Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X2AFXGFWZ28D684V2CPGQ

Run Details

Duration:
9m 60s
Cost:
$0.018172
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last of the Thursday crowd had thinned to nothing by half ten. Rory worked a damp cloth across the bar top in slow circles, the fabric catching on a groove where someone had carved initials years before she'd arrived in London. Behind her, Silas tallied the till with the precision of a man defusing something. His signet ring clicked against the register keys. "Go up." He didn't look up from the numbers. "I'll finish." "I'm not tired." "You're never tired. That's the problem." He glanced at her — hazel eyes flat with something between fondness and impatience — then returned to the count. "Go on." Rory draped the cloth over the tap handle. She didn't argue. Silas didn't make offers he didn't mean. She had one boot on the bottom stair when the front door swung open and green neon from the sign outside spilled across the black-and-white photographs lining the opposite wall. A woman stepped in out of the rain and shook water from the shoulders of a fitted grey coat with the gesture of someone who'd been walking in it for hours. Hair cut into a severe dark bob that ended at her jaw. Shoes with thin heels that had no business on wet Soho pavement. A leather bag clutched against her chest like armour. She surveyed the empty room the way people look at menus. Silas lifted his chin toward her. "Last call." "Just the one." She chose a stool near the far end and set the bag on the bar. "Whisky. Whatever's open." Rory's hand moved toward the bottle before her mind caught up. The woman lifted her eyes. The room did something — contracted, shifted — and the maps and photographs on the walls blurred to the edges of Rory's vision and there was only the face across the bar. Hair that had once been a copper riot, refusing every brush and clip, tamed into something dark and precise. Skin that used to carry smudges of charcoal and acrylic now bare under lipstick the colour of dried blood. Hands with no paint beneath the nails, no ink on the fingers. Nothing of the girl who'd once covered every flat surface in Cathays with something she'd made. "Rory?" The name came out thin and broke against the bar like a dropped glass. "Eva." Eva's chin trembled once. She pressed her lips together and the lipstick creased. Her fingers gripped the bar edge. "No. No way." Eva looked up at the ceiling, at the low amber lights, back at Rory's face. "You live here?" "Above here." "You live above a bar in Soho." A breath left Eva that sounded like it had been held for years. She looked at the maps, the photographs, the rain-streaked windows. "I can't believe — God. Rory Carter." Silas looked from one to the other. He pocketed the float and came out from behind the till. "I'll be in the back." "Silas, you don't need to—" "The back." He limped past them toward the bookshelf at the far wall and the shelf swung inward and swallowed him. Eva stared at the place where the shelf had closed. "Who is that?" "My landlord. Silas. He's a friend." "You have friends who disappear through bookshelves." Eva exhaled a laugh that came out wrong. "How long since we've seen each other?" "Six years." "Six." She unbuttoned her coat and draped it over the stool beside her. Underneath she wore a silk blouse the colour of weak tea, ironed flat. "Six years and you're behind a bar and I'm in pharmaceutical sales and neither of us is who we were." "Whisky still sound right?" "Whisky sounds perfect." Rory poured two glasses and set one before Eva and kept the other, leaning against the bar opposite. She turned her glass in slow rotation on the mahogany. The silence sat between them with weight and edges. Not the kind they'd once shared — the kind where two people could sit in a parked car at Cardiff Bay and let an hour pass without a word and it said everything. This one had teeth. "So." Eva wrapped both hands around the glass. A band of white gold on her left hand, narrow, without a stone. "How long have you been in London?" "Since March." "March." Eva took a sip and the whisky made her blink. "I knew you left Cardiff. Your mum told me. But March." "Yeah." "And before March?" "Before March I was still in Cardiff." "I know where you were before March." Eva's gaze dropped to Rory's left wrist, where the crescent scar sat like a small white moon against her skin. She looked away. "I know who you were with." Rory kept her hand flat on the bar. "You told me to leave." "I told you to leave three years ago." "And I left." "In March." Eva drew a finger through the condensation ring on the mahogany. She traced a shape, erased it, traced it again. "How's Cardiff?" Rory asked. "Cardiff is Cardiff." Eva's mouth twisted. "Your dad does crosswords at the coffee shop on Wellfield Road. Your mum still teaches Year Nine English and hates every minute. The bay's the same. The Pierhead clock still doesn't work." "And you?" "I'm fine." The word came out flat. Eva heard it and picked up the glass. "I'm good. I got married two years ago. Tom. He's an accountant and he's kind and he takes the bins out without being asked." "Sounds nice." "It is. It's very nice." She turned the ring on her finger — the