Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HF4J0E4QJKTG6W06EQNTC

Run Details

Duration:
46.0s
Cost:
$0.026753
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first oak stone stood taller than Aurora and wore a skin of bark that had turned to rock. Its roots gripped the ground on either side of a narrow path, leaving a gap wide enough for one person at a time. “Richmond Park doesn’t have a gate here,” Rory said. Nyx stopped beside her. The living shadow had drawn itself into a human shape, though the leaves behind it showed through the edges of its shoulders. Its violet eyes fixed on the gap. “It does today.” A robin perched on the stone. Rory took a step towards it, and the bird opened its beak. Instead of a call, a small silver bell rang from somewhere beneath the earth. The sound travelled up through the soles of her boots. She looked back. The path they had followed lay between winter-bare brambles and wet grass. A cyclist crossed a distant stretch of the park, bent over his handlebars. He passed behind a tree and did not come out the other side. “Did you see that?” “I heard the bell.” Nyx touched the stone. Their fingers sank into the bark-grain, then met resistance. “I cannot pass through it.” “That’s new.” “Not for the stone.” Rory slipped through the gap first. The Heartstone pressed against her chest through her jumper, warm as a mug fresh from someone’s hands. She caught the silver chain and drew the deep crimson gem into view. Its inner glow beat once. On the other side, grass brushed her ankles. Wildflowers crowded the path in thick patches: blue petals shaped like tiny hands, white cups with gold at their throats, red blossoms whose stems curved towards her as she passed. It was January. Behind her, the brambles held last night’s rain; ahead, the flowers carried the smell of sun-baked earth. Nyx emerged from the gap and turned. “Well?” Rory asked. “The path is gone.” She spun. The two oak stones still stood there, but between them grew a dense wall of fern. Through its fronds she saw no winter grass, no cyclist, no open sky. A droplet fell from one fern and struck the back of her hand. It tasted of salt when she touched it to her tongue. “You could’ve mentioned that before we came in.” “I had never been here.” The bell rang again, farther away. Rory scanned the clearing. The stones formed a loose circle around her, some upright, others leaning, their surfaces furred with moss. Beyond them stretched a grove of trees unlike any she knew. One trunk twisted upwards in three pale strands, woven together without touching. Another had leaves as thin as green glass. Light slipped through them and broke into shapes on the ground, each bright patch edged in violet. “Isolde?” Rory called. Her voice came back from the trees in fragments. The last piece sounded like a question in a language she did not know. Nyx raised a hand. Rory fell silent. From somewhere within the grove came a scrape, a pause, then another scrape. The sound followed the irregular rhythm of something heavy dragging one foot. Rory reached beneath her coat and found the hilt of the Fae blade. Cold bit into her palm. “Don’t draw it,” Nyx murmured. “Are we meeting someone?” “The trees are listening.” Rory kept her fingers around the hilt but left the slender dagger sheathed. The scraping stopped. Leaves high above them trembled, though the air against her face remained still. A narrow stream divided the clearing. Rory had missed it on first glance because its surface reflected neither trees nor sky. Within the water, tiny lights moved against a field of black. Some clustered and parted like fish. One flashed near the bank, and she crouched to look. A street crossed beneath the surface. She saw a row of terraced houses, their windows lit against dusk, and a bus easing around a corner. Water ran over the image without disturbing it. “That’s Cardiff.” Nyx stood behind her. “Which street?” “Near my parents’ house.” Rory leaned closer. A woman stepped off the bus with a canvas bag tucked beneath one arm. Rory knew the set of her shoulders before she saw her face. “Mum?” The figure looked up. Rory’s hand shot towards the water. Nyx caught her wrist before her fingers broke the surface. Their grip felt solid and cold. “Look at the bus,” they whispered. Rory did. It had no driver. The woman on the pavement raised one arm, though her face remained fixed on the bus. A second woman emerged from its open doors carrying the same canvas bag. The first one vanished. Rory pulled back. “What was that?” Nyx released her wrist. “I