Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HQ5FFEA0V9XBCD5TTX4TC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.036320
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory opened Eva’s door and found Lucien Moreau bleeding on the landing. “Before you shut it,” he said, “check the stairs.” Blood soaked the cuff of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had come loose above one temple, and he gripped his ivory-handled cane hard enough to whiten his knuckles. Rory kept one hand on the door. The stairwell smelled of curry from the shop below and the sharp iron tang of his blood. Nobody stood on the narrow flight, but a fresh smear marked the wall beside the lower landing. “Whose?” she asked. “Mine.” “The smear?” Lucien glanced towards it. “Not all of it.” Ptolemy slipped between Rory’s ankles and stopped at the threshold. The tabby’s back rose in a stiff arch. “Eva isn’t here,” Rory said. “I know.” That landed worse than the blood. Rory had come to feed Eva’s cat and found a note under the kettle: Back soon. Don’t touch the blue notebook. She had touched it. The notebook lay open on the crowded kitchen table, between three scrolls and a chipped mug. Lucien followed her gaze into the flat. “Has she contacted you?” “Why?” “Because she took something from the Court, and the Court knows she took it.” Rory pushed the door towards him. Lucien caught its edge, then let go when she looked at his hand. “I came here to warn you,” he said. “You’ve done that before. Your warnings tend to arrive after the damage.” His black eye fixed on hers. The amber one caught the stairwell light. Two months had passed since she had seen him at Silas’s bar, standing beneath the broken sign while men in grey coats searched her flat upstairs. She had walked past him with a delivery bag in her hand. He had neither stopped her nor called her name. The week before that, he had kissed her against the wall of his office, with his cane propped by the door and both hands gentle at her waist. She had gone home carrying the taste of him. Then the Court had come looking for Aurora Carter. “What did Eva take?” Rory asked. “A deposition. Mine.” She stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold, and Rory slid all three deadbolts home behind him. Ptolemy fled beneath a stack of books. In the cramped room, Lucien looked out of place among the loose pages and the curling edges of Eva’s research notes. He left a dark drop on the floorboards. “Kitchen,” Rory said. “Sit down.” “I can stand.” “You can bleed standing. Sit down for the part where I decide whether to help.” He sat. Rory fetched Eva’s first-aid tin from beside the sink. It held plasters, dressings and a pair of scissors with one blade bent at the tip. She cut through Lucien’s sleeve. A deep slice ran along his forearm. “That needs stitches.” “Yes.” “Then why come here?” “Eva left a message at my office. She said she’d found a way to withdraw my testimony.” Rory set a dressing over the cut. Lucien flinched. She paused, her fingers a breath from his skin. “May I?” “Please.” She pressed down. His breath caught, but he held his arm still while she bound it. “Your testimony,” she said. “Tell me what you swore.” “That you told me your name of your own free will.” “I did. Over dinner.” “Yes.” “You left out the part where you took it to the Court.” “I gave it to them in exchange for Eva’s release.” Rory pulled the bandage tight. Lucien’s jaw clenched. Eva had spent four days behind a door no one could find, taken over a debt she had unearthed in one of her old books. Lucien had brought her back. Rory had thanked him. She had asked him to stay the night. “You could have told me,” she said. “The exchange would have failed if you fled before they released her.” “So you made sure I didn’t.” “I made that choice.” He did not dress it up. Rory hated how much she had wanted him to. She secured the bandage and dropped the scissors into the tin. A passing bus shook the window; one of Eva’s pinned notes lifted from the wall and settled again. “You let me go back to my flat,” Rory said. “You knew they’d come there.” “I thought I could get you out before they did.” “Silas got me out.” “I know.” “The men you sent turned his bar over. He still has a board across the window.” Lucien lowered his gaze to the table. For once, he had no neat answer waiting. Rory slid the blue notebook towards herself. Eva’s handwriting filled the page in tight columns. Among the copied terms, she had circled one sentence until the pen had torn the paper. “A witness can retract a deposition,” Rory said, “before the docket closes.” “Yes.” “Eva found this three days ago. Why did you need her to tell you?” “The Court keeps that clause out of its copies.” “Convenient.” “Entirely.” Rory read the next line. Her stomach tightened. “If the witness dies, the deposition stands.” Lucien said nothing. A small shard of glass glittered in his hair, and his wounded arm rested across Eva’s crowded table. Whoever had cut him knew the clause too. “The Court wants you dead,” she said. “Or in their custody until the docket closes.” “When?” “Midnight.” Rory turned another page. Eva had drawn a rough map of the Court’s entrance beneath a solicitor’s office off Fleet Street. Beside it, she had written two words: original seal. “Where’s the deposition?” “Eva has it. A retraction needs the original seal beside it.” “She left no address.” Lucien looked towards the door. “Then we find her.” “You came here expecting her.” “I came here because she said she’d meet me.” “And you brought whoever cut you along for the walk.” “I lost them.” Rory glanced at the smear on the stairwell wall. “You checked?” “I checked.” “You once assured me my flat was safe.” His expression tightened. He took the point without defending himself. A phone buzzed beneath a heap of papers. Rory dug hers out and read Eva’s message. I’m at the back. Open the window. Do not open the front door. A knock struck the door. Ptolemy shot out from under the books and sprang onto the table, scattering pages across Lucien’s lap. “Rory?” Eva called from the landing. “It’s me. Open up.” Rory showed Lucien the phone. He rose, drawing the thin blade from his cane. The window latch clicked behind them. Rory turned. Across the narrow gap between buildings, Eva clung to the fire escape, one hand wrapped around its rail and the other pressed to the glass. She had a leather folder tucked inside her coat. “Rory,” the voice at the front door said, “I know you can hear me.” Lucien moved between Rory and the door. At the window, Eva struck the pane with her palm. Rory grabbed the latch, but it stuck under her fingers. “Help her,” Rory said. Lucien came to the window and drove the butt of his cane against the frame. Wood splintered. Eva hauled it open, thrust the folder into Rory’s hands, then climbed inside. The first deadbolt slid back. Eva landed on the floorboards. She looked from the door to the folder in Rory’s hands. “Don’t let it touch the seal.” The second bolt snapped free. Lucien raised his blade. The third tore out of the doorframe, and something wearing Eva’s face stepped into the flat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.412
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1254
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount885
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity3.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva16
Lucien18
Moreau1
Blood1
Rory28
Silas1
Court2
Aurora1
Carter1
Fleet1
Street1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Blood"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Court"
7"Aurora"
8"Carter"
9"Ptolemy"
places
0"Fleet"
1"Street"
globalScore0
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.797
wordCount1254
matches
0"neither stopped her nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean12.42
std12.25
cv0.987
sampleLengths
012
19
229
341
43
51
62
78
818
95
102
1147
127
134
141
1514
1619
178
1812
1960
2046
216
223
233
2449
255
263
2715
282
2937
303
311
324
3317
3418
352
361
3716
389
3911
404
411
4212
4310
448
4542
467
4712
486
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences160
ratio0.006
matches
0"A passing bus shook the window; one of Eva’s pinned notes lifted from the wall and settled again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012401352874859075
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean7.84
std5.48
cv0.699
sampleLengths
012
19
28
321
47
517
617
73
81
92
104
114
1210
138
145
152
166
1716
185
194
2016
217
224
231
2414
256
2613
278
2812
296
307
3126
3212
339
3428
359
369
376
383
393
4013
417
4221
438
443
452
463
4715
482
499
56.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners55
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then the Court had come"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences90
matches
0"His platinum hair had come"
1"She had touched it."
2"His black eye fixed on"
3"She had walked past him"
4"He had neither stopped her"
5"She had gone home carrying"
6"She stepped aside."
7"He left a dark drop"
8"It held plasters, dressings and"
9"She cut through Lucien’s sleeve."
10"She paused, her fingers a"
11"She pressed down."
12"His breath caught, but he"
13"She had asked him to"
14"He did not dress it"
15"She secured the bandage and"
16"Her stomach tightened."
17"His expression tightened."
18"He took the point without"
19"I’m at the back."
ratio0.256
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences90
matches
0"Rory opened Eva’s door and"
1"Blood soaked the cuff of"
2"His platinum hair had come"
3"Rory kept one hand on"
4"The stairwell smelled of curry"
5"Nobody stood on the narrow"
6"Lucien glanced towards it."
7"Ptolemy slipped between Rory’s ankles"
8"The tabby’s back rose in"
9"That landed worse than the"
10"Rory had come to feed"
11"She had touched it."
12"The notebook lay open on"
13"Lucien followed her gaze into"
14"Rory pushed the door towards"
15"Lucien caught its edge, then"
16"His black eye fixed on"
17"The amber one caught the"
18"She had walked past him"
19"He had neither stopped her"
ratio0.867
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Whoever had cut him knew"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.412
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.9317%