Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X2EZ7AXRS5SN44J96V6CV

Run Details

Duration:
58.2s
Cost:
$0.000542
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak trunks thickened as they pressed further into Richmond Park, their bark ridged and black with rain that hadn't fallen in days. Rory stopped at the edge of a clearing she'd never noticed before — not in all the months she'd spent running deliveries across South London, not once. The grass before them didn't match. It hummed. "That's new," she said. Nyx materialized from the shadow of a hawthorn, their violet eyes casting a faint stain on the surrounding leaves. "New to you." Rory looked at the other two with her. Eva had insisted on coming — she'd heard too much about the strange things following Rory lately, and she wasn't the type to sit at home worrying when she could worry in person. She stood with her arms crossed, her red hair catching what little amber light filtered through the canopy. "So this is it," Eva said. "The famous Grove." "I haven't been inside," Rory said. She reached up and touched the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. The deep crimson gem sat warm against her collarbone, a pulse she'd felt three times now — always heavy, always steady. It beat differently here. Faster. "Then we go in," Nyx said, and stepped forward. The boundary was marked by standing stones — ancient oaks that had been shaped or grown into columns, their trunks narrowing at the base and flaring at the crown where heavy branches arched together like ribs. Moss hung from them in curtains the colour of wet velvet. Between the pillars, the air rippled. Not metaphorically. It warped, the way heat shimmered over tarmac, but cold instead of warm. Rory crossed first. The temperature dropped ten degrees in a single step. Her breath didn't fog — the cold didn't touch her lungs — but her skin prickled with goosebumps. The pendant pulled against her throat like it was trying to lead her forward. Behind her, Eva stepped through and stopped dead. "Jesus." The clearing opened up impossibly wide. The park beyond — the miles of fenced greenery, the joggers, the families with their flasks of tea — all of it had vanished behind the wall of oaks. What stood before them instead was a hollow ringed by wildflowers in colours Rory had no name for: blooms of bruised gold, petals the deep blue of an exposed vein, clusters of something translucent that dripped light like slow honey. Nyx walked through the shimmer last. The boundary curled around their form and released them. "Keep your eyes open," they whispered, the sound threading through the air like a breeze with words in it. "Things here watch." "Things always watch," Eva muttered, but her voice had thinned. The ground underfoot changed from grass to something softer — a carpet of fallen leaves that were green and whole and faintly luminous, as if the trees had shed them mid-season only moments ago. Rory knelt and pressed two fingers into the leaf bed. The surface yielded like warm skin, then held firm. "Rory." Eva crouched beside her, pointing. Ahead, a path wound between the flowers. It wasn't a path of dirt or stone but of packed earth that glittered with flecks of silver, each one catching a different colour of the ambient light. Along its edges, small stones had been arranged in deliberate spirals — dozens of them — spirals within spirals that seemed to rotate when she looked at them from the corner of her eye but sat perfectly still when she faced them directly. She blinked and looked again. Still. Still as anything. "I don't like spirals," Eva said. "They mark the way," Nyx said. They stood at the head of the path, head tilted as though listening to something at a frequency below human hearing. "Someone has walked here. Many someones. Over a long time." "How long?" Rory asked. Nyx's violet gaze moved across the stones, the oaks, the impossible sky visible through the canopy gaps — a sky that had shifted to a bruised gold while they stood there. The winter sun was nowhere in it. "Longer than your country has a name." They moved down the path. Rory took point — she'd always been faster at reading rooms, and this felt like a room, a vast one with no ceiling. The wildflowers on either side leaned toward them as they passed. Not swaying. Leaning. Their petals opened wider with each step, revealing centres that weren't pollen but tiny pinned faces of colour — abstract, like something a child might paint after waking from a strange dream. "Don't touch anything," Rory said. "Wasn't planning on it," Eva said. The path narrowed. The oaks closed in, their roots bulging from the earth like the knuckles of buried hands. Rory ducked under a low branch and found herself staring at a face carved into the trunk of the nearest tree — a woman's features, eroded by centuries of rain and root growth, her mouth open in an expression that could have been laughter or warning. Rory couldn't tell which. The pendant surged against her chest. She stopped walking. "What?" Eva asked. "The pulse," Rory said. She pressed the Heartstone flat against her sternum. It throbbed — once, twice — and warmth spread outward from the gem in slow waves. "It's done this before. Near the portals." "Hel portal?" Eva's hand went to her jacket pocket, where Rory knew she'd stashed a kitchen knife before they left the flat. Nyx moved past them both. They extended one hand — a shape of shadow — toward the base of a massive oak where the silver path