don’t know.” The stream kept moving. The houses folded out of sight beneath a patch of black water, and the lights returned. On the far bank, a bridge of roots arched across the current. Each root bore small copper scales that clicked together as the wood shifted. Rory stood. “We go over?” A pale moth settled on the nearest root. Its wings opened to reveal two lavender circles. It rose, crossed the bridge and disappeared among the trees. “Seems like an invitation.” Rory stepped onto the roots. The copper scales rattled under her boots. Halfway across, the bridge dipped. The Heartstone grew hot enough to sting. Rory caught the chain and lifted the pendant clear of her skin. Nyx stopped at her shoulder. “Something’s close.” The lights in the stream gathered beneath them. Between their flickers, a thin line opened in the water, amber on one side and black on the other. Heat rose from it with the smell of roasted fruit and browned butter. Rory gripped the railing of roots. For a moment she saw rows of vines beneath an amber sky and a long table crowded with dishes. A hand reached across the table for a silver platter. The water closed before she saw whose hand it was. “The pendant reacted,” she said. “I felt the tear.” Rory studied the stream. Its surface showed only moving lights now, but the scent of fruit lingered. “A way into Hel?” “A small one. I would not test where it led.” The Heartstone cooled as she reached the far bank. Behind them, the bridge gave a last copper shiver. The path narrowed beneath branches heavy with round, translucent fruit. Each held a dark seed at its centre. When Rory passed under the first branch, she heard a child laughing from inside one of them. She stopped. A fruit beside it gave a low, tired sigh. “No,” she told herself, and walked on. Nyx followed with their head tilted towards the branches. “They keep sounds.” “Whose?” A fruit overhead rang with the bell they had heard at the gate. Another gave back Rory’s voice: “Isolde?” The word stretched and thinned until it became the scrape they had heard in the clearing. Nyx looked up sharply. “Were those steps?” Rory listened. The scraping passed from fruit to fruit farther along the branch, then faded. “Something that walked here before us?” “Or a warning caught before it reached us.” The trees opened around a shallow pool. Stone steps led into it from every side, their edges worn into hollows. No building stood near them. Slender columns rose from the water, holding nothing overhead; their tops ended in ragged breaks, and silver vines bound the shafts. Rory counted seven columns, then eight. When she looked back to check, there were seven again. The pool’s surface stood higher than its banks. It rose in a clear, trembling mound without spilling. Beneath it lay white pebbles and a bronze key the length of Rory’s forearm. “Leave the key,” Nyx murmured. “I wasn’t going to take it.” “You looked at it twice.” A sound came from behind the nearest column: a spoon striking the rim of a glass. Rory circled the pool. Each step brought the sound around the next column, always one ahead. She stopped, and so did it. On the other side of the water, a cluster of flowers turned their faces towards her. Their petals were the colour of old paper. Thin lines ran across them, too fine to read from where she stood. “Those look like writing.” Nyx came beside her. Their shadow fell across the pool and broke into several shapes, each facing a different direction. “There are no footprints.” Rory looked at the damp ground beyond the flowers. A woman stood beneath an arch of silver branches, her waist-length hair pale against the dark trunks. Her lavender eyes rested on Rory’s hand, still curled around the cold hilt beneath her coat. “I thought you would come by the stream,” Isolde said. “It likes to show visitors what will make them kneel.” Rory glanced towards the water they had crossed. “It showed me my mother.” “And you kept your feet.” Isolde moved towards the pool. The damp earth took no print beneath her shoes. Up close, Rory saw that the lines on the flower petals matched the delicate marks carved into the silver vines around the columns. “What is this place?” Rory asked. Isolde touched one column. The spoon-and-glass sound rang out again, close enough to make Rory flinch. “A threshold that grew tired of being crossed.” Isolde drew her hand away. “Do not step into the pool.” “The key?” Rory asked. “Beneath it.” “That wasn’t an answer.” “No.” Isolde’s mouth curved, though her eyes stayed on the blade Rory had not drawn. “It was not.” Nyx moved