Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X1STPN5VPV20NJ3MNNF8K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.002551
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and Rory stopped breathing. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway of the flat above Silas' bar, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, rainwater darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair held its shape against the weather. The amber eye caught the light from the bare bulb overhead. The black one held nothing at all. "You moved," he said. "Twice since you last knew where I lived." She gripped the door frame. The wood dug into the crescent scar on her left wrist. "How did you find this place?" "Golden Empress delivery bags. You leave them by the bin." He glanced past her into the narrow corridor behind, at the mismatched coat hooks and the fire extinguisher with its expired tag. "Still no deadbolts. Three at Eva's flat and not one here." "Eva's flat has things worth stealing." Rory shifted to block the doorway. Her shoulder pressed the frame. "What do you want, Lucien?" The name came out of her mouth like a reflex and she watched it land on him. His jaw moved. He looked at her — straight shoulder-length black hair still damp at the ends, the oversized jumper she wore to sleep, bare feet on cold floorboards — and his gaze took its time. "Eight months," he said. "Eleven." "I stand corrected." Something crossed his face. Not a smile. "You counted." "Don't flatter yourself." She held up the Chinese takeout container she'd been eating from when the knock came. Cold sweet and sour pork. "I'm busy." "Then let me in and I'll make this brief." "You don't get to do that. You don't get to show up at midnight and — " She stopped. Breathed. Picked her words the way she picked routes through London traffic on her delivery runs, fast and without hesitation. "The last time we spoke you told me to stay out of Avaros affairs and I told you to go back to Marseille. Neither of us was unclear." Lucien's fingers tightened on the cane. He spoke four languages and every one of them had failed him at the wrong moment. She'd watched it happen in a warehouse in Wapping, watched the fixer who never lost his composure lose it in front of a dozen people, and she had never forgiven him for making her care about it. "You were right to say what you said," he murmured. "That's generous." "I'm not being generous. I'm being accurate." He leaned on the cane and the leather of his glove creaked. "I need information. You've been running deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung for nine months. You hear things. Names, routes, who eats with whom in the back rooms." "Ask someone else." "I did. Three someones. Two are dead and the third sent me here." Rain traced a line down the collar of his suit. The flat behind Rory held its silence — the hum of the small fridge, the drip from the kitchen tap she kept meaning to fix. Below, muffled through the floorboards, the last of Silas' regulars sang something off-key. "You're wet," she said. "It's raining." "Come in before the carpet soaks through. But you say what you came to say and then you leave." She turned and walked down the corridor without checking whether he followed. Her bare feet slapped the cold boards. She heard the door click shut, the three deadbolts — she'd installed them in a burst of paranoia the week after Wapping — and then his measured steps on the runner rug. She set the takeout container on the counter beside a stack of unpaid bills and faced the kitchen. He filled the doorway of the small kitchen the way he filled every room. Even sodden, even tired — there were shadows under his eyes she hadn't seen before, deep ones — he carried himself like the space owed him rent. He leaned the cane against the counter and unbuttoned his jacket. Water dripped from his sleeve onto the lino. "Talk," she said. He didn't talk. He looked at her hands instead, at the small crescent scar on her left wrist where she gripped the counter edge. She pulled her sleeve down over it. "Lucien." "There's a shipment moving through the docks on Friday. Yu-Fei's people are the couriers and someone inside his operation is passing the manifest to a third party. I want to know who." "And you can't ask Yu-Fei because he'd gut you where you stood." "Your words are as kind as ever." "Kind costs extra." She opened the fridge, pulled out two bottles of beer, cracked one against the edge of the counter. She held the other out to him. He took it. Their fingers touched on the glass and she let go too late. He looked at the bottle. Twisted the cap with his palm. "You didn't have to come here yourself," she said. "You have people. People with better lockpicks and worse manners." "None of them know which of Yu-Fei's drivers talks to whom." He drank. Watched her over the rim. "And none of them would let me through the door." "That's not your opening argument. That's self-pity." "It's the truth. You think I didn't sit in the car across the street for forty minutes before I came up?" The beer turned bitter on her tongue. Forty minutes in the rain in a tailored suit. She could picture it — Lucien Moreau in the back of some idling sedan, checking his phone, checking the windows, working out the angles the way he always did, and getting every single one wrong. "You should have called," she said. "You changed your number." "Blocked it. There's a difference." He set the bottle down. The counter edge caught the light on his