | 2 | "Rory undid the chain and" | | 3 | "He looked worse than she" | | 4 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 5 | "The amber eye found hers." | | 6 | "The black eye, that void" | | 7 | "He had never called her" | | 8 | "He had called her *Rory*," | | 9 | "A flicker of something —" | | 10 | "She did not step aside." | | 11 | "That was the thing about" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, traitor that he was," | | 13 | "The tabby threaded himself between" | | 14 | "Lucien looked down." | | 15 | "The hard line of his" | | 16 | "Rory stepped back" | | 17 | "It wasn't forgiveness; it was" | | 18 | "He came in." | | 19 | "He had to pass her" |
| | ratio | 0.894 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nothing but the fat, contented breathing of Ptolemy, who had taken the arm of the sofa as his own and was washing a paw with theatrical indifference." | | 1 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled cane as though it were load-bearing rather than decorative, and his weight was wrong on his left leg." | | 2 | "He had called her *Rory*, and once, in a low restaurant in Soho, *ma chère* — and she had let him, which was its own kind of mistake." | | 3 | "His sleeve brushed her wrist, and the old scar there — the small crescent, childhood's souvenir — tightened the way it did in cold weather, in weather like this…" | | 4 | "Rory set two cups on the counter without asking whether he wanted tea, which was its own admission." | | 5 | "He sat, unfolding himself with the particular grace of a man who had decided, in a first-floor flat above a curry house, to accept being told what to do." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.258 | | leniency | 0.516 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |