Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X4Q9AD0B89CY7DV5KBWPN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000714
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts turned with a sound like bones cracking, and Eva yanked the door wide. Lucien stood in the stairwell with his ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm, rain beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Water dripped from his slicked-back platinum hair and traced the line of his jaw. One eye caught the hallway light — amber, warm as a struck match. The other stayed black, an absence, a hole punched through his face. He'd been standing there a while. She could tell by the way he held himself, that particular stillness he wore like a second skin. "You shouldn't be here," Rory said. "I know." The flat behind her smelled of turmeric and damp plaster and Ptolemy's litter box, which Eva kept promising to move to the bathroom. Books and scroll-wrapped parcels covered every surface — the kitchen counter, the arm of the sofa, the windowsill where the tabby usually slept. Rory had her reading glasses pushed up into her hair, a pen behind one ear. She'd been at something for hours, if the mug of cold tea was any indication. Lucien's gaze moved past her shoulder, cataloguing the chaos. He did that without thinking. Filed details away for later. "I called the bar downstairs," he said. "Silas told me you weren't working tonight." "So he gave you my address." "He gave me your address." Rory leaned against the doorframe and folded her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist pressed into the skin of her opposite forearm. "It's nearly midnight." "I'm aware." "What do you want, Lucien?" He shifted his weight. The cane tapped once against the concrete step, a sharp, deliberate sound. For a moment she thought he might turn around and walk back into the rain without answering. She'd seen him do it before — vanish into traffic, into fog, into the grey machinery of London as though the city owed him a favor and he'd decided not to collect. "I have something you need," he said instead. "May I come in?" "You're already soaked through. Whatever it is, it can wait until you're dry." "Not the way the evening's going." Rory studied him. He looked tired under the composure, the way he always did when he thought no one was looking — a tightness at the corners of his mouth, a thinning of the skin beneath his eyes. Whatever had chased him across East London at midnight had left a mark. She stepped back and turned toward the kitchen, not waiting to see if he followed. He followed. She heard the cane against the floorboards, the quiet click of the door shutting behind him. Ptolemy lifted his striped head from the windowsill, considered Lucien with the deep indifference of a cat who had never once been impressed by a well-cut suit, and went back to sleep. Rory pulled the second mug from the cupboard and filled the kettle. "Tea. Sit." Lucien lowered himself into the chair across the small table, resting the cane against his knee. Water pooled on the wood beneath him. He didn't bother apologizing. "I heard you left the bar tonight in a hurry," he said. "I didn't leave in a hurry. I finished my shift." "And then?" "And then I came home and started reading." She nodded toward the pile of papers spread across the counter — the same ones she'd been picking at since the curry house downstairs closed for the evening, the smell of frying onions seeping up through the floorboards. Lucien leaned forward. "That's the Grimaldi ledger." "It's a photocopy of the Grimaldi ledger." "Where did you get it?" "You're not answering my question. What do you want?" He opened his mouth, closed it, and rapped his knuckle twice against the tabletop. When he spoke again, the French had bled into his vowels, the way it always did when he forgot to hold himself together. "I want to know why you stopped answering." Rory's hand paused over the tea tin. She kept her back to him for a beat longer than she needed to. "You know why." "I know what you told Eva. I don't know what you told yourself." She turned around and set the tin on the counter, hard enough that the lid rattled. "You stood me up, Lucien. You picked a Wednesday, you picked that awful little wine bar in Soho, and then you didn't show. I sat there for two hours watching the bartender wipe the same glass over and over. After that—" She pressed her lips together. "After that, I decided I'd rather not do it again." "I was at St. Thomas'. My father's informant took a turn and ended up in A&E with three cracked ribs and a demon tail he couldn't retract. Security had him cornered in Radiology." Lucien's jaw worked. "I called you fourteen times." Rory picked up the pen behind her ear and turned it over in her fingers. She'd known that, of course. She'd known it the moment Eva mentioned it — Lucien's father, the demon from Avaros, the whole tangled mess that kept pulling Lucien into rooms she couldn't follow. Knowing it didn't change the two hours in the wine bar. Didn't erase the way her chest had tightened every time the door swung open. "You could have called the next day." "I did call the next day. And the day after." "From a blocked number." He held up a finger. "Fair." The kettle clicked off. Rory poured the water, watched the tea leaves swirl, and carried both mugs to the table. She set one in front of him without ceremony and sat down across from the mess of photocopied pages she'd dragged from the counter. Lucien wrapped both hands around the mug and stared into it. "I'm not here to make you forgive me," he said. "Good. Because you're not going to." "Right." A beat. "I'm here because Ivan Grimaldi is putting together a circle. And the names I've seen so far include yours." The room went quiet. Ptolemy's tail twitched against the windowsill. Rory set her pen down. "Explain." Lucien pulled a folded piece of paper from his inside jacket pocket — dry, of course, tucked away from the rain like he'd planned the presentation. He flattened it on the table with two fingers and slid it across. She read it twice. The handwriting was cramped, the ink bleeding into the paper in places. A list of names, some crossed out, some circled. Hers was circled. "Where did you get this?" "That's not your concern." "Lucien." His amber eye flicked up to meet hers. "A source in Avaros-adjacent circles. I paid a significant amount of money, and I'll be paying more when she decides the amount wasn't significant enough." Rory traced the edge of the paper with her thumbnail. "Aurora Carter. That's my name on this list. Not Rory. Not Malphora. My actual name." "I noticed." "That means whoever compiled this knows exactly who I am." She looked up. "How?" "That," he said, "is also not my concern. Not yet. First I need to know why your name is in Ivan Grimaldi's ledger at all." Rory pushed back from the table and walked to the window. The street below was nearly empty — a taxi sliding past the curry house, a couple sharing an umbrella, the orange glow of a streetlamp catching the wet pavement. She pressed her forehead against the cold glass and breathed. Behind her, Lucien waited. He was good at waiting. It was one of the things that made him dangerous, and one of the things that made her want to throw something at his head. "I don't know," she said. "I haven't done anything to Ivan Grimaldi. I don't even know him." "But you know his name." "I know his name because you said it just now." "Before that." Rory turned. He was watching her with that particular expression — patient, unblinking, both eyes fixed on her even though one of them was nothing more than a black disc that swallowed the light. "I've been running deliveries for Yu-Fei for six months," she said. "Two of them were to addresses in Bloomsbury that didn't match any restaurant order. Cash, no receipt. Yu-Fei told me not to ask." Lucien's mouth thinned. "And you didn't ask." "I asked. He told me not to ask again. So I stopped, and I started writing down the addresses instead." "You wrote down the addresses." "I wrote down the addresses." He leaned back in the chair, and something shifted in his face — not quite a smile, not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension that had been sitting in his shoulders since he walked through the door. "That," he said, "is exactly the kind of thing that gets your name on Ivan Grimaldi's list." "Then I should have asked harder." "You should have told me." Rory crossed her arms and leaned against the window frame. "Told you what? We weren't speaking." "We were speaking. We just weren't saying anything useful." Ptolemy hopped down from the windowsill, wound once between Rory's ankles, and jumped onto the table. He sniffed Lucien's tea, considered it, and sat down on the corner of the Grimaldi ledger. Lucien watched the cat with something close to warmth. He reached out and scratched behind Ptolemy's ears, and the tabby leaned into it, purring like the betrayal hadn't happened. "He likes you," Rory said. "He has taste." "He has no taste. He ate a rubber band last week." Lucien's hand stilled. The purring stopped. They looked at each other across the table, and Rory felt it — that thing she'd been refusing to name since the wine bar in Soho, since the fourteen calls she'd let go to voicemail, since the night in Eva's kitchen when she'd told her oldest friend that she was fine and Eva had known she was lying and let her get away with it anyway. She wanted him to leave. She wanted him to stay. "What happens now?" she asked. Lucien folded his hands over the ledger — carefully, so Ptolemy wouldn't be disturbed — and fixed her with the amber eye. The black one said nothing. It never did. "Now," he said, "you tell me everything. And then we figure out how to keep your name off that list before Ivan Grimaldi decides to do something about it." "That could take all night." "Yes." He picked up his tea and drank. "It could."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:31:50.835Z" 9/23/2026, 10:31:50 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.479
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.028
97.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1737
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1737
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"tension"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"The room went quiet"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1750
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1176
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Ptolemy6
Rory16
London2
East1
Lucien16
French1
Avaros1
Grimaldi1
Soho1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"French"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"Avaros"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.82
windowScore0.833
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension that had been sitting in his shoulders since he walked through the door"
1"not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension that had been sitting in his shoulders since he walked through the door"
2"something close to warmth"
85.71% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.143
wordCount1750
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension"
1"not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean19.23
std18.15
cv0.944
sampleLengths
016
161
224
36
42
576
619
714
86
95
1024
113
122
135
1465
1512
1613
176
1851
1915
2050
2114
2227
2312
2410
252
2646
277
287
295
309
3137
328
3321
343
3513
3616
3756
3841
3973
407
4110
424
436
4444
4511
4610
476
4822
4910
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"been impressed"
1"was cramped"
2"was circled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was looking "
1"was watching"
2"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences152
ratio0.079
matches
0"One eye caught the hallway light — amber, warm as a struck match."
1"Books and scroll-wrapped parcels covered every surface — the kitchen counter, the arm of the sofa, the windowsill where the tabby usually slept."
2"She'd seen him do it before — vanish into traffic, into fog, into the grey machinery of London as though the city owed him a favor and he'd decided not to collect."
3"He looked tired under the composure, the way he always did when he thought no one was looking — a tightness at the corners of his mouth, a thinning of the skin beneath his eyes."
4"\"And then I came home and started reading.\" She nodded toward the pile of papers spread across the counter — the same ones she'd been picking at since the curry house downstairs closed for the evening, the smell of frying onions seeping up through the floorboards."
5"She'd known it the moment Eva mentioned it — Lucien's father, the demon from Avaros, the whole tangled mess that kept pulling Lucien into rooms she couldn't follow."
6"Lucien pulled a folded piece of paper from his inside jacket pocket — dry, of course, tucked away from the rain like he'd planned the presentation."
7"The street below was nearly empty — a taxi sliding past the curry house, a couple sharing an umbrella, the orange glow of a streetlamp catching the wet pavement."
8"He was watching her with that particular expression — patient, unblinking, both eyes fixed on her even though one of them was nothing more than a black disc that swallowed the light."
9"He leaned back in the chair, and something shifted in his face — not quite a smile, not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension that had been sitting in his shoulders since he walked through the door."
10"They looked at each other across the table, and Rory felt it — that thing she'd been refusing to name since the wine bar in Soho, since the fourteen calls she'd let go to voicemail, since the night in Eva's kitchen when she'd told her oldest friend that she was fine and Eva had known she was lying and let her get away with it anyway."
11"Lucien folded his hands over the ledger — carefully, so Ptolemy wouldn't be disturbed — and fixed her with the amber eye."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1167
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.028277634961439587
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002570694087403599
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.51
std10.16
cv0.883
sampleLengths
016
122
214
313
412
56
618
76
82
923
1023
1115
1215
139
145
155
167
177
186
195
209
2115
223
232
245
254
2612
2717
2832
298
304
3113
326
333
3435
3513
3615
372
3816
3932
4012
412
4216
437
444
4512
4610
472
4846
493
46.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences85
matches
0"He'd been standing there a"
1"She could tell by the"
2"She'd been at something for"
3"He did that without thinking."
4"He shifted his weight."
5"She'd seen him do it"
6"he said instead"
7"He looked tired under the"
8"She stepped back and turned"
9"She heard the cane against"
10"He didn't bother apologizing."
11"She nodded toward the pile"
12"He opened his mouth, closed"
13"She kept her back to"
14"She turned around and set"
15"She pressed her lips together"
16"She'd known that, of course."
17"She'd known it the moment"
18"He held up a finger."
19"She set one in front"
ratio0.435
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The three deadbolts turned with"
1"Lucien stood in the stairwell"
2"Water dripped from his slicked-back"
3"The other stayed black, an"
4"He'd been standing there a"
5"She could tell by the"
6"The flat behind her smelled"
7"Books and scroll-wrapped parcels covered"
8"Rory had her reading glasses"
9"She'd been at something for"
10"Lucien's gaze moved past her"
11"He did that without thinking."
12"Rory leaned against the doorframe"
13"The crescent scar on her"
14"He shifted his weight."
15"The cane tapped once against"
16"She'd seen him do it"
17"he said instead"
18"Rory studied him."
19"He looked tired under the"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ptolemy lifted his striped head from the windowsill, considered Lucien with the deep indifference of a cat who had never once been impressed by a well-cut suit,…"
1"She'd known it the moment Eva mentioned it — Lucien's father, the demon from Avaros, the whole tangled mess that kept pulling Lucien into rooms she couldn't fol…"
2"He was watching her with that particular expression — patient, unblinking, both eyes fixed on her even though one of them was nothing more than a black disc tha…"
3"He leaned back in the chair, and something shifted in his face — not quite a smile, not quite relief, but a loosening of the tension that had been sitting in hi…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She nodded, the smell of frying onions seeping up through the floorboards"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.366
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.028
79.3371%