| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.244 | | leniency | 0.488 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1612 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1612 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "chilled" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 184 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1612 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1387 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 28 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 18 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 1 | | Water | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Water" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.491 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1612 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 19.9 | | std | 18.27 | | cv | 0.918 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 58 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 52 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 53 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 184 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "It had warmed against her chest on the walk through the park; now heat soaked the silver chain." | | 1 | "Across the hollow below, more trees carried more shells; their chimes overlapped until the ground seemed to hum." | | 2 | "Both figures held one end of a length of rope; a third figure, reduced to a shallow oval, occupied the space between them." | | 3 | "Her eyes lost it when she looked straight at it; at the edge of her sight, it returned." | | 4 | "She recognised the lowest as a child’s rough notch; above it, more notches climbed the trunk in the same crooked line." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1388 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.018731988472622477 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 184 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 184 | | mean | 8.76 | | std | 4.99 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 59.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3804347826086957 | | totalSentences | 184 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks rose straight from" | | 1 | "She had seen bracken, a" | | 2 | "She had never seen the" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes found the" | | 4 | "Its crimson face held a" | | 5 | "It had warmed against her" | | 6 | "Her fingers met cool air," | | 7 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 8 | "She looked through the gap" | | 9 | "Their centres held tiny beads" | | 10 | "It reflected a tall white" | | 11 | "She sprang upright, wiping her" | | 12 | "Their hand passed through the" | | 13 | "They moved uphill." | | 14 | "Her hand stopped." | | 15 | "She thought of the coins" | | 16 | "It disappeared beneath a stone" | | 17 | "They crossed the bridge." | | 18 | "It showed a face with" | | 19 | "They lay shoulder to shoulder" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 42.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 122 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in a" | | 1 | "Their trunks rose straight from" | | 2 | "Rory had walked past this" | | 3 | "She had seen bracken, a" | | 4 | "She had never seen the" | | 5 | "Eva stopped beside her and" | | 6 | "Nyx drew up behind them." | | 7 | "Their violet eyes found the" | | 8 | "Rory pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 9 | "Its crimson face held a" | | 10 | "It had warmed against her" | | 11 | "Rory reached between the oaks." | | 12 | "Her fingers met cool air," | | 13 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 14 | "Sunset lay behind her." | | 15 | "She looked through the gap" | | 16 | "Sunlight still filled the clearing." | | 17 | "Eva took hold of Rory’s" | | 18 | "Rory stepped through." | | 19 | "The earth gave a little" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx came through last, their outline shedding a few black wisps that clung to the invisible boundary before returning to them." | | 1 | "It reflected a tall white tree that grew nowhere above them." | | 2 | "In the nearest basin lay a heap of white feathers that shifted as they approached, though Rory saw no bird beneath them." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.171 | | leniency | 0.341 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |