Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HECNADDD50GM9RT1C31TG

Run Details

Duration:
51.3s
Cost:
$0.030034
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora had come downstairs for a clean glass and found Silas standing with both hands flat on the bar, watching a woman in a yellow raincoat study the photographs on the wall. The Raven’s Nest had emptied after the theatre crowd moved on. Someone had left a scarf hooked over the back of a chair, and the green neon sign above the door washed the windows with a colour that made the street look submerged. Aurora set the glass beside the sink. Silas had not noticed her. He wore his reading glasses on a cord around his neck, and his silver signet ring rested against a dark patch of beer on the counter. The woman took off her coat. Beneath it she wore a grey suit with one cuff folded back, as though she had washed her hands somewhere and forgotten to put herself in order again. Her hair was cropped close to her head. She moved from photograph to photograph, stopped beneath a picture of a narrow street crowded with tram cables, then turned. “Your knee,” she spoke to Silas. “You still lead with the right.” Aurora saw his hand lift from the bar. “Nora.” “Is that welcome or a diagnosis?” Silas came around the end of the counter. His left foot caught for a fraction of a step. Nora watched it and looked away before he reached her. He offered his hand; she caught his forearm instead, and for a moment they stood close enough to embrace without doing it. “I was looking for a drink,” Nora told him. “The sign did the work.” “You never liked green.” “I’ve learned to tolerate it.” Aurora picked up the glass she had come for. “Rory.” Silas kept his eyes on the woman. “This is Nora Vale. Nora, Aurora Carter. She lives upstairs.” Nora gave Aurora a quick, level glance. “Do you work here?” “Only when he can’t reach the top shelf.” “I can reach the top shelf,” Silas muttered. “He asks me to, then criticises how I put things back.” Aurora held up her glass. “I won’t interrupt.” “You weren’t interrupting,” Silas replied. Nora pulled out a stool. “Stay. I haven’t seen him in fourteen years. You may need to confirm which of us remembers the conversation.” Aurora looked at Silas. He took a bottle of whisky down from the shelf and set three glasses on the bar. She stayed. Nora sat without removing her suit jacket. From the other side of the counter, Aurora could see a fine white seam near Nora’s temple and a pale rectangle on her ring finger. Neither stood out until Nora tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, and then Aurora could not help seeing both. “Fourteen years,” Silas said as he poured. “Thirteen and eight months.” Nora accepted a glass. “You sent me a card when I got married.” “You sent it back.” “I sent you a photograph. You never wrote again.” Silas set the bottle down. The sound drew Nora’s attention to his right hand. “You’ve kept the ring.” “My father’s ring.” “I know whose it was.” Aurora took her drink and leaned against the counter near the till. Nora raised her glass but did not drink. She looked past Silas at the shelves, the old maps with their edges curling inside mismatched frames, the row of photographs that gave customers something to point at while they waited for a friend. “This is yours?” she asked. “Has been for eleven years.” “You used to talk about a place with no clocks.” “There’s one over the door.” “I saw. It’s seven minutes slow.” “I prefer it that way.” “You prefer being able to tell people the time is wrong.” Silas smiled into his glass. Nora watched him as if she had heard that answer from a much younger mouth. Then she drank and winced. “Still punishing people with cheap whisky.” “That one isn’t cheap.” “Then you’ve lost your touch.” A bus passed outside, painting a brief wash of light over the ceiling. Aurora had seen Silas refuse drinks to men twice his size and calm a shouting couple without raising his voice. She had never seen him sit opposite someone with his shoulders drawn tight. He dragged a stool close to Nora’s and lowered himself onto it, leaving his left leg stretched out. “What brought you to Soho?” “The train came into Euston. I had an hour before meeting my sister.” “You have a sister?” “I did when you knew me.” “You never spoke about her.” Nora examined him over the rim of her glass. “No.” Silas rubbed his thumb across the signet ring. “How is she?” “She lives in Finchley. She has twins who turn twelve next month. I’m bringing them a box of pencils each, because their mother says they’ll lose anything that costs more than six pounds.” “And you?” “I bought the pencils.” “I meant—” “I know.” She put her glass down and turned towards the wall again. Aurora followed her gaze to the photograph beneath the tram cables. It showed three people outside a café. One held up a paper bag to cover his face. Another stood with her back to the camera, arms folded against the cold. The third was Silas, younger, with dark auburn hair and a grin Aurora had never seen on him in life. “That’s you,” Nora spoke softly. “Prague. I had it printed years ago.” “The woman with her back turned is me.” Aurora glanced at her. Nora had folded her arms in the same way, one hand holding the opposite elbow. “Who took it?” “A waiter.” Silas shifted on the stool. “He charged us for the film.” “He charged you. I told you to leave it.” “You wanted the picture.” “I wanted us to get inside. It was freezing.” “We did get inside.” “After you made the poor man take six more.” Silas looked at the photograph. “He left his thumb over five of them.” Nora’s laugh broke off before it filled the room. She brought her glass to her mouth, found it empty, and set it down. Aurora fetched the bottle. “Another?” “Not yet, thank you.” Silas held his glass out. Aurora poured him a little more. Nora noticed the easy movement between them: the way Aurora waited for Silas to steady the glass, the way he moved the bottle cap towards her before she asked. Her eyes travelled to Aurora’s left wrist, where the cuff of her jumper had slipped above a small crescent-shaped scar. “Do you work in the bar?” “I deliver food for a place round the corner. Silas lets me live upstairs.” “She pays rent,” Silas added. Nora nodded. “You’ve made a home of it.” Aurora looked at the damp rings on the bar, at the stack of clean glasses Silas had been too busy to put away. “He’s kept it standing.” “It has a roof,” Silas answered. “Some nights that’s all I can promise.” Nora turned the empty glass between her fingertips. “You had a flat with a roof in Prague.” “The roof leaked over the cooker.” “We moved the cooker.” “You moved it. I held the bucket.” “And told me you knew a man who could mend it.” “I did know him.” “He came round six months later to ask for money.” Silas laughed, then stopped when Nora lowered her eyes. Aurora put the whisky away. The bottle slid into its place between two taller ones, its label worn pale where Silas gripped it each night. Nora broke the silence. “I went to see Magda before I came here.” Silas’s hand closed around his glass. “How is she?” “She died in March.” Aurora turned towards the sink, where a single spoon lay in a saucer. She rinsed it though it was already clean. “I’m sorry,” Silas replied. “Her son told me. He thought you knew.” “I didn’t.” “She kept a box of photographs. He let me have a look.” Nora pointed at the picture on the wall. “There’s another from that day. You’re carrying all three coffees, and I’ve got the paper bag over my face.” “I remember.” “I didn’t. Not until I saw it.” The tap dripped against the spoon. Aurora shut it with the heel of her hand. Behind her, Silas shifted his left leg. “I could have gone to see her,” he said. “Yes.” “I thought she wouldn’t want—” “She asked about you.” He stared at the bar. Nora ran her thumb along a scratch in the wood, the one Aurora had caught her cleaning cloth on a hundred times. “I told her you owned a pub,” Nora continued. “She asked whether you’d finally learned to cook anything besides eggs.” “I can make soup.” “She would have liked to hear that.” Silas rose. His knee resisted him. He took his glass behind the counter and stood facing the shelves, his back to Nora, while he drank. When he turned, he rested both palms on the counter again. “You could have called me.” “I know.” “Did you have my number?” “Magda did.” “And before March?” Nora pulled her jacket cuff down over her wrist. “I had your number.” Aurora lifted the clean spoon from the saucer and set it on the drying mat. No one had asked her to leave. Nora had asked her to stay, though the invitation had come before Magda, before the unanswered calls neither of them had made. Aurora took her glass towards the stairs. “I’ll be upstairs.” Nora looked up. “I’m sorry, Aurora. I asked you to stay and then forgot you were here.” “That’s all right.” “It isn’t, but thank you.” Silas gave Aurora a small nod. She crossed towards the narrow staircase at the back of the bar. Halfway there, Nora spoke again. “You told Magda I left because you got hurt.” Aurora stopped beside the scarf on the chair. Silas did not answer. “She wrote it on the back of one of the photographs,” Nora went on. “She wrote, ‘Nora left after Silas hurt his leg.’ I suppose she wanted to remember when she took it.” “I told her when you left. Nothing else.” “She thought the two belonged together.” “They did.” Nora got off the stool. “Your leg wasn’t why I left.” “I know.” “No. You knew I’d told you that. It’s different.” Silas drew the damp cloth from beneath the counter. He held it in his hand without wiping anything. “I came to the hospital every day,” Nora told him. “Your sister brought oranges. Magda brought the papers. You sent both of them in.” “I sent you in.” “Once. You spent ten minutes asking about a key you couldn’t find.” “There were people waiting on it.” “There always were.” Nora reached for her coat and pulled it over one arm. “I’d come to tell you I’d found a flat. Two rooms, near the river. I sat there holding the address in my pocket while you told me which drawer the key belonged in.” Silas’s eyes lifted to hers. “I remember the flat.” “You never saw it.” “I remember you telling me.” “I had to tell you three times.” Aurora’s foot rested on the first stair. Through the front window, she saw a couple pause beneath the green sign. They read the chalkboard menu, spoke to each other, and walked on. Silas laid the cloth beside the sink. “I thought you would ask me to come when I got out.” “I did. You told me the stairs would be trouble.” “They would have been.” “We could have carried a chair up together.” “You had no room for a chair.” Nora looked at him with her coat hanging from one shoulder. “There it is.” “What?” “You’re still arguing about the furniture.” Silas opened his mouth, then closed it. He came out from behind the bar. Nora stayed where she was. “I should have come,” he said. “You should have told me you didn’t want to.” “I did.” “Not to me.” She pulled her other arm into the coat. “You told Magda I’d gone. You told your sister we’d made the sensible choice. Every time I came back to the hospital, you were out of bed with that crutch, asking someone what you’d missed while you were there.” “I couldn’t sit in that room.” “I didn’t ask you to.” Silas gripped the back of an empty stool. He looked down at his hand and let go. “The address. Was it on blue paper?” “Yes.” “You left it on my tray.” “I gave it to you.” “You did.” He touched his trouser pocket, as though the folded paper might still be there. “I kept it for months.” Nora smoothed her coat collar. She glanced at the photograph once more, at the woman turning her face away from the camera. “My sister will be waiting,” she told him. Silas stepped aside so she could reach the door. Nora picked up the scarf from the chair, considered it, and held it towards Aurora. “Is this yours?” “No. Someone left it after the quiz.” Nora laid it back across the chair, with both ends hanging even. Then she stopped, one hand still on the wool, and looked at Silas. “Magda made him give me the other photograph,” she said. “It’s in my bag if you want to see it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nora spoke softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences149
tagDensity0.168
leniency0.336
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.013
97.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2219
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2219
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"charged"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences129
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences253
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions43
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Halfway there, Nora spoke again."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions107
wordCount1259
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.02
worstName"Nora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas37
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora29
Nora38
Magda1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Aurora"
4"Nora"
5"Magda"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2219
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences253
matches
0"heard that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs164
mean13.53
std14.74
cv1.089
sampleLengths
032
181
262
312
48
51
66
750
814
94
105
119
1218
1311
148
158
1619
175
1824
1923
2053
217
2217
234
249
2514
264
273
285
2954
305
315
3210
335
346
355
3611
3725
386
394
405
4164
425
4313
444
456
465
4710
4811
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences253
ratio0.004
matches
0"He offered his hand; she caught his forearm instead, and for a moment they stood close enough to embrace without doing it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1260
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025396825396825397
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007936507936507937
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences253
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences253
mean8.77
std6.54
cv0.745
sampleLengths
032
111
232
37
45
526
66
728
88
920
106
116
128
131
146
158
1610
1710
1822
199
205
214
225
239
248
2510
267
274
288
298
3016
313
325
335
3419
354
3617
372
387
3925
4021
417
428
439
444
459
465
479
484
493
45.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.20553359683794467
totalSentences253
uniqueOpeners52
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then she drank and winced."
1"Then she stopped, one hand"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences116
matches
0"He wore his reading glasses"
1"Her hair was cropped close"
2"She moved from photograph to"
3"she spoke to Silas"
4"His left foot caught for"
5"He offered his hand; she"
6"He took a bottle of"
7"She looked past Silas at"
8"She had never seen him"
9"He dragged a stool close"
10"She put her glass down"
11"It showed three people outside"
12"She brought her glass to"
13"Her eyes travelled to Aurora’s"
14"She rinsed it though it"
15"He stared at the bar."
16"His knee resisted him."
17"He took his glass behind"
18"She crossed towards the narrow"
19"He held it in his"
ratio0.233
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences116
matches
0"Aurora had come downstairs for"
1"The Raven’s Nest had emptied"
2"Someone had left a scarf"
3"Aurora set the glass beside"
4"Silas had not noticed her."
5"He wore his reading glasses"
6"The woman took off her"
7"Her hair was cropped close"
8"She moved from photograph to"
9"she spoke to Silas"
10"Aurora saw his hand lift"
11"Silas came around the end"
12"His left foot caught for"
13"Nora watched it and looked"
14"He offered his hand; she"
15"Nora told him"
16"Aurora picked up the glass"
17"Silas kept his eyes on"
18"Nora gave Aurora a quick,"
19"Aurora held up her glass"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Someone had left a scarf hooked over the back of a chair, and the green neon sign above the door washed the windows with a colour that made the street look subm…"
1"Beneath it she wore a grey suit with one cuff folded back, as though she had washed her hands somewhere and forgotten to put herself in order again."
2"She looked past Silas at the shelves, the old maps with their edges curling inside mismatched frames, the row of photographs that gave customers something to po…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He touched, as though the folded paper might still be there"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she spoke (speak)"
1"Silas muttered (mutter)"
2"Nora spoke softly (speak)"
3"Silas added (add)"
4"Nora continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences149
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.215
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.067
86.1790%