Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HHJEK8K3BJ3E914X77SBR

Run Details

Duration:
53.9s
Cost:
$0.030824
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened as far as its chain allowed. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a charcoal suit damp at the shoulders, his platinum hair darkened by rain. He held a paper bag in one hand and his ivory-handled cane in the other. Rory kept her fingers on the edge of the door. “You found Eva’s place.” “I knew which building. The smell of cumin handled the rest.” “It’s a curry house.” “Then my detective work remains flawless.” Behind Rory, Ptolemy leapt onto a stack of books and sent three loose pages across the floor. Lucien glanced past her, but made no move towards the gap. “I didn’t know you were here tonight,” he told her. “I came to leave this for Eva.” He raised the bag. A corner of dark blue leather showed above its folded rim: Eva’s notebook, the one Rory had spent two days looking for. She had last seen it under Lucien’s arm. “You could have posted it.” “Eva advised against putting it through her letterbox. She mentioned an incident with ink and a territorial cat.” Ptolemy hooked a page beneath one paw. Rory watched Lucien’s fingers tighten around the bag. A week ago, those fingers had closed around her hand outside the Golden Empress. He had kissed her there, in the rain, with her delivery bag slipping off her shoulder. By the following morning, Yu-Fei had crossed Rory’s name off the rota. Lucien had asked for it. He had told Yu-Fei she wanted a week away from work. Rory slid the chain free and opened the door. She took the bag. Lucien stayed where he was. “Eva’s at the library,” she told him. “I’ll give it to her.” “That saves me another trip.” “It does.” She should have shut the door. Instead, she reached into the bag and drew out the notebook. A square of paper was tucked inside its cover, addressed to her in Lucien’s narrow handwriting. “I didn’t come here to hide a note in her books,” he told her. “I put it in after you opened the door. I thought you might not want to talk.” Rory pulled out the paper. It contained a name, an address in Clerkenwell, and a telephone number. “Who’s this?” “Someone who can tell you what happened on your delivery route. His name is Harrow. He works for my father.” The curry house extractor hummed beneath their feet. Rory folded the note once, pressing her thumbnail into the crease. “You told me there was trouble on my route. You didn’t tell me who sent it.” “No.” “You went to Yu-Fei first.” “Yes.” “And now you’ve come to give me a stranger’s address.” She held up the paper. “What am I meant to do with this?” “Whatever you choose. Harrow agreed to answer your questions. If you want him to come here, I can arrange it. If you want nothing to do with him, I won’t ask again.” Rory looked at his face. His amber eye caught the light from Eva’s hall; the black one gave nothing back. For six days she had rehearsed what she would say if she saw him, but all her neat sentences had started with him standing close enough to interrupt. “Why didn’t you tell me on Tuesday?” “Because I thought you’d insist on taking your shift.” “I would have.” “I know.” “And you decided that settled it.” Lucien rested the tip of his cane against the floor. “I made the wrong decision.” “Yu-Fei thought I’d asked you to speak for me. She spent ten minutes telling me I could have come to her myself.” Rory pushed a fallen page back into the flat with her foot. “I had to stand there while she wondered what else I’d let you arrange.” “I went back to her. I told her I lied.” “You did?” “This afternoon. Your shifts are yours if you want them. She also had a few things to tell me about men who interfere with her staff.” Rory could hear Yu-Fei delivering every word. She glanced at Lucien’s mouth and found a small split in his lower lip. “Did she do that?” “No. A man at the Clerkenwell address took exception to my questions.” Rory gripped the door. “Is Harrow going to be safe for me to meet?” “He gave his word. You shouldn’t have to rely on that alone, so I wrote down the name of the woman who witnessed it.” She unfolded the paper. Below the telephone number, in smaller writing, stood another name and a number. Lucien let her read it without speaking. “I don’t know either of them,” she told him. “No. You can ask Eva about the witness. She knows her.” Ptolemy abandoned the pages and pressed against Rory’s ankle. She bent to pick him up, grateful for a reason to look away. The cat settled in her arms, all warm fur and pointed elbows. “I found out about the rota after you kissed me,” she told Lucien. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then returned to her eyes. “I know.” “Did you think I’d be easier to persuade?” “No.” His hand moved on the cane. “I wanted to kiss you. I’d wanted to for months. I went to Yu-Fei that morning, before I saw you outside the restaurant.” Rory’s throat tightened. “You knew I’d find out.” “I knew I had to tell you. Then you came around the corner, and I let myself have something I wanted before I did.” The words landed harder than a polished excuse would have. Ptolemy dug a claw into her jumper. Rory eased it loose. “When you left,” she told him, “you said the kiss had been a mistake.” “I thought calling it that would help you send me away.” “You could have let me decide that too.” “I should have.” Rainwater dripped from the hem of his coat onto Eva’s landing. He looked tired beneath the careful line of his hair, though he stood straight and kept his voice level. Rory remembered how often she had mistaken that composure for certainty. She had liked leaning against it until he had used it to move her out of her own life. “You don’t get to do that again,” she told him. “Not with my work. Not with anything else.” “I