Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X74BF98FEB8H2FMBRR4MK

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Duration:
7m 29s
Cost:
$0.124429
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory set her palm to the nearest trunk and found bark where she had expected stone. The oaks stood in a hollow of Richmond Park no path-sign bothered to name. Winter grass lay flat beyond them, grey-green, tired of feet. A dog barked twice and gave up. Between the trunks the light did other work. It fell amber, thick as the last inch of tea, and stopped short of the mud. "These aren't markers." She lifted her hand. Warmth stayed in the palm. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed paler than it had on the path. "Someone grew a door and left the latch up." Nyx occupied the space at her shoulder without agreeing to be a body. Tall as a doorframe. A human outline poured from hedge-shadow, eyes violet and lit from nowhere. The whisper of them reached her a half-step late, wind doing the last of the carrying. "Latches are a mortal fuss. Cross, or stay and plead your case to the dog." Rory checked her phone. No signal. 16:11. She pocketed it, set her boot between two roots, and crossed. Heat shoved the cold out of her coat. Pear-skin and crushed mint came up off the turf, and under them a sweetness gone over, fig and burnt sugar. The ground sprang back under her weight. Flowers packed every gap and refused one season between them: snowdrops with green hooks, blackberries split and shining, bluebells, a white blossom no bigger than a fingernail with a coal of light in its throat. A bee worked that one. Its wings left a smear of brightness, there and then not. She turned. The oaks drew their gaps shut. Park, dog, dull grass, all of it gone. Older trees stood in their place, trunks broad as the door of the bar under her flat, branches woven to a roof that let the sky down in coins. No sun in that sky. Amber at the rim. A green deep enough to drink. Above it a blue borrowed from a bruise. Brightness moved there, a pulse behind cloth. Nyx stood at her shoulder. Solid, a fern bent under their hand. Then less than solid, the fern rising through the place their hip had been. "This place cannot decide what I am." "Then pick a shape and keep it. I need a witness with a number in its head." She looked at the phone again. 16:11. The minute had not spent itself. She put the phone away and listened, because the clock had resigned and her ears had not. Clicks in the canopy. Glass on glass. Irregular, hard little bodies with bells for throats. A hum in the soil climbed her soles and sat in her back teeth. Water off to the left, the splash arriving backwards, strike then fall, hush, strike. She walked towards it. A wrong sound was a thing she could hold. The air cooled over three strides and warmed over the next, breath from something large with no face on offer. Her pendant lay against her collarbone, crimson, thumbnail-small, silver chain warmed by skin and nothing else. Once, in an alley off the Edgware Road, that gem had heated when the air wore a shimmer she alone could look at straight. She waited. The heat did not come. She tapped the stone with a nail. "Quiet. So this is no tear. Not the kind that wakes it." Nyx's outline thickened. The violet sharpened. "No rift. No Warden on a seam. A pocket, stitched between your park and the Fae side of the cloth. Old thread. It snags." The stream showed itself where the path dipped. Water clear as bottle-glass ran uphill for a yard, forgot itself, and turned. Stones under it clicked a cousin of the canopy's rhythm, close and not the same. Rory crouched. Two fingers went in. Cold bit the bone. She shook her hand, and the drops that left her skin refused the fall. They hung, turned, and slid sideways into the moss. "Gravity's on a break." A voice came off the bank above, a bell struck under water. "Gravity is a guest. Guests do not set the table." Rory got to her feet, scarred wrist tucked to her ribs, eyes up. Silver hair to the waist. Pale lavender eyes. A face that had misplaced its age and declined to search. Leaves passed for cloth and shifted when the woman did not. Rory looked down, because the ground was the part that failed to make sense. Every spear of moss stood straight. No heel. No print. The woman had come along the bank, and the bank kept no record. "You brought a clock." Those eyes moved to Nyx and stayed. "Clocks are costumes. The grove will not wear yours. The Shadow carries a second name, and that name fell. Fallen fruit draws wasps." "Isolde." Rory kept Eva's warning behind her teeth. No lies in that mouth. No straight road through it either. "Rory Carter. This is Nyx. We came through the oaks. My minute won't spend. Give me the shape of this place in words I can walk on." The whisper slid under the glass-clicks. "Nyx is the name that fits. Leave the one that fell where the century dropped it." Her feet rested on the moss and the moss refused the acquaintance. "You stand where the oaks spend their silence. Richmond knocks at one bark. The Courts knock at the other. No winter received an invitation, so the flowers forgot how to die. Your hour came in with you. Outside, the minute you brought is still buttoning its coat." Rory let the fallen name sit. She nodded at the uphill water. "Stream arguing with itself. Flowers that can't pick a month. Sky that isn't London. I can use a grove. I can't use a costume when that minute remembers its job." "You can use what does not become a lie." Isolde turned. The moss stood up behind her, unmarked. "Follow the pale stones. They are the grove's idea of a path. Ideas here have edges." Rory crossed where the stream ran downhill, honest for three feet, and set her boot on the first pale stone. Behind her, the uphill water clicked out the shape of the word she had used for it, syllable by syllable, a child proud of a new mouth. Nyx flowed along the verge. Person. Long stain of dark up a root. Eyes