Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HXJ8S7ATF3J1JDTBQ1J6R

Run Details

Duration:
51.7s
Cost:
$0.026487
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped between two oaks whose trunks had hardened into fluted pillars. Behind her, a cyclist’s bell rang somewhere in Richmond Park. Ahead, light poured across a carpet of blue flowers, though the sky above the clearing remained the colour of wet slate. She stopped with one boot over the boundary. “Are you coming?” she called. Nyx detached themself from the shadow of the left-hand oak. Their violet eyes appeared first, then the long outline of their shoulders. “Your foot has been inside for twelve heartbeats.” Aurora looked down. The flowers had turned their faces towards her boot. “Count thirteen.” She crossed. The air closed against her skin, cool and dense as water without its weight. A note rang through her teeth. She glanced back. The two oaks stood so close together that their branches interlocked, but the path she had followed through them was gone. Beyond the trunks lay a stretch of park she did not recognise: tawny grass, a fallen branch, no cyclist. “Rory?” Nyx passed between the oaks. Their edges blurred, and for a moment she could see the grain of the bark through their chest. Then they came together beside her. “The way back has moved.” “That seems rude.” “It is a boundary.” “So are garden fences. Most of them let you see the gate.” Nyx raised one hand towards the space between the trees. Their fingers sank into darkness up to the knuckles. Something in the grove struck a deep, wooden tone, and they pulled their hand free. “Don’t do that again,” Aurora told them. “I had reached the same conclusion.” Ahead, wildflowers crowded the clearing. White blooms brushed purple ones, and stems bearing seedheads rose beside fresh buds. Aurora crouched and touched a yellow petal. It folded around her fingertip, then opened to reveal a bead of water. The bead held a tiny image of her face. She jerked her hand back. It fell into the soil, where it made a sound like a dropped coin. “Did you see that?” “I saw you touch it. I heard it answer.” A narrow track wound through the flowers. No shoes had flattened it, and no animal had worn it down. Pale stones lay beneath the grass at intervals, each one bearing a shallow groove. Aurora followed the first groove with her eyes. It pointed to the next stone. Together, they marked a route into the trees. She slid a hand beneath her coat and checked the dagger at her belt. Cold bit through its sheath. Isolde’s gift had kept its chill on the warmest afternoon in London; here, the moonsilver seemed to draw heat from the air around it. “Stay on the stones?” Nyx asked. “Until one bites me.” They moved into the grove. The sounds of Richmond Park thinned behind them. Traffic vanished. Wind stirred the leaves overhead, but the flowers below stood still. Somewhere farther in, water ran over rock. Between its splashes came a faint tapping, too measured for rain. Aurora counted seven taps before it stopped. “What made that?” Nyx turned their head towards the trees. “Something with patience.” “That narrows it down.” The track curved around a pool no wider than her outstretched arms. Its surface held a clear reflection of the sky, but the sky in the water blazed with stars. A silver fish swam across it. Aurora looked beneath the bank for the fish itself and found roots, black mud and nothing else. Nyx knelt on the opposite side. Their reflection remained upright while they crouched. “Oh, I hate that,” Aurora murmured. In the water, reflected Nyx turned towards her. Nyx beside the pool did not move. Aurora caught their sleeve and pulled. “Come on.” The reflected figure pressed one dark palm against the underside of the water. Ripples spread towards the bank. Nyx rose with Aurora, and their reflection snapped back into place. “You saw it?” “Yes.” “You could have mentioned it sooner.” “I was watching its hand.” The track led away from the pool beneath low boughs strung with thin, white threads. Aurora ducked. Each thread carried a small object: an acorn cap, a blue feather, a brass key gone green. One held a button identical to the top button of her coat. She checked. Her own button sat in place. “Did Isolde hang these?” Nyx bent beneath a strand of feathers. “Ask her.” “If we find her.” Aurora eased past a hanging teaspoon. Its bowl flashed, and a voice sounded beside her ear. “Mind the step.” She stopped. A root crossed the path in front of her boot, almost hidden by moss. Nyx looked at the spoon. “Who spoke?” “A woman. Right here.” She pointed. The spoon gave one small swing. No breeze touched the other threads. Aurora stepped over the root. Behind her, the spoon rang once against the key. The trees opened onto a long slope. At its foot stood a ring of stones, each taller than Aurora and shaped like an oak trunk stripped of bark. Branchlike ridges climbed their sides. Pale lichen filled the grooves, making every stone look lit from within. Between them, beds of flowers spread in bands of colour that changed as she watched: red deepened to violet, violet paled to white. Above the ring hung three moons. One was full, one a fine crescent, and the third had a dark centre with a bright rim. Aurora tipped her head back. Through a gap in the canopy beyond the stones, she could still see the grey Richmond sky. “Those aren’t up there,” she whispered. “No.” “They’re only over the ring.” Nyx stepped beside her. The bright rim of the third moon caught in their violet eyes. “I can feel them.” Aurora reached for the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem rested against her chest, warm enough to notice through her shirt. She drew it out. Its inner glow brightened when she faced the stones, then faded when she turned towards the path behind them. “You feel that as well?” Nyx held out a hand, stopping short of the pendant. “Heat. From there.” “The Veil?” “A seam in it.” Aurora looked across the slope. Something shimmered between two standing stones, faint as air above a hot road. She had missed it beneath the shifting flowers. She closed her fist around the Heartstone. An unknown hand had placed it in her possession; now it pulled her attention towards a gap in the world. She let the chain slide through her fingers and settled the gem beneath her collar. “We came to find Isolde,” she told Nyx. “Not to walk into Hel.” “The path goes through the ring.” “Of course it does.” They descended. The earth felt springy under Aurora’s boots. The tapping began again, louder now, somewhere below them. Four beats. A pause. Four more. At the edge of the flower beds, she found its source: droplets falling from the underside of a dry stone ledge into a hollow log. Each drop shone blue for an instant before it struck the wood. She held her palm under the next one. The drop landed cold, then spread across her skin in a fine silver pattern. Lines branched from her lifeline to the crescent scar on her wrist. “Nyx.” They came close. The pattern shifted. It formed two circles joined by a narrow line, then broke apart as the water dried. “Was that a map?” Aurora asked. Nyx studied the ledge. No water marked its top. “It may have been a warning.” “Useful distinction.” A voice came from the standing stones. “A map and a warning share a tongue. The listener chooses which one speaks.” Aurora turned. A woman stood inside the ring, silver hair falling to her waist. She wore a dark green dress without a hem of mud despite the damp grass. Her pale lavender eyes rested on Aurora’s wet palm. “Isolde Varga?” “The name still belongs to me.” “You could have met us at the entrance.” “The entrance would not hold still for me.” Isolde crossed the flower beds towards them. Aurora watched her feet. The blossoms bent beneath the cloth of her dress, but the soil kept no print. Nyx moved half a step forward. “The pool took my reflection.” “It borrowed your shape.” “For what?” Isolde looked towards the slope they had crossed. “It has not asked to keep it.” Aurora glanced back. The pool lay out of sight among the trees. “The spoon warned me about a root,” she told Isolde. “The pool borrowed Nyx, and something just drew on my hand. Does anything here leave a visitor alone?” “The stones.” Aurora looked at the ring. “Until you touch them,” Isolde added. “Comforting.” Isolde’s gaze dropped to the chain visible at Aurora’s collar. “You brought warmth from Dymas into my grove.” Aurora drew out the Heartstone. Its glow cast a red mark across her fingers. “Someone gave it to me. I don’t know who.” “I did not ask whose hand carried it to yours.” “Do you know who it was?” “I know who it was not.” Aurora waited. Isolde turned and walked towards the ring. “Is that all I get?” “For now, you have a name for the warmth.” Nyx followed Isolde. Aurora fell in beside them, keeping the pendant clear of her skin. They passed a stone whose ridges resembled twisted oak roots. In its lichen, she saw tiny flecks of gold moving against the grain. On the far side of the ring, the ground fell away into a hollow. Hundreds of glasslike leaves hung in the air there, suspended above a stream. They turned without wind. As each leaf revolved, it caught a different scene: the bare branches of winter, a field under summer sun, rain striking a London pavement. One held a glimpse of Aurora’s kitchen window, with the cracked blue mug she had left beside the sink that morning. She gripped the stone beside her. The cold of it travelled into her hand. “That’s my flat.” Isolde stopped short. “Take your hand away from the stone.” Aurora did. The image of her kitchen vanished from the leaf and gave way to a snowy hillside. “Why was it there?” “The grove took a look through you. It was curious.” “It could ask.” “It heard you speak to the spoon.” Nyx reached towards one of the floating leaves. Its surface clouded before their fingers touched it, then cleared around an image of a candle burning inside a circle of salt. Nyx withdrew their hand. Aurora glanced at them. “What did you see?” “An old room.” Their voice had thinned to a breath against stone. Isolde studied the leaf but did not question them. The stream below ran over black pebbles, yet its water made no sound. The tapping from the hollow log continued behind them. Aurora realised she could hear her own breathing above it, and Nyx’s silence beside her. “Where does the stream go?” she asked. “Under the stones,” Isolde answered. “And after that?” “Where the stones cannot follow.” Aurora scanned the hollow. A slender bridge crossed the stream farther down, woven from living roots. At its end, a path climbed towards a roof half-hidden in leaves. Pale smoke rose from a chimney and spread beneath the three moons. “Is that where you live?” Isolde looked up at the roof. “Today.” Aurora started towards the bridge. Beneath her collar, the Heartstone gave one slow pulse of heat. She stopped and faced the standing stones. Between two of them, the shimmer had sharpened into a narrow band. Through it she saw a sliver of amber sky and the dark curve of a tree heavy with fruit. Nyx saw it too. Their shadow stretched across the grass towards the gap, though the moons cast their light from the other side. “That’s not part of the grove,” Aurora told Isolde. “No.” “Has it always been there?” Isolde came to stand beside her. She set one pale hand against the nearest stone. For the first time, a mark appeared beneath her feet: not a footprint, but a circle of pressed flowers. “The gap was smaller when I woke.” Aurora looked from the amber sliver to the root bridge. Water slid beneath it without a murmur. She tucked the pendant back under her shirt and kept her hand against the warm stone. “Then show me where to stand,” she told Isolde.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.165
leniency0.329
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2061
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2061
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"measured"
3"shimmered"
4"comforting"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"scanned"
8"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences183
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences254
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2061
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions91
wordCount1652
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Nyx21
Ahead2
London2
Aurora36
Heartstone4
Isolde15
Pale3
One3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"Isolde"
4"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.41
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beneath her feet: not a footprint, but a circle of pressed flowers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.485
wordCount2061
matches
0"not a footprint, but a circle of pressed flowers"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences254
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs129
mean15.98
std16.23
cv1.016
sampleLengths
043
18
25
330
412
52
625
740
835
93
104
1112
1234
137
146
1547
1619
174
189
1955
2043
216
224
235
2439
257
263
2710
284
2953
3013
316
3215
338
3429
353
361
376
385
3954
404
419
424
4316
443
4516
467
474
4814
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences183
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs263
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences254
ratio0.008
matches
0"Isolde’s gift had kept its chill on the warmest afternoon in London; here, the moonsilver seemed to draw heat from the air around it."
1"An unknown hand had placed it in her possession; now it pulled her attention towards a gap in the world."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1654
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.020556227327690448
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences254
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences254
mean8.11
std5.2
cv0.64
sampleLengths
012
110
221
38
45
510
612
78
83
99
102
112
1214
136
143
1521
1619
176
1818
196
205
213
224
2312
2410
259
2615
277
286
295
3013
317
3213
339
345
3514
364
379
387
3912
4014
418
426
438
4414
455
4624
476
484
495
49.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.31496062992125984
totalSentences254
uniqueOpeners80
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences162
matches
0"Then they came together beside"
1"Somewhere farther in, water ran"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences162
matches
0"She stopped with one boot"
1"Their violet eyes appeared first,"
2"She glanced back."
3"Their edges blurred, and for"
4"Their fingers sank into darkness"
5"It folded around her fingertip,"
6"She jerked her hand back."
7"It fell into the soil,"
8"It pointed to the next"
9"She slid a hand beneath"
10"They moved into the grove."
11"Its surface held a clear"
12"Their reflection remained upright while"
13"Her own button sat in"
14"Its bowl flashed, and a"
15"She drew it out."
16"Its inner glow brightened when"
17"She had missed it beneath"
18"She closed her fist around"
19"She let the chain slide"
ratio0.235
68.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences162
matches
0"Aurora stepped between two oaks"
1"She stopped with one boot"
2"Nyx detached themself from the"
3"Their violet eyes appeared first,"
4"Aurora looked down."
5"The flowers had turned their"
6"The air closed against her"
7"A note rang through her"
8"She glanced back."
9"The two oaks stood so"
10"Nyx passed between the oaks"
11"Their edges blurred, and for"
12"Nyx raised one hand towards"
13"Their fingers sank into darkness"
14"Something in the grove struck"
15"Aurora told them"
16"Aurora crouched and touched a"
17"It folded around her fingertip,"
18"The bead held a tiny"
19"She jerked her hand back."
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Between them, beds of flowers spread in bands of colour that changed as she watched: red deepened to violet, violet paled to white."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde added (add)"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.306
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.071
87.8087%