Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HHZ265ZH2YKC018PG2V0S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.034684
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened the third deadbolt and found Lucien Moreau on Eva’s landing, his charcoal suit dark with rain. Water ran from the tip of his ivory-handled cane onto the threadbare mat. For a moment, neither of them moved. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “Eva sent me.” “She’s in Manchester.” “She knows.” From inside, Ptolemy gave a sharp yowl. Rory glanced over her shoulder. The tabby stood on the kitchen threshold, his back arched, one paw lifted from the floor. A strip of copper wire ran beneath the threshold. It had lain flat when Rory fed him an hour ago. Now it curled at the ends. Lucien followed her gaze. “How long has he been doing that?” “Since you knocked.” “I didn’t knock.” The copper wire snapped against the skirting board. Ptolemy fled under a stack of newspapers. Rory stepped aside. “Come in.” Lucien crossed the threshold without his usual pause to straighten a cuff or inspect the room. He went towards the kitchen, then stopped short of the wire. Rory shut the door and slid the bolts home. Eva’s flat left little room for two people to stand apart. Books covered the table, scrolls occupied the armchair, and notes hung from a string across the window. Lucien set his cane against the wall beside an annotated map of London. “When did Eva call you?” Rory asked. “Twenty minutes ago. She saw the kitchen through the glass on her desk.” Rory looked at the desk. Between two towers of paper sat a small oval mirror, its surface clouded white. “She could have called me. I’m here.” “She did. You didn’t pick up.” Rory took her phone from her pocket. The screen stayed black beneath her thumb. She had meant to charge it before dinner. Lucien crouched near the threshold. His left hand hovered over the wire, palm down. A thin red line appeared across his skin. He pulled back. “Ptolemy got through the salt.” “He knocked over a jar. I swept it up.” “How much?” “All of it. It was on the floor.” Lucien looked up at her. His amber eye caught the kitchen light; the black one gave nothing back. “The salt held the wire in place.” “Then I’ll put it back.” “Not while it’s awake.” The wire struck the floor again. This time a black mark spread across the wood. Rory fetched a cup of water from the bathroom. Lucien caught her wrist before she could throw it. His fingers closed over the small crescent scar on her skin, and both of them went still. “Water feeds it.” “You could have led with that.” “I thought you were getting a cloth.” She took her wrist back. Six weeks had passed since his hand had last rested there. He had held it outside Eva’s flat then, beside the three locked bolts, while Rory asked him whether Evan had her new address. Lucien had looked her in the face and told her no. The next morning, Rory had found the address written on a receipt in Evan’s handwriting. She set the cup on a shelf well away from the kitchen. “What does it need?” “Something to hold the wire down. Human skin.” Lucien opened his left hand. The red line across his palm deepened. “Not mine.” “Of course.” “Rory.” “Tell me where to put my hand.” He moved a pile of notebooks off the nearest chair and placed one of Eva’s heavy dictionaries on the floor beside the kitchen door. The wire shivered. Ptolemy watched from behind the newspapers, eyes bright in the gap. “Press here.” Lucien indicated the dark mark on the floor. “Flat palm. Don’t touch the copper. I’ll close the ring.” Rory knelt. Heat rose through the boards and reached her face. Lucien crouched opposite her, close enough that rain from his coat touched her bare ankle. She planted her palm over the mark. The heat pulled at her skin. She gritted her teeth. Lucien unwound a length of copper from the baseboard and drew it into a circle around her hand. The end resisted him. His palm split along the red line, and a drop of blood landed on the floor. “Your hand.” “It’s fine.” “It’s bleeding on Eva’s notes.” “That is a more persuasive objection.” He took a folded handkerchief from his pocket and wrapped it round his palm with his teeth and his free hand. Rory held her place while he worked. The wood pressed hot against her skin. “Eva put this in after the break-in?” she asked. “Yes.” “She told me the kitchen wire kept mice out.” “She wanted you to sleep here.” “She could have told me what it did.” Lucien tightened the handkerchief. Rory watched him. “Did you know Evan had this address?” His hand stopped. The wire gave a hard twitch beneath her palm. Lucien pinned its loose end with his cane. “Yes.” Rory stared at the crown of his bent head. “At the door, six weeks ago, you told me he didn’t.” “I did.” “What happened to your speech about protecting me?” “I’ve used enough of it.” The wood bucked. Rory pressed down with both hands, and the crescent scar flashed pale against her flushed wrist. “Don’t stop now. I’m busy keeping Eva’s kitchen on the floor.” Lucien lifted his face. Rain had loosened a strand of platinum hair across his forehead. “Evan bought the address from someone who handled your deliveries. I