Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HTG0FW8SZJYEB64C7ZTXF

Run Details

Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.025067
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear hung between two oaks at the edge of Isolde’s grove. From the path, it looked like a strip of summer heat caught upright in the cold air. Through it, Aurora saw branches heavy with fruit beneath an amber sky. “That isn’t Richmond Park.” “No.” Nyx stood beside the tear, their violet eyes fixed on the trees beyond it. “Keep your hand out until I’ve checked the edge.” They passed an arm through. Shadow stretched across the opening, thinned to a thread, then drew back into the shape of fingers. Aurora gripped the Heartstone pendant at her throat. Its crimson centre pressed warmth into her palm. Isolde swept her silver hair over one shoulder. “Where the boundary frays, one world may taste another.” “Does it taste us back?” Isolde met Aurora’s eyes. “You stand close enough to ask.” Aurora pulled the moonsilver dagger from its sheath. The blade chilled her fingers through the hilt. She parted the leaves beneath the tear and stepped through. Warmth closed around her. The air smelled of split figs, wet soil and bread fresh from an oven. A pale path ran between orchard trees whose trunks rose in graceful twists, wider than any oak in the park. Lantern-sized fruit hung among leaves that shifted from green to copper when she moved. Above the canopy, the sky glowed a steady amber, with no sun she could find. Nyx emerged at her side, followed by Isolde. The tear shivered behind them between two rows of vines. Aurora looked back through it. Richmond’s bare branches crossed a grey afternoon. One dead leaf drifted towards the opening, touched it, and burst into a scatter of gold dust. “Dymas?” she asked. Isolde watched the dust settle on the path. “A table with more places than its guests can fill.” “That’s a yes.” Aurora tucked the blade close to her wrist. Something chimed deeper in the orchard. Not metal. The sound carried through the ground, up through the soles of her boots, and into her teeth. Nyx glanced down. “Roots.” “Can they feel us?” Nyx lowered a hand to the soil. Their fingers sank into the shade beneath a vine. A pulse passed through the path; fruit swayed overhead though the air stayed still. “They noticed.” They followed the path. Flowers grew thick along its edges, each one cupping a bead of liquid that reflected a different sky. Aurora saw blue noon in one, a night crowded with stars in the next. She bent towards a third and caught the scent of her mother’s kitchen in Cardiff: toast under the grill, tea steeping too long. Her stomach tightened. “Rory.” Nyx’s voice reached her from several steps ahead. “Don’t lean over those.” Aurora straightened. The scent faded. Beneath the flower, something small moved under the soil, following the line of her shadow. “Why did it smell like home?” Isolde knelt without leaving a mark on the soft path. She touched neither flower nor liquid. “An open mouth offers what it hopes you’ll put inside.” Aurora stepped away from the flower bed. At the end of the path, the orchard opened onto terraces cut into a hillside. Stone channels carried streams the colour of clear honey past herbs with blue stems and leaves shaped like fish tails. Shallow basins stood at each junction. In one, tiny silver seeds spun against the current, circling an empty space at the centre. Beyond the terraces, columns rose from the earth. Roots embraced them from base to crown, holding up a roof of woven branches. Aurora could see tables beneath it, long enough to seat hundreds. A knife struck a board. Another answered. The sound came from beyond the roof, precise as a clockwork mechanism. “We’re not alone,” Aurora murmured. Nyx tilted their head. “Eight knives. One voice.” As they crossed the first terrace, a vine curled around Aurora’s boot. She stopped. It tightened, no thicker than a shoelace but strong enough to pull her heel against the stone. “Hold still.” Nyx crouched and let their hand lose its shape. Shadow poured along the groove beside the vine. It recoiled from them and released her. From the columned hall came a sharp human voice. “Leave the vines alone if you want them to leave you alone.” A man in a white apron stood at the far end of the terrace. He held a chopping knife in one hand and a bunch of purple herbs in the other. Flour coated his forearms. Under it, black writing circled his left wrist in cramped lines. Aurora kept the dagger lowered. “It caught my boot.” “You crossed a feeding channel.” He pointed with the herbs to a thin groove in the stone. “Walk between them.” Isolde stepped across the channel. “Where bread has hands, whose oven burns?” The man studied her, then Nyx. His grip on the knife shifted. “Kitchen’s over there. If you’ve come for the competition, take a number from the steward. If you’ve come to gawp, stay off my beds.” “We’ve just arrived,” Aurora told him. “Then you’ve got no number.” He turned towards the hall. “Don’t pick anything. The judges notice missing fruit.” “What’s growing in that basin?” Aurora asked. He glanced back at the spinning seeds. “Salt pears. They need running water until the shells crack.” Aurora looked from the seeds to the branches above the terraces. “Pears?” “You’ll know one when you see one.” His mouth twitched. “Keep to the paths.” He vanished between the columns. His knife resumed its measured beat. Nyx watched the empty space where the man had stood. “The writing on his wrist moved.” Aurora had seen it too. A word had slipped beneath the apron cuff while the man pointed at the channel. “A contract?” “Ink with a pulse,” Nyx answered. They crossed between the channels. The Heartstone warmed against Aurora’s chest as they approached the hall. She stopped under the first arch and drew the pendant out. Its deep crimson caught the amber light; a faint glow stirred inside it. “There’s another opening here.” Isolde looked past the rows of tables. “A house of feasts needs more than one door.” The hall held no diners. Platters lined its tables: translucent slices of fruit, little towers of green pastry, bowls of broth whose surfaces rose and fell like breathing chests. At every place sat a cup carved from dark wood. The cups were empty, yet each cast a shadow shaped like a different vessel—goblet, jug, shallow dish. Aurora leaned over one platter. A pale fruit lay split into six sections, exposing seeds that gave off a low, sweet hum. The sound caught in her throat and made her think of music through the wall of Silas’ bar. “No tasting,” Nyx reminded her. “I know.” She leaned closer to see the seeds. Beneath the fruit lay a plate painted with a map. Orchards, terraces and the long hall spread across its surface in fine blue lines. The path they had taken appeared as a narrow curl between trees. Three marks, no bigger than crumbs, sat under the first arch. Aurora moved her hand across the plate. One mark slid. She drew back. It stopped. “Isolde. Look.” Isolde bent beside her. Nyx crossed behind them, and the darkest mark travelled along the painted hall. “It shows us,” Aurora said. “Then let it show you where you stand.” Isolde pointed to a narrow blue line beyond the last table. The line ended at a round chamber behind the kitchens. In its centre, the painter had left a circle bare of colour. Aurora turned the plate a fraction. The hum from the fruit changed pitch. On the painted map, the bare circle remained fixed while the rest of the hall shifted around it. Nyx placed a hand above the plate, careful not to touch the food. Their shadow spread over the little chamber. For a moment, Aurora saw a door drawn there in silver lines, fitted into the blank circle. She lifted the plate towards the amber light. The silver vanished. Nyx lowered their hand, and the door returned beneath its shadow. “Can you see it?” Aurora asked. Nyx nodded. “There’s a latch on this side.” Aurora studied the tiny silver mark. Then she looked down the length of the real hall, past its empty cups and humming platters, towards the kitchens where the knives kept time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"chilled"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chilled"
2"pulse"
3"stomach"
4"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1394
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1157
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Isolde10
Aurora25
Heartstone2
Cardiff1
Nyx15
Shadow2
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
4"Shadow"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.42
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a strip of summer heat caught"
56.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.435
wordCount1394
matches
0"neither flower nor"
1"no thicker than a shoelace but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.36
std14.88
cv0.769
sampleLengths
041
14
224
322
416
517
65
710
826
967
1018
1129
123
1318
1411
1525
164
174
1830
192
2059
213
2213
2320
246
2526
267
2757
2833
2919
305
318
3231
3326
3421
3546
369
3720
3812
3912
4024
416
4218
437
4417
4512
4614
4711
4816
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
87.20% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences154
ratio0.019
matches
0"A pulse passed through the path; fruit swayed overhead though the air stayed still."
1"Its deep crimson caught the amber light; a faint glow stirred inside it."
2"The cups were empty, yet each cast a shadow shaped like a different vessel—goblet, jug, shallow dish."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016251354279523293
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean9.05
std5.28
cv0.583
sampleLengths
012
117
212
34
415
59
65
717
88
98
108
119
125
134
146
158
168
1710
184
1914
2020
2114
2215
238
2410
255
267
2717
283
298
3010
3111
326
332
3417
353
361
374
387
399
4014
412
424
4318
4414
4523
463
479
484
492
68.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42207792207792205
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners65
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then she looked down the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences114
matches
0"They passed an arm through."
1"Its crimson centre pressed warmth"
2"She parted the leaves beneath"
3"Their fingers sank into the"
4"They followed the path."
5"She bent towards a third"
6"Her stomach tightened."
7"She touched neither flower nor"
8"It tightened, no thicker than"
9"It recoiled from them and"
10"He held a chopping knife"
11"He pointed with the herbs"
12"His grip on the knife"
13"He turned towards the hall"
14"He glanced back at the"
15"His mouth twitched"
16"He vanished between the columns."
17"His knife resumed its measured"
18"They crossed between the channels."
19"She stopped under the first"
ratio0.219
52.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences114
matches
0"The tear hung between two"
1"Nyx stood beside the tear,"
2"They passed an arm through."
3"Shadow stretched across the opening,"
4"Aurora gripped the Heartstone pendant"
5"Its crimson centre pressed warmth"
6"Isolde swept her silver hair"
7"Isolde met Aurora’s eyes."
8"Aurora pulled the moonsilver dagger"
9"The blade chilled her fingers"
10"She parted the leaves beneath"
11"Warmth closed around her."
12"The air smelled of split"
13"A pale path ran between"
14"Nyx emerged at her side,"
15"The tear shivered behind them"
16"Aurora looked back through it."
17"Richmond’s bare branches crossed a"
18"Isolde watched the dust settle"
19"Aurora tucked the blade close"
ratio0.816
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lantern-sized fruit hung among leaves that shifted from green to copper when she moved."
1"Flowers grew thick along its edges, each one cupping a bead of liquid that reflected a different sky."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx stood, their violet eyes fixed on the trees beyond it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.044
86.9188%