Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HT0VCAFSJH11CWZES1N78

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42.4s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened the door with the chain still on. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, one hand braced against the frame, the other wrapped around the ivory handle of his cane. Blood had soaked through his charcoal suit at the shoulder. “Three locks,” he said. “Eva has excellent instincts. Unfortunately, she left you with only one chain.” Aurora kept her hand on the door. “She left me her cat, too. He bites.” “Then we have something in common.” A heavy tread sounded on the stairs below. Lucien’s gaze shifted past her, towards the cramped hall of Eva’s flat. “Rory. Open it.” She hated that he still used that name as though he had earned it. She slid the chain free. Lucien crossed the threshold, caught the door with his foot and pressed it shut without a sound. Aurora turned all three deadbolts. The first clicked. At the second, he reached past her and cut the hall light. Darkness swallowed his face. Not his scent. Expensive soap, tobacco and the copper tang rising from his coat. Ptolemy hissed from beneath a tower of books. “Who’s on the stairs?” she asked. “A man who believes I have something that belongs to him.” “And do you?” Lucien took his hand off the door. Even in the dark, she caught the pale flash of his hair as he turned towards her. “No.” A knock struck the wood. Three polite taps. “Mr Moreau,” called a voice from the landing. “Your cabbie says you came in here.” Aurora touched Lucien’s uninjured arm and pointed towards Eva’s bedroom. He shook his head. Blood dripped from his cuff onto the floorboards. “You’ve got the wrong flat,” she called. “Sorry to disturb you, miss. May I ask if you’ve seen a gentleman with light hair?” “Half of Shoreditch has light hair. Ask at a salon.” The man gave a soft laugh. His shoes stayed outside the door. Lucien pulled a slim blade from his cane. Aurora caught his wrist before he could lift it. “Not in Eva’s flat,” she breathed. He looked down at her fingers. Six weeks ago, those fingers had closed around his lapel in a car outside her building. She had kissed him first. He had kissed her back until her pulse beat against his mouth, then told her that he had made a mistake. She let go. The footsteps retreated. One flight, then silence. Lucien eased away from the door. His knees buckled before he reached the sitting room. Aurora got under his good arm and steered him past Eva’s crowded shelves. Scrolls lay across the sofa. She swept them onto a chair and sat him down. “You’re bleeding on a seventeenth-century translation.” “I shall send Eva a cheque.” “You’ll send her an apology.” “If the man outside permits it.” Aurora pulled off his coat. A narrow cut ran across his shoulder and vanished beneath his shirt collar. The cloth had stuck to the wound. When she peeled it back, Lucien gripped the sofa hard enough to make the frame creak. “That wasn’t a knife.” “No.” She looked at the blood darkening her hands. “You came here because Eva knows how to deal with this sort of thing.” “I came because Eva was out.” “That makes no sense.” “It made sense to him.” The third deadbolt rattled. Aurora froze. It rattled again, slower this time, while a thin metal point scratched inside the keyhole. Ptolemy shot under the kitchen table. Aurora crossed to Eva’s desk and dragged open the top drawer. Pens, sealing wax, a dried sprig of rosemary. Under a notebook lay the little iron key Eva had made her promise not to touch. “She said that thing could take someone’s fingers off.” “She undersold it,” Lucien said. Aurora carried the key to the door. Its teeth bore tiny marks that caught against her skin. “Where?” “Under the middle lock. There’s a hole in the frame.” She found it by touch and pushed the key in. The metal warmed against her palm. On the other side of the door, the scratching stopped. A wet sound followed, like a tongue dragged over glass. The man outside shouted. His shoes hammered down the stairs. Aurora pulled the key free. A bead of black liquid clung to its tip. She held it away from her clothes. “Eva could have mentioned that.” Lucien gave her a thin smile. “She dislikes spoiling surprises.” “Save your breath. I need to see how deep that cut goes.” She fetched a basin and a clean tea towel from the kitchen. Books covered the worktop beside the kettle; one lay open beneath a packet of cat treats. Eva had scribbled notes in three colours across its margins. Aurora cleared enough space to fill the basin, then found a pair of scissors. Lucien watched her cut his shirt away from the wound. The blade had sliced across his shoulder, close to the neck. Beneath the blood, a fine black line marked the edge of the cut. Aurora touched the skin beside it. Heat struck her fingertips. “That’s spreading.” “Yes.” “What did he use?” “Avaros iron. My father’s people took great pleasure in giving things dramatic names. They made an exception for that.” She pressed the damp cloth to his shoulder. He drew a sharp breath through his teeth. “Your father’s people?” “Demons.” “Right.” She wrung the cloth into the basin. Red threaded through the water. “I’d have guessed bankers.” Lucien laughed once, then stopped. He reached for the cane she had set beside the sofa. “Leave that alone.” “He may come back.” “You can barely sit upright.” “That has never stopped me from being unpleasant.” Aurora rinsed the cloth again. His hand remained on the cane. She pushed his fingers aside so she could clean the rest of the wound. “You told me staying near you would put me in danger.” “It would.” “And then you came to my door with a man chasing you.” “Yes.” “Six weeks, Lucien. Not a word. You could have gone anywhere in London.” His jaw tightened. “I know.” “You could at least look at me when you say it.” He did. One eye amber, the other black, both fixed on her face. Aurora pressed the cloth harder than she meant to. He flinched, but he did not look away. “I saw Evan outside Silas’s bar,” he said. Her hand stilled. “When?” “Yesterday. He asked the barman for you. Silas sent him away.” “You could have told me.” “I intended to.” “That’s becoming a habit with you.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to the crescent scar on her left wrist. She pulled her hand back before he could touch it. “He followed someone else after Silas turned him out,” Lucien said. “The man on the stairs. I followed them both.” Aurora stood. The basin rocked on the edge of the table. “Evan knows him?” “I heard your name. I heard Eva’s address.” She gripped the back of a chair. The wood dug into her palm. Evan had last sent her a message three months ago, a photograph of the street outside the Golden Empress. She had changed her route home. She had not changed her number. She refused to give him that, too. “You should have gone to Silas,” she said. “I did. He told me you were here.” “So you brought the man straight to us.” “I lost him twice. He found me again after he cut me.” Aurora looked at the wound. The black line had crept another inch towards his throat. His skin had taken on a grey cast. “Tell me how to stop it.” “Eva has a book on her shelf. Red spine. The title is written in Latin.” “That narrows it down to about forty.” “Find the one she keeps upside down.” Aurora searched the shelves while Lucien told her what the title meant. Eva’s books crowded one another in crooked rows; scraps of paper bristled between them, and Ptolemy had left fur along the bottom shelf. Aurora found the inverted book behind a chipped mug full of pencils. Inside the front cover, Eva had written, DO NOT USE SALT ON A WOUND. Underneath: ASK BEFORE DRAWING BLOOD. Aurora carried it back. Lucien read the page she opened, then reached for the scissors. “What does it need?” she asked. “Blood from the person who closes the wound.” “How much?” “Less than Eva would object to.” “That’s not a measure.” “One drop. But it will leave a mark.” Aurora held out her hand. He took it, then hesitated with the scissors poised above her thumb. “I never should have said it was a mistake.” She stared at him. “Your timing is appalling.” “I wished to tell you while you could still refuse me.” “Refuse what?” “My blood. My troubles. This.” His thumb rested against the inside of her wrist, clear of the scar. “I meant to make it easier for you to walk away. Instead, I made you think I wanted to.” The middle lock clicked. Aurora snatched her hand back. A second click followed, then the third. The deadbolts slid free one after another while the iron key lay on Eva’s desk. Lucien rose too fast and caught the arm of the sofa. Aurora picked up his cane and drew the blade. Its weight settled into her hand. The door opened a few inches. A woman’s voice came through the gap. “Rory? It’s me.” Eva shoved the door wider. Ptolemy burst from under the table and ran to her. Blood streaked one side of her face, and she carried a torn coat over her arm. Someone stepped onto the landing behind her. Evan smiled past Eva’s shoulder. “Found her,” he said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.289
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1615
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1615
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1096
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora23
Eva11
Lucien17
Red1
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy4
Blood3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Blood"
places
0"Red"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.451
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1615
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std11.82
cv0.915
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38
46
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63
719
837
918
108
116
1211
133
1424
151
168
1715
1822
197
2016
2110
2212
2317
246
2548
263
277
2843
296
306
315
326
3341
344
351
3622
376
384
395
406
4115
4241
439
445
4517
461
4710
4826
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences206
ratio0.01
matches
0"Books covered the worktop beside the kettle; one lay open beneath a packet of cat treats."
1"Eva’s books crowded one another in crooked rows; scraps of paper bristled between them, and Ptolemy had left fur along the bottom shelf."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1096
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.020985401459854013
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean7.84
std4.39
cv0.56
sampleLengths
09
122
210
34
412
57
68
76
88
912
103
1114
125
1317
145
153
1612
174
183
1911
208
216
2211
233
247
2517
261
275
283
298
307
3110
324
338
347
3516
3610
376
386
398
409
416
426
4316
445
4521
463
473
484
496
49.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3106796116504854
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners64
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences123
matches
0"She hated that he still"
1"She slid the chain free."
2"He shook his head."
3"His shoes stayed outside the"
4"He looked down at her"
5"She had kissed him first."
6"He had kissed her back"
7"She let go."
8"His knees buckled before he"
9"She swept them onto a"
10"She looked at the blood"
11"It rattled again, slower this"
12"Its teeth bore tiny marks"
13"She found it by touch"
14"His shoes hammered down the"
15"She held it away from"
16"She fetched a basin and"
17"She pressed the damp cloth"
18"He drew a sharp breath"
19"She wrung the cloth into"
ratio0.293
29.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences123
matches
0"Aurora opened the door with"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Blood had soaked through his"
3"Aurora kept her hand on"
4"A heavy tread sounded on"
5"Lucien’s gaze shifted past her,"
6"She hated that he still"
7"She slid the chain free."
8"Lucien crossed the threshold, caught"
9"Aurora turned all three deadbolts."
10"The first clicked."
11"Darkness swallowed his face."
12"Ptolemy hissed from beneath a"
13"Lucien took his hand off"
14"A knock struck the wood."
15"Aurora touched Lucien’s uninjured arm"
16"He shook his head."
17"Blood dripped from his cuff"
18"The man gave a soft"
19"His shoes stayed outside the"
ratio0.862
40.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Even in the dark, she"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Its teeth bore tiny marks that caught against her skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.024
88.4094%