| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.756 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 90.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1583 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1583 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "footfall" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "calculated" | | 7 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1599 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "I don't do this" | | 1 | "you already are" | | 2 | "you were seven and you still didn't cry" | | 3 | "I cried afterwards, where no one could see" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1225 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Eva | 8 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Lucien | 4 | | Moreau | 3 | | March | 2 | | Vermeer | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Vauxhall | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Grimoires | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Bloomsbury | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "March" | | 3 | "Vauxhall" | | 4 | "Tube" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "London" | | 7 | "Bloomsbury" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile, the ghost of one that had been exiled" | | 1 | "a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twel" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1599 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 30.75 | | std | 28.83 | | cv | 0.938 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 96 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 73 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 92 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 95 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 87 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 74 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 89 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 53 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "been exiled" | | 1 | "been allowed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was already turning" | | 1 | "was being" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was pulling" | | 4 | "was looking" | | 5 | "wasn't reaching" | | 6 | "wasn't performing" | | 7 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.147 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped halfway down the hallway, a stack of Yu-Fei's thermal bags still looped over her arm, and listened to the familiar scrape of rust in the strike plate — Eva's curse, muttered through the wood, the fumble, the release." | | 1 | "Platinum hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Vermeer — all clean angles and improbable stillness." | | 2 | "He had not used the stairs, either; Rory could hear nothing behind him, no footfall, no stair-tread groan under his weight." | | 3 | "A flicker at the corner of his mouth — not quite a smile, the ghost of one that had been exiled." | | 4 | "The correction landed the way she intended — a small, deliberate wall, the name only her friends used, only people who had been allowed into the parts of her she'd packed into two suitcases in Cardiff and carried to London." | | 5 | "Eva's fingers brushed her arm as she went by — a squeeze, brief and pointed — and then she was pulling Ptolemy off the stack of Grimoires by the sink, tabby complaining in a rust-paper voice, and the kitchen door swung shut behind her." | | 6 | "Her wrist, the left one, caught the light — the small crescent scar she'd had since she was seven, since the broken kitchen glass and her mother's hand over her mouth." | | 7 | "\"No.\" He leaned the cane against the wall — deliberately, with both hands free, a gesture she recognised from their second meeting, when he'd wanted her to see that he wasn't reaching for anything." | | 8 | "He wasn't performing contrition; he'd weighed it and answered honestly, the way he answered everything — five languages deep and still choosing the smallest, sharpest word available." | | 9 | "\"You solved the Hendon thing in an afternoon. You read a contract Yu-Fei signed in 1987 and found the clause that was killing him, and you did it over the phone while delivering sweet-and-sour to Camberwell.\" The amber eye held hers; the black one gave nothing back." | | 10 | "He let the silence sit, which was a thing he did that drove her mad — Lucien Moreau never filled a gap, never rescued a conversation from its own weight." | | 11 | "He waited her out with the patience of a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twelve years of practice, and Rory became aware of the rain on the window, of Ptolemy mewing through the kitchen door, of the exact distance between them — four feet of scuffed floorboard, six books deep on every side." | | 12 | "The charcoal suit, immaculate; the glove he hadn't removed; the single amber eye and the void beside it." | | 13 | "Rory set the mugs down — chipped ones, Eva's, not the good ones — and heard the kitchen door open behind her, Eva's footsteps retreating down the hall with Ptolemy, the quiet diplomacy of a woman giving them the flat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 382 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.028795811518324606 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013089005235602094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 16.83 | | std | 14.23 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 55 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 58.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4105263157894737 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Their flat had three deadbolts" | | 1 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 2 | "He'd shaved since the last" | | 3 | "He had not come through" | | 4 | "He had not used the" | | 5 | "She didn't step aside." | | 6 | "He inclined his head" | | 7 | "His gaze lifted past Eva's" | | 8 | "He looked thinner." | | 9 | "He accepted it with a" | | 10 | "She stepped back to let" | | 11 | "he amended, and there was" | | 12 | "Her wrist, the left one," | | 13 | "He'd traced it once, with" | | 14 | "He leaned the cane against" | | 15 | "He wasn't performing contrition; he'd" | | 16 | "His hand found the head" | | 17 | "He let the silence sit," | | 18 | "He waited her out with" | | 19 | "He exhaled, and at close" |
| | ratio | 0.426 | |
| 9.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt stuck, which" | | 1 | "Rory stopped halfway down the" | | 2 | "Their flat had three deadbolts" | | 3 | "Eva got it on the" | | 4 | "The door swung inward, and" | | 5 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 6 | "Platinum hair slicked back from" | | 7 | "He'd shaved since the last" | | 8 | "He had not come through" | | 9 | "He had not used the" | | 10 | "Eva said, in the voice" | | 11 | "She didn't step aside." | | 12 | "He inclined his head" | | 13 | "A flicker at the corner" | | 14 | "His gaze lifted past Eva's" | | 15 | "That was all." | | 16 | "He looked thinner." | | 17 | "That was the detail her" | | 18 | "The cheekbone sharper." | | 19 | "The suit hanging just fractionally" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Their flat had three deadbolts precisely because of the people who came looking, and only one of them ever bothered to knock before the locks started moving." | | 1 | "Ivory-handled cane hooked over his forearm, its slim blade hidden where only someone who'd once been fool enough to watch him open a man's throat would know to …" | | 2 | "Platinum hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Vermeer — all clean angles and improbable stillness." | | 3 | "The correction landed the way she intended — a small, deliberate wall, the name only her friends used, only people who had been allowed into the parts of her sh…" | | 4 | "She stepped back to let him past, which was more generosity than Rory would have given him, and Rory made a mental note to be annoyed about that later." | | 5 | "He waited her out with the patience of a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twelve years of practice, and Rory became aware of the rain on the window, of Pt…" | | 6 | "He exhaled, and at close range she saw it cost him something: the breath of a half-demon who had not, in all their acquaintance, permitted himself to be seen ne…" | | 7 | "Rory set the mugs down — chipped ones, Eva's, not the good ones — and heard the kitchen door open behind her, Eva's footsteps retreating down the hall with Ptol…" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His hand found, fingers settling into the ivory curve" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |