Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WWS97CYX2ZN6MTT7CSGTR

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Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.000641
Provider:
Xiaomi

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, which meant someone on the other side of the door was already turning the first. Rory stopped halfway down the hallway, a stack of Yu-Fei's thermal bags still looped over her arm, and listened to the familiar scrape of rust in the strike plate — Eva's curse, muttered through the wood, the fumble, the release. Their flat had three deadbolts precisely because of the people who came looking, and only one of them ever bothered to knock before the locks started moving. Eva got it on the second try. "Don't — I've got it —" The door swung inward, and the smell of the curry house below came up the stairwell with it: tandoori and hot oil and the particular damp brick smell of Brick Lane after rain. And standing on the landing, one gloved hand still raised to a knock that hadn't landed, was Lucien Moreau. He looked exactly as he had in March, which was its own kind of insult. Tailored charcoal, pressed to a knife-edge. Ivory-handled cane hooked over his forearm, its slim blade hidden where only someone who'd once been fool enough to watch him open a man's throat would know to look for it. Platinum hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Vermeer — all clean angles and improbable stillness. He'd shaved since the last time, and the absence of stubble made the black eye recede, so that the amber one held the whole room. He had not come through the curry house. He had not used the stairs, either; Rory could hear nothing behind him, no footfall, no stair-tread groan under his weight. "Mr Moreau," Eva said, in the voice she used for her least trustworthy catalogue sources. She didn't step aside. "Eva." He inclined his head. "I'm sorry to come unannounced." "You're sorry to be seen." A flicker at the corner of his mouth — not quite a smile, the ghost of one that had been exiled. "That too." His gaze lifted past Eva's shoulder and found Rory in the hallway, and stayed there. Three months. That was all. Ninety-two days, if she was being precise, and she had been precise, in the particular way that she'd stopped being precise about anything else. Ninety-two days since the car park behind Vauxhall, since the wrong word spoken at the wrong moment, since she'd said *I don't do this* and he'd said *you already are* and she'd walked to the Tube with her hands shaking and hadn't turned around. He looked thinner. That was the detail her brain caught and held onto, magnifying it, the way she magnified clause numbers when she was trying not to feel something. The cheekbone sharper. The suit hanging just fractionally truer at the shoulder. "Aurora," he said. "Rory." The correction landed the way she intended — a small, deliberate wall, the name only her friends used, only people who had been allowed into the parts of her she'd packed into two suitcases in Cardiff and carried to London. He accepted it with a dip of his chin, and something moved behind the amber eye, quick as a fish under ice. "I'll make tea," Eva said, in the tone of a woman removing herself from a situation with professional grace. She stepped back to let him past, which was more generosity than Rory would have given him, and Rory made a mental note to be annoyed about that later. Eva's fingers brushed her arm as she went by — a squeeze, brief and pointed — and then she was pulling Ptolemy off the stack of Grimoires by the sink, tabby complaining in a rust-paper voice, and the kitchen door swung shut behind her. Lucien stepped inside and stopped, taking in the flat the way he took in everything: cataloguing exits first, then detail. Books from floor to ceiling. Scrolls unrolled across the coffee table under a brick from the windowsill. Rory's courier bag slung over the back of a chair, Golden Empress lanyard still looped through it, the laminated photo of her grinning idiotically at Yu-Fei's insistence. "You live here now," he said. "I've lived here since before I met you." "Between visits," he amended, and there was no heat in it, only accuracy, which was worse. Rory set the thermal bags down on the counter. Her wrist, the left one, caught the light — the small crescent scar she'd had since she was seven, since the broken kitchen glass and her mother's hand over her mouth. He'd traced it once, with a thumb, in a bed in Bloomsbury, and asked how, and she'd told him, and he'd said *you were seven and you still didn't cry*, and she'd said *I cried afterwards, where no one could see*, and he'd looked at her then the way he was looking at her now. "Say what you came to say," Rory told him. "You don't take the stairs for small talk." "No." He leaned the cane against the wall — deliberately, with both hands free, a gesture she recognised from their second meeting, when he'd wanted her to see that he wasn't reaching for anything. "I don't take the stairs at all, under normal circumstances. Your friend's building has a warded lift. Brass sigils on the shaft, nineteenth century, somebody's grandmother with a grudge against anything from Avaros. I'd have had to come up the fire escape, and I thought we'd done enough of me appearing through windows." "Did it occur to you," she said, "that I might not want to see you." "Yes." The flatness of it stopped her. He wasn't performing contrition; he'd weighed it and answered honestly, the way he answered everything — five languages deep and still choosing the smallest, sharpest word available. "And you came anyway." "The alternative was a letter, and you'd have read it and known exactly where the lie was in the second paragraph. I wanted to watch you decide." His hand found