Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WWRZHKT6JMP1C9G7DC6Q3

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Duration:
4m 46s
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$0.100322
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xAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
She yanked the chain free and hauled the door open on the second knock. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow landing. Curry steam climbed the stairs behind him and clung to his charcoal suit. Platinum hair, slicked back. Ivory cane in one hand. One amber eye, one black, both locked on her face. "Two bolts," he said. "You left the third." "I wanted you gone before I finished the set." "A poor plan. I have never been good at gone." She braced her shoulder in the doorway. Books and scrolls crowded the flat behind her. A mug of cold tea sat on a stack of notes. Ptolemy shot between her ankles, tabby fur on end, and spat at the Frenchman. "Eva's out." "I did not come for Eva." "Then you've got the wrong stair." "I have the right woman in the right door." His gaze dropped to her left wrist. Gauze wrapped the crescent scar. A dark spot had seeped through. "And you are leaking." She tugged the sleeve down. His mouth tightened. "Move." "No." He did not shove her. He set the ivory handle against the frame and waited, polite as a debt. Fried onions and cardamom rolled up from the curry house. A pan cracked on a hob below. The clang jumped into her teeth. "Five minutes," she said. "Three. If you stop lying." She stepped aside. He entered. His shoulder caught a stack of hardbacks and a scroll slid free, unrolling across the rug in a rush of paper. Neither of them bent to catch it. She shut the door. One bolt shot home under her thumb. The other two stayed bare. Ptolemy leapt onto the arm of the battered sofa and stared. Lucien rested the cane against a tower of notes. No spare air lived in that room. His cologne cut the spice, clean and cold, rain on stone. On the desk, Eva's notebook lay open. A crescent filled the margin, ringed with script Aurora could not read. She flipped it shut. His eyes had already taken the page. "Research. Not an invitation." "Eva has a steady hand." He did not smile. "Her nerve is another matter." "You vanished. Spitalfields. My name in your mouth at midnight. A cold sheet by dawn. Don't pretty it up." "Buyers were already drinking under your flat." He undid his jacket button. No hurry in it. "Silas pours a fine cognac. He also pours names, when the coin is kind." "You sold me." "I bought you six hours." He held her stare. "Do not call it mercy. I do not trade in that." She planted her feet. The sofa still caught the backs of her knees. Paper dust tickled her nose. She bit the inside of her cheek and tasted copper. "What do you want?" "What I wanted the night you left my rooms." His eyes caught on her mouth. He looked at the cat instead. His jaw set hard. "And the sentence I swallowed. They would have killed you if you had stayed." "Say it." "No." "Coward." "Yes." He closed the distance. Wool, heat, the faint sweet of cardamom trapped in his cuff. "Evan is in London. He keeps a new friend with old money and a hunger for buried names. Laila. Malphora. He is selling both." The second name struck like a thrown glass. She had not heard it spoken since a locked kitchen in Cardiff, long before London, long before him. "You don't get to use that." "I did not dig it up. They did. I came before the bill arrived." "Fixer talk." Her laugh came out short. "A clean word for a filthy job." "And you still want a clean exit." His hand rose and stopped short of her jaw. The gap between palm and skin hummed. "There is not one. Not tonight. Not while your own flat sits over a bar full of ears." Ptolemy's tail beat the sofa. A bike bell rang in the street, thin and sharp. Aurora held her ground. His hand waited one inch from her cheek. Last time, his mouth at her throat. Her fingers wrecking that neat hair. Dawn, and a folded note in a drawer, still untranslated. "Read it. The note. Aloud. You owe me the words." "Je reviendrai quand le sang se taira." The French sat low in his chest. "I will come back when the blood goes quiet." "It didn't." "No." His thumb skimmed the edge of her sleeve. Not the scar. Near enough to count. "It grew loud. So here I am. A cramped library. A cat with murder in its face. A woman with the same plan." "Solid plan." "You want my throat and my mouth. Pick one before the stair decides for you." She shoved his chest. He caught her wrist and kept it. Under the gauze, the old scar burned. Childhood pavement, a broken bottle, her mother's shout. It had no business burning now. His black eye flooded dark. The amber one looked stranded in a storm. "Let go." "Show me." "It's a scar, Lucien. I fell. I was eight." "Show me what they paid for." She ripped the gauze free. The crescent kept