Run: 2026-09-23-01M36WZXTJF41P2ZA3SQ9VB467

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.000649
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked into place one at a time, and Rory still checked the chain she'd screwed into the frame herself. Old habits from a life she'd left in Cardiff, reinforced by eight months in London and a door that rattled in its jamb whenever the curry house downstairs fired up its tandoor. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, his tail a metronome against the shin of her jeans. "You're not getting tuna tonight. Eva said you had a pouch this morning." The cat answered with a warble that sounded like complaint, and Rory dropped to one knee to scratch behind his ears. The flat smelled of cardamom rising through the floorboards and old paper — Eva's research notes had colonized every surface, spilling from the desk to the windowsill to the narrow strip of counter where the kettle lived. Rory had learned to navigate around them the way sailors learn a reef. The knock came at nine-seventeen. She knew the time because she glanced at her phone — face-down on the stack of encyclopedias — when the first knuckle hit wood. Three raps. Even pressure. Patient. Not Silas. Silas banged like he was trying to cave the door in. She stood, wiped her palm on her thigh, and pulled the chain free before she thought about it. The second deadbolt followed. On the third, her fingers paused on the cold brass. "Rory." His voice carried through the wood, unhurried, the vowels rounded and softened by Marseille before London took them on. "I can hear you deliberating." She opened the door. Lucien Moreau filled the frame like a photograph cut to fit. Charcoal suit, pressed to a knife's crease, the ivory handle of his cane hooked over one gloveless hand. His platinum hair was slicked back from a forehead unmarked by worry, and his mismatched eyes — amber and black, the pair that had unsettled her the first time she'd looked into them and fascinated her the tenth — held hers without blinking. He'd grown a shadow of stubble along his jaw. It softened him. She hated that she noticed. "You're not welcome here." "I'm aware." He didn't move. The hallway behind him was dark; someone had killed the bulb two weeks ago and nobody had bothered. "May I come in?" "No." His mouth shifted — not quite a smile, more like the memory of one, which was worse. "Then I'll say what I need to say from the corridor, and your neighbours can hear it, and Ptolemy can hear it." "You know the cat's name." "I know most things." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the threshold. "Eva's in Ghent. She left three days ago and didn't tell you, which means she doesn't want you following her, which means she's doing something reckless. I'm here because whatever she's dragging up from the Avaric texts, it's going to open doors she can't close." Rory leaned against the jamb, arms folded. The corridor's single window let in the orange wash of a streetlight, and it caught the amber of his left eye and left the right one a flat, depthless black. She'd forgotten how strange it looked. She hadn't forgotten how it made her feel. "Eva's a big girl." "Eva is brilliant and stubborn and half-convinced she's invincible. You know this. You also know that the last time someone underestimated what lives behind those texts, you ended up in a stairwell in Whitechapel with your wrist bleeding through your sleeve." The crescent scar tingled. She pressed her thumb against it through the denim. "That was your mess, Lucien." "Agreed. Which is why I'm cleaning it up." He took a half-step forward, and she didn't step back, so they stood close enough that she caught the scent of him — bergamot and cold air and something underneath that had no name, something that lived in the space between human and whatever his father had been. "I need the ledger Eva pulled from the Mireille collection. The one with the silver clasp." "She didn't leave it with me." "Then where?" "Around. Hidden. Somewhere you won't find it if I throw you out." A beat. His jaw worked. The cane's ivory handle creaked under his grip. "You haven't asked why I came to you instead of going to the ledger myself." "Because you can't find it. Because Eva trusts me with her hiding spots and she doesn't trust you. Because you burned that bridge the night you chose your client over me in that basement, and you've spent six months pretending the choice was complicated." The words came out level, rehearsed only in the sense that she'd said them to herself enough times that they'd worn smooth. She watched them land. He didn't flinch, but the tendons in his gloved hand tightened, and he transferred the cane to his other grip — a tell she'd catalogued in the early weeks when she'd still been learning the vocabulary of him. "It was complicated." "It was simple. You just didn't like the answer." Silence settled between them, heavy as the curry-house steam that seeped under the door. Ptolemy, unimpressed with the tension, trotted out and wound around Lucien's ankle. The cat had never done that to a stranger. Lucien looked down, and something in his expression cracked — just a fracture, there and gone, the way a hairline runs through glass. "He remembers me." "Cats are stupid like that." "Rory." The use of the nickname stopped her. He'd only ever called her that twice — once in the back of a black cab with her hand wrapped around his forearm, once in his flat in Marylebone when the power had cut and they'd sat in the dark and he'd traced the line of her jaw with one finger and whispered *Rory* like it was a question he didn't want answered. After the basement, he'd reverted to Aurora. Formal. Distant. A wall built from a single syllable. She unfolded her arms. Let her hands hang at her sides. "If I let you in, you take the ledger and you leave. No explanations. No—" She stopped, bit down on the inside of her cheek. "No standing in my kitchen pretending the last six months were a negotiation." "I won't pretend anything." "You never do. That's the problem. You state things like they're verdicts and expect everyone to accept the ruling." His eyes — both of them, amber and void — stayed on her face, reading it the way he read contracts, searching for the clause she'd buried. He had a talent for finding what people tried to hide. It was what made him good at his work and impossible to keep at arm's length. "One hour," he said. "Give me the ledger, and if what's inside it is what I suspect, you'll want to hear it before Eva does whatever she plans to do in Ghent." "You're making it sound urgent so I'll open the door." "I'm making it sound urgent because it is." He straightened, and the streetlight caught the edge of his cane's ferrule, a dull gleam of steel. "But I also want to come in. Those two things can be true." The honesty of it hung in the air, raw and undeserved. She looked past him, at the dark corridor, the dead bulb, the stairwell that led down to Silas' bar where the low murmur of closing time filtered up through the stairwell like distant surf. She stepped back. Lucien crossed the threshold, his shoes quiet on Eva's cluttered floor. He navigated the drifts of paper without disturbing a single page, which meant he'd been here before — probably while she was out on delivery runs, probably while she trusted the three deadbolts to mean something. He stopped in the middle of the room, took in the stacks of scrolls, the tabby twining around his legs for a second time, the kettle and the single mug with a hairline crack running through its glaze. "Homey," he said. "It's not mine." "No." He turned, and the full weight of his gaze settled on her again. "It isn't."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:29:13.688Z" 9/23/2026, 10:29:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"navigate"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"navigate"
1"unsettled"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"tension"
5"traced"
6"navigated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1354
ratio0.001
matches
0"Rory"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount938
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Cardiff1
London2
Eva2
Silas2
Marseille1
Moreau1
Lucien4
Marylebone1
Aurora1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Marylebone"
4"Aurora"
globalScore1
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like complaint, and Rory dropped t"
1"not quite a smile, more like the memory of one, which was worse"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1354
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean27.08
std25.21
cv0.931
sampleLengths
069
113
271
334
413
532
625
74
872
917
104
1127
121
1339
145
1560
1651
174
1841
1913
205
2172
226
232
2412
2513
2615
2744
2864
293
309
3158
323
335
341
3586
3611
3738
384
3919
4054
4132
4210
4338
4445
453
4685
473
483
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences97
ratio0.113
matches
0"The flat smelled of cardamom rising through the floorboards and old paper — Eva's research notes had colonized every surface, spilling from the desk to the windowsill to the narrow strip of counter where the kettle lived."
1"She knew the time because she glanced at her phone — face-down on the stack of encyclopedias — when the first knuckle hit wood."
2"His platinum hair was slicked back from a forehead unmarked by worry, and his mismatched eyes — amber and black, the pair that had unsettled her the first time she'd looked into them and fascinated her the tenth — held hers without blinking."
3"The hallway behind him was dark; someone had killed the bulb two weeks ago and nobody had bothered."
4"His mouth shifted — not quite a smile, more like the memory of one, which was worse."
5"\"Agreed. Which is why I'm cleaning it up.\" He took a half-step forward, and she didn't step back, so they stood close enough that she caught the scent of him — bergamot and cold air and something underneath that had no name, something that lived in the space between human and whatever his father had been."
6"He didn't flinch, but the tendons in his gloved hand tightened, and he transferred the cane to his other grip — a tell she'd catalogued in the early weeks when she'd still been learning the vocabulary of him."
7"Lucien looked down, and something in his expression cracked — just a fracture, there and gone, the way a hairline runs through glass."
8"He'd only ever called her that twice — once in the back of a black cab with her hand wrapped around his forearm, once in his flat in Marylebone when the power had cut and they'd sat in the dark and he'd traced the line of her jaw with one finger and whispered *Rory* like it was a question he didn't want answered."
9"His eyes — both of them, amber and void — stayed on her face, reading it the way he read contracts, searching for the clause she'd buried."
10"He navigated the drifts of paper without disturbing a single page, which meant he'd been here before — probably while she was out on delivery runs, probably while she trusted the three deadbolts to mean something."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025331724969843185
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0036188178528347406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean13.96
std13.1
cv0.939
sampleLengths
022
132
215
313
421
537
613
75
824
92
102
111
122
1311
1418
154
1610
1720
185
194
2011
2118
2243
239
243
255
264
275
2818
294
301
3117
3222
335
3415
3545
367
3730
386
398
404
4141
424
439
445
4556
4616
476
482
4912
59.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3917525773195876
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
13.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences58
matches
0"She knew the time because"
1"She stood, wiped her palm"
2"His voice carried through the"
3"She opened the door."
4"His platinum hair was slicked"
5"He'd grown a shadow of"
6"It softened him."
7"She hated that she noticed."
8"He didn't move"
9"His mouth shifted — not"
10"He shifted his weight, the"
11"She'd forgotten how strange it"
12"She hadn't forgotten how it"
13"She pressed her thumb against"
14"He took a half-step forward,"
15"His jaw worked."
16"She watched them land."
17"He didn't flinch, but the"
18"He'd only ever called her"
19"She unfolded her arms."
ratio0.517
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences58
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked into"
1"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
2"The cat answered with a"
3"The flat smelled of cardamom"
4"Rory had learned to navigate"
5"The knock came at nine-seventeen."
6"She knew the time because"
7"Silas banged like he was"
8"She stood, wiped her palm"
9"The second deadbolt followed."
10"His voice carried through the"
11"She opened the door."
12"Lucien Moreau filled the frame"
13"Charcoal suit, pressed to a"
14"His platinum hair was slicked"
15"He'd grown a shadow of"
16"It softened him."
17"She hated that she noticed."
18"He didn't move"
19"The hallway behind him was"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Old habits from a life she'd left in Cardiff, reinforced by eight months in London and a door that rattled in its jamb whenever the curry house downstairs fired…"
1"His platinum hair was slicked back from a forehead unmarked by worry, and his mismatched eyes — amber and black, the pair that had unsettled her the first time …"
2"Silence settled between them, heavy as the curry-house steam that seeped under the door."
3"His eyes — both of them, amber and void — stayed on her face, reading it the way he read contracts, searching for the clause she'd buried."
4"He navigated the drifts of paper without disturbing a single page, which meant he'd been here before — probably while she was out on delivery runs, probably whi…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He shifted, the cane tapping once against the threshold"
1"He straightened, and the streetlight caught the edge of his cane's ferrule, a dull gleam of steel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.4602%