the head of his cane again, fingers settling into the ivory curve. "I've a problem. I'm told you solve problems." "You're told wrong." "You solved the Hendon thing in an afternoon. You read a contract Yu-Fei signed in 1987 and found the clause that was killing him, and you did it over the phone while delivering sweet-and-sour to Camberwell." The amber eye held hers; the black one gave nothing back. "You are, without exaggeration, the quickest mind I've encountered in a hundred and twelve years of variously legal and illegal work, and I have included my own." "Flattery." "Accurate flattery." A pause. He let the silence sit, which was a thing he did that drove her mad — Lucien Moreau never filled a gap, never rescued a conversation from its own weight. He waited her out with the patience of a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twelve years of practice, and Rory became aware of the rain on the window, of Ptolemy mewing through the kitchen door, of the exact distance between them — four feet of scuffed floorboard, six books deep on every side. "What's the problem?" she said. He exhaled, and at close range she saw it cost him something: the breath of a half-demon who had not, in all their acquaintance, permitted himself to be seen needing anything. "There's a woman named Sorcha Nally. Human, as far as anyone knows. She's been buying names — old names, true names, the kind that cost teeth to trade — and last week she purchased mine." He said it lightly, cane-tap light. "I'd like to know why, before she does something inventive with it." "You could find that out yourself." "I could." He didn't move. "Three months ago I'd have said I preferred to." Rory looked at him. The charcoal suit, immaculate; the glove he hadn't removed; the single amber eye and the void beside it. Behind all of it, the thing she kept folding up and putting away, the almost-touch of his hand near the doorframe, the way he'd said *Aurora* like he'd been carrying it. "You didn't come for help," she said quietly. "You came because you wanted to see if I'd slam the door." The corner of his mouth moved again, and this time it was almost real. "You've three deadbolts and a Welsh dragon on the mat. I calculated a forty percent chance." "Higher." "I hoped." The word sat between them, bare and unstrategic, and Rory felt the wall she'd built in March develop a hairline fracture right down its centre. She turned to the counter, busied herself with the kettle, because her hands knew what to do when the rest of her didn't. "Tea," she said. "Then you tell me everything, and if I decide you're wasting my time, you take the stairs back down. All seven flights." "And if I'm not?" "Then we'll see." She glanced over her shoulder. He was watching her fill the kettle with the focus of a man memorising a language he'd once been fluent in and had let go to ruin. "Sugar?" "Two." "You always say one." "I've had a difficult week." Rory set the mugs down — chipped ones, Eva's, not the good ones — and heard the kitchen door open behind her, Eva's footsteps retreating down the hall with Ptolemy, the quiet diplomacy of a woman giving them the flat. The kettle began to boil. The rain ran down the window in long grey ribbons over Brick Lane, and Lucien Moreau stood in a room built entirely of words, waiting to find out which ones she'd give him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.044
90.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1583
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"deliberately"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1583
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"footfall"
2"weight"
3"flicker"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"calculated"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords24
totalWords1599
ratio0.015
matches
0"I don't do this"
1"you already are"
2"you were seven and you still didn't cry"
3"I cried afterwards, where no one could see"
4"Aurora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1225
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei2
Eva8
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien4
Moreau3
March2
Vermeer1
Rory12
Vauxhall1
Tube1
Cardiff1
London1
Ptolemy3
Grimoires1
Golden1
Empress1
Bloomsbury1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"March"
3"Vauxhall"
4"Tube"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
7"Bloomsbury"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile, the ghost of one that had been exiled"
1"a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twel"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1599
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"see that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean30.75
std28.83
cv0.938
sampleLengths
019
167
213
352
496
529
619
710
85
923
1015
1173
1241
133
141
1562
1692
1764
186
198
2016
2195
2217
2387
2415
251
2633
274
2850
293
3074
311
3289
335
3431
3553
366
3714
3853
3920
4030
411
422
4348
4425
454
4636
471
484
495
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"been exiled"
1"been allowed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was already turning"
1"was being"
2"was trying"
3"was pulling"
4"was looking"
5"wasn't reaching"
6"wasn't performing"
7"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences95
ratio0.147
matches
0"Rory stopped halfway down the hallway, a stack of Yu-Fei's thermal bags still looped over her arm, and listened to the familiar scrape of rust in the strike plate — Eva's curse, muttered through the wood, the fumble, the release."
1"Platinum hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Vermeer — all clean angles and improbable stillness."
2"He had not used the stairs, either; Rory could hear nothing behind him, no footfall, no stair-tread groan under his weight."
