Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HV860WHXRPP4AKXWJCGCA

Run Details

Duration:
52.7s
Cost:
$0.031884
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened Eva’s door with the third deadbolt still in her hand. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair held its shape except for one strand stuck to his forehead. He looked at her left wrist, at the crescent scar exposed beneath her rolled sleeve, then raised his eyes to her face. Neither of them moved. From the curry house below came the clang of a dropped pan and a burst of laughter. Aurora tightened her grip on the bolt. “Eva’s out.” “I came to see you.” “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “No.” Lucien held up a narrow envelope, creased across its middle. “We need to talk.” “You had six weeks.” The amber eye caught the landing light. The black one gave nothing back. “I did.” “That wasn’t an invitation to agree with me.” Ptolemy squeezed between Aurora’s ankles and planted himself on the threshold. Lucien glanced down. “Hello, Ptolemy.” The tabby sniffed the toe of his polished shoe, then looked up at Aurora as if she ought to account for this visitor. “Traitor.” She bent to lift the cat. Ptolemy dug his claws into her cardigan, and Lucien took one step towards them. Aurora straightened. “Don’t.” He stopped. His hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane. She looked past him, down the narrow stairs. “Did someone follow you?” “No.” “Is that your professional answer, or the truth?” “It’s both.” She wanted to close the door. The envelope stopped her. Its corner bore a smear of black wax, marked with a symbol she recognised from Eva’s notes: a circle crossed by three hooked lines. “Where did you get that?” “Inside an empty flower box on your window ledge.” Aurora shifted Ptolemy to one arm. “My flat?” “Yes.” “Who put it there?” “I’d rather not explain on Eva’s landing.” She stepped back. “You get five minutes.” Lucien entered without brushing against her. That took care, given the narrow doorway, and she resented noticing it. She shut the door, drove home all three bolts, then turned to find him examining the room. Books lay open across the sofa. Research notes covered the coffee table, the floor beside it, even the radiator. Eva had left a mug balanced on an atlas and three fountain pens tucked into a chipped vase. “Don’t touch anything,” Aurora told him. “I remember Eva’s rules.” “You remembered mine?” His gaze returned to her. “Every one.” Aurora set Ptolemy down. The cat marched to Lucien and rubbed his flank against the cane. “Your five minutes have started.” Lucien placed the envelope on a clear patch of table no wider than his palm. Aurora stayed where she was. “It has your name on it,” he told her. “I can see that.” The handwriting curled across the front in thick black strokes. A. Carter. No address. “Open it,” Lucien urged. “You found it. You open it.” “I already checked for a mechanism.” “Then you know what’s inside.” “I know what I saw.” She picked it up by the edges. The wax broke under her thumb. Inside lay a single photograph, folded once. She opened it. Her stomach contracted. The picture showed her outside the Golden Empress, delivery bag over one shoulder, turning towards the street. Someone had circled her left wrist in red ink. Beneath the image, in the same curling hand as the envelope, were four words: Ask him what happened. Aurora laid the photograph on the table. “What happened to my wrist? I broke a greenhouse window when I was nine.” Lucien didn’t look at the photograph. “I don’t think they mean the scar.” “Then enlighten me.” “I can’t. Not from that.” She gave a short laugh. “You came all the way to Brick Lane to tell me you can’t explain a note?” “I came because whoever took that photograph watched you at work. I wanted you to know.” “You could have called.” “You blocked my number.” “You could have given it to Eva.” “Eva would have told me to bring it here.” “She might have shut the door in your face first.” “I counted on that.” Aurora studied him. Water dripped from the hem of his coat onto a stack of newspapers. He shifted his cane away before the handle caught a hanging scroll, careful in Eva’s crowded room. She remembered that care. He’d once carried a bowl of hot soup across her flat while she lay feverish on the sofa, stepping around her shoes and pretending not to see the state of the place. She put the photograph down beside the envelope. “Who took it?” “I don’t know yet.” “There’s a first time.” His mouth tightened. “There are more than you think.” “Were you followed here?” “I checked twice.” “That’s not what I asked.” “No. I wasn’t followed.” He took off his wet coat and held it, uncertain where to put it. Aurora pointed at a hook by the door. The first had Eva’s canvas bag on it; the second held a string of drying herbs. He used the third. “You’re still standing,” she told him. “Sit, if you’re going to make a habit of it.” Lucien looked at the sofa, where three open books lay beneath a blanket of loose paper. “Where?” Aurora moved the books to the floor. A receipt slipped out from between the pages, and she caught sight of her own handwriting on it: ask L about gate. She folded it into the book before he could see. He sat on the sofa’s edge. Ptolemy jumped up beside him and began washing one paw. Aurora stayed beside the table. “The note says to ask you what happened.” “It does.” “So let’s ask. What happened?” “When?” “That night at Silas’s.” Lucien rested both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. His thumb covered the join that concealed the blade. “You told me not to come back.” “After you left without a word.” “I had to meet someone.” “You told me that the next morning. You left out the part where you paid him to find Evan.” Lucien’s hands went still. Downstairs, the pan clattered again. “I paid him to find out whether Evan knew where you lived,” he answered. “He did find me. In the bar. With you watching the door.” “I was watching for the man I’d hired.” “And when Evan came in, you took him outside. You wouldn’t let me speak to him.” “He’d been drinking. I heard him threaten you.” “You heard me tell him to get out.” “I did.” “Then why did you put your arm around me in front of him?” Lucien lifted his gaze to hers. “I wanted him to see you weren’t alone.” “He already saw me standing next to you.” “Yes.” The admission landed between them. Aurora folded her arms, then uncrossed them when her fingers found the scar on her wrist. “I spent that whole night wondering whether you’d kissed me because you wanted to,” she said, “or because Evan was across the street.” Lucien drew in a breath. “I didn’t know Evan was there when I kissed you.” “You spotted him moments later.” “I spotted him when we came out of the bar. You were laughing at the terrible song Silas had put on.” His grip shifted on the cane. “I looked up. Evan stood beside the cash machine.” Aurora remembered the cold against her cheeks, the warmth of Lucien’s hand at the back of her neck. She remembered pulling away when his phone rang, and his face closing as he read the screen. “You could have told me,” she said. “I should have.” “You let me work it out from a receipt you left on my kitchen counter. Payment for an address check. My address.” “I asked the man to find Evan’s address.” “The receipt had mine on it.” “I needed to make certain he hadn’t learned it.” “You used my name and my flat number. You didn’t ask me.” “No.” “I went to Cardiff to get away from him. I came back and found you’d handed a stranger the door he’d need.” “I gave it to someone I trusted.” “I didn’t trust him. I didn’t even know he existed.” Lucien looked down. Ptolemy pressed his head against Lucien’s knee, requesting attention. After a moment, Lucien rubbed between the cat’s ears. “I was wrong,” he told her. “Not because the man betrayed me. He didn’t. I was wrong to decide for you.” Aurora pulled out a chair. One of Eva’s books occupied the seat; she moved it to the floor and sat. “You said I was safer not knowing.” “I did.” “You sounded so much like Evan that I couldn’t bear another word from you.” Lucien’s hand left Ptolemy’s head. The cat nudged it, indignant. “I know,” he told her. “No, you don’t. I told you to leave, and you did. That was the one thing I asked for that night, and the one thing you gave me.” She rubbed a thumb over the edge of the photograph. “I kept waiting for you to argue.” “You’d told me to go.” “I know what I told you.” “Rory—” “Don’t use that to make this easier.” “I wasn’t.” She looked at him. He had spoken softly, but his hands had closed around the cane. “What were you going to say?” “That I came back the next morning. I got as far as Silas’s door. I saw you through the window.” He stopped, then continued. “You were having breakfast with Eva. You smiled at something she’d said. I stayed outside.” “I saw you.” Lucien’s head rose. “Eva did too. She asked if she should fetch you. I told her to let you go.” “Then you knew—” “That you’d come back? Yes. I didn’t know what I would say if you came upstairs.” Lucien let go of the cane and leaned forward. The gap between them remained crowded with books and Eva’s notes. “I would have listened.” “You can do that now.” “I am.” Aurora looked down at the photograph. The red circle enclosed the scar and part of the delivery bag strap. The picture had been taken close enough for the photographer to catch the tiny burn on her thumb from a takeaway container. “I need you to tell me when someone watches me,” she said. “Even if you think you can fix it before I find out.” “I will.” “And don’t hire anyone to look into me. Ask.” “I will.” She turned the photograph over. Blank. “I haven’t agreed to let you fix this.” “I know. I can tell you what the seal means, if you want to hear it.” She nodded. Lucien reached for the envelope, then checked her face before picking it up. “I’ve seen that mark on documents sold through a broker in Whitechapel. People use him when they want the recipient to pay attention.” “Does he know who sent it?” “He might.” “And the message?” Lucien looked at the words beneath the picture. “It could be aimed at both of us. At what I kept from you.” Aurora watched him set the envelope back on the table. “Do you know anything else about my wrist?” “No.” “Good. That’s one answer I can cross off.” She rose and went to the cramped kitchenette. “Tea?” Lucien blinked. “Yes. Thank you.” “It’s Eva’s. If you complain about the leaves, I’ll hand you the box and let you find a better one in this mess.” “I wouldn’t dare.” Aurora filled the kettle. Her hands steadied around it. Behind her, the sofa creaked as Lucien shifted, and Ptolemy gave a sharp meow at the interruption. “There’s something else,” Aurora told him. “I’m listening.” She turned. Lucien sat with the cat across his lap now, one hand supporting its striped body. He looked ridiculous in his immaculate suit with Ptolemy’s fur gathering at his cuffs. “That kiss,” she said. “I wanted it.” His fingers paused in the cat’s fur. “I wanted it before we went outside,” she continued. “I wanted it while you were arguing with Silas about whether a demon could get drunk on his cheap gin. I wanted it when you came into the Golden Empress that afternoon and pretended you’d crossed half of London for noodles.” “The noodles were good.” “You ordered the same dish three times in a week.” “It was excellent.” She leaned against the counter. “You could have asked me to dinner.” “I thought I had.” “You asked whether I’d eaten.” “You told me you hadn’t.” “Then you bought two cartons and took yours home.” “I thought you wanted me to leave.” “I didn’t. Not that day.” Lucien looked at her over Ptolemy’s ears. “I wanted to stay.” The kettle began to rumble. Aurora faced it, set two mugs on the counter and searched through Eva’s tins until she found the tea. Lucien didn’t fill the silence. She heard Ptolemy purring from across the room. When she carried the mugs over, Lucien put the cat down and cleared a space on the table. He took one cup from her. Their fingers touched. Aurora kept hold of the handle for a breath, then released it. “Thank you,” he told her. “You haven’t tasted it.” “I wasn’t thanking you for the tea.” Aurora sat opposite him. “I’m still angry with you.” “I know.” “I don’t know what to do with the rest.” “You don’t have to decide tonight.” She took a drink. Eva had bought strong tea; it needed milk, but Aurora stayed where she was. Lucien held his untouched mug between his hands. His coat dripped once more by the door. “You can stay while we work out who sent that,” she said. “Then you can walk me back to Silas’s.” “I’d like that.” “And Lucien?” “Yes?” “If you find something you think I won’t want to hear, tell me anyway.” He set his mug down and met her eyes. “I will.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stopped then [then]"
dialogueSentences166
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.012
97.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2323
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2323
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences142
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences288
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2323
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions49
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1180
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva9
Moreau1
Aurora25
Ptolemy11
Lucien30
Golden1
Empress1
Ask1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.229
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2323
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences288
matches
0"remembered that care"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs193
mean12.04
std12.08
cv1.004
sampleLengths
012
150
24
324
42
55
65
715
84
913
102
118
1214
132
1423
1521
163
1712
1812
191
208
212
2234
235
249
258
261
274
287
297
3072
316
324
333
347
3516
365
3720
389
394
4014
414
426
436
445
455
4623
473
4844
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"been taken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences288
ratio0.01
matches
0"The first had Eva’s canvas bag on it; the second held a string of drying herbs."
1"One of Eva’s books occupied the seat; she moved it to the floor and sat."
2"Eva had bought strong tea; it needed milk, but Aurora stayed where she was."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1180
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.020338983050847456
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000847457627118644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences288
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences288
mean8.07
std6.21
cv0.769
sampleLengths
012
114
214
322
44
517
67
72
85
95
1011
114
124
137
146
152
168
1711
183
192
2023
217
2214
232
241
252
2610
278
284
291
308
312
326
334
3424
355
369
376
382
391
404
417
423
434
446
4512
4617
476
4813
4918
45.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.21180555555555555
totalSentences288
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences125
matches
0"His platinum hair held its"
1"He looked at her left"
2"She bent to lift the"
3"His hand rested on the"
4"She looked past him, down"
5"She wanted to close the"
6"Its corner bore a smear"
7"She stepped back."
8"She shut the door, drove"
9"His gaze returned to her."
10"he told her"
11"She picked it up by"
12"She opened it."
13"Her stomach contracted."
14"She gave a short laugh."
15"He shifted his cane away"
16"She remembered that care."
17"He’d once carried a bowl"
18"She put the photograph down"
19"His mouth tightened."
ratio0.376
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences125
matches
0"Aurora opened Eva’s door with"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His platinum hair held its"
3"He looked at her left"
4"Neither of them moved."
5"Aurora tightened her grip on"
6"Lucien held up a narrow"
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"The black one gave nothing"
9"Ptolemy squeezed between Aurora’s ankles"
10"Lucien glanced down."
11"The tabby sniffed the toe"
12"She bent to lift the"
13"Ptolemy dug his claws into"
14"His hand rested on the"
15"She looked past him, down"
16"She wanted to close the"
17"The envelope stopped her."
18"Its corner bore a smear"
19"Aurora shifted Ptolemy to one"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien urged (urge)"
1"she continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences166
tagDensity0.09
leniency0.181
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.024
83.5492%