cane handle, on the amber eye, on the wet gleam of his hair. He looked thinner than she remembered. The suit had been let out at the waist or he'd stopped eating. Both, maybe. She knew the shape of his bad months. She'd slept beside him through three of them and that memory sat in her chest like a swallowed stone. "This is about the shipment," he said. "This is about you standing in my kitchen dripping on my floor." "Then give me a towel and I'll stand in your kitchen dry." She opened the drawer beside him. He reached past her to get it and his arm brushed her ribs through the jumper. She didn't move away. He didn't either. The towel hung between them and neither took it. "Rory." He said it the way he'd said it the first time, in the back booth of Silas' bar, sliding her a glass of something amber and expensive, and she'd told him that nobody used that name and he'd said "then who does" and she'd said "no one" and he'd smiled like he'd won something. "Don't," she said. "I didn't say anything." "You were about to." She took the towel herself and pressed it against his lapel. Water wicked into the cotton. Her knuckles pressed the solid plane of his chest beneath the shirt. He caught her wrist — the left one, the scarred one — and held it still against him. His thumb traced the crescent. "You rewrote my name in the rain on the car window the night before you left," he said. "Laila. I didn't know what it meant until I asked around. Aurora. Golden dawn. Very sentimental for someone who claims to feel nothing." "I felt annoyed. You were being dramatic." "You left it there. You didn't wipe it off." "It was your car." His thumb moved on the scar. Slow. The kitchen tap dripped. Somewhere below, the singing stopped and a door slammed and Silas' voice boomed something about last orders. "I need the name," he said. "The one passing the manifest to the third party. After Friday you'll never see me again if that's what you want. But I need this and I came to you because I'm out of people I trust." "And the eleven months?" "The eleven months were my mistake and I've had time to sit with it." Her pulse jumped under his thumb. She felt it, the small betrayal of her own body. His black eye held her the way deep water held a swimmer — no bottom, no sides, just the pull. "One name," she said. "And you leave." "One name. And I leave." She stared at him. The rain picked up against the window above the sink. His hand on her wrist stayed, warm through the damp sleeve of his shirt. "Chen Wei," she said. "The driver with the scar on his ear. He owes money to someone in Whitechapel and he's paying it off in information. Yu-Fei doesn't know yet." Lucien closed his eyes. Something loosened in his face — the tight line of his mouth, the set of his shoulders. He breathed out. "Chen Wei," he repeated. "Friday, the docks, the manifest. He tells them the timing, the container number. That's everything I have." She pulled her wrist from his grip. Her skin carried the print of his fingers. "Go." He picked up the cane. Buttoned the jacket over the wet shirt. She watched his hands work the buttons and remembered those hands on the back of her neck, in her hair, braced on the wall of his flat in whatever part of the city he'd been living in then. His flat had smelled of bergamot and old paper. He'd read to her in French when she couldn't sleep and she'd understood maybe one word in five. He walked to the kitchen doorway and stopped. "The carpet's soaked," she said to his back. "I'll send someone for it." "Don't bother." He turned. The amber eye found her in the dim kitchen light. He opened his mouth and she saw the words forming, saw the shape of them the way she'd seen it in Wapping before everything broke, and she gripped the counter again and the scar pressed the wood. "Say it and I will throw that beer at you," she said. He smiled. It reached neither eye. He raised one hand in a small gesture — surrender, or a goodbye, or both — and walked down the corridor toward the door. Three deadbolts turned. The hinges creaked. The flat went quiet and cold and hers again. The beer sweated in her fist. On the counter, the cold sweet and sour pork sat in its container, forgotten. The towel he'd touched lay in a damp fold on the lino. Below the window, a car engine turned over and pulled away into the wet street.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:30:15.132Z" 9/23/2026, 10:30:15 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1764
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1764
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"silence"
2"measured"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1144
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau2
Chinese1
Cold1
Breathed1
London1
Wapping3
Rain1
Watched1
Lucien4
Water2
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Rain"
3"Lucien"
4"Water"
places
0"London"
1"Wapping"
2"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1780
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean23.12
std20.71
cv0.896
sampleLengths
08
157
24
330
443
522
653
74
81
912
1025
119
1267
1359
1410
152
1645
173
1813
1948
204
212
2219
2369
2460
253
2631
271
2832
2912
307
3143
3211
3319
3428
357
3621
3751
386
394
405
4174
427
4312
4412
4538
4655
473
484
4950
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences157
ratio0.057
matches
0"He looked at her — straight shoulder-length black hair still damp at the ends, the oversized jumper she wore to sleep, bare feet on cold floorboards — and his gaze took its time."
