Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WTP1MGABQ9S7K2W738Z1T

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.002222
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape across the tunnel entrance had torn loose on one side and flapped in the draught coming up from below. Quinn ducked under it and clicked her torch on. The beam caught water running down tiled walls and the ribbed metal curve of a Tube tunnel that hadn't carried a train since the seventies. "Mind the third rail," DS Achebe said behind her. "Or what's left of it." "Power's been dead since seventy-six." "Humour me." Their footsteps clanged on the service walkway. Fifty metres in, a second cordon blocked the way, and PC Nwosu stood guard beside it with a scarf over his mouth. Quinn showed her warrant card out of habit. Nwosu lifted the tape and looked glad to hand the problem over. The abandoned Camden station opened up ahead of them, its tiled walls plastered with layers of posters, some advertising acts she half-remembered from her teens, others advertising things she couldn't read at all. Strings of coloured bulbs hung between the old platform columns, still lit, humming off a generator somewhere. Market stalls lined the platform edge under tarpaulins and moth-eaten velvet, all of them cleared in a hurry. Glass jars clustered on a counter caught her torchlight — things floating in cloudy fluid that she didn't look at twice. Chalk marks stained the platform in overlapping circles and sigils. The air smelled of tallow, copper, and something sweet underneath it all, like fruit just past ripe. And in the middle of the platform, sprawled across the chalk circles with his arms flung wide, a dead man. "Who called it in?" Quinn asked. "Anonymous. Pay-as-you-go handset, found in a bin two streets up." Achebe pulled his collar higher. He was a big man who felt the cold, and he'd complained the whole way down. "First responders didn't know what to make of the setup. Figured ritual. Figured we should see it before SOG got their hands on it and tidied everything into an incident report nobody reads." "They were right." Quinn moved toward the body. "Who's the senior SOG officer on scene?" "DI Renwick. She's over by the old ticket office, taking statements from the traders who didn't scarper. Fewer than you'd think. Place like this, half the vendors don't exist on paper." Quinn crouched at the edge of the chalk circles. The dead man looked mid-forties, heavy across the shoulders, dressed in a good suit ruined by whatever had pooled beneath him. His shoes alone cost more than her monthly rent. No watch on either wrist, though the left sleeve bore the pale stripe where one had sat for years. His hands were clean, nails trimmed, but the knuckles on his right hand had healed over badly at least twice in the past. "He's been moved," she said. Achebe stopped beside her. "Renwick reckons he fell. Said the chalk's undisturbed, so he couldn't have been dragged in." "The chalk's undisturbed. Look at the suit." Quinn played her torch across the man's torso. "Fabric rides up on the left side. Trouser leg twisted at the knee the wrong way for a fall. Somebody posed him." Achebe crouched and squinted. "Could've thrashed about. Renwick said the cause of death is going to be unexplained — no marks, no punctures, tox screen pending. Fits with the setup. You get these groups, they take something together and one of them doesn't come back." "The setup fits, you're right. That's what bothers me." Quinn stood and walked a slow circle around the body, keeping outside the chalk. "Look at the stencils." "What about them?" "You've worked anything ritual-adjacent before?" "Two years in the weird squad before it got defunded. Mostly fraud. Priests who weren't." "Then you know how these chalk drawings usually look. Hands shaking, lines wobbly, circles that don't close." She swept her torch across the platform floor. "These are ruled. Look at the spacing between the sigils. Even. The outer circle's true. Whoever drew this used a cord and a pivot. That's not devotion, Achebe, that's set dressing." Achebe rocked back on his heels and said nothing for a moment. Somewhere deeper in the tunnels, water dripped in a slow steady rhythm. "Some of them are careful," he said. "You get practitioners who treat it like drafting. Doesn't mean the dead man didn't walk in here of his own accord and drop." "His own accord." Quinn swung her beam to the chalked platform edge. "Then where are his footprints? The chalk goes right up to where he's lying. Mine have marked it just walking around, and I've been here four minutes." Achebe looked down at his own shoes, then at the pristine white circles. "Whoever put him here lowered him," Quinn said. "Carried him in and laid him down inside the drawing. Two people at least — he's fifteen stone if he's a pound. And they did it without scuffing the chalk, which means they knew exactly where to stand. So they drew it first and then fetched him." "That's a lot of supposition." "It's a lot of work is what it is." Quinn moved toward the stalls, stepping over a spilled basket of dried things she refused to identify. "Which tells me this isn't a ritual gone wrong. Rituals gone wrong are messy. People panic. They run and knock things over." She pointed her torch at the row of stalls. "These tarpaulins are folded. Folded. Someone packed up in an orderly fashion." "Or the market closes neatly and everyone goes home and the poor bastard stayed behind." "And somebody tidied a market stall while a man lay dead three metres away?" Quinn shook her head. "No. I want forensics to print every one of those jars." Achebe sighed and pulled out his notebook. "Renwick's not going to love this. She wants it closed as an unexplained death at an unlicensed gathering. Sensitive, she said. Keeps it away from press." "Sensitive how?" "She wouldn't elaborate." He clicked his pen. "Where do you want me?" "Start with the perimeter. Photographs of every entrance and exit before the traffic ruins it. And find out who ran this market — somebody sold these people the space." Quinn left him to it and moved down the platform past the stalls. Glass clinked in a draught she couldn't feel. The chalk work continued in patches — half-finished sigils by the pillar, a circle abandoned near the old platform bench, arrows scratched into the tile at eye height in a hand that looked, to her eye, like a different hand entirely from the one that had laid out the platform floor. She crouched by the bench. Tucked underneath it, half-hidden by a collapsed stack of cloth, something caught her torch and threw back a greenish gleam. She pulled the cloth aside with a gloved finger. A small brass compass sat in the dust, its casing mottled with verdigris. Sigils covered its face, etched fine as hair. The needle spun, found a direction, and held steady toward the tunnel wall rather than any point of the compass rose. Footsteps approached. DI Renwick stopped a few paces off, a slim woman with her coat buttoned to the throat and her hands buried in its pockets. "DS Achebe tells me you've got theories," Renwick said. "Questions." Quinn straightened, the compass sitting in her palm. "Whoever staged this scene left in a hurry. Not panicked. Hurried. There's a difference." "Staged." Renwick's mouth thinned. "That's a strong word." "There aren't any footprints in the chalk around the body, ma'am. He was placed there." Renwick looked at the dead man, then at the chalk, and said nothing for a long moment. A breeze moved through the platform and stirred the coloured bulbs overhead. "The traders I've spoken to say he arrived alone," Renwick said. "That he was looking for something. Asking after a woman." "After her?" Quinn turned the compass over. "Did they say what he wanted?" "They used a word I don't care to repeat and pointed at the chalk circles like that explained anything." Renwick tilted her head at the compass. "What have you got?" "Something that doesn't belong to a man who buys his suits on Savile Row." Quinn held it out so the DI could see the etched face. The needle hadn't wavered. It pointed at the tiled wall where no door existed, quivering the length of a fingernail back and forth across its mark. "Professional work, but not his. A working tool. Left behind." Renwick didn't reach for it. Her gaze fixed on the spinning needle. "It's not pointing north," she said. "No, ma'am." "What's it pointing at?" Quinn looked at the wall the needle chose. Old tiles, cracked grout, the ghosts of adverts beneath decades of grime. She looked at the sigils scratched at eye height on that same stretch, arrows converging. She looked at the compass again, and at the dead man's empty wrist with its pale stripe where a watch had sat for years. "The same thing he was looking for," Quinn said.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:26:21.882Z" 9/23/2026, 10:26:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1496
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1496
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"velvet"
2"pristine"
3"etched"
4"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1501
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount828
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Achebe7
Nwosu2
Camden1
Quinn17
Renwick7
persons
0"Achebe"
1"Nwosu"
2"Quinn"
3"Renwick"
places(empty)
globalScore0.473
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1501
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean28.32
std24.12
cv0.852
sampleLengths
055
114
25
32
449
5116
620
76
864
915
1031
1181
125
1319
1437
1545
1627
173
185
1915
2056
2124
2230
2339
2413
2555
265
2769
2815
2929
3033
312
3212
3329
3472
3525
3651
3726
389
3923
408
4115
4229
4321
4413
4530
4662
4712
486
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
88.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences105
ratio0.019
matches
0"Glass jars clustered on a counter caught her torchlight — things floating in cloudy fluid that she didn't look at twice."
1"The chalk work continued in patches — half-finished sigils by the pillar, a circle abandoned near the old platform bench, arrows scratched into the tile at eye height in a hand that looked, to her eye, like a different hand entirely from the one that had laid out the platform floor."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount831
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.021660649819494584
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0036101083032490976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.3
std9.84
cv0.688
sampleLengths
021
19
225
39
45
55
62
77
822
98
1012
1133
1217
1318
1421
1510
1617
1720
186
1915
2016
2133
228
237
2431
259
2621
279
2819
2923
305
314
3215
3315
3422
354
3641
3723
384
393
405
4115
4225
4331
4412
4512
467
4723
4812
4927
89.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5428571428571428
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners57
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Somewhere deeper in the tunnels,"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences62
matches
0"Their footsteps clanged on the"
1"He was a big man"
2"His shoes alone cost more"
3"His hands were clean, nails"
4"She swept her torch across"
5"She pointed her torch at"
6"He clicked his pen"
7"She crouched by the bench."
8"She pulled the cloth aside"
9"It pointed at the tiled"
10"Her gaze fixed on the"
11"She looked at the sigils"
12"She looked at the compass"
ratio0.21
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"The tape across the tunnel"
1"Quinn ducked under it and"
2"The beam caught water running"
3"DS Achebe said behind her"
4"Their footsteps clanged on the"
5"Quinn showed her warrant card"
6"Nwosu lifted the tape and"
7"The abandoned Camden station opened"
8"Strings of coloured bulbs hung"
9"Glass jars clustered on a"
10"Chalk marks stained the platform"
11"The air smelled of tallow,"
12"Achebe pulled his collar higher"
13"He was a big man"
14"Quinn moved toward the body"
15"Quinn crouched at the edge"
16"The dead man looked mid-forties,"
17"His shoes alone cost more"
18"His hands were clean, nails"
19"Achebe stopped beside her."
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was a big man who felt the cold, and he'd complained the whole way down."
1"The chalk work continued in patches — half-finished sigils by the pillar, a circle abandoned near the old platform bench, arrows scratched into the tile at eye …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn straightened, the compass sitting in her palm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.155
leniency0.31
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.7138%