Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HX4T2E9J02DG0JRGMFH0Q

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Duration:
44.1s
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$0.026706
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OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back, and Eva’s door opened just far enough for Aurora to see Lucien Moreau standing in the hall. For one stupid second, she noticed his tie. Dark green silk, neatly knotted against a charcoal suit. Then she noticed the blood on his cuff. “No,” she said. His amber eye narrowed. The black one gave nothing away. “Good evening to you, too.” “You don’t get to come here.” “I know.” He shifted his weight onto the ivory handle of his cane. It was such a small movement she might have missed it if she hadn’t once made a habit of watching him. “May I come in anyway?” From the kitchen, Eva called, “Rory? Who is it?” Lucien looked past her, not quite into the flat. He could have answered for himself. Instead he waited. Rory hated that she still knew the difference between his manners and his restraint. “Someone you don’t want bleeding on your stairs,” she called back, and opened the door. Lucien stepped inside. Ptolemy, who had been winding around Rory’s ankles, took one look at him and vanished beneath the sofa. The flat smelled of curry rising through the floorboards and the cold tea Eva had forgotten on the table. Books and scrolls crowded every surface. Rory had cleared a space among them that afternoon for a plate of toast; Eva had since covered it with notes. Eva emerged from the kitchen holding a dish towel. Her eyes went to Lucien’s cuff. “What happened?” “An unfortunate disagreement.” “With what?” “A knife.” “Sit down,” Eva said. “I don’t intend to impose.” “You already have,” Rory said. “Sit.” He took the chair nearest the door. Of course he did. Even hurt, Lucien placed himself where he could leave quickly or stop someone else coming in. Rory shut the door and set all three deadbolts. The top one stuck; she had to shove it home with the heel of her hand. When she turned, Lucien was watching her. “You’re at Eva’s,” he said. “I am.” “I went to your flat first.” The words landed before she could stop them. She had spent the last week wondering whether he knew where she was, whether he cared to find out. Now he had been to the flat above Silas’ bar, had climbed those stairs and found her gone. Eva returned with a metal first-aid box and set it on the table. “I’ll get clean towels.” Rory looked at her. Eva looked back, taking in more than Rory wanted her to. Then she went into the bedroom and pulled the door nearly closed behind her. Lucien laid his cane across his knees. Blood had seeped through the cuff of his right sleeve and dried along the edge of his palm. Rory took the chair opposite him, close enough to work. She opened the box and found gauze, tape, a small pair of scissors. “Show me.” “It’s shallow.” “Good. Then it won’t take long.” He unbuttoned his cuff with his left hand. His fingers fumbled on the second button, and Rory reached over. He went still. She freed the button, then rolled the sleeve above his elbow. A cut ran across the inside of his forearm, longer than she’d expected, its edges parted and still bleeding. “That’s not shallow.” “It missed the important things.” “Let me be the judge of that.” She fetched a bowl of water from the kitchen. By the time she came back, he had taken off his jacket and folded it over the back of the chair, careful to keep the bloody sleeve from touching the upholstery. His hair, usually so immaculate, had come loose at one temple. She remembered putting her hand there. She pushed the memory away and sat down. The water pinked as she cleaned the cut. Lucien held still, though his breath caught once when she worked near his wrist. “Who did this?” “Someone who mistook my patience for a bargaining position.” “Try again.” He looked at her over the small distance between their chairs. “A man I paid to retrieve something. He decided he could sell it twice.” “And you came here because?” “I needed to know Eva was safe.” Rory drew the wet cloth away. “Eva.” “And you,” he said. She pressed a clean pad of gauze to his arm. “You could have rung.” “I thought you might tell me not to come.” “I did tell you.” “And then you let me in.” The gauze needed changing. Rory reached for another piece rather than answer. He had always been good at leaving a silence where she could hear herself thinking. They had parted nine days ago outside Silas’ bar. She had asked him what, exactly, he wanted from her. Lucien had said they should both go home. For a moment she’d thought he meant together. Then he’d hailed a cab and held its door while she got in. It had been raining, and his hand had stayed on the roof until she finally gave the driver her address. “You didn’t answer me that night,” she said. “No.” “You kissed me, Lucien. Then you sent me home.” His jaw tightened. “I know what I did.” “You knew I wouldn’t come chasing after you.” “Yes.” That hurt more than she wanted it to. Rory wrapped a bandage around his arm, keeping her eyes on her hands. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed pale beside the gauze. Lucien had once asked about it over breakfast, tracing the shape in the air rather than touching her. She’d told him about falling through a greenhouse pane when she was ten. He had listened as though he had all morning. She tore a strip of tape and fixed the bandage in place. “Why?” A noise came from the bedroom: Eva moving something heavy across the floor, perhaps trying to reach the old tin of charms she kept behind her books. Rory was grateful for the sound. It gave her somewhere else to look. Lucien spoke quietly. “The man with the knife has been asking questions about you.” Rory’s hands stopped. “What questions?” “Where you live. Who you work for. Whether you’re often alone.” “Because of you.” “Yes.” He did not try to soften it. She looked toward the door with its three bolts, then back at the blood on the cloth. “How long?” “Since the night at Silas’.” “The night you put me in that cab.” “I’d heard he was looking for a way to reach me. I thought if I stayed away—” “He’d lose interest in me?” “I hoped he would have no reason to learn your name.” “But he did.” Lucien’s gaze fell to his bandaged arm. “This afternoon.” Rory sat back. Nine days of anger had given her something solid to stand on. Now she could feel it shifting beneath her feet. He had known there might be danger, and he had chosen for her again. She could understand why. That didn’t make it easier to bear. “You should have told me.” “Yes.” “I could have been careful.” “I know that now.” She gave a short, disbelieving laugh. “You’ve met me. I deliver food all over London on my own, and I was doing that long before you appeared. Did you think I’d fall apart if you told me some bastard was asking questions?” “No.” Lucien looked up. “I thought you might stay close to me. And I wanted that enough that I didn’t trust myself to ask.” Rory had an answer ready. It deserted her. From the bedroom, Eva called, “I’ve got the window covered. Has he told you about the men outside?” Rory turned. “The what?” Lucien closed his eyes briefly. “Eva.” The bedroom door opened. Eva stood there with a roll of brown packing tape in one hand. “Two men across the road. One’s been pretending to read the same takeaway menu for ten minutes.” Rory went to the front window. She kept to the side of the curtain and looked down. Brick Lane shone under a fine rain. People passed beneath the shop signs, collars up, heads bent. Across the road, a man stood under the awning of a closed shop, holding a menu too low to read in that light. Another waited by a parked car. “Are they yours?” she asked Lucien. “No. But they’ll have seen me come in. I can draw them away.” “You’re dripping blood.” “Less than I was.” “They might come up after you leave,” Eva said. Lucien rose, reaching for his jacket. Rory crossed back and put her hand on the cane before he could take it. He looked down at her fingers around the ivory handle. “What did you retrieve?” she asked. He hesitated, then took a narrow leather case from the inside pocket of his jacket. It was hardly longer than her palm. “Something he was meant to deliver to a client,” Lucien said. “He’ll think I brought it here.” “Did you?” “Yes.” “At least we’ve established that.” Rory held out her hand. He gave her the case. It was heavier than it looked. Inside, wrapped in black cloth, lay a little brass key with a loop of red thread tied through its bow. Eva came to look over Rory’s shoulder. “That’s what they want?” “I suspect they’d take me as well,” Lucien said. Rory closed the case. Across the road, the man lowered his menu and spoke to his companion. Both looked up at the windows above the curry house. “Eva, does your landlord still keep the back stair locked?” “He keeps it locked when he remembers. Why?” “Because I don’t want them trying it.” Rory handed the case back to Lucien. “Put that away. Eva, can you ring the curry house and tell them there are two men hanging about their back entrance? It isn’t true yet, but they’ll go and check.” Eva was already reaching for her phone. “And then?” “Then you call Silas. Tell him what’s happened. I’ll ring him too once I’ve got Lucien downstairs.” Lucien’s expression sharpened. “Rory, you are not coming with me.” “I know. You’re going to take the back stair. I’ll take the front and make sure they’re watching me instead of the door behind the kitchen.” “No.” “Those two have been watching this window. They’ll know I’m here.” She spoke steadily, though her pulse had begun to race. “I can go down to the shop and stay where there are people. You can get clear before they realize you’ve left.” Eva paused with the phone at her ear. “That might work.” Lucien looked from her to Rory. “It might also put you directly in their path.” “They’ve seen me, remember? Besides, Silas is five minutes away, and I’m not going past the shop counter.” Rory picked up her coat from the hook. “You said you came to check we were safe. Help us do this, then.” For a moment she thought he would argue again. Instead he reached for his cane and stood beside her while Eva spoke to the curry house owner. Through the floor came the faint ring of a telephone, then a man’s voice answering it. Rory went to the door. She lifted the top bolt, then the middle. At the third, Lucien caught her hand. “I should have told you that night,” he said. “All of it. Especially that I didn’t want you to go.” She looked at him. There was rain drying in his hair and blood under the edge of his cuff. He had come to find her, and she was still angry with him. Both things could be true. “I didn’t want to go either,” she said. “But I thought you did.” “I’m sorry.” “Tell me the rest when we’re safe.” His hand loosened around hers. Rory slid back the last bolt, opened the door, and listened to the voices rising from the curry house below. Then she stepped into the hall.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She spoke steadily [steadily]"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.02
97.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1989
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1989
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"impose"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"race"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"weight"
2"impose"
3"silence"
4"tracing"
5"could feel"
6"pulse"
7"race"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences145
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences225
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1989
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1311
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva16
Aurora1
Lucien22
Moreau1
Rory27
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.47
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite into the flat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1989
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences225
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs121
mean16.44
std16.78
cv1.021
sampleLengths
022
125
23
315
46
539
69
718
814
915
1067
1117
123
132
142
154
165
176
1852
197
205
212
226
2345
2417
2529
2648
272
282
296
3052
313
325
337
3465
3522
363
379
382
3925
405
417
427
434
4414
459
464
476
4827
4968
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs247
matches
0"was watching"
1"was already reaching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences225
ratio0.009
matches
0"Rory had cleared a space among them that afternoon for a plate of toast; Eva had since covered it with notes."
1"The top one stuck; she had to shove it home with the heel of her hand."
98.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount763
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04193971166448231
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005242463958060288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences225
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences225
mean8.84
std6.26
cv0.708
sampleLengths
022
18
29
38
43
54
66
75
86
913
1021
115
129
139
146
153
1614
1715
183
1918
2019
216
2221
239
246
252
263
272
282
294
305
315
321
337
344
3516
369
3716
387
395
402
416
428
4319
4418
4513
464
474
4811
4914
48.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.29777777777777775
totalSentences225
uniqueOpeners67
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences132
matches
0"Dark green silk, neatly knotted"
1"Then she noticed the blood"
2"Instead he waited."
3"Of course he did."
4"Even hurt, Lucien placed himself"
5"Then she went into the"
6"Then he’d hailed a cab"
7"Instead he reached for his"
8"Then she stepped into the"
ratio0.068
80.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences132
matches
0"His amber eye narrowed."
1"He shifted his weight onto"
2"It was such a small"
3"He could have answered for"
4"she called back, and opened"
5"Her eyes went to Lucien’s"
6"He took the chair nearest"
7"She had spent the last"
8"She opened the box and"
9"He unbuttoned his cuff with"
10"His fingers fumbled on the"
11"He went still."
12"She freed the button, then"
13"She fetched a bowl of"
14"His hair, usually so immaculate,"
15"She remembered putting her hand"
16"She pushed the memory away"
17"He looked at her over"
18"She pressed a clean pad"
19"He had always been good"
ratio0.348
54.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences132
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back,"
1"His amber eye narrowed."
2"The black one gave nothing"
3"He shifted his weight onto"
4"It was such a small"
5"Lucien looked past her, not"
6"He could have answered for"
7"Rory hated that she still"
8"she called back, and opened"
9"Lucien stepped inside."
10"Ptolemy, who had been winding"
11"The flat smelled of curry"
12"Books and scrolls crowded every"
13"Rory had cleared a space"
14"Eva emerged from the kitchen"
15"Her eyes went to Lucien’s"
16"He took the chair nearest"
17"Rory shut the door and"
18"The top one stuck; she"
19"The words landed before she"
ratio0.811
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"Now he had been to"
1"By the time she came"
2"Now she could feel it"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She spoke steadily, though her pulse had begun to race"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called back (call back)"
1"She spoke steadily (speak)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.039
93.5410%