1"The flat behind Rory held its silence — the hum of the small fridge, the drip from the kitchen tap she kept meaning to fix."
2"She heard the door click shut, the three deadbolts — she'd installed them in a burst of paranoia the week after Wapping — and then his measured steps on the runner rug."
3"Even sodden, even tired — there were shadows under his eyes she hadn't seen before, deep ones — he carried himself like the space owed him rent."
4"She could picture it — Lucien Moreau in the back of some idling sedan, checking his phone, checking the windows, working out the angles the way he always did, and getting every single one wrong."
5"He caught her wrist — the left one, the scarred one — and held it still against him."
6"His black eye held her the way deep water held a swimmer — no bottom, no sides, just the pull."
7"Something loosened in his face — the tight line of his mouth, the set of his shoulders."
8"He raised one hand in a small gesture — surrender, or a goodbye, or both — and walked down the corridor toward the door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount460
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.010869565217391304
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.34
std9.44
cv0.833
sampleLengths
08
130
29
311
47
54
613
711
86
932
1011
1112
125
135
1417
153
1633
174
181
197
203
212
2218
235
242
259
2619
271
2819
2928
306
3116
3237
3310
342
3519
3626
373
3813
3910
4025
4113
424
432
4419
4512
467
4732
4818
4914
52.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.35668789808917195
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners56
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Somewhere below, the singing stopped"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences95
matches
0"His platinum hair held its"
1"She gripped the door frame"
2"He glanced past her into"
3"Her shoulder pressed the frame."
4"His jaw moved."
5"He looked at her —"
6"She held up the Chinese"
7"He spoke four languages and"
8"She'd watched it happen in"
9"He leaned on the cane"
10"She turned and walked down"
11"Her bare feet slapped the"
12"She heard the door click"
13"She set the takeout container"
14"He filled the doorway of"
15"He leaned the cane against"
16"He didn't talk."
17"He looked at her hands"
18"She pulled her sleeve down"
19"She opened the fridge, pulled"
ratio0.589
28.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences95
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"His platinum hair held its"
3"The amber eye caught the"
4"The black one held nothing"
5"She gripped the door frame"
6"The wood dug into the"
7"He glanced past her into"
8"Rory shifted to block the"
9"Her shoulder pressed the frame."
10"The name came out of"
11"His jaw moved."
12"He looked at her —"
13"Something crossed his face"
14"She held up the Chinese"
15"Lucien's fingers tightened on the"
16"He spoke four languages and"
17"She'd watched it happen in"
18"He leaned on the cane"
19"Rain traced a line down"
ratio0.863
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Even sodden, even tired —"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She could picture it — Lucien Moreau in the back of some idling sedan, checking his phone, checking the windows, working out the angles the way he always did, a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.059
84.3858%