to the pool’s edge. Their reflection remained behind when they stepped away, violet eyes watching the three of them from the raised water. Rory pointed. “Does it do that to everyone?” Isolde followed her gaze. “It has never met Nyx before.” The reflection lifted a hand. Nyx kept both hands at their sides. Rory backed towards Isolde, her boots crushing a few of the paper-coloured flowers. The marks on their petals gave off a sharp scent, like a struck match. “Then why did it know how to make them?” Isolde looked down at the crushed petals. She bent and picked one up between two fingers. “Ask your friend to stand in the light.” Nyx looked from Isolde to the pool, then stepped into a patch of violet-edged sunlight. The reflection stayed where it was. It pressed both palms against the inside of the water’s surface, and the mound bowed out towards them without spilling. Rory pulled the Fae blade from its sheath. Moon-pale metal caught the strange light; cold ran from the hilt into her scarred wrist. She held the dagger low, clear of Nyx. “What do we do?” Isolde held up the marked petal. “First, we listen to what it asks.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1788
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1537
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Nyx17
Heartstone3
January1
Fae2
Rory37
Isolde10
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.296
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a question in a language she"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.559
wordCount1788
matches
0"neither trees nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean19.23
std17.87
cv0.93
sampleLengths
042
19
233
33
442
541
64
722
82
94
1041
1158
127
133
144
1555
168
175
1875
193
2023
217
2243
235
244
254
2629
2748
2833
292
306
3134
324
3322
346
3535
364
376
387
3945
405
4126
429
4331
447
4585
465
474
4821
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs255
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences206
ratio0.015
matches
0"Behind her, the brambles held last night’s rain; ahead, the flowers carried the smell of sun-baked earth."
1"Slender columns rose from the water, holding nothing overhead; their tops ended in ragged breaks, and silver vines bound the shafts."
2"Moon-pale metal caught the strange light; cold ran from the hilt into her scarred wrist."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1546
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.022639068564036222
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00129366106080207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean8.68
std5.19
cv0.597
sampleLengths
019
123
29
34
422
57
63
76
812
914
1010
113
1212
1313
1413
154
168
179
185
192
204
216
2217
2313
245
258
2630
273
2817
297
303
314
322
3316
3413
3513
3611
378
385
396
404
4117
4211
4312
448
4517
463
479
4814
494
54.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.33495145631067963
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners69
22.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Instead of a call, a"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences148
matches
0"Its roots gripped the ground"
1"Its violet eyes fixed on"
2"She looked back."
3"He passed behind a tree"
4"Their fingers sank into the"
5"She caught the silver chain"
6"Its inner glow beat once."
7"It was January."
8"It tasted of salt when"
9"Her voice came back from"
10"She saw a row of"
11"Their grip felt solid and"
12"It had no driver."
13"Its wings opened to reveal"
14"It rose, crossed the bridge"
15"Its surface showed only moving"
16"she told herself, and walked"
17"It rose in a clear,"
18"She stopped, and so did"
19"Their petals were the colour"
ratio0.176
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences148
matches
0"The first oak stone stood"
1"Its roots gripped the ground"
2"Nyx stopped beside her."
3"The living shadow had drawn"
4"Its violet eyes fixed on"
5"A robin perched on the"
6"Rory took a step towards"
7"The sound travelled up through"
8"She looked back."
9"The path they had followed"
10"A cyclist crossed a distant"
11"He passed behind a tree"
12"Nyx touched the stone"
13"Their fingers sank into the"
14"Rory slipped through the gap"
15"The Heartstone pressed against her"
16"She caught the silver chain"
17"Its inner glow beat once."
18"Wildflowers crowded the path in"
19"It was January."
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde’s mouth curved, though her eyes stayed on the blade Rory had not drawn"
99.15% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.102
86.7495%