the same small curve it had always kept, pale against her skin, until light moved in it. Slow as a pulse. A cruel small gleam that did not belong to any lamp in Eva's flat. A scroll on the desk shivered. No window stood open. The page lifted an inch and lay still. Lucien breathed out. He did not retreat. "Malphora," he said, soft as a man who had found a saint in the wrong church. "Don't call me that." "Then do not answer." Her chin tipped up. He had to lower his to meet her. Cognac sweetened the air between their mouths, dark and warm. His free hand braced the sofa back and caged her in wool and heat. The scar pulsed between them like a second heart. Feet hit the stair. Not Eva's quick tread. Heavier. Two sets. They stopped on the landing. A knock. Polite. Patient. Lucien released her wrist and twisted the cane. A thin blade slid free of the ivory, a bright whisper of steel. "Behind the sofa." "I'm not ducking behind Eva's cushions because you brought trouble to her door." "I brought a warning. Trouble brought itself." The knock came again. A man's voice, warm the way a locked room is warm. "Rory. Love. Open up. Your Frenchman left a trail a child could follow. Brick Lane. Curry on the air. Three bolts, and you only throw two when you're scared." The third deadbolt turned from the outside. Tick-tock. Metal kissed metal. Lucien stepped in front of her, blade levelled at the wood. "Stay behind me." The bolt shot home with a hard click. The handle dipped. The door swung in. Evan stood on the landing with a split lip and a bunch of cheap red petrol-station roses dripping on his shoe. He smiled like the kitchen lock had never existed. Behind him, a shape ducked to clear the frame, and the landing light caught a second pair of eyes, amber and black, set in a face that was not Lucien's.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1198
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount802
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Gauze1
Eva3
Aurora2
Wool1
Cardiff1
London1
French1
Lucien6
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Gauze"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"French"
5"Lucien"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Frenchman"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1198
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean17.36
std15.73
cv0.906
sampleLengths
014
138
28
39
410
540
62
76
86
931
108
111
121
1342
144
155
1633
1716
1838
1930
204
2114
2219
2330
243
2520
2628
274
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292
301
311
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3326
346
3514
3614
3741
3850
3910
4023
412
4239
432
4415
4545
462
472
489
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount804
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.017412935323383085
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean7.83
std5.45
cv0.696
sampleLengths
014
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213
34
45
510
64
74
89
910
107
118
1211
1314
142
156
166
1716
185
196
204
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223
231
241
255
2614
2710
287
296
304
315
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3421
357
364
377
385
3911
409
417
4211
437
4412
454
467
474
489
495
69.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43790849673202614
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners67
33.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Near enough to count."
ratio0.01
61.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences101
matches
0"She yanked the chain free"
1"She braced her shoulder in"
2"His gaze dropped to her"
3"She tugged the sleeve down."
4"His mouth tightened."
5"He did not shove her."
6"He set the ivory handle"
7"She stepped aside."
8"His shoulder caught a stack"
9"She shut the door."
10"His cologne cut the spice,"
11"She flipped it shut."
12"His eyes had already taken"
13"He did not smile"
14"He undid his jacket button"
15"He held her stare"
16"She planted her feet."
17"She bit the inside of"
18"His eyes caught on her"
19"He looked at the cat"
ratio0.396
29.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences101
matches
0"She yanked the chain free"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
2"Curry steam climbed the stairs"
3"Platinum hair, slicked back."
4"Ivory cane in one hand."
5"She braced her shoulder in"
6"Books and scrolls crowded the"
7"A mug of cold tea"
8"Ptolemy shot between her ankles,"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"Gauze wrapped the crescent scar."
11"A dark spot had seeped"
12"She tugged the sleeve down."
13"His mouth tightened."
14"He did not shove her."
15"He set the ivory handle"
16"A pan cracked on a"
17"The clang jumped into her"
18"She stepped aside."
19"His shoulder caught a stack"
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.107
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.3479%