found out the day before I came here. I paid him for the note he’d written it on. I thought I had the only copy.” “And when I asked?” “I didn’t want you to spend the night listening for him on the stairs.” “So you let me spend it believing you.” “Yes.” The wire slipped under the cane tip. Lucien caught it with his injured hand. His jaw tightened, but he guided the copper back towards the dictionary. Rory’s palms stung. “You went after Evan without telling me. You gave him money without telling me. Then you came here and kissed me.” “I came to tell you. I stood outside that door for ten minutes with the note in my pocket.” “You found time for the kiss.” “I did.” Lucien set the dictionary over the joined ends of the wire. “I wanted it. I should have told you before I touched you.” The kitchen light blinked once. The heat beneath Rory’s hands began to ebb, but Lucien kept his cane against the wire. “What did you do with the note?” “I still have it.” “You told me you’d destroyed it.” “Yes.” Rory lifted her eyes to his. “Was there anything that night you didn’t lie about?” Lucien looked down at the handkerchief, spotted red where it crossed his palm. “What I said before I left.” She remembered him at this very threshold, his coat over one arm, asking if she wanted him to stay. She had said she didn’t know. He had told her he would wait until she did. “You left before I woke.” “You’d asked me to go if I couldn’t tell you the truth. I couldn’t make myself say it, so I went.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No.” He shifted his cane a fraction. “It wasn’t.” Under the newspapers, Ptolemy crept out and planted one cautious paw on the kitchen floor. He glanced at Rory, then at Lucien, and began washing his chest. Rory eased one palm from the dark mark. The wire stayed still. She reached for Lucien’s injured hand. “Give me that. Your handkerchief’s soaked through.” He held it out. Rory unwound the linen and examined the cut. It crossed his palm from thumb to little finger, shallow at one end and deep at the other. Lucien’s free hand remained on the cane. They sat close enough that she could feel the warmth of his knee through her jeans. “There’s a first-aid tin by the sink,” she told him. “Blue lid. Don’t lift the cane yet.” Lucien reached past her with his uninjured hand. His sleeve brushed her shoulder as he searched among Eva’s jars, and Rory kept hold of his bleeding palm while he found the tin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1357
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount904
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien23
Moreau1
Eva5
Ptolemy4
Rory22
London1
Evan2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.228
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1357
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs98
mean13.85
std13.1
cv0.946
sampleLengths
031
17
25
33
43
52
654
74
87
93
103
1115
125
1336
1441
157
1613
1719
187
196
2022
2125
225
239
242
258
2618
277
285
294
3015
3135
323
336
347
3565
3612
374
3822
392
401
417
4238
4320
4433
4510
4638
472
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences160
ratio0.006
matches
0"His amber eye caught the kitchen light; the black one gave nothing back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.017679558011049725
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean8.48
std5.55
cv0.654
sampleLengths
018
113
27
35
43
53
62
77
85
916
109
1111
126
134
147
153
163
178
187
193
202
2116
2211
239
2411
2517
2613
277
2813
295
3014
317
326
337
347
358
365
379
388
393
405
419
422
438
445
4513
467
475
484
496
49.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33125
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences94
matches
0"It had lain flat when"
1"He went towards the kitchen,"
2"She had meant to charge"
3"His left hand hovered over"
4"He pulled back."
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"His fingers closed over the"
7"She took her wrist back."
8"He had held it outside"
9"She set the cup on"
10"He moved a pile of"
11"She planted her palm over"
12"She gritted her teeth."
13"His palm split along the"
14"He took a folded handkerchief"
15"His hand stopped."
16"His jaw tightened, but he"
17"She remembered him at this"
18"She had said she didn’t"
19"He had told her he"
ratio0.298
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences94
matches
0"Aurora opened the third deadbolt"
1"Water ran from the tip"
2"Rory glanced over her shoulder."
3"The tabby stood on the"
4"A strip of copper wire"
5"It had lain flat when"
6"Lucien followed her gaze."
7"The copper wire snapped against"
8"Ptolemy fled under a stack"
9"Rory stepped aside."
10"Lucien crossed the threshold without"
11"He went towards the kitchen,"
12"Rory shut the door and"
13"Eva’s flat left little room"
14"Books covered the table, scrolls"
15"Lucien set his cane against"
16"Rory looked at the desk."
17"Rory took her phone from"
18"The screen stayed black beneath"
19"She had meant to charge"
ratio0.936
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now it curled at the"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.086
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1503%