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Run: 2026-09-23-01M37HZS9N7VR3ARTDFTEQNVAK
Run Details
Model:
GPT-6 Sol
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
45.6s
Cost:
$0.023950
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
64.01%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
26.36%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.52%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
21.93%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
91.05%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
32.89%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.1257%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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Rory opened the door against
the chain and found Lucien Moreau with blood on his cuff. “You have thirty seconds.”
He braced one hand against
the frame.
His charcoal suit still fitted
as though someone had sewn it onto him, but a dark stain spread beneath his jacket.
The ivory handle of his
cane knocked once against the stair. “Then I suggest you undo the chain.” “No.” “Twenty-eight.” A door slammed below them. Rory glanced past his shoulder, down the narrow staircase that led to Silas’s bar. Music rose through the floorboards, bass thick enough to hide
footsteps
. Lucien’s gaze stayed on hers, one amber eye bright, the other black and
unreadable
. “You said I wouldn’t see you again.” “I was wrong.” The admission cost him.
She heard it in the
scrape of his breath.
Rory shut the door, slid
the chain free, and opened it wide enough for him to stumble inside.
She turned the deadbolt as
he leaned on the kitchen counter.
His cane slipped from his
hand and struck the boards.
Blood dripped from his fingers
onto the tiles. “Coat off.” “An invitation at last.” “Keep talking and I’ll charge you for the towels.”
She fetched the first-aid kit
from beneath the sink.
By the time she turned
back, he had opened his jacket. A cut crossed his ribs, deep enough to soak through his shirt. Yet he watched the door, not the wound. “Who did that?” “A woman with an excellent reach.” “Name.” “You wouldn’t know her.” “Then you won’t mind telling me.”
He pressed his palm over
the cut.
His jaw tightened, and for
one sharp second his polished composure gave way to pain.
Rory set the kit on
the counter and pulled his hand aside. “Hold still.” “You used to say that with more
affection
.” “I used to believe you when you said you were protecting me.” She lifted his shirt. Warmth rose from his skin, carrying the scent of expensive soap and iron.
He had other scars, pale
lines she knew from a night neither of them had discussed since. Rory tore open a dressing before her hand could hesitate. “This cut needs stitches.” “It can wait.” “It’s leaving blood on my floor.” “That, I regret.”
His fingertips closed around her
left wrist. Not hard.
His thumb rested beside the
small crescent scar there, and she looked up. “Let go.” He did. Below them, the music stopped mid-song. Lucien reached for his cane. Rory caught it first. “No one knows you’re here?” “Someone knows where I intended to go.” “That sounds like a yes.” “It sounds like we have little time.” A floorboard creaked outside her flat. Rory pushed Lucien towards the alcove beside the wardrobe. He resisted until someone knocked. Three neat taps. “Rory?” Silas called through the door. “Got a bloke down here asking after you.” Rory met Lucien’s eyes.
He drew the thin blade
from his cane without a sound. “What bloke?” “Claims he’s a friend from Cardiff.” Her
stomach
clenched. Few people in London knew where she had grown up. Fewer still would use it to get through Silas. “Did he give you a name?” A pause. The boards beyond the door creaked again. “Evan.” Lucien stepped out of the alcove. Rory caught his sleeve and shook her head.
His expression changed when he
saw her face, the blade lowering an inch. “Tell him I’m not in,” she called. “Thought you’d say that.” Silas’s voice sounded closer to the lock. “He’s standing beside me, love.” The man beyond the door gave a short laugh. Rory knew it before he spoke. “You always did make other people lie for you.” Lucien slid the blade back into the cane. Rory kept hold of his sleeve.
He had seen her face
at the sound of Evan’s name, and she
hated that he
now stood between her and the door as if the choice belonged to him. “Take him downstairs, Silas.” “Already asked,” Silas said. A muffled thud struck the door. Then
silence
. Rory grabbed her phone. No signal.
She raised it towards the
ceiling, but the bars stayed empty. Lucien examined the blood on his fingertips. “He came with the woman who cut me.” “How do you know?” “She asked for Aurora Carter. He told her where you lived.” Rory looked towards the door. Evan had found her once before, after she moved to London.
He had sent flowers to
Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, white lilies with no card.
She had thrown them into
the bin before her shift and spent the rest of it checking every customer’s face. “You should have led with that.” “I had hoped to get inside first.” “Congratulations.” The lock clicked. Rory stared at it. Silas kept a spare key behind the bar for emergencies. He would never have handed it to Evan. “Move away from the door,” Lucien said. She stepped back. The deadbolt held for one second, then the metal
began to
glow. Paint blistered around the frame. Lucien gripped his cane in one hand and pulled Rory behind him with the other. She wrenched free, snatched a saucepan from the hob, and turned the handle into her palm. “Silas?” No answer came from the landing. Her grip tightened. The deadbolt fell. The door swung inward. Evan stood there in a dark coat Rory had never seen. He looked much as he had in Cardiff, tidy hair, clean shoes, a face that could turn kind the moment anyone else entered a room. A woman
loomed
behind him, one hand raised towards the ruined lock. Black veins branched across her wrist. Evan glanced at the saucepan. “You haven’t changed.” Rory looked past him. Silas lay against the opposite wall, one arm crooked beneath him. His chest rose. “He’ll wake,” the woman said. Her eyes fixed on Lucien. “If we leave before I lose patience.” “You followed him here,” Rory said. Evan’s gaze found the blood on Lucien’s shirt. His smile thinned. “He found you first. That must sting.” Lucien shifted his cane across the doorway. “You have delivered your guide. Take him and leave.” The woman laughed. “He thinks I’m the guide?” Evan’s eyes
flicked
to her. Too fast. Rory caught it, and so did Lucien. “I brought you to her,” Evan said. “That was the bargain.” “The bargain changed,” the woman said. She stepped over the threshold. Lucien struck her wrist with the cane before her hand reached Rory. The impact cracked like a snapped branch. She hissed and drove her other hand into his wounded side. He staggered. Rory swung the saucepan at the woman’s head. The rim caught her temple and knocked her against the doorframe. Evan lunged for Rory’s arm. She pulled back, but his nails scraped the crescent scar on her wrist. Pain flashed up to her elbow, cold rather than hot. The scar shone blue beneath his fingers. Everyone stopped. The woman straightened. Blood ran from her temple, and she smiled at Rory’s wrist. “There you are.” Rory slammed the saucepan down on Evan’s hand. He shouted and let go. She drove her knee into his
stomach
, then snatched Lucien’s cane from the floor. Its blade slid free with a soft metallic
whisper
. Lucien caught her wrist before she could advance. “Not her. The threshold.” “What?” “The burned wood. Cut across it.” The woman rushed them. Lucien caught her around the waist and hurled her into the kitchen table. Books and unpaid bills scattered. Rory dropped to one knee at the doorway and scored the blade through the charred strip of wood. Blue light ran along the cut. The woman screamed. Air slammed through the flat. Rory clung to the frame as the light spread under the skirting boards and climbed the walls. Evan crawled towards the stairs. Silas stirred on the landing. Then the light snapped out. Rory heard the woman hit the floor behind her. Lucien stood over her, one hand pressed to his side. Blood slipped between his fingers. The woman’s black veins had faded to grey. She lay still, breathing through clenched teeth. Rory kept the blade pointed at her while Silas hauled himself upright outside. “Bloody hell,” he said. “That’s coming out of your deposit.” “Put Evan downstairs,” Rory said. “Lock him in the cellar.” Silas looked at Evan, who had reached the top step. He caught the back of Evan’s coat and dragged him down. “Happy to.” Their
footsteps
receded. Rory shut what remained of the door and wedged a chair beneath the handle. Lucien knelt beside the woman and pulled a narrow brass chain from her neck. A small key hung from it. “What did she want with my wrist?” “She wanted to know whether the mark would answer her.” “You knew about it.” “I knew your scar came from more than a childhood accident.” Rory’s hand closed around the blade. “You saw it months ago. In your bed.” “Yes.” “And you said nothing.” “I didn’t know who else had seen it.” “That isn’t an answer.” He looked up at her. Pain had stripped the ease from his face, leaving the man who had stood in her kitchen six weeks ago and said he could not stay. She had asked whether that meant one night or forever. He had walked out without telling her. “I left because someone had begun asking about you,” he said. “I thought I could draw them away.” “You could have told me. I know how to lock a door.” “I see that now.” She set the blade on the counter, beyond the woman’s reach. Lucien’s gaze followed her as she picked up the dressing. She knelt before him and pressed it to his ribs. His hand covered hers to hold it there. “I didn’t tell you because you would have chosen to help,” he said. “You don’t get to make that choice for me.” “No.” It took one word. No defence tucked behind it. Rory wound a bandage around his waist, pulling it snug. He drew a sharp breath. Close enough to touch, she could see the fine tremor in his hands. She had once known where he hid every weakness, or thought she had. “When you left,” she said, “I asked you to look at me.” His hand tightened over the dressing. “I heard you.” “I know.” He lifted