Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X1M7935V0BQKMJ1KE410H

Run Details

Duration:
54.8s
Cost:
$0.000643
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone had been warm since Hammersmith. Not the flat heat of a coin left in the sun but a slow, organic pulse, like something with a small heart pressed against her collarbone. Rory had stopped twice on the walk to check it, pinching the crimson stone between thumb and forefinger, watching the faint glow bleed through her fingertips. Each time the glow bent toward the north, toward the park, and each time she'd started walking again. Richmond Park closed at dusk. She went in anyway, over the rail where the grass gave, boots sinking into ground that smelled of iron and wet leaves. The oaks stood in a ragged line ahead of her, black shapes with too many arms. Wind moved through them without moving the air. She hadn't told anyone. That was the first thing that felt wrong once she stepped between the two largest stones and the temperature dropped by ten degrees in a single breath. The grove opened around her in a bowl of wildflowers. They should have been dead in November. Instead they stood to her knee, white and yellow and a blue so deep it looked bruised, all of them facing the same direction — away from her. Not toward the moon, not toward any light. Away from her, the way a field of small faces turns from something it doesn't want to see. Rory crouched and pressed her palm flat to the soil. Warm. Warmer than the air. The Heartstone pulsed against her sternum, quicker now, a moth trapped under skin. "I know," she said aloud, because the silence had already started to press on her eardrums. "I know, I hear you." Her phone had no signal from the moment she crossed the stones. She'd checked four times, each time watching the little bars flicker and die like struck matches. Eva had texted her at seven asking whether she was working the late shift. Rory hadn't answered. Yu-Fei would notice the empty scooter bay in the morning and phone her twice, then stop, because Yu-Fei never phoned three times. A sound came from the far side of the clearing. Not an animal. It had a rhythm to it, a wet deliberate rhythm, like someone peeling a long strip of bark from a tree with their thumbnail. It stopped when she turned her head. She stood, brushed the dirt from her knees, and waited for it to start again. Nothing. The flowers held their strange unanimous posture. Somewhere behind her, maybe a mile off, a car moved along the road with its headlights sweeping the tree line, and the light came through the trunks in pale bars and went out, and the dark that replaced it was heavier than before. She walked toward the far side of the grove anyway. The Heartstone dragged at her chest with each step, pulling her slightly left, and she let it pull. Halfway across she felt the ground change — the soft give of loam giving way to something packed and gritty, like ash. She looked down. Her boots left no prints. That was when she heard the second sound. A voice. Low, unhurried, speaking a language she didn't know, coming from the direction of the standing stones she'd entered through. Not carried on wind, because there was still no wind. Carried the way a sound travels down a corridor — focused, narrowing, aimed. She turned. The stones stood where they'd stood. Between them, the park was empty, a long reach of black grass and farther off the faint sodium smear of the city. Nothing moved. "Hello?" she called. Her voice came back to her from the wrong direction, from behind her left shoulder, and it took her a second to understand that the grove was returning it wrong. Or that something had. The word hung in the air a moment longer than a word should, then folded in on itself and stopped. She checked the pendant. Its glow had gone from a dull ember to something almost solid, a bead of blood held in silver, and the heat of it was no longer pleasant. It burned in small, regular spasms, and each burn coincided with a faint vibration in the ground beneath her feet, so regular it could have been a pulse, or a footstep repeating at a distance. Rory counted them. Twelve. Thirteen. Fourteen. At twenty the flowers moved. They didn't bend. They didn't sway. Every stem in the clearing rotated by a few degrees, all at once, all in perfect unison, until the blue ones faced her and the white ones faced her and the whole field had turned its attention on her like an audience that had been pretending to read. She stepped backward and her heel struck something that hadn't been there. She looked down. A second set of prints in the ash, bare feet, small, pressed into the grit less than a hand's width behind hers. They hadn't been there when she crossed. She was certain of it the way you're certain of your own name. The voice spoke again, closer, from the grass to her right this time, and this time she caught a word. Not a word. A shape that meant word, a sound like her own name said by someone who had learned it from a distance and got the vowels almost right. She ran for the stones. Three strides in, the grove stopped responding to her. Her legs kept working, her breath kept coming, but the distance to the stones didn't close. The oaks at the rim stood exactly as far away as they had, patient, their branches arranged now in a pattern she didn't want to look at too long. The ground stayed ash. Her boots still left no prints, and behind her the bare footprints kept pace, one set, never two, always a hand's width back. She stopped. Forced her breathing down the way she'd taught herself in the last year — in through the nose, out slow, count to four, count to four again — and turned around. The clearing was empty. The flowers had turned back to their original bearing, all of them facing away from her, and in the middle of them stood a shape at the edge of her vision, at the exact point where detail gives out. She couldn't say how tall it was. She couldn't say whether it had a face. Every time she shifted her focus toward it, it relocated to the periphery, and the space where it had been filled with flowers again, as though the ground had closed over a footprint. The Heartstone gave a hard, single thump against her ribs, and the whole grove answered it. Every tree exhaled at once — a long, collective sigh of sap and hollow wood, and under it the voice stopped being a voice and became a sound made of many voices speaking her name in overlapping registers, some of them too low to belong to any throat, some of them thin and bright and breathless. The flowers lifted their heads. Not toward her this time. Upward, toward a sky that had gone the colour of a held bruise, where the stars had begun to go out one at a time from the horizon inward. She backed up until her shoulders hit oak. The bark was warm, fever-warm, and it moved slightly under her shoulder blades, a slow expansion and contraction she felt through her jacket. She did not take her eyes off the clearing. The bare footprints filled, one after another, from the stones to where she stood. Not stepping. Pressing themselves into the ash in sequence, heel to toe, heel to toe, the way a trail of ink spreads through wet paper, until the last pair stopped an inch from her shoes and held there, soles turned up, five small toes arranged with an attention to detail that made her stomach lift. Then nothing. The grove went quiet. The stars finished going out. The Heartstone cooled against her chest, slow, like a coal losing its last breath, and the flowers folded themselves shut in the dark, all down the clearing, a sound like paper being crumpled very gently. Something stood an inch from her shoes and did not breathe. Rory counted to four and counted to four again and did not move.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:30:09.39Z" 9/23/2026, 10:30:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
85.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"flicker"
4"perfect"
5"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1394
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1386
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Yu-Fei"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Hammersmith1
Park1
November1
Yu-Fei2
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.717
wordCount1394
matches
0"Not the flat heat of a coin left in the sun but a slow, organic pulse, like something with a small heart pre"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"understand that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean39.83
std26.81
cv0.673
sampleLengths
077
151
231
371
428
521
667
710
849
951
1058
118
1246
1330
143
1554
1667
176
185
1954
2012
2145
2250
235
2481
2533
2691
2716
2895
2940
3069
312
3244
3311
3413
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been filled"
1"being crumpled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was working"
1"was returning"
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"Instead they stood to her knee, white and yellow and a blue so deep it looked bruised, all of them facing the same direction — away from her."
1"Halfway across she felt the ground change — the soft give of loam giving way to something packed and gritty, like ash."
2"Carried the way a sound travels down a corridor — focused, narrowing, aimed."
3"Forced her breathing down the way she'd taught herself in the last year — in through the nose, out slow, count to four, count to four again — and turned around."
4"Every tree exhaled at once — a long, collective sigh of sap and hollow wood, and under it the voice stopped being a voice and became a sound made of many voices speaking her name in overlapping registers, some of them too low to belong to any throat, some of them thin and bright and breathless."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1383
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03398409255242227
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0028922631959508315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean13.8
std12.08
cv0.875
sampleLengths
07
126
226
318
45
522
616
78
84
927
1010
117
1228
138
1418
1510
161
174
1813
1916
205
2112
2216
2314
243
2522
2610
273
2824
297
3015
311
327
3343
3410
3518
3622
373
385
398
402
4119
4210
4313
442
456
4622
472
483
4930
55.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38613861386138615
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Instead they stood to her"
1"Away from her, the way"
2"Somewhere behind her, maybe a"
3"Upward, toward a sky that"
ratio0.045
88.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences88
matches
0"She went in anyway, over"
1"She hadn't told anyone."
2"They should have been dead"
3"she said aloud, because the"
4"Her phone had no signal"
5"She'd checked four times, each"
6"It had a rhythm to"
7"It stopped when she turned"
8"She stood, brushed the dirt"
9"She walked toward the far"
10"She looked down."
11"Her boots left no prints."
12"Her voice came back to"
13"She checked the pendant."
14"Its glow had gone from"
15"It burned in small, regular"
16"They didn't bend."
17"They didn't sway."
18"She stepped backward and her"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.33
67.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Heartstone had been warm"
1"Rory had stopped twice on"
2"Each time the glow bent"
3"Richmond Park closed at dusk."
4"She went in anyway, over"
5"The oaks stood in a"
6"Wind moved through them without"
7"She hadn't told anyone."
8"That was the first thing"
9"The grove opened around her"
10"They should have been dead"
11"Rory crouched and pressed her"
12"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
13"she said aloud, because the"
14"Her phone had no signal"
15"She'd checked four times, each"
16"Eva had texted her at"
17"Rory hadn't answered."
18"Yu-Fei would notice the empty"
19"A sound came from the"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"That was the first thing that felt wrong once she stepped between the two largest stones and the temperature dropped by ten degrees in a single breath."
1"Every stem in the clearing rotated by a few degrees, all at once, all in perfect unison, until the blue ones faced her and the white ones faced her and the whol…"
2"Every time she shifted her focus toward it, it relocated to the periphery, and the space where it had been filled with flowers again, as though the ground had c…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.7206%