Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HK4M37JF658YKXZ4Z3R2C

Run Details

Duration:
48.3s
Cost:
$0.027523
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks stood in a ring where the Richmond Park footpath should have continued. Their trunks rose straight from the grass, thick as pillars, with bark folded into ridges that caught the last daylight. Rory had walked past this slope twice that week. She had seen bracken, a litter bin and a man throwing a ball for his dog. She had never seen the trees. Eva stopped beside her and looked back down the path. “I can still see the bin. That makes this worse.” Nyx drew up behind them. Their violet eyes found the gap between two trunks, though there was nothing there for Rory to see. “The gap has an edge.” Rory pulled the Heartstone pendant from beneath her collar. Its crimson face held a thread of light. It had warmed against her chest on the walk through the park; now heat soaked the silver chain. “An edge I can’t see?” “Put your hand out.” Rory reached between the oaks. Her fingers met cool air, then a resistance as fine as silk drawn across her palm. Beyond it, wildflowers nodded in sunlight. She snatched her hand back. Sunset lay behind her. She looked through the gap again. Sunlight still filled the clearing. Eva took hold of Rory’s coat sleeve. “If this eats your arm, I’m not pulling the rest of you in.” “You brought the first-aid kit.” “For cuts. Human-sized cuts.” Rory stepped through. The earth gave a little beneath her boot. Warm air pressed against her face, carrying the scent of crushed thyme and something sweet with a sharp, green bite. Behind her, Eva cursed as she crossed. Nyx came through last, their outline shedding a few black wisps that clung to the invisible boundary before returning to them. The clearing spread much farther than the ring of oaks could contain. Grass rolled over a hill ahead of them, thick with blue flowers whose petals opened as Rory watched. Their centres held tiny beads of light. A blackbird called from a branch overhead. A second bird answered in the same notes, but the sound came from the ground at Rory’s feet. She crouched. Beneath the grass lay a pool no wider than a dinner plate. It reflected a tall white tree that grew nowhere above them. A blackbird perched in its branches and called again. When Rory leaned closer, the bird cocked its head towards her. “Rory.” Eva’s grip tightened on her sleeve. “Come away from that.” The reflected bird struck the surface from below. Water jumped against Rory’s face. She sprang upright, wiping her cheek. The little pool had vanished. Grass filled the spot where it had been. Nyx bent over it. Their hand passed through the grass and came back wet. “Does that happen often?” Eva asked. “Ask the bird.” They moved uphill. Small yellow flowers brushed Rory’s ankles, opening and closing as her shadow crossed them. No breeze stirred their stems. The air rang with thin, irregular notes, like glass touched by fingernails. At the crest, Rory found their source. Hundreds of clear shells hung from a thorn tree. Some held rainwater. Others held moths, seeds or scraps of coloured thread. Each shell turned on its own stem, tapping its neighbours. Across the hollow below, more trees carried more shells; their chimes overlapped until the ground seemed to hum. Eva reached towards a shell with a blue thread inside. “Don’t,” Nyx murmured. Her hand stopped. “You recognise them?” “No. One recognised you.” The shell had turned towards Eva. The thread inside drew taut, though nothing held either end. Eva tucked her hands under her arms. “I hate a plant with opinions.” Rory studied the trees. Among the shells hung a child’s wooden button and a small brass key, each enclosed in clear, glassy growth. She thought of the coins and ribbons people left at wells. Someone had come here with a key and chosen not to take it home. A narrow runnel cut through the hollow. Water climbed its bank in slow beads, gathered on the undersides of leaves, then dropped back into the stream. Rory knelt to touch it. Cold bit her fingers. “What’s feeding it?” she asked. Nyx followed the stream with their gaze. It disappeared beneath a stone bridge half buried in moss. “Something beneath us. I can hear it through the ground.” Rory held still. Under the chimes, under Eva’s shifting feet, a low sound travelled through the soil: three heavy knocks, a pause, then three more. The ground carried a faint tremor into her knees. They crossed the bridge. Stone carvings ran along its parapet, worn almost flat. Rory traced one with her damp fingers. It showed a face with antlers. Beside it, another face wore a crown of reeds. Both figures held one end of a length of rope; a third figure, reduced to a shallow oval, occupied the space between them. “I don’t like the middle one,” Eva told her. “I can’t make out what it is.” “That’s why.” On the far side, the grass ended at a floor of pale roots. They lay shoulder to shoulder across the earth, smooth from use, though no path showed among the flowers behind them. The roots led into a stand of silver-barked trees. Their crowns joined high overhead and shut out the sun. Rory drew Isolde’s blade from the sheath at her hip. Moonsilver chilled her fingers through the grip. Eva glanced at it. “See something?” “No. I want both hands free if I need them.” “You’re holding a knife.” “One hand free, then.” They entered beneath the branches. The chimes faded. Here, footsteps made no sound, even when Eva stamped on a root to test it. Each trunk bore a dark knot at chest height. Rory passed one and caught sight of an eye in the grain, complete with a fleck of gold in its iris. She turned. The knot was a knot. “Look at the trees,” she told the others. Eva moved close enough to see over Rory’s shoulder. “What am I looking for?” “I don’t know. That one had an eye.” Nyx put their palm against the trunk. A patch of bark darkened beneath their touch. Voices rose around them, too faint for words, then narrowed to one clear sentence in a child’s voice. “Mind the roots, Da.” Nyx drew back. The bark lightened. For a few steps, nobody spoke. Rory watched the roots underfoot and the dark knots ahead of her. A sentence lodged inside a tree felt less strange than the care in that small voice. Someone had walked this path before them. Someone had worried about another person falling. Eva broke the silence. “That sounded like a little girl.” “Yes,” Nyx answered. “Was she in there?” “I heard her. I couldn’t feel anyone behind the bark.” The roots widened and carried them into another clearing. This one held a circle of shallow stone basins, each cut into the ground. Water filled some. Wildflowers crowded others. In the nearest basin lay a heap of white feathers that shifted as they approached, though Rory saw no bird beneath them. At the centre stood an oak stump broad enough to seat a dozen people. Its rings shone silver. Knives, pins and needles studded the wood, their handles furred with moss. A silver comb lay caught between two roots. Eva approached a basin full of water. A moon occupied its surface. Above them, daylight glowed between the silver branches. “Rory. Come and see this.” Rory stood beside her. The moon in the basin carried a dark mark across its face. As she watched, the mark moved. A line of tiny figures crossed the reflection, each bearing something on its shoulders. She bent lower. One carried a basket. Another bore a chair. The last hauled a shape wrapped in cloth. The pendant pulsed once against her skin. Rory straightened and searched the clearing. A shimmer hung between two trees beyond the stump, faint as heat above a road. Her eyes lost it when she looked straight at it; at the edge of her sight, it returned. Nyx saw where she looked. Their form drew thin, black at the edges. “Another boundary,” they whispered. “Hel?” Rory touched the pendant. Its warmth remained, but it gave no second pulse. Nyx crossed to the shimmer and stopped short of it. The silver trunks beyond stood close together, their roots threaded with white flowers. “I can’t see through from here.” Eva left the basin and joined Rory by the stump. “Isolde lives in this place? With the talking trees and the portable moon?” “She said there was a path to her grove.” Rory looked down at the roots. They ran past the basins and between the two trees, right through the wavering air. Eva followed her gaze. “She could have mentioned the other boundary.” “She told me to mind where I put my feet.” “That covered the roots. Not the sky in a bowl.” Rory sheathed the blade and stepped around the stump. Close to the shimmer, the air cooled against her face. On the nearest tree, a row of marks had been cut into the bark at different heights. She recognised the lowest as a child’s rough notch; above it, more notches climbed the trunk in the same crooked line. Tiny flowers had grown inside the older cuts. Nyx came to stand on her left. Eva took her place on the right, careful to keep her boots on the roots. Rory touched the highest mark, then let her hand fall. The chimes sounded again beyond the trees, clear enough now to pick out each shell. Together they followed the pale roots towards them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1612
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"chilled"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"traced"
2"chilled"
3"footsteps"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"pulse"
8"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences153
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1612
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1387
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory28
Heartstone1
Eva18
Nyx11
Isolde1
Water3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Water"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.491
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1612
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean19.9
std18.27
cv0.918
sampleLengths
065
110
210
323
45
535
65
74
827
920
107
1113
125
134
143
1556
1662
1745
1811
1932
2014
216
223
2334
2456
2510
263
276
284
2916
3013
3148
3235
335
3417
3510
3634
3758
389
397
402
4152
4217
436
4410
454
464
4753
487
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs225
matches(empty)
65.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences184
ratio0.027
matches
0"It had warmed against her chest on the walk through the park; now heat soaked the silver chain."
1"Across the hollow below, more trees carried more shells; their chimes overlapped until the ground seemed to hum."
2"Both figures held one end of a length of rope; a third figure, reduced to a shallow oval, occupied the space between them."
3"Her eyes lost it when she looked straight at it; at the edge of her sight, it returned."
4"She recognised the lowest as a child’s rough notch; above it, more notches climbed the trunk in the same crooked line."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1388
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.018731988472622477
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean8.76
std4.99
cv0.57
sampleLengths
014
120
29
316
46
510
610
75
818
95
109
118
1218
135
144
155
1616
176
185
194
206
215
227
2313
245
254
263
278
2820
297
3021
3112
3218
337
347
3518
362
3712
3811
399
4011
417
424
438
445
456
465
478
484
4910
59.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3804347826086957
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners70
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences146
matches
0"Their trunks rose straight from"
1"She had seen bracken, a"
2"She had never seen the"
3"Their violet eyes found the"
4"Its crimson face held a"
5"It had warmed against her"
6"Her fingers met cool air,"
7"She snatched her hand back."
8"She looked through the gap"
9"Their centres held tiny beads"
10"It reflected a tall white"
11"She sprang upright, wiping her"
12"Their hand passed through the"
13"They moved uphill."
14"Her hand stopped."
15"She thought of the coins"
16"It disappeared beneath a stone"
17"They crossed the bridge."
18"It showed a face with"
19"They lay shoulder to shoulder"
ratio0.205
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences146
matches
0"The oaks stood in a"
1"Their trunks rose straight from"
2"Rory had walked past this"
3"She had seen bracken, a"
4"She had never seen the"
5"Eva stopped beside her and"
6"Nyx drew up behind them."
7"Their violet eyes found the"
8"Rory pulled the Heartstone pendant"
9"Its crimson face held a"
10"It had warmed against her"
11"Rory reached between the oaks."
12"Her fingers met cool air,"
13"She snatched her hand back."
14"Sunset lay behind her."
15"She looked through the gap"
16"Sunlight still filled the clearing."
17"Eva took hold of Rory’s"
18"Rory stepped through."
19"The earth gave a little"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Nyx came through last, their outline shedding a few black wisps that clung to the invisible boundary before returning to them."
1"It reflected a tall white tree that grew nowhere above them."
2"In the nearest basin lay a heap of white feathers that shifted as they approached, though Rory saw no bird beneath them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.341
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.098
86.2538%