won’t.” “If you learn my route has become dangerous, you tell me before you tell my boss.” “Yes.” “If you think I’m about to make a bad choice, you can say so. I’ll hear you.” Lucien’s hand loosened on the cane. “All right.” “You’ll hate that part.” “I expect I will.” Rory looked down at the note. Harrow’s address ran across the fold she had made. She would speak to Eva before she called either number. Tomorrow, she would go to the Golden Empress and check the rota with Yu-Fei herself. Lucien shifted his weight towards the stairs. “I’ve kept you at the door long enough,” he told her. “You haven’t asked to come in.” “I wasn’t going to.” “Good.” Rory stepped back, leaving room beside the bookcase. “Take your shoes off. Eva has a scroll on the floor, and I don’t know what the ink does.” Lucien looked at the narrow space she had made. “Rory.” “It’s tea, Lucien. You can drink it while I ask questions.” “And after?” “I haven’t decided.” He set down his cane and bent to untie his shoes. Rory carried Ptolemy through to the kitchen, where a clean mug sat beside Eva’s overflowing dish rack. She put the kettle on. Lucien came in holding the blue notebook, which she had left on the hall table, and stopped at the sight of Eva’s notes spread across every chair. “There’s nowhere to sit,” he observed. “You can clear that one. Don’t mix the pages.” He put the notebook down and lifted a sheaf with both hands. Rory watched him find a safe place for it. When he turned back, she caught his wrist before he could reach for the next pile. “Let me see your lip.” “It’s a scratch.” “I can see that.” He held still while she tilted his face towards the light. The cut was shallow. His breath touched her thumb when she let it rest beside his mouth. “I’m still angry,” she told him. “I know.” “I wanted to kiss you on Tuesday. I wanted to after.” Lucien’s eyes searched hers. “And now?” The kettle clicked off. Rory released his chin but kept hold of his wrist. “Now I want you to answer the rest of my questions.” “I will.” She drew him closer and kissed him. He waited until she tightened her hand around his wrist before he put his free hand against her waist. Ptolemy jumped onto the table behind them, scattering Eva’s pencils. Rory broke away and caught one before it rolled off the edge. Lucien looked at the pencil in her hand. “Was that one of the questions?” “No.” She set it beside the notebook and reached for the kettle. “Start with Harrow. What did your father ask him to do?”
created_at"2026-09-23T16:28:23.39Z" 9/23/2026, 4:28:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.181
leniency0.361
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.024
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1514
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1514
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flawless"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flawless"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1514
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount844
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory22
Ptolemy6
Eva7
Lucien17
Golden2
Empress2
Yu-Fei4
Clerkenwell1
Rainwater1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Rainwater"
places
0"Golden"
1"Clerkenwell"
globalScore0.197
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1514
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences156
matches
0"mistaken that composure"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs97
mean15.61
std13.95
cv0.893
sampleLengths
044
110
24
311
44
56
628
717
834
95
1018
1157
1216
1318
1412
155
162
1733
1831
1917
202
2120
2219
2316
241
255
261
2723
2832
2948
307
319
323
332
346
3515
3648
3710
382
3926
4021
414
4212
4314
4424
4524
469
4711
4834
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences156
ratio0.006
matches
0"His amber eye caught the light from Eva’s hall; the black one gave nothing back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount849
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01884570082449941
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.71
std6.32
cv0.651
sampleLengths
09
120
215
310
44
511
64
76
817
911
1010
117
124
1322
148
155
1618
177
188
1914
2016
2112
225
2311
249
254
265
277
285
295
302
316
3211
3316
3414
3517
365
3712
382
3920
408
4111
4216
431
445
451
4615
478
4832
495
46.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2948717948717949
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners46
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Instead, she reached into the"
ratio0.011
59.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences87
matches
0"He held a paper bag"
1"he told her"
2"He raised the bag."
3"She had last seen it"
4"He had kissed her there,"
5"He had told Yu-Fei she"
6"She took the bag."
7"she told him"
8"She should have shut the"
9"he told her"
10"It contained a name, an"
11"She held up the paper"
12"His amber eye caught the"
13"She glanced at Lucien’s mouth"
14"She unfolded the paper."
15"she told him"
16"She bent to pick him"
17"she told Lucien"
18"His gaze dropped to her"
19"His hand moved on the"
ratio0.402
0.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences87
matches
0"The door opened as far"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"He held a paper bag"
3"Rory kept her fingers on"
4"Lucien glanced past her, but"
5"he told her"
6"He raised the bag."
7"A corner of dark blue"
8"She had last seen it"
9"Ptolemy hooked a page beneath"
10"Rory watched Lucien’s fingers tighten"
11"A week ago, those fingers"
12"He had kissed her there,"
13"Lucien had asked for it."
14"He had told Yu-Fei she"
15"Rory slid the chain free"
16"She took the bag."
17"Lucien stayed where he was."
18"she told him"
19"She should have shut the"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.024
85.2281%