same nervous rotation she'd had since sixth form. "Pharmaceutical sales now. Bristol office. I drive a Prius and go to a gym on Tuesdays and buy free-range eggs and I cannot believe I'm saying any of this to you." "The girl who climbed onto the roof of the National Museum at three in the morning to watch the sun come up over Cathays Park now buys free-range eggs." "Believe me." Eva stared into the glass. "The irony is not lost. What about you? God, Rory. Delivering food?" "Deliveries pay rent." "You had a law degree. You sat in the front row and argued with every lecturer and they loved you for it. You were—" She stopped. Pressed two fingers to her temple. "You were the brightest person in any room you walked into." "People change." "Some things don't." Eva's gaze returned to the crescent scar. She reached across the bar and touched it with two fingertips. "Does it still—" Rory pulled her wrist back. Not because it hurt. Eva closed her hand around the glass again. Her knuckles went white. "I should have come sooner," Eva said. "Come where?" "London. To find you." Eva pressed her palms flat against the bar, fingers splayed as though pushing something invisible into the wood. "After you left. After that text. I should have come." "You had a life." "I had a Prius and a nice man who does the bins." The bitterness surfaced and Eva wrestled it back down. "I kept my phone on loud. For months. I thought you'd call." Rory looked at the maps on the wall. Old cartography. Coastlines redrawn since they were printed. Somewhere in the far left corner, a faded outline of the Bristol Channel. Somewhere in there, the roads they'd driven at seventeen with the windows down and no destination. "I'm sorry," Rory said. "For what?" "For the silence." "Yeah." Eva cleared her throat. Her eyes caught the lamplight and she blinked and looked at her hands. "I didn't come here to make you feel bad." "Why did you come?" Eva's mouth opened and shut. She turned the ring on her finger. The thin gold band caught light and went dark again. "I'm in London for a conference. Pharmaceuticals. Terrible. And I was walking and I saw the green sign and I thought—" She shook her head. "I don't know what I thought." "That we could have a drink and pretend the last six years didn't happen." "That is what I thought." Eva looked up and for a second she was twenty-one again, cross-legged on a bedroom floor in Cathays, painting her toenails electric blue and talking too fast about the novel she'd write and the cities she'd see and the life she'd build that looked nothing like anyone else's. "Can we do that?" Eva said. Rory lifted her glass. "To pretending." They drank. Eva coughed and set the glass down with a knock that echoed. "The wolf is still up, by the way," Eva said. "On Castle Street. They built the new block around it. Kept it on the side wall like a shrine." "Someone painted over the eye." "What?" "Last year. I was home for—" Rory paused. "I was walking past and someone had painted a heart where the eye used to be. Red. Like a patch." Eva stared at her. "You saw it?" "I saw it." They looked at each other across the mahogany. The silence didn't have edges this time. It had a pulse. It sat between them like something living and neither of them breathed too hard. Eva's eyes went bright and she blinked and looked down at the bar. "I should go," Eva said. "Tom's expecting me. The hotel's near Paddington." "Ev—" "It's fine. I just—" She stood and pulled on the coat and buttoned it with fingers that shook and then went still. She picked up the bag. "It's good to see you, Rory. You look like you." "And you look like—" Rory stopped. She took in the woman standing there: grey coat, the dark bob, the white gold band, the dried-blood lipstick. And underneath all of it, the ghost of the girl who'd spray-painted a wolf on a car park wall because the city needed one. "Someone sensible?" Eva made a shape with her mouth that wasn't quite a smile. "Someone who walked a long way in the rain for one drink." Eva crossed to the door and stopped with her hand on the brass handle. The green neon outside flickered against the glass and painted her silhouette in cold, shifting light. She didn't turn around. "Heart instead of an eye," Eva said. "That's not nothing." She pulled the door open and stepped into the rain and the green glow swung across the room and cut off and the Raven's Nest settled back into its map-lined dark. Rory stood behind the bar with two empty glasses and the ring of condensation Eva had left on the mahogany. Behind the bookshelf, in the back room, Silas turned a page.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:30:32.197Z" 9/23/2026, 10:30:32 AM
model"xiaomi/mimo-v2.6-pro-20260921"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1758
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time599257
tokens_prompt1063
tokens_completion22413
native_tokens_prompt1010
native_tokens_completion20382
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning18104
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.01817169
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.20.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1790159432-5RnaFdMvIGZKJYze60gJ"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1790159432-o6znIs9S2KB60c4WYIRN"