seemed to bend. Their fingers sank into the bark. "This place sits between," Nyx said. "Earth and Fae. But the soil underneath carries something older. Something that smells of brimstone and orchards." "A Hel rift," Rory said. "Thin. Dormant. But present." The air around them shifted. It tasted different — thicker, sweeter, like fruit left too long in the sun. A sound rose from somewhere deep within the clearing: a low, resonant hum, almost musical, that Rory felt in her back teeth before she heard it in her ears. The wildflowers trembled. Eva stepped closer to Rory. "Tell me that's the wind." "It's not the wind," Rory said. Ahead, the path opened into a second clearing — smaller, tighter, ringed by stones that didn't look like oaks but actual standing stones, grey and lichen-crusted, each one taller than Rory by a head. Between them, the ground dipped into a shallow basin where the grass grew silver and sharp, each blade like a sliver of wire. At the basin's centre, something sat in the earth: a flat stone slab, cracked down the middle, with something dark pooling in the fracture. Not blood. Something that caught light differently — refracting it into colours that hurt to look at directly. "Don't look at it too long," Nyx said. "Eyes here aren't yours to give away." Rory forced her gaze down. The pendant still pulsed — steady now, matching her own heartbeat as though the two had synced during the walk. She counted the beats. One, two, three. The warmth of it anchored her when everything around her seemed to breathe. "We should keep moving," Rory said. "If there's a dormant rift here, someone needs to know before the solstice." Eva glanced up at the sky — the gold deepening toward rust, shadows lengthening across the silver grass despite no visible sun. "Since when are you the responsible one?" "Since always." Rory looked back at the carved face in the oak, then at the spirals of stone along the path, then at Nyx standing motionless at the basin's edge with their hand raised as if feeling for a current in still water. The wind — actual wind — picked up and carried the scent of wildflowers and something underneath it, something old and sweet and wrong. The stones between them hummed louder. "Someone knows we're here," Eva said. Rory pulled the pendant off her neck and held it in her palm. The crimson gem blazed — not faintly now but fully, casting red light across her fingers and the blade-shaped leaves at her feet. It pointed. The way a compass points, unyielding, toward the second clearing and the cracked slab at its centre. "Then we find out what's waiting," Rory said, and stepped forward.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:30:36.784Z" 9/23/2026, 10:30:36 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.639
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"velvet"
2"shimmered"
3"throbbed"
4"warmth"
5"trembled"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1394
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1230
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
South1
London1
Nyx9
Rory24
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Eva12
Ahead2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"South"
3"London"
globalScore0.524
windowScore0.333
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as though listening to something at a frequency below human hearing"
1"felt like a room, a vast one with no ce"
2"as if feeling for a current in still water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.717
wordCount1394
matches
0"not faintly now but fully, casting red light across her fingers"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean29.04
std24.88
cv0.857
sampleLengths
058
14
222
359
49
543
69
768
844
98
101
1175
1237
1310
1453
156
1678
179
186
1937
204
2145
2274
235
246
2569
269
273
2835
2922
3035
3123
325
334
3451
3510
366
3781
3818
3915
4045
4119
4229
4367
446
456
4655
4711
98.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"was marked"
1"been shaped"
2"been arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount27
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences114
ratio0.184
matches
0"Rory stopped at the edge of a clearing she'd never noticed before — not in all the months she'd spent running deliveries across South London, not once."
1"Eva had insisted on coming — she'd heard too much about the strange things following Rory lately, and she wasn't the type to sit at home worrying when she could worry in person."
2"The deep crimson gem sat warm against her collarbone, a pulse she'd felt three times now — always heavy, always steady."
3"The boundary was marked by standing stones — ancient oaks that had been shaped or grown into columns, their trunks narrowing at the base and flaring at the crown where heavy branches arched together like ribs."
4"Her breath didn't fog — the cold didn't touch her lungs — but her skin prickled with goosebumps."
5"The park beyond — the miles of fenced greenery, the joggers, the families with their flasks of tea — all of it had vanished behind the wall of oaks."
6"The ground underfoot changed from grass to something softer — a carpet of fallen leaves that were green and whole and faintly luminous, as if the trees had shed them mid-season only moments ago."
7"Along its edges, small stones had been arranged in deliberate spirals — dozens of them — spirals within spirals that seemed to rotate when she looked at them from the corner of her eye but sat perfectly still when she faced them directly."
