Run: 2026-09-23-01M36X9C8Q7QV8RNV1BG72QNR1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.000793
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled across the wet pavement as Rory pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest. Rain ticked against the windows. Silas stood behind the bar polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades, and the maps on the walls looked older than the day they'd been printed. A man sat at the far end of the counter, back to the entrance, a glass of something amber untouched in front of him. Rory shrugged off her jacket, shook the water from her hair, and took the stool two seats from him. "Rough shift?" Silas asked. "Two flats in Bloomsbury, a hotel in Marylebone, and a kid who tried to tip me with a Tesco voucher." She leaned on her forearms. "Just a ginger ale, Si." He poured it. The ice clinked. The man at the end of the bar turned his head—slow, deliberate, the way people move when they're not sure they're seeing what they think they're seeing. "Rory?" She looked up. Evan Marsh sat three feet away. Or someone who wore Evan Marsh's face like a borrowed coat. His hair had gone steel at the temples, cropped close on the sides in a style he'd never have picked at twenty-two. A gold watch caught the low light on his wrist. He'd filled out through the jaw, the neck, the shoulders—thick in a way that spoke of gym routines and protein shakes rather than the lean, restless boy who used to eat kebabs on the Welsh coast at two in the morning. "Jesus," she said. He smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. It never had. "Five years," he said. "Six?" "Four." Rory wrapped both hands around her glass. "Four, then." He took his first sip. His eyes stayed on her the way a man watches a hand of cards he hasn't decided to play. "You look good. Cardiff suits you—or London does. I can't tell." "I live here." "Yeah?" He glanced around the bar—at the black-and-white photographs, at Silas refilling a bowl of peanuts without looking up. "This place?" "Since I came down." "So that was real, then. Eva told me you'd left." He said *Eva* the way you'd say the name of a mutual acquaintance, casual, but his thumb rubbed the base of his glass. "I figured it was talk." "Cardiff was talk?" "Cardiff was a lot of things." He pulled his stool an inch closer. The leather creaked. "You didn't return my messages." Rory's fingers tightened on the ginger ale. The crescent scar on her left wrist pressed white against the glass. "I know," she said. A beat of silence. Silas drifted toward the far end of the bar, busying himself with bottles, giving them the width of the room. The rain thickened against the windows. Evan turned his body fully toward her now. The gold watch slid back on his wrist. "I looked for you. Properly. Not just messages. I went to your mum's house in Pontcanna. Your dad answered the door in his robes—he was coming from court." He laughed, short and without warmth. "He told me you were in London and that I should respect your wishes. His word. *Wishes.*" "My dad's a barrister. He likes precise language." "He likes controlling things." Evan's jaw shifted. He caught himself, reined it in, set the glass down with care. "I'm not here to fight, Rory. I'm here because I saw you and I couldn't—" "Couldn't what?" "Couldn't walk past." Rory took a long drink. The ginger burned slightly at the back of her throat. She set the glass down and turned the stem with her finger, a small clockwise rotation, then counter. "Where are you living now?" she asked. "Battersea. Penthouse flat, canalside. I moved into fintech four years ago—payments infrastructure, boring stuff, but it pays." He said *pays* with a small flourish, the way people do when they've rehearsed the sentence. "I got the watch for the two-year mark. The flat for the three-year." "Good for you, Evan." "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Talk like you're reading a verdict." He leaned in. His voice dropped, not to a whisper but to the register people use when the room is meant to hear the volume and not the words. "I changed. That's the thing I need you to understand. I'm not the same bloke who—" "I know you're not." Rory held his gaze. "You look like a stranger. That's not a compliment or an insult. It's just what I see." Evan sat back. He picked up the glass, put it down again without drinking. The gold caught light. "And you?" he said. "You delivering food?" "Among other things." "Rory. You were Pre-Law. You were top of your cohort—Eva sent me the results once, don't ask why. You were going to be a solicitor. Now you're riding a scooter around Soho." "Six months left on the degree. I walked out in April." She said it flat. Factual. "The rest is as you see it." Something flickered across his face—recognition, maybe, or the shadow of it. He rubbed the back of his neck. "Why?" "Why what?" "Why did you walk out?" Rory looked at the maps on the wall. A coastline she didn't recognise, hand-drawn, centuries old. Ships frozen mid-voyage in faded ink. "Because I couldn't sit in a room for three years writing arguments I didn't believe in," she said. "Because every time I opened a case file I heard my dad's voice telling me what the right answer was before I'd read the question. Because London—" She stopped. Started again. "Because London was supposed to be the part where I figured out who I was without someone else deciding for me." "And you figured it out?" "I figured out that the delivery business pays weekly and the landlord upstairs doesn't care what my degree is." Evan watched her. The gym-built stillness of him settled into something less rehearsed. "I hurt you," he said. "You did." "I know." "That's new." She angled her stool toward him a few degrees. "You never said it before. Not once, not in the whole year and a half. You'd apologise for the plate. The mug. You'd apologise for raising your voice while you were still raising it. But you never said those three words." His throat worked. He swallowed. "I've had time," he said. "Time's not the same as understanding." "No." He picked up his drink and drained half of it in one go. "But it's a start." Silas appeared at the end of the bar, refilled Rory's ginger ale without being asked, and moved away again. His limp barely registered on the worn floorboards. The signet ring on his right hand caught the neon from outside. Evan watched Silas go. "You close with the owner?" "He's the reason I have a roof over my head. The flat upstairs is his." "The barman who looks like he's killed a man?" "Retired," Rory said. "That's what they all say." Evan shook his head, a small motion, almost amused. He turned the glass in his hands, mirroring the motion she'd been making minutes ago. "So what now? I walk out that door and we go another four years?" "What do you want from me, Evan?" "I want—" He stopped. Started. His hand moved on the bar, stopped. "I want to buy you dinner. Not here. Somewhere with a menu that doesn't have a smiley face on it. I want to sit across from you for an hour and have you tell me all the things you've been doing that I don't know about, and I'll tell you mine, and neither of us will pretend we're still twenty-two and stupid about each other." Rory turned her glass. Clockwise. "I don't know if I can do that." "I'm not asking you to forgive me." "Then what are you asking?" "I'm asking you to let me try." He set his palm flat on the bar. The gold watch pressed into the wood. "That's all. One hour." She looked at his hand. At the tendons she used to trace in a shared bed in a terraced house in Roath, back when his hands shook after he'd been drinking and he'd cry in the morning and say he didn't remember. Back when she'd believed him. "The Crescent," she said. "Tomorrow. Seven." His shoulders dropped a fraction. "Seven," he said. He reached for his wallet—a slim black thing, expensive—and laid a note on the bar that covered his drink and more. He stood. The stool scraped. He put one hand on the bar and looked down at her, and for a moment the geometry of his face rearranged into something that belonged to the boy on the coast. "I'm glad I walked in here," he said. Rory didn't answer. She watched him cross the bar, push through the door, and step into the rain, where the green neon caught the top of his head before the dark took him. Silas appeared beside her, towel over his shoulder. "You didn't have to say yes." "I know." He picked up Evan's glass, held it to the light, put it on the rack. "Seven o'clock," he said. "You want me to close early?" "No." Rory drank. The ginger had gone flat. "I'll be fine."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:34:23.39Z" 9/23/2026, 10:34:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.03
effectiveRatio0.024
96.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1557
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1557
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1547
ratio0.002
matches
0"Eva"
1"Wishes."
2"pays"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount893
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Raven1
Nest1
Marsh2
Evan9
Welsh1
Silas7
Factual1
Started2
Roath1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Marsh"
1"Welsh"
2"Roath"
globalScore0.828
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside her, towel over his shoulder"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.646
wordCount1547
matches
0"not to a whisper but to the register people use"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean18.2
std19.85
cv1.091
sampleLengths
078
119
24
330
46
527
61
73
890
93
1010
115
128
1337
143
1521
164
1738
183
1921
2019
214
2230
2316
2451
258
2634
272
283
2933
307
3146
324
333
342
3551
3625
3718
387
393
4032
4123
4218
431
442
455
4622
4770
485
4919
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"been printed"
1"is meant"
2"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
48.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences152
ratio0.033
matches
0"The man at the end of the bar turned his head—slow, deliberate, the way people move when they're not sure they're seeing what they think they're seeing."
1"He'd filled out through the jaw, the neck, the shoulders—thick in a way that spoke of gym routines and protein shakes rather than the lean, restless boy who used to eat kebabs on the Welsh coast at two in the morning."
2"\"Yeah?\" He glanced around the bar—at the black-and-white photographs, at Silas refilling a bowl of peanuts without looking up."
3"Something flickered across his face—recognition, maybe, or the shadow of it."
4"He reached for his wallet—a slim black thing, expensive—and laid a note on the bar that covered his drink and more."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016574585635359115
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033149171270718232
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean10.18
std10.04
cv0.986
sampleLengths
019
15
230
324
419
54
625
75
83
93
1027
111
123
136
1411
1522
1610
1741
183
192
205
213
224
231
248
257
2619
2711
283
2919
302
314
3233
335
343
3513
363
375
387
3912
404
414
4220
436
448
458
4634
4717
488
497
50.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34868421052631576
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences77
matches
0"She leaned on her forearms"
1"He poured it."
2"She looked up."
3"His hair had gone steel"
4"He'd filled out through the"
5"It didn't reach his eyes."
6"It never had."
7"He took his first sip"
8"His eyes stayed on her"
9"He glanced around the bar—at"
10"He said *Eva* the way"
11"He pulled his stool an"
12"He laughed, short and without"
13"He caught himself, reined it"
14"She set the glass down"
15"He said *pays* with a"
16"He leaned in"
17"His voice dropped, not to"
18"He picked up the glass,"
19"She said it flat"
ratio0.442
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Rain ticked against the windows."
2"Silas stood behind the bar"
3"A man sat at the"
4"Rory shrugged off her jacket,"
5"She leaned on her forearms"
6"He poured it."
7"The ice clinked."
8"The man at the end"
9"She looked up."
10"Evan Marsh sat three feet"
11"His hair had gone steel"
12"A gold watch caught the"
13"He'd filled out through the"
14"It didn't reach his eyes."
15"It never had."
16"Rory wrapped both hands around"
17"He took his first sip"
18"His eyes stayed on her"
19"He glanced around the bar—at"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades, and the maps on the walls looked older than the day they'd been printed."
1"Or someone who wore Evan Marsh's face like a borrowed coat."
2"He'd filled out through the jaw, the neck, the shoulders—thick in a way that spoke of gym routines and protein shakes rather than the lean, restless boy who use…"
3"He turned the glass in his hands, mirroring the motion she'd been making minutes ago."
4"He reached for his wallet—a slim black thing, expensive—and laid a note on the bar that covered his drink and more."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Evan shook, a small motion, almost amused"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.024
80.4882%