Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HQNA4X8Y2HEG7WZHFKR31

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.032784
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had soaked through the paper bag before Aurora Carter got the takeaway boxes onto the counter. A dark patch spread across the bar top beneath them. “Yu-Fei packed you dumplings,” she told Silas. “And a warning about the state of your lunch habits.” Silas eased himself off the stool, favouring his left leg. His silver signet ring caught the light as he lifted the bag by its damp handles. “Which cost more?” “The warning. She gave it for free.” The door opened behind Rory. Rain rattled against the glass, and someone stepped in under the green wash of the Raven’s Nest sign. Rory heard the door shut, then the sound of a coat being shaken out. “Are you open?” Rory knew the voice before she turned. Eva stood beside the rack of umbrellas with a folded newspaper over her head. Water ran off its corners and spotted the floor. Her hair, once a copper tangle she cut with kitchen scissors, lay close against her skull. A black coat hung open over a grey shirt and a white clerical collar. Neither woman moved. Silas looked from one to the other. “We’re open. Coffee?” Eva lowered the newspaper. “Please.” Rory’s delivery jacket still had a strip of packing tape stuck to one sleeve. She peeled it off and wound it around her finger. “Eva.” Eva’s mouth opened, then closed. “Rory.” Silas set a cup beneath the machine. Steam hissed between them. Rory watched Eva look past her, taking in the maps, the photographs, the brass rail at the foot of the bar. She had never seen the place before. That much showed. “I came in because of the rain.” Eva held up the ruined newspaper, as if it could account for the years between them. “I was heading for the station.” “You missed it.” “I know.” “You always did.” Eva gave a small laugh. It stopped when Rory looked at the collar. “That’s new,” Rory said. “It’s been three years.” Rory thought of Eva at seventeen, standing outside a chapel in Cardiff with a cigarette behind her ear, arguing with the priest who had refused to let them shelter from a storm. Eva had called him a man guarding an empty building from wet children. She had been pleased with that line for a week. “Three years,” Rory repeated. Silas brought the coffee over. He set it near Eva but stayed within reach of the cup. “Rory lives upstairs,” he told her. Eva glanced at Rory. “Do you?” “Four years.” Silas took his food to the far end of the counter. He opened a box, found a fork and turned his attention to a black-and-white photograph on the wall. Eva wrapped both hands around the cup. “I didn’t know you were still in London.” “I didn’t know you weren’t.” “I moved back to Cardiff. Then Bristol. I’m here for a course.” “What sort?” “Hospital chaplaincy.” Rory pulled out the stool beside Eva but did not sit. Her legs ached from the delivery rounds. On the other side of the counter, the coffee machine clicked as it cooled. “You told me I was mad to study law,” she said. “You hated law.” “You told me anybody with a job title had given up thinking.” “I had plenty of opinions.” “You had a leaflet about breaking into vacant houses.” “It was about the housing crisis.” “It had instructions for opening a window.” Eva looked down at her coffee. Her fingernails were cut short and clean. Rory remembered them stained blue with paint, the skin around them split from turpentine. Eva had filled the margins of every schoolbook with drawings of strangers on buses. Now she wore a small watch with a cracked face and kept turning the cup until its handle faced squarely towards her. “What happened to painting?” Rory asked. “I still do some.” “You mean you own paints.” “I painted the kitchen last month.” Rory let the tape fall from her finger. It stuck to the bar. Eva pushed the cup away by an inch. “That sounded like a joke when I thought it.” “It was one.” “I know you remember it differently.” “Painting?” “Me.” Silas shut one of the takeaway boxes. He carried it into the back room without a word. The old photographs kept their places on the wall. Rory stayed standing. “I remember a phone call,” she said. “You told me to get on a train. You told me your sofa was mine for as long as I needed it.” “It was.” “For one night.” Eva pressed her thumb into a wet ring beneath the cup. “I should have come back.” Rory looked at the windows. A bus passed outside, its lit upper deck sliding across the glass. She had arrived in London at twenty with a backpack and a holdall whose wheel had broken before she got off the platform. Eva had met her there. They had bought chips on the walk home, and Rory had eaten hers with her fingers because her hands shook too much to manage the wooden fork. On the second morning, Eva had gone out and left a note beside the kettle. “I read that note so many times,” Rory said. “‘Dad’s ill. Back soon.’ Not even your number.” “I had the same number.” “You turned your phone off.” Eva pulled her hands away from the cup. “He was in surgery.” “I know that now.” “I couldn’t talk in the ward.” “You could have talked outside it. You could have sent six words from a corridor.” Eva’s eyes went to the strip of tape on the bar. She lifted one end with her nail, folded the sticky sides together and left it in front of Rory. “My father died that week,” she said. Rory took the stool at last. “I know that too.” “I went straight from the hospital to my mum’s. I kept thinking I’d call you after I’d sorted the next thing.” “There was always a next thing.” “There was.” “I was in your flat. I didn’t know anybody else in London. Evan kept calling, and every time someone came up the stairs I stood behind your front door with a chair in my hands.” Eva looked at her then. Rory had not planned to tell her about the chair. She could still feel its cheap wooden legs biting into her palms. “I’m sorry,” Eva said. Rory picked up the folded tape and pressed it against the counter. “You told me I could come.” “Yes.” “You knew why I came.” “Yes.” Outside, the rain thinned. Water dripped from the newspaper at Eva’s feet onto the tiles. Eva touched her collar, then dropped her hand. “You don’t have to forgive me.” “I wasn’t going to ask for permission.” “No. You wouldn’t.” “You sound surprised.” “I remember you asking permission to use your own money.” Rory felt the small crescent scar on her wrist rub against the edge of her sleeve. At university she had once asked Evan whether he thought she should buy a winter coat. She had owned the money, and he had never liked the coat she chose. Eva knew about that day. Rory had told her on the train out of Cardiff. “People learn,” Rory said. Eva nodded. “I can see that.” “Don’t make it sound like one of your hospital talks.” “I wasn’t.” “Then tell me something true. Why did you stop answering after the funeral?” Eva drew the cup towards her, but she didn’t drink. At the far end of the bar, Silas came out of the back room and put a clean glass on the shelf. Rory heard its base touch the wood. “I saw your messages,” Eva said. “The first few, I thought I’d answer when I got home.” “And the rest?” “I knew you were angry. I was ashamed of leaving you there, and each day I let pass made it harder to pick up the phone.” Rory looked at the coffee going cold between Eva’s hands. “I gave you a new number in March,” she said. “I know. I saved it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.173
leniency0.346
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1349
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount865
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.35
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Silas8
Rory27
Raven1
Nest1
Eva29
Cardiff2
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Raven"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1349
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean13.49
std14.63
cv1.085
sampleLengths
027
117
226
33
47
537
63
77
853
93
1010
115
1224
131
146
1542
1629
173
182
193
2013
214
224
2355
244
2517
266
276
282
2929
3015
315
3212
332
342
3532
3611
373
3812
395
409
416
427
4363
446
454
465
476
4813
4917
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"being shaken"
1"been pleased"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences158
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay close against her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012687427912341407
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011534025374855825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean8.54
std6.21
cv0.727
sampleLengths
017
110
27
310
410
516
63
77
85
918
1014
113
127
1314
149
1516
1614
173
187
193
204
211
2214
2310
241
255
261
277
284
2921
307
313
3223
336
343
352
363
375
388
394
404
4132
4213
4310
444
455
4612
476
484
492
42.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.27848101265822783
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences79
matches
0"she told Silas"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"Her hair, once a copper"
3"She peeled it off and"
4"She had never seen the"
5"It stopped when Rory looked"
6"She had been pleased with"
7"He set it near Eva"
8"he told her"
9"He opened a box, found"
10"Her legs ached from the"
11"Her fingernails were cut short"
12"It stuck to the bar."
13"He carried it into the"
14"She had arrived in London"
15"They had bought chips on"
16"She lifted one end with"
17"She could still feel its"
18"She had owned the money,"
ratio0.241
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences79
matches
0"Rain had soaked through the"
1"A dark patch spread across"
2"she told Silas"
3"Silas eased himself off the"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"The door opened behind Rory."
6"Rain rattled against the glass,"
7"Rory heard the door shut,"
8"Rory knew the voice before"
9"Eva stood beside the rack"
10"Water ran off its corners"
11"Her hair, once a copper"
12"A black coat hung open"
13"Neither woman moved."
14"Silas looked from one to"
15"Eva lowered the newspaper."
16"Rory’s delivery jacket still had"
17"She peeled it off and"
18"Eva’s mouth opened, then closed."
19"Silas set a cup beneath"
ratio0.924
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now she wore a small"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory thought of Eva at seventeen, standing outside a chapel in Cardiff with a cigarette behind her ear, arguing with the priest who had refused to let them shel…"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva held up, as if it could account for the years between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.321
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.025
86.2178%