8"Nyx's violet gaze moved across the stones, the oaks, the impossible sky visible through the canopy gaps — a sky that had shifted to a bruised gold while they stood there."
9"Rory took point — she'd always been faster at reading rooms, and this felt like a room, a vast one with no ceiling."
10"Their petals opened wider with each step, revealing centres that weren't pollen but tiny pinned faces of colour — abstract, like something a child might paint after waking from a strange dream."
11"Rory ducked under a low branch and found herself staring at a face carved into the trunk of the nearest tree — a woman's features, eroded by centuries of rain and root growth, her mouth open in an expression that could have been laughter or warning."
12"It throbbed — once, twice — and warmth spread outward from the gem in slow waves."
13"They extended one hand — a shape of shadow — toward the base of a massive oak where the silver path seemed to bend."
14"It tasted different — thicker, sweeter, like fruit left too long in the sun."
15"Ahead, the path opened into a second clearing — smaller, tighter, ringed by stones that didn't look like oaks but actual standing stones, grey and lichen-crusted, each one taller than Rory by a head."
16"Something that caught light differently — refracting it into colours that hurt to look at directly."
17"The pendant still pulsed — steady now, matching her own heartbeat as though the two had synced during the walk."
18"Eva glanced up at the sky — the gold deepening toward rust, shadows lengthening across the silver grass despite no visible sun."
19"The wind — actual wind — picked up and carried the scent of wildflowers and something underneath it, something old and sweet and wrong."
20"The crimson gem blazed — not faintly now but fully, casting red light across her fingers and the blade-shaped leaves at her feet."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different — thicker, sweeter, like"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02902155887230514
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009950248756218905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean12.23
std10.61
cv0.868
sampleLengths
023
127
26
32
44
519
63
78
833
918
106
113
126
1311
1421
154
161
179
1836
1911
206
212
2213
233
249
2518
2614
278
281
296
3029
3140
326
339
3419
353
3610
3734
3810
399
406
417
4228
4343
445
451
463
476
486
4921
57.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.39473684210526316
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences77
matches
0"She stood with her arms"
1"She reached up and touched"
2"It beat differently here."
3"It warped, the way heat"
4"Her breath didn't fog —"
5"they whispered, the sound threading"
6"It wasn't a path of"
7"She blinked and looked again."
8"They stood at the head"
9"They moved down the path."
10"Their petals opened wider with"
11"She stopped walking."
12"She pressed the Heartstone flat"
13"It throbbed — once, twice"
14"They extended one hand —"
15"Their fingers sank into the"
16"It tasted different — thicker,"
17"She counted the beats."
ratio0.234
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences77
matches
0"The oak trunks thickened as"
1"Rory stopped at the edge"
2"The grass before them didn't"
3"Nyx materialized from the shadow"
4"Rory looked at the other"
5"Eva had insisted on coming"
6"She stood with her arms"
7"She reached up and touched"
8"The deep crimson gem sat"
9"It beat differently here."
10"Nyx said, and stepped forward"
11"The boundary was marked by"
12"Moss hung from them in"
13"It warped, the way heat"
14"Rory crossed first."
15"The temperature dropped ten degrees"
16"Her breath didn't fog —"
17"The pendant pulled against her"
18"The clearing opened up impossibly"
19"The park beyond — the"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The boundary was marked by standing stones — ancient oaks that had been shaped or grown into columns, their trunks narrowing at the base and flaring at the crow…"
1"The ground underfoot changed from grass to something softer — a carpet of fallen leaves that were green and whole and faintly luminous, as if the trees had shed…"
2"It wasn't a path of dirt or stone but of packed earth that glittered with flecks of silver, each one catching a different colour of the ambient light."
3"They stood at the head of the path, head tilted as though listening to something at a frequency below human hearing."
4"Nyx's violet gaze moved across the stones, the oaks, the impossible sky visible through the canopy gaps — a sky that had shifted to a bruised gold while they st…"
5"Their petals opened wider with each step, revealing centres that weren't pollen but tiny pinned faces of colour — abstract, like something a child might paint a…"
6"Rory ducked under a low branch and found herself staring at a face carved into the trunk of the nearest tree — a woman's features, eroded by centuries of rain a…"
7"Ahead, the path opened into a second clearing — smaller, tighter, ringed by stones that didn't look like oaks but actual standing stones, grey and lichen-cruste…"
8"Something that caught light differently — refracting it into colours that hurt to look at directly."
9"The pendant still pulsed — steady now, matching her own heartbeat as though the two had synced during the walk."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva muttered, but her voice had thinned"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
76.4928%