3"A flicker at the corner of his mouth — not quite a smile, the ghost of one that had been exiled."
4"The correction landed the way she intended — a small, deliberate wall, the name only her friends used, only people who had been allowed into the parts of her she'd packed into two suitcases in Cardiff and carried to London."
5"Eva's fingers brushed her arm as she went by — a squeeze, brief and pointed — and then she was pulling Ptolemy off the stack of Grimoires by the sink, tabby complaining in a rust-paper voice, and the kitchen door swung shut behind her."
6"Her wrist, the left one, caught the light — the small crescent scar she'd had since she was seven, since the broken kitchen glass and her mother's hand over her mouth."
7"\"No.\" He leaned the cane against the wall — deliberately, with both hands free, a gesture she recognised from their second meeting, when he'd wanted her to see that he wasn't reaching for anything."
8"He wasn't performing contrition; he'd weighed it and answered honestly, the way he answered everything — five languages deep and still choosing the smallest, sharpest word available."
9"\"You solved the Hendon thing in an afternoon. You read a contract Yu-Fei signed in 1987 and found the clause that was killing him, and you did it over the phone while delivering sweet-and-sour to Camberwell.\" The amber eye held hers; the black one gave nothing back."
10"He let the silence sit, which was a thing he did that drove her mad — Lucien Moreau never filled a gap, never rescued a conversation from its own weight."
11"He waited her out with the patience of a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twelve years of practice, and Rory became aware of the rain on the window, of Ptolemy mewing through the kitchen door, of the exact distance between them — four feet of scuffed floorboard, six books deep on every side."
12"The charcoal suit, immaculate; the glove he hadn't removed; the single amber eye and the void beside it."
13"Rory set the mugs down — chipped ones, Eva's, not the good ones — and heard the kitchen door open behind her, Eva's footsteps retreating down the hall with Ptolemy, the quiet diplomacy of a woman giving them the flat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount382
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.028795811518324606
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.013089005235602094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean16.83
std14.23
cv0.845
sampleLengths
019
140
227
37
46
533
619
715
86
931
1019
1125
128
1321
1415
154
165
175
185
1921
202
2115
222
233
2424
2544
263
2726
283
299
303
311
3240
3322
3419
3529
3644
3720
385
3912
4027
416
428
4316
449
4531
4655
479
488
4934
58.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences61
matches
0"Their flat had three deadbolts"
1"He looked exactly as he"
2"He'd shaved since the last"
3"He had not come through"
4"He had not used the"
5"She didn't step aside."
6"He inclined his head"
7"His gaze lifted past Eva's"
8"He looked thinner."
9"He accepted it with a"
10"She stepped back to let"
11"he amended, and there was"
12"Her wrist, the left one,"
13"He'd traced it once, with"
14"He leaned the cane against"
15"He wasn't performing contrition; he'd"
16"His hand found the head"
17"He let the silence sit,"
18"He waited her out with"
19"He exhaled, and at close"
ratio0.426
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, which"
1"Rory stopped halfway down the"
2"Their flat had three deadbolts"
3"Eva got it on the"
4"The door swung inward, and"
5"He looked exactly as he"
6"Platinum hair slicked back from"
7"He'd shaved since the last"
8"He had not come through"
9"He had not used the"
10"Eva said, in the voice"
11"She didn't step aside."
12"He inclined his head"
13"A flicker at the corner"
14"His gaze lifted past Eva's"
15"That was all."
16"He looked thinner."
17"That was the detail her"
18"The cheekbone sharper."
19"The suit hanging just fractionally"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Their flat had three deadbolts precisely because of the people who came looking, and only one of them ever bothered to knock before the locks started moving."
1"Ivory-handled cane hooked over his forearm, its slim blade hidden where only someone who'd once been fool enough to watch him open a man's throat would know to …"
2"Platinum hair slicked back from a face that belonged on a Vermeer — all clean angles and improbable stillness."
3"The correction landed the way she intended — a small, deliberate wall, the name only her friends used, only people who had been allowed into the parts of her sh…"
4"She stepped back to let him past, which was more generosity than Rory would have given him, and Rory made a mental note to be annoyed about that later."
5"He waited her out with the patience of a man who had, apparently, a hundred and twelve years of practice, and Rory became aware of the rain on the window, of Pt…"
6"He exhaled, and at close range she saw it cost him something: the breath of a half-demon who had not, in all their acquaintance, permitted himself to be seen ne…"
7"Rory set the mugs down — chipped ones, Eva's, not the good ones — and heard the kitchen door open behind her, Eva's footsteps retreating down the hall with Ptol…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His hand found, fingers settling into the ivory curve"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.9408%