upstream_id"b01c31b6-df6a-4b73-861f-49cdd3c762bc_cd8f4d750aa64cedb157b671f48974a3"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"4354fc36-b8ab-4ced-aa8c-0efb6b4523f1"
id"b01c31b6-df6a-4b73-861f-49cdd3c762bc_cd8f4d750aa64cedb157b671f48974a3"
is_byokfalse
latency1680
model_permaslug"xiaomi/mimo-v2.6-pro-20260921"
provider_name"Xiaomi"
status200
total_cost0.01817169
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Xiaomi"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"silk"
2"perfect"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"electric"
7"echoed"
8"pulse"
9"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1769
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1163
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.67
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Thursday1
London1
Silas5
Rory16
Soho1
Cathays2
Eva31
Underneath1
Cardiff1
Bay1
Pressed1
Bristol1
Channel1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cathays"
3"Cardiff"
4"Bay"
5"Bristol"
globalScore0.167
windowScore0
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something between fondness and impatience — the"
1"sounded like it had been held for years"
2"as though pushing something invisible into the wood"
3"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1769
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean19.02
std18.74
cv0.985
sampleLengths
064
111
23
328
418
530
675
78
821
916
1098
111
1214
131
1419
1521
162
1737
1818
195
205
2121
2213
236
2422
252
2646
274
283
2974
3028
312
3222
331
343
357
3636
3713
388
393
402
4120
424
4338
442
4539
462
4753
4829
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"been held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
75.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences170
ratio0.024
matches
0"\"You're never tired. That's the problem.\" He glanced at her — hazel eyes flat with something between fondness and impatience — then returned to the count."
1"The room did something — contracted, shifted — and the maps and photographs on the walls blurred to the edges of Rory's vision and there was only the face across the bar."
2"Not the kind they'd once shared — the kind where two people could sit in a parked car at Cardiff Bay and let an hour pass without a word and it said everything."
3"\"It is. It's very nice.\" She turned the ring on her finger — the same nervous rotation she'd had since sixth form."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1165
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.018025751072961373
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008583690987124463
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean10.41
std8.49
cv0.815
sampleLengths
013
129
214
38
49
52
63
726
82
98
103
117
1230
1331
1412
1512
169
1711
186
192
2018
213
2211
235
2432
2519
2619
2712
2816
291
3014
311
324
339
346
3518
363
372
3820
3910
407
417
4211
435
445
4521
4610
473
486
4915
57.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.38823529411764707
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners66
70.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Somewhere in the far left"
1"Somewhere in there, the roads"
ratio0.021
93.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences95
matches
0"His signet ring clicked against"
1"He didn't look up from"
2"He glanced at her —"
3"She didn't argue."
4"She had one boot on"
5"She surveyed the empty room"
6"She chose a stool near"
7"She pressed her lips together"
8"Her fingers gripped the bar"
9"She looked at the maps,"
10"He pocketed the float and"
11"He limped past them toward"
12"She unbuttoned her coat and"
13"She turned her glass in"
14"She looked away."
15"She traced a shape, erased"
16"She turned the ring on"
17"She reached across the bar"
18"Her knuckles went white."
19"Her eyes caught the lamplight"
ratio0.316
7.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences95
matches
0"The last of the Thursday"
1"Rory worked a damp cloth"
2"His signet ring clicked against"
3"He didn't look up from"
4"He glanced at her —"
5"Rory draped the cloth over"
6"She didn't argue."
7"Silas didn't make offers he"
8"She had one boot on"
9"A woman stepped in out"
10"Hair cut into a severe"
11"Shoes with thin heels that"
12"A leather bag clutched against"
13"She surveyed the empty room"
14"Silas lifted his chin toward"
15"She chose a stool near"
16"Rory's hand moved toward the"
17"The woman lifted her eyes."
18"The room did something —"
19"Hair that had once been"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A woman stepped in out of the rain and shook water from the shoulders of a fitted grey coat with the gesture of someone who'd been walking in it for hours."
1"Hair that had once been a copper riot, refusing every brush and clip, tamed into something dark and precise."
2"Skin that used to carry smudges of charcoal and acrylic now bare under lipstick the colour of dried blood."
3"And underneath all of it, the ghost of the girl who'd spray-painted a wolf on a car park wall because the city needed one."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva pressed, fingers splayed as though pushing something invisible into the wood"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.021
81.7599%