Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HNWZMR4H6A6JFAW365ZZN

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.030144
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. Rory had to lift the door by its handle before it gave, and when it swung inward, Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with blood on his shirt cuff. For a moment, neither of them moved. Curry fumes rose through the floorboards. Somewhere below, a cook struck a pan with a ladle, three sharp knocks that carried up the stairwell. Lucien’s charcoal suit had a tear at the shoulder. He held his ivory-handled cane beneath his arm, though he put no weight on it. His platinum hair, combed back as usual, had come loose across his forehead. One amber eye met hers; the black one made his face look as if it held two different answers. Rory kept her hand on the door. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “I checked.” “You should have checked whether you were welcome.” His gaze dropped to the three locks, then returned to her face. “Someone followed me from Whitechapel.” “Then keep walking.” “Rory.” She hated what her name did in his voice. Six weeks since he had spoken it. Six weeks since he had left her outside Silas’s bar with rain sliding down the back of her collar and his last words lodged beneath her ribs: You’ll be safer if you stay away from me. She stepped out onto the landing and pulled the door nearly shut behind her. Through the gap, Ptolemy wound around a stack of books and gave Lucien a stare of grave contempt. “This is Eva’s place. She has nothing to do with you.” “I know whose flat it is.” “Then you know I can wake her.” “You should.” He looked towards the stairs. “And you should let me past the door before whoever followed me reaches this floor.” Rory caught his sleeve. Blood had soaked through the cuff and marked the seam beneath his wrist. “Is that yours?” “Yes.” “Who followed you?” “I didn’t see a face.” “Convenient.” “A coat. Dark green, long enough to cover the hands. The person kept to the other side of the road until Brick Lane.” The stairwell fell quiet. Rory listened past him: the extractor fan downstairs, tyres brushing wet tarmac outside, a burst of laughter from the street. No footsteps on the stairs. She opened the door. “You get five minutes. Then you leave.” Lucien entered without brushing against her. She shut the door, pushed it up with her hip and drove each deadbolt home. By the second, Ptolemy had retreated beneath Eva’s desk. By the third, Rory could hear Lucien’s breathing in the cramped room. He stopped beside a tower of books and looked at the notes that covered the walls. His hand went to his cuff. “Don’t touch anything,” Rory told him. “Eva knows where every scrap of paper goes.” “I remember.” “You were here once.” “You made tea. Eva asked me twelve questions about Avaros before I’d taken a sip.” “She was being polite.” “She called my father a liar.” “He is, from what you told her.” Lucien drew a breath through his nose. Rory went to the kitchen sink, found a clean tea towel and ran it under cold water. When she turned, he had taken off his jacket. Blood spread from the inside of his left forearm towards his elbow. “That needs more than five minutes.” “I can manage it.” “Your cuff says otherwise. Sit.” He glanced at the narrow chair wedged between the table and Eva’s research shelf. “Is that an instruction?” “It’s a chair.” He sat. Rory pulled a lamp closer and laid his arm on the table. Beneath the split fabric, a cut ran along his forearm. The edges had begun to knit, but when he flexed his fingers, fresh blood welled through. “What did that?” “A blade.” “I’d got that far.” “Someone found me at my office.” “Who?” “I don’t know.” She pressed the damp towel against the cut. Lucien’s jaw tightened, though his arm remained still. Up close she saw a bruise along the edge of his collar and a small tear in the lining of his shirt. Whoever had struck him had come near enough to land more than one blow. “You came here instead of a doctor.” “I came here because of you.” Rory held the towel in place. “You’re going to need to do better than that.” From the bedroom, Eva’s voice came rough with sleep. “Rory?” “We have a visitor.” There was a thump, a rustle, then Eva appeared in the doorway in an old university sweatshirt. She took in Lucien, his blood on her table, and Rory’s hand around his wrist. “Moreau. My floor had better survive this.” “I’ll pay for cleaning.” “People who say that tend to make a mess.” Eva crossed to a cupboard and took out a first-aid tin. “Who’s outside?” “Someone followed him. Green coat. He didn’t see a face.” Eva looked at Lucien. “You brought them to my door?” “I lost them before I crossed the street.” “You’re confident of that?” “No.” Eva set the tin beside Rory. “There’s a peephole. Use it before you open the door again.” She picked up her phone. “I’ll check the street.” “Eva—” “I live here.” Eva gave Rory a look that left no room for argument and went back into the bedroom with her phone. Rory lifted the towel. The cut had begun to bleed less. She found antiseptic, gauze and a roll of bandage in the tin. Lucien watched her work until she pushed his torn sleeve out of the way. Her left wrist turned beneath the lamp; the small crescent scar there showed white against her skin. “You still have that,” he murmured. “It’s a scar, Lucien.” “I know what it is.” She tipped antiseptic onto a pad. “Then don’t sound surprised.” He flinched when she touched the cut. He’d once held that wrist between his fingers outside Golden Empress, turning it towards the light while he asked how she’d acquired the mark. She had told him about the broken greenhouse pane, about her mother driving her to hospital with a dish towel wrapped around her arm. He had remembered it. She had forgotten that he knew. She fixed the gauze over his forearm and wound the bandage through his fingers to keep it in place. “You could have gone to Silas,” she told him. “He’d have called you.” “You don’t know that.” “He called you when I asked after you.” Her grip tightened on the roll. “You asked after me?” “Twice.” “And when he offered to pass on a message?” “I didn’t leave one.” “Right.” She tucked the end of the bandage beneath a fold. Lucien pulled his arm back, but he didn’t stand. “I had no right to ask Silas for news and no courage to ask you,” he told her. Rory shut the first-aid tin. “You managed to tell me to stay away. You found the words for that.” “I did.” “You walked off before I could answer.” “Yes.” “Did you think I was going to chase you down the street?” “No. I thought if I stayed, I would ask you not to go.” The noise from downstairs reached them through the floor: pans, voices, the low churn of the extractor. Rory moved to the sink to rinse the towel. Pink water swirled around the plug. “You could have asked,” she told him. “I had people watching my office. One of them knew where you worked.” “You didn’t tell me.” “I’d already found a watcher outside the Golden Empress. I thought I could draw them away.” “You thought.” She wrung out the towel. “And what did I get to do?” His chair scraped back. “I should have told you.” “You should have let me choose whether I wanted to see you.” “You’re right.” Rory turned off the tap. He had stopped beside the table, one hand resting on the cane. She remembered that hand at the small of her back as they squeezed through a crowded market, the care he took not to steer her, and how it had felt to have him drop it when someone called his name. Six weeks had not stripped those memories of their edges. “What happened at your office?” she asked. Lucien reached into his jacket pocket. Rory stiffened. He drew out a folded sheet and set it on the table between two stacks of Eva’s notes. A dark smear marked one corner. “They were looking for this. They asked about the night I took you to the river.” Rory stared at the paper. That night had ended on the steps above the Thames. Lucien had kissed her there, his hand cold from the cane and warm where it touched her cheek. The next morning, he had come to Silas’s bar to tell her to stay away. “What’s on it?” “A name. A place. I found it after I spoke to you that morning.” “So this is why you’ve come.” “It’s part of it.” Rory looked up. “You could have sent the paper to Eva.” “I could have.” “You could have knocked on Silas’s door and handed it to him.” “Yes.” “Instead you came up three flights of stairs, bleeding on her landing.” His mouth pressed into a line. “I wanted to see you.” She could hear Eva moving in the bedroom, speaking into her phone too quietly for the words to carry. Rory picked up the folded paper but did not open it. A line of Lucien’s handwriting showed through the thin stock. “I spent weeks making sense of what you’d said,” she told him. “I thought I’d read everything else wrong.” “You hadn’t.” “You took my hand that night.” “I did.” “You kissed me.” “I remember.” “And the next day you looked at me as though I’d made it up.” Lucien’s fingers closed around the handle of his cane. He looked down at his bandaged arm, then at her. “I saw the man outside the restaurant that morning. I knew he had seen us by the river. I should have come to you with that. Instead I made you think I regretted kissing you.” Rory set the paper down. “Did you?” “No.” “Look at me.” He did. The lamp caught the amber eye; the black one held the shape of her face. “I wanted to kiss you before we reached the river,” he told her. “I wanted to stay after you went upstairs that night. None of that changed in the morning.” A knock struck the flat door. Lucien turned. Rory crossed the room before he could move towards it. Eva came out of the bedroom, phone in hand. “Curry house,” she told them. “They’re closing the front shutters. Cook heard someone on the stairs.” Rory looked through the peephole. A boy in an apron stood on the landing with a paper bag pressed to his chest. He glanced down the staircase, then raised a fist to knock again. “It’s Imran,” she told Eva. She opened the top deadbolt. Lucien stayed back by the table while she worked the other two. Imran held out the bag. “Your order. Someone left it downstairs.” “We didn’t order.” “It’s got your flat number on it.” Rory took the bag by its twisted handles. Grease had darkened the bottom. No name appeared on the receipt stapled to the fold, only the flat number and the time, printed ten minutes earlier. “Who left it?” “Didn’t see. I came back from the bins and it was on the counter.” Imran leaned to see past her. “Everything all right?” “Yeah. Thanks.” He nodded and hurried downstairs. Rory shut the door and slid the bolts across. Eva took the bag from her and put it on the clear end of the table. She peeled the receipt free, opened the fold and looked inside. “Rice,” she told them. “And a note.” Lucien came to her side. Eva tipped the bag, letting the carton settle against the paper, and handed Rory a folded square torn from a notebook. Rory opened it. Two words sat in block capitals above a phone number. CALL ME. She held it under the lamp. “No name.” Eva took a photograph of the note with her phone. “I’ll ask Imran to keep the shutters down. The back door opens onto the yard if we need it.” Lucien reached for his jacket. “I should leave.” “No,” Rory told him. He paused with the jacket in his hand. She set the note beside his folded sheet. “Someone knows this flat number. You can tell Eva what happened at your office, and we can work out what these are. You don’t walk out while there’s someone on the stairs.” Eva picked up the rice carton. “I’ll put this in the kitchen. Neither of you touch it.” She carried the bag away. Rory heard the cupboard open, then the clink of a plate as Eva cleared a space. Lucien remained where he stood, his jacket held against his good arm. “You don’t owe me this.” “I know.” “I meant what I said about the kiss.” “I heard you.” Rory drew the chair out from the table with her foot. “Sit down. Tell me who cut your arm.” He set his jacket over the chair back and sat. Rory took the other chair, close enough to see the blood beginning to spot the fresh bandage, and opened the folded sheet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2231
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2231
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"grave"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"churn"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"grave"
2"footsteps"
3"churn"
4"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences255
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2231
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1396
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien20
Moreau1
Silas2
You1
Ptolemy2
Rory31
Eva17
Golden1
Empress1
Thames1
Six3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"You"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Empress"
places
0"Golden"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.39
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2231
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences255
matches
0"held that wrist"
1"forgotten that he"
2"remembered that hand"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs157
mean14.21
std14.4
cv1.013
sampleLengths
033
131
256
37
45
52
68
717
83
91
1052
1132
1211
136
147
1522
1617
173
181
193
205
211
2223
2329
2411
2542
2622
2714
282
294
3015
314
326
337
3445
356
364
375
3818
393
4040
413
422
434
446
451
463
4752
487
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs244
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences255
ratio0.012
matches
0"One amber eye met hers; the black one made his face look as if it held two different answers."
1"Her left wrist turned beneath the lamp; the small crescent scar there showed white against her skin."
2"The lamp caught the amber eye; the black one held the shape of her face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1399
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.01858470335954253
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002144388849177984
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences255
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences255
mean8.75
std6.56
cv0.749
sampleLengths
04
129
27
36
418
59
615
713
819
97
105
112
128
1312
145
153
161
179
187
1936
2014
2118
2211
236
247
257
2615
274
2813
293
301
313
325
331
3423
354
3620
375
384
397
406
4115
429
4312
4416
456
466
478
482
494
45.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.23137254901960785
totalSentences255
uniqueOpeners59
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Somewhere below, a cook struck"
ratio0.007
70.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences134
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"His platinum hair, combed back"
2"His gaze dropped to the"
3"She hated what her name"
4"She stepped out onto the"
5"He looked towards the stairs"
6"She opened the door."
7"She shut the door, pushed"
8"He stopped beside a tower"
9"His hand went to his"
10"He glanced at the narrow"
11"She pressed the damp towel"
12"She took in Lucien, his"
13"She picked up her phone"
14"She found antiseptic, gauze and"
15"Her left wrist turned beneath"
16"She tipped antiseptic onto a"
17"He flinched when she touched"
18"He’d once held that wrist"
19"She had told him about"
ratio0.373
30.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences134
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"Rory had to lift the"
2"Curry fumes rose through the"
3"Lucien’s charcoal suit had a"
4"He held his ivory-handled cane"
5"His platinum hair, combed back"
6"Rory kept her hand on"
7"His gaze dropped to the"
8"She hated what her name"
9"She stepped out onto the"
10"He looked towards the stairs"
11"Rory caught his sleeve."
12"Blood had soaked through the"
13"The stairwell fell quiet."
14"Rory listened past him: the"
15"She opened the door."
16"Lucien entered without brushing against"
17"She shut the door, pushed"
18"He stopped beside a tower"
19"His hand went to his"
ratio0.858
37.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Whoever had struck him had"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Somewhere below, a cook struck a pan with a ladle, three sharp knocks that carried up the stairwell."
1"One amber eye met hers; the black one made his face look as if it held two different answers."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.09
leniency0.18
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.015
87.8963%