again. Where they passed, the coloured light dimmed and returned marked with violet, a taste the grove had taken and spat back. Deeper, her ears popped. No tunnel. She worked her jaw until the hum in her teeth found a pitch she could carry. Smell shifted under the pear: wet iron, then sea-salt, then the cold of a coast she had bunked off school to stand on. She breathed through her mouth and refused the gift. "It's wearing my places. Coast. A kitchen I won't name. How." "The air is a borrower." Nyx's whisper frayed, then knit. "It puts on the familiar so you will not run. I have watched hedges do worse with less skill." The pale stones quit at a pool no wider than the round table upstairs from the bar. Rory stopped. The water refused her face. It held the park path instead: winter grass, a crisp packet snagged on bramble, two figures walking away from a ring of oaks. One jacket bore a small gold dragon between the shoulders. The other figure was a smudge the winter light declined to finish. She crouched. The Rory in the water did not crouch. That one kept walking, back turned, phone in hand, shrinking towards a London that still had hold of 16:11. "That's the pair of us on the way out. We came in. We have not gone out." Isolde stood at the lip of the pool. Wet ground, and no mark of her. "You have not arrived. Arrival is a habit. This ground has no habit of you. The water keeps the receipt of the minute you spent at the bark. Groves prefer receipts." In the pool, the small Rory tapped a screen. Same minute. Same thumb. Rory's skin drew tight along her forearms. She left it alone. She stood. Her knees cracked, a human sound, and she kept that the way she kept the scar. "Then we walk until the ground learns a habit or gives the door back. Past the pool the stones start. If I put my weight on them, do they hold?" "The path holds what walks it with both feet and a name it can bear." Isolde did not blink. "One of you has both. One of you sheds names the way bark sheds. I will not walk it in your place. My step signs nothing the ground can keep." Rory went around the water. Stillness had begun to taste like a fee. On the far side the stones narrowed, set with chips that shone the way moon sits on a knife. The amber-green overhead could not account for it. Rory kept her hands off. Nyx did not. Shadow traced a chip. Cold light ran up their arm, and their dark drank it. A hiss left them, steam with no kettle behind it. "Fae metal. Sung out of a moon, still proud. My dark will not speak to that song." "Can you walk?" "I am a disagreement that learned to use feet. Go on." The path fed them into clearings like rooms, walls of leaf. First room: mushrooms in a ring, taller than her knee, caps the colour of a fresh bruise, gills lit underneath like exit signs. Spores drifted. Each spore a speck of mirror. One landed on her sleeve and showed her, pin-small, a black umbrella and Cardiff rain on a pavement she knew by the crack near the kerb. She swept it off. It burst. Wet wool filled her nose for a breath, then nothing. "Keep that out of you." "I do not breathe." Nyx's eyes sat higher than a face required. Their chest thinned until the far trunks showed through. "I copy the motion so the living will not stare. The spores stare in any case." Second room. Branches had grown themselves into arches. Fruit hung that no market would price. Pears skinned in bark. Apples clear as ice, seeds inside them like caught stars. Berries that chimed when air moved, each a separate small bell. Smell came in layers. Sugar. Sea-salt again. Then the clean bite after lightning, streets washed and bright and unfit to trust. Rory's hand rose and stopped an inch from a clear apple. Her stomach argued for it. She had eaten a cold spring roll in the Empress kitchen and nothing after. Her jaw set. She spoke flat. "I take one. What does the ground take?" Isolde stood under the arch. Grass upright at her hem. "A taking is a conversation. The grove answers in kind. Fruit for fruit. Hour for hour. Sweetness for a secret. You carry secrets. They ripen ahead of any apple on these boughs." "A toll." "The only shape the truth will keep in my mouth." Rory drew her hand back. Her fist closed. The scar pulled, a kitchen, a broken glass, a year when none of this had a door. She pressed her thumb to it once and walked. Three berries chimed after them, a short run of notes. The branch went still. The third room had bargained the light down to copper-grey. Not night. Dusk the canopy had won off that strange sky. It sat on her skin like warm dust. The hum drew close and found her wrist. Pulse met pulse. The scar ticked with the ground. She stopped and pressed her thumb to the crescent until the match broke and her own heart had its rhythm back. "It's copying me." Nyx thinned to a suggestion. Violet with no skull around it. The whisper came apart, reassembled wrong, then right. "Rhythms are doors. Do not teach it the knock. I have opened worse and paid in years I carry." Isolde lifted a hand. The hum withdrew a room or two, a guest sent back to the kitchen. "The grove tastes new metres. Yours is quick. Honest. The roots are pleased. Walk, and offer no second helping." Rory walked. The tug left her wrist in stages, last of it stubborn in the bone, then gone. Sweat cooled at her hairline. Black hair stuck to her cheek. She pushed it back and counted stones, a handle for her fist. Twenty. Twenty-one. The next stone had split. In the split, a filament of light no thicker than a hair ran forward, pale as moon on a wet kerb, writing an inch ahead of her boots. Nyx gathered at her shoulder. Chill, where a body would have given heat. "For a stitched pocket, that is new. I have slipped Fae hedges since before your city's bridges had names. The ground does not write in light for every visitor." "To us, or about us?" Isolde's answer came from ten paces on. The grass between bore no passage. "Both. Writing is not a welcome. Reading is not a welcome. The grove does both without asking your leave." The filament branched. Left, trees with leaves silver on one face and black on the other, turning with no wind to excuse them. Each turn flashed a scrap of the pool's receipt: jacket, dragon-stitch, the minute that refused to die. Right, a knock of wood on wood, steady as a craft carried on after the worker left the shed. Centre, the pale stones, unmarked, running on into the copper-grey. Rory watched the silver leaves until her eyes ached. She watched the knocking until it paused, aware of the look, and took up its beat again. Her mouth had gone dry. She kept both hands visible and her weight on the centre stone. "We don't split. Nyx, if you go thin, you stay in my print. Isolde. This middle line. Under my foot, now. Does it hold?" "It holds." True, and bright, and short of everything she wanted. Isolde set her weightless step on the next stone. Rory followed. The filament slid to the verge, a courtesy with no hand attached, and ran beside her instead of under her sole. Nyx poured into the space at her heel. Violet down to an ember. The knock kept time on the right. The leaves kept their stolen minute on the left. Pear came back into the air, then iron, then a sweetness with no kitchen in it. Her boot met the next stone. Through the leather came the canopy's click, one note, glass and small. "Twenty-three." She set her weight on the stone after that. The click answered at the same pitch as the leaves overhead, no faster than her foot. Warm dust of the copper light lay across her hands. The filament kept beside her, thin and bright. Nyx stayed in her print. Isolde did not leave one. On the right, wood went on with its work.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx's whisper frayed then [then]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.044
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2511
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2511
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count4
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"whisper"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"traced"
7"stomach"
8"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences210
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences248
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2511
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1850
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park2
Warmth1
Edgware1
Road1
Nyx12
Rory19
Eva1
London1
Cardiff1
Empress1
Isolde8
persons
0"Warmth"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Edgware"
3"Road"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
6"Empress"
globalScore0.986
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences132
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2511
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences248
matches
0"kept that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean34.4
std21.98
cv0.639
sampleLengths
016
155
236
345
415
518
686
72
873
926
107
1117
1230
1356
1467
1519
1630
1769
184
1922
2013
2167
2234
2346
2422
2559
2642
2734
2847
2936
3054
3111
3229
3369
3429
3517
3646
3742
3830
3949
4013
4160
4217
433
4411
4584
465
4737
4861
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs299
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences248
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1866
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"Irregular, hard little bodies"
1"thumbnail-small, silver chain"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.016613076098606645
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences248
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences248
mean10.13
std7.52
cv0.743
sampleLengths
016
114
210
37
48
516
67
75
815
99
1013
114
1212
1316
1415
154
162
171
1811
198
2020
217
2235
235
2411
252
266
278
2829
295
304
316
328
337
345
357
3614
377
3817
396
401
416
4217
434
443
458
4614
4714
484
499
63.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4024390243902439
totalSentences246
uniqueOpeners99
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences183
matches
0"Then less than solid, the"
1"Once, in an alley off"
2"Then the clean bite after"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences183
matches
0"It fell amber, thick as"
1"She lifted her hand"
2"She pocketed it, set her"
3"Its wings left a smear"
4"She looked at the phone"
5"She put the phone away"
6"She walked towards it."
7"Her pendant lay against her"
8"She tapped the stone with"
9"She shook her hand, and"
10"They hung, turned, and slid"
11"Her feet rested on the"
12"She nodded at the uphill"
13"She worked her jaw until"
14"She breathed through her mouth"
15"It held the park path"
16"She left it alone."
17"Her knees cracked, a human"
18"She swept it off."
19"Their chest thinned until the"
ratio0.186
69.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences183
matches
0"Rory set her palm to"
1"The oaks stood in a"
2"Winter grass lay flat beyond"
3"A dog barked twice and"
4"It fell amber, thick as"
5"She lifted her hand"
6"Warmth stayed in the palm."
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"Nyx occupied the space at"
9"A human outline poured from"
10"The whisper of them reached"
11"Rory checked her phone."
12"She pocketed it, set her"
13"Heat shoved the cold out"
14"Pear-skin and crushed mint came"
15"The ground sprang back under"
16"Flowers packed every gap and"
17"A bee worked that one."
18"Its wings left a smear"
19"The oaks drew their gaps"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences183
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Older trees stood in their place, trunks broad as the door of the bar under her flat, branches woven to a roof that let the sky down in coins."
1"She shook her hand, and the drops that left her skin refused the fall."
2"Each turn flashed a scrap of the pool's receipt: jacket, dragon-stitch, the minute that refused to die."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.2586%