Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HHZ2HHPEH16DR4SAF2K4Q

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37.0s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened the door with the chain still hooked. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, blood soaking the cuff of his charcoal suit. “You have until I count to three to explain why you’re here.” “Your talent for welcome has not improved.” His platinum hair had come loose at one temple. That unsettled her more than the blood. Lucien kept himself immaculate through threats, fights and the night he’d told her that getting close to him had been a mistake. “One.” “The blood is not mine.” “Two.” “They found Eva.” Aurora slid the chain free. Lucien stepped inside, and she shut the door against the narrow corridor. His ivory-handled cane tapped the floorboards once before he caught it. “Where?” “Alive. For the moment.” “You could have led with that.” “I did.” She caught the lapel of his jacket and pushed him towards the kitchen. He let her. The cramped room offered two chairs, a sink full of mugs and a table that served as desk, dining space and a place to dump the post. He stopped beside it rather than sit. Blood dripped from his cuff onto an unopened gas bill. “Whose blood?” “A man who took offence when I asked where your friend had gone.” “That sounds unlike you. Asking.” “You remember me fondly, then.” Aurora yanked a tea towel from its hook and pressed it into his hand. “Hold that against your arm.” “I told you it is not mine.” “And I’ve seen you lie without changing your expression. Take the jacket off.” Lucien set his cane against the table. The blade hidden inside its shaft had once appeared at her throat before she knew who held it. Later, she’d learnt to recognise the precise tap of that cane in a crowd. She hated that her pulse still answered it. He took off his jacket. A cut ran along his forearm beneath the shirt, shallow but long. His amber eye followed her glance; the black one gave away nothing. “Not your blood?” “Most of it is not.” “Sit.” He sat. Aurora fetched the first-aid tin from above the cooker. Her flat occupied the floor above Silas’ bar, and the bass from downstairs made the glasses hum in their rack. She pulled a chair close enough to work on his arm. Lucien watched her tip antiseptic onto a pad. “This will sting.” “I have endured worse.” “I know. I was there for some of it.” His mouth closed. She cleaned the cut harder than she needed to, then eased her grip when he flinched. “Eva,” she said. “Start talking.” “She rang me from a borrowed telephone. Someone had entered her flat and taken a scroll.” “She keeps scrolls beside the cereal. Which one?” “The one with the seal from Avaros.” Aurora stopped. Eva had shown her a rubbing of that seal two days ago: a circle split by three hooked lines. Lucien’s father came from Avaros. At the sight of the rubbing, Lucien had folded it face down and told Aurora to leave the matter alone. “Did she give them the scroll?” “No. She took it with her.” “Then where is she?” “She would not tell me over the telephone. She gave me an address where she intended to meet you.” Aurora reached for the clean bandage. “She called you to arrange a meeting with me?” “She called me because I know what hunts her. She asked me to bring you.” “Say that again.” “Rory.” “Don’t.” He held still while she wound the bandage round his arm. Her fingers knew the shape of him better than they had any right to. She secured the end with tape and moved her chair back. “Last time you came here, you told me you’d used me to get close to Eva’s research. Was that a lie?” Lucien’s hand tightened around the bloodied tea towel. “I had heard she possessed the scroll. That is why I approached her.” “Through me.” “Yes.” The answer struck cleanly. Aurora stood and dropped the used pad in the bin. “And after that?” “After that, I should have told you.” “You managed to tell me plenty. You called what happened between us an inconvenience.” “I wanted you to put your locks between us.” “You didn’t need to work so hard.” “I saw you at the bar three nights later.” “I live upstairs.” “You waited until I left before you came down.” Aurora turned on the tap and washed his blood from her hands. The water ran pink. In the pane over the sink, his reflection sat behind her, pale hair above a dark shirt, posture rigid despite the kitchen chair. She’d met him on a delivery for the Golden Empress. He’d opened the door of a house where no one had ordered food and paid for the meal anyway. She’d spotted the address on Eva’s notes that same evening. By then, Lucien had already asked her name and remembered it. What followed had not felt like a transaction when his mouth met hers. “You knew I’d left Evan,” she said. “You knew what it cost me to believe someone again.” “Yes.” “And you let me believe you wanted me.” “I did want you.” Aurora faced him. “Choose your words with care.” He rose. The chair legs scraped against the floor. “I wanted you. I knew what I’d done to meet you, and I wanted you when it no longer served me. Both things are true.” Downstairs, a cheer rose from the bar and faded. Aurora gripped the edge of the sink. Lucien took one step towards her, then stopped. He looked at her wrist, at the small crescent scar she never thought to cover. He’d kissed it once while she told him how she’d got it. She curled her fingers into her palm. “I should have told you everything before I touched you,” he said. “You should have.” “I cannot undo it.” “No.” His jaw shifted. For once he had no elegant answer ready. Aurora dried her hands and picked up her phone. “Give me the address.” “Eva asked that we come together.” “Give it to me, and I’ll decide how I get there.” Lucien named a shop off Commercial Street. Eva had bought stationery there before. Aurora typed the address in, then sent Eva a message. It failed to deliver. “What hunts her?” “A collector. He acquires objects with a claim on Avaros.” “Objects?” “People, when the contract permits it.” Aurora looked at his bandaged arm. “Was the man with your blood on your sleeve working for him?” “Yes. He found Eva’s flat before I did.” “How did he get through three deadbolts?” “He did not use the door.” A thud sounded overhead. Aurora lifted her gaze. Above her ceiling lay a cramped loft space Silas used for Christmas decorations and broken stools. A second thud came from it, followed by the scrape of something dragging across the boards. Lucien reached for his cane. “Back of the room,” he said. “No.” “The window leads to the fire escape.” “Eva knows this address?” “Yes.” “Who else knows you came here?” Lucien drew the blade from his cane. It slid free without a sound. “No one saw me enter.” The loft hatch burst open. Dust spilled over Aurora’s kitchen table. A hand gripped the edge from above, its fingers too long, each nail black as a charred match. Lucien moved in front of her. Aurora snatched the kettle from its base. “Rory. The window.” The creature dropped between them and the door, landing on the table hard enough to split it. Its face looked human until its jaw opened sideways. A strip of paper hung from one of its teeth, marked with the same hooked seal Eva had shown her. Lucien drove his blade towards its throat. The creature caught his wrist. Aurora hurled the kettle. Boiling water struck its face, and its grip broke with a shriek that shook the mugs in the rack. “Window,” Lucien said again. Aurora seized his jacket from the chair and flung it over the creature’s head. Lucien pulled free. Together they reached the window, but something struck the glass from outside. A second long-fingered hand spread across the pane. The front door slammed open behind them. “Get down!” Eva shouted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said again [again]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.025
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1378
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount867
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora19
Avaros1
Lucien17
Golden1
Empress1
Eva6
Commercial1
Street1
Silas1
Christmas1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Avaros"
1"Commercial"
2"Street"
globalScore0.404
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a transaction when his mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1378
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs113
mean12.19
std13.82
cv1.134
sampleLengths
023
112
27
338
41
55
61
73
828
91
104
116
122
1360
142
1513
165
175
1814
195
207
2113
2247
2329
243
255
261
272
2848
293
304
319
3219
335
3416
358
367
3746
386
396
404
4119
426
439
4415
453
461
471
4836
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences169
ratio0.006
matches
0"His amber eye followed her glance; the black one gave away nothing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount542
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.016605166051660517
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean8.15
std5.45
cv0.668
sampleLengths
09
114
212
37
49
57
622
71
85
91
103
115
1212
1311
141
154
166
172
1813
193
2027
217
2210
232
2413
255
265
2714
285
297
3013
317
3218
3314
348
355
3612
3712
383
395
401
412
429
4320
4411
458
463
474
489
493
55.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.35502958579881655
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences86
matches
0"His platinum hair had come"
1"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
2"She caught the lapel of"
3"He let her."
4"He stopped beside it rather"
5"She hated that her pulse"
6"He took off his jacket."
7"His amber eye followed her"
8"Her flat occupied the floor"
9"She pulled a chair close"
10"His mouth closed."
11"She cleaned the cut harder"
12"He held still while she"
13"Her fingers knew the shape"
14"She secured the end with"
15"She’d met him on a"
16"He’d opened the door of"
17"She’d spotted the address on"
18"He looked at her wrist,"
19"He’d kissed it once while"
ratio0.291
12.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora opened the door with"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His platinum hair had come"
3"That unsettled her more than"
4"Lucien kept himself immaculate through"
5"Aurora slid the chain free."
6"Lucien stepped inside, and she"
7"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
8"She caught the lapel of"
9"He let her."
10"The cramped room offered two"
11"He stopped beside it rather"
12"Blood dripped from his cuff"
13"Aurora yanked a tea towel"
14"Lucien set his cane against"
15"The blade hidden inside its"
16"She hated that her pulse"
17"He took off his jacket."
18"A cut ran along his"
19"His amber eye followed her"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Boiling water struck its face, and its grip broke with a shriek that shook the mugs in the rack."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.025
86.7039%