| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.639 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1394 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1230 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | South | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 24 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | Ahead | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "South" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.524 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though listening to something at a frequency below human hearing" | | 1 | "felt like a room, a vast one with no ce" | | 2 | "as if feeling for a current in still water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.717 | | wordCount | 1394 | | matches | | 0 | "not faintly now but fully, casting red light across her fingers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 29.04 | | std | 24.88 | | cv | 0.857 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 69 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 81 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 67 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 55 | | 47 | 11 |
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| 98.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "been shaped" | | 2 | "been arranged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.184 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped at the edge of a clearing she'd never noticed before — not in all the months she'd spent running deliveries across South London, not once." | | 1 | "Eva had insisted on coming — she'd heard too much about the strange things following Rory lately, and she wasn't the type to sit at home worrying when she could worry in person." | | 2 | "The deep crimson gem sat warm against her collarbone, a pulse she'd felt three times now — always heavy, always steady." | | 3 | "The boundary was marked by standing stones — ancient oaks that had been shaped or grown into columns, their trunks narrowing at the base and flaring at the crown where heavy branches arched together like ribs." | | 4 | "Her breath didn't fog — the cold didn't touch her lungs — but her skin prickled with goosebumps." | | 5 | "The park beyond — the miles of fenced greenery, the joggers, the families with their flasks of tea — all of it had vanished behind the wall of oaks." | | 6 | "The ground underfoot changed from grass to something softer — a carpet of fallen leaves that were green and whole and faintly luminous, as if the trees had shed them mid-season only moments ago." | | 7 | "Along its edges, small stones had been arranged in deliberate spirals — dozens of them — spirals within spirals that seemed to rotate when she looked at them from the corner of her eye but sat perfectly still when she faced them directly." | | 8 | "Nyx's violet gaze moved across the stones, the oaks, the impossible sky visible through the canopy gaps — a sky that had shifted to a bruised gold while they stood there." | | 9 | "Rory took point — she'd always been faster at reading rooms, and this felt like a room, a vast one with no ceiling." | | 10 | "Their petals opened wider with each step, revealing centres that weren't pollen but tiny pinned faces of colour — abstract, like something a child might paint after waking from a strange dream." | | 11 | "Rory ducked under a low branch and found herself staring at a face carved into the trunk of the nearest tree — a woman's features, eroded by centuries of rain and root growth, her mouth open in an expression that could have been laughter or warning." | | 12 | "It throbbed — once, twice — and warmth spread outward from the gem in slow waves." | | 13 | "They extended one hand — a shape of shadow — toward the base of a massive oak where the silver path seemed to bend." | | 14 | "It tasted different — thicker, sweeter, like fruit left too long in the sun." | | 15 | "Ahead, the path opened into a second clearing — smaller, tighter, ringed by stones that didn't look like oaks but actual standing stones, grey and lichen-crusted, each one taller than Rory by a head." | | 16 | "Something that caught light differently — refracting it into colours that hurt to look at directly." | | 17 | "The pendant still pulsed — steady now, matching her own heartbeat as though the two had synced during the walk." | | 18 | "Eva glanced up at the sky — the gold deepening toward rust, shadows lengthening across the silver grass despite no visible sun." | | 19 | "The wind — actual wind — picked up and carried the scent of wildflowers and something underneath it, something old and sweet and wrong." | | 20 | "The crimson gem blazed — not faintly now but fully, casting red light across her fingers and the blade-shaped leaves at her feet." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1206 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "different — thicker, sweeter, like" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02902155887230514 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009950248756218905 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 12.23 | | std | 10.61 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 57.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.39473684210526316 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood with her arms" | | 1 | "She reached up and touched" | | 2 | "It beat differently here." | | 3 | "It warped, the way heat" | | 4 | "Her breath didn't fog —" | | 5 | "they whispered, the sound threading" | | 6 | "It wasn't a path of" | | 7 | "She blinked and looked again." | | 8 | "They stood at the head" | | 9 | "They moved down the path." | | 10 | "Their petals opened wider with" | | 11 | "She stopped walking." | | 12 | "She pressed the Heartstone flat" | | 13 | "It throbbed — once, twice" | | 14 | "They extended one hand —" | | 15 | "Their fingers sank into the" | | 16 | "It tasted different — thicker," | | 17 | "She counted the beats." |
| | ratio | 0.234 | |
| 24.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trunks thickened as" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "The grass before them didn't" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized from the shadow" | | 4 | "Rory looked at the other" | | 5 | "Eva had insisted on coming" | | 6 | "She stood with her arms" | | 7 | "She reached up and touched" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem sat" | | 9 | "It beat differently here." | | 10 | "Nyx said, and stepped forward" | | 11 | "The boundary was marked by" | | 12 | "Moss hung from them in" | | 13 | "It warped, the way heat" | | 14 | "Rory crossed first." | | 15 | "The temperature dropped ten degrees" | | 16 | "Her breath didn't fog —" | | 17 | "The pendant pulled against her" | | 18 | "The clearing opened up impossibly" | | 19 | "The park beyond — the" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary was marked by standing stones — ancient oaks that had been shaped or grown into columns, their trunks narrowing at the base and flaring at the crow…" | | 1 | "The ground underfoot changed from grass to something softer — a carpet of fallen leaves that were green and whole and faintly luminous, as if the trees had shed…" | | 2 | "It wasn't a path of dirt or stone but of packed earth that glittered with flecks of silver, each one catching a different colour of the ambient light." | | 3 | "They stood at the head of the path, head tilted as though listening to something at a frequency below human hearing." | | 4 | "Nyx's violet gaze moved across the stones, the oaks, the impossible sky visible through the canopy gaps — a sky that had shifted to a bruised gold while they st…" | | 5 | "Their petals opened wider with each step, revealing centres that weren't pollen but tiny pinned faces of colour — abstract, like something a child might paint a…" | | 6 | "Rory ducked under a low branch and found herself staring at a face carved into the trunk of the nearest tree — a woman's features, eroded by centuries of rain a…" | | 7 | "Ahead, the path opened into a second clearing — smaller, tighter, ringed by stones that didn't look like oaks but actual standing stones, grey and lichen-cruste…" | | 8 | "Something that caught light differently — refracting it into colours that hurt to look at directly." | | 9 | "The pendant still pulsed — steady now, matching her own heartbeat as though the two had synced during the walk." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva muttered, but her voice had thinned" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |