Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HB1ATKY55MF99ZKZR92ZR

Run Details

Duration:
47.5s
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$0.027174
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened the door as far as the chain allowed. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the landing’s bare bulb, a charcoal suit darkened at one shoulder by rain. He held his ivory-handled cane against his leg. A drop slid from his platinum hair onto the collar he had neglected to turn up. For three weeks, she had pictured what she would say if she saw him again. None of it survived the sight of him on Eva’s landing. “You found me.” “I knew where you were.” “That wasn’t what I meant.” From inside the flat, Ptolemy pushed his striped face into the gap between Aurora’s ankle and the door. Lucien looked down. The cat withdrew with a noise of deep offence. “Eva’s away,” Aurora told him. “I came to see you.” The curry house below sent heat and the smell of toasted cumin up the stairwell. Behind Lucien, the narrow stairs disappeared into shadow. Aurora kept one hand on the door and the other against the frame, her left wrist turned inward. The little crescent scar caught against a splinter in the paint. “You could have called.” “You blocked my number.” “You could have knocked before eleven.” “Would you have opened it?” She looked at the wet shoulder of his jacket. “You’ve had an answer.” Lucien rested both hands on the cane’s handle. His amber eye held hers; the black one caught the landing bulb without giving it back. She remembered those eyes across a restaurant table, the amber one warm over the rim of his glass. She remembered them in the alley behind Silas’s bar, when he had told her to leave and hadn’t followed. A door opened on the floor below. Someone called an apology into the stairwell, followed by the clatter of keys and footsteps. Aurora shut the door, slipped the chain free, and opened it again. “Come in before Mrs Patel decides you’re here to collect a debt.” Lucien stepped across the threshold. He stopped on the strip of bare floor between Eva’s books and the tower of research notes that leaned beside the coat rack. Aurora shut the door and turned each deadbolt. The third caught halfway; she lifted the handle until it slid home. “I can leave,” he told her. “You’re already wet on the rug.” He looked down, then moved off it. That, more than anything, made her want to shut him out. Lucien had once walked into her flat above Silas’s bar as though he belonged there, had set his cane beside her chipped kitchen table and known which cupboard held the mugs. Now he stood with rain dripping from his sleeve, careful not to touch Eva’s books. “Take your jacket off.” “It’s fine.” “Eva will charge me for the water damage.” He unbuttoned the jacket and eased it off. A narrow split showed in his white shirt beneath his right arm, the fabric stained rust-brown. Aurora’s hand closed around the coat hook. “Whose blood?” “Mine.” “How much?” “Less than it looks.” “That answer hasn’t improved since the last time you used it.” She took the jacket from him before he could refuse and hung it over the bath door. When she came back, he had stayed where she left him. Ptolemy sat on Eva’s desk, tail wound around a stack of notebooks, watching the cane. Aurora pulled a tea towel from the kitchen drawer and held it out. Lucien took it, his fingers brushing hers. Cold skin. She withdrew her hand. “What happened?” “A man took objection to a conversation.” “Did the conversation involve that blade in your cane?” “Not until he brought a knife.” Lucien pressed the towel against his side. Aurora knew the shape of his answers. He gave her enough to stop one question and leave three more waiting. Three weeks ago, she might have tugged the towel away and inspected the cut herself. Tonight she stayed by the kitchen counter. “What do you want, Lucien?” He glanced at the books spread across Eva’s table. Maps of East London lay beneath a cracked green mug. A page of Eva’s notes hung off the edge, covered in tight handwriting and red circles. “I came to apologise.” Aurora let out a breath that scraped her throat. “For which part?” “For telling you I regretted taking you to Avaros.” “You did regret it.” “I regretted that you were hurt there.” “You made that sound like the same thing.” “I know.” Below them, a cook struck a pan against the stove. The metal rang up through the floorboards. Ptolemy hopped down from the desk and crossed the room with an air of grave purpose, then settled on the chair furthest from Lucien. Aurora picked up Eva’s mug and moved it away from the notes. “You said I’d been a mistake. You chose the words. I heard them.” “I thought you had.” “That’s a remarkable start to an apology.” Lucien lowered the tea towel. Blood had soaked through one corner. “The man in the alley worked for my father.” Aurora’s fingers tightened on the mug handle. “You knew he was there.” “I recognised him after you went inside.” “And you sent me upstairs.” “Yes.” “You could have told me.” “I could have.” She set the mug down hard enough to make the spoons inside rattle. “That’s what you came here for? To give me another reason you couldn’t bear to look at me?” Lucien crossed no further into the room. “I looked at you through the bar window until Silas closed the shutters.” The words landed where she had kept her anger. Aurora turned toward the sink, where Eva had left a plate with a crust of toast on it. She had spent that night at her own window, watching the pavement for a charcoal coat. The next morning, Lucien’s number had gone unanswered. By the third day, she had blocked it before she could call again. “You watched me go upstairs.” “I watched to make sure no one followed.” “You should have come up.” “Yes.” His plain answer left her with nowhere to put the argument she had rehearsed. She gripped the edge of the sink. Rain tapped at the glass above it. Lucien shifted his weight. His face pinched before he smoothed it out. Aurora turned. “Sit down.” “Rory—” “Sit. You’re bleeding on Eva’s floor.” He took the chair beside the table. Ptolemy rose from the other one and leapt to the windowsill. Aurora found Eva’s first-aid box beneath a mound of photocopies, exactly where Eva had told her it would be. She carried it over and set it beside Lucien. “Lift your shirt.” “You don’t have to do this.” “I’m aware.” He unfastened the bottom two buttons. The cut ran along his ribs, shallow at one end and deeper toward his back. Aurora peeled the towel away and saw that the blood had begun to clot. She tore open a packet of gauze with her teeth. “He got close.” “He knew the blade was in the cane.” “That must have ruined your surprise.” “It did spoil the evening.” She pressed gauze to the wound. Lucien drew a breath between his teeth but kept still. Up close, she could smell rain in his hair beneath the sharp scent of his soap. The familiarity made her hands less steady than the blood did. “Why come here hurt?” she asked. “You have people for this.” “Your block of flats has had a visitor for two nights.” Aurora looked up. “What visitor?” “A man near the entrance to Silas’s bar. Brown coat. Burn across his neck.” “I saw him yesterday.” She pressed fresh gauze over the cut. “He asked for directions to the station.” “He knows where the station is.” “Is he one of your father’s?” “No. He works for the man I met tonight.” She lifted her hand from his side. “You could have led him here.” “I checked the street before I came up. I didn’t see him.” “You didn’t see the man who cut you until he had a knife out?” “I saw him.” Lucien held her gaze. “I stayed to find out why he had been watching your building. He told me your name.” Aurora folded the bloodied gauze into her palm. “You could have opened with that.” “I should have.” “Yes, you should have.” She reached for antiseptic. “What does he want?” “He believes you brought something back from Avaros.” “I brought a bruised knee and a coat that smelled of smoke. You saw me empty the pockets.” “I told him.” “And he believed you?” “He cut me.” She poured antiseptic onto a pad. “This will sting.” “It already does.” She cleaned the cut. Lucien’s hand closed around the edge of the table. She watched his knuckles pale and eased the pad across the deepest part. Her wrist brushed his skin; the little scar grazed the open edge of his shirt. His gaze fell to it. “You still hide that when you’re angry.” “I’m holding a bandage.” “You hid it in the alley.” Aurora reached for tape. “I was angry in the alley.” “I know.” “No, you don’t.” She drew a length of tape from the roll and snapped it against the dispenser. “I’d told you about Evan. You knew what it cost me to stay while someone decided which pieces of the truth I was allowed to hear. Then you told me to go upstairs, called me a mistake, and expected me to trust that you had a good reason.” Lucien released the table. “I didn’t expect you to trust me after that.” “Then why did you do it?” “Because I saw my father’s man behind you, and I wanted him to hear that you meant nothing to me.” “He’d been listening?” “He came out of the alley when you turned towards the door.” Aurora remembered the scrape of a shoe behind a stack of empty kegs. She had taken it for one of Silas’s deliveries. “You could have warned me,” she told him. “With him close enough to hear?” “Inside. Afterwards.” “I intended to.” “You didn’t.” “He followed me when I left the bar. By the time I’d lost him, you wouldn’t answer.” “I waited all night.” She smoothed the clean dressing over his ribs. “I waited the next morning too.” Lucien looked at her. For once, he gave her no polished answer. “I’m sorry,” he told her. Aurora pressed the last strip of tape into place. “I know.” That surprised him. She saw it in the slight lift of his brows. “I believe you regret it,” she added. “I haven’t decided what to do with that.” “You don’t need to decide tonight.” “No. Tonight I need you to tell me everything about the man outside my building.” She closed the first-aid box and stood. Lucien buttoned his shirt, stopping short of the dressing. When she reached for the bloodied gauze, he caught her hand. His fingers circled her wrist without covering the scar. “Rory. I didn’t regret taking you with me.” She looked at his hand, then at his face. “You said you’d made a mistake.” “I meant leaving you alone there. I meant making you ask me to stay when I already wanted to.” The flat seemed to shrink around the table. Aurora remembered the bridge in Avaros, its stone warm beneath her palms, and Lucien beside her while sparks from the market fires rose into a violet sky. She had asked him to stay until sunrise. He had. His grip loosened. She could have pulled away. Instead, she turned her hand and felt his thumb come to rest against her palm. A key rattled in the front door. Ptolemy sprang from the windowsill as the first deadbolt shook. “Rory?” Eva called through the wood. “Why are all three on?” Aurora drew her hand back and looked at Lucien’s stained shirt. “We’ve got company.” “So have I,” Eva called. “Open up. The bloke behind me followed me from the corner.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences119
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.218
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1994
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1994
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"grave"
count1
2
word"remarkable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"grave"
2"remarkable"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences232
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1235
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva12
Ptolemy5
Aurora23
Lucien22
Silas3
East1
London1
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Avaros"
globalScore0.569
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1994
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences232
matches
0"spent that night"
1"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean14.35
std14.82
cv1.033
sampleLengths
010
141
226
33
45
55
630
75
85
952
104
114
126
135
1413
1561
1634
1712
1848
196
206
2164
224
232
248
2531
262
271
282
294
3011
3143
3226
332
347
359
366
3749
385
3935
404
4112
429
434
447
458
462
4741
4825
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences232
ratio0.013
matches
0"His amber eye held hers; the black one caught the landing bulb without giving it back."
1"The third caught halfway; she lifted the handle until it slid home."
2"Her wrist brushed his skin; the little scar grazed the open edge of his shirt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.01775625504439064
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008071025020177562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences232
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences232
mean8.59
std5.74
cv0.667
sampleLengths
010
117
28
316
415
511
63
75
85
918
103
119
125
135
1415
158
1618
1711
184
194
206
215
229
234
248
2516
2618
2719
287
2915
3012
3112
325
3323
348
3512
366
376
387
3911
4031
4115
424
432
448
458
4616
477
482
491
44.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences232
uniqueOpeners58
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Instead, she turned her hand"
ratio0.008
76.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences120
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"She looked at the wet"
2"His amber eye held hers;"
3"She remembered those eyes across"
4"She remembered them in the"
5"He stopped on the strip"
6"he told her"
7"He looked down, then moved"
8"He unbuttoned the jacket and"
9"She took the jacket from"
10"She withdrew her hand."
11"He gave her enough to"
12"He glanced at the books"
13"She set the mug down"
14"She had spent that night"
15"His plain answer left her"
16"She gripped the edge of"
17"His face pinched before he"
18"He took the chair beside"
19"She carried it over and"
ratio0.358
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences120
matches
0"Aurora opened the door as"
1"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
2"He held his ivory-handled cane"
3"A drop slid from his"
4"None of it survived the"
5"Lucien looked down."
6"The cat withdrew with a"
7"Aurora told him"
8"The curry house below sent"
9"Aurora kept one hand on"
10"The little crescent scar caught"
11"She looked at the wet"
12"Lucien rested both hands on"
13"His amber eye held hers;"
14"She remembered those eyes across"
15"She remembered them in the"
16"A door opened on the"
17"Someone called an apology into"
18"Aurora shut the door, slipped"
19"Lucien stepped across the threshold."
ratio0.9
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now he stood with rain"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien had once walked into her flat above Silas’s bar as though he belonged there, had set his cane beside her chipped kitchen table and known which cupboard h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences119
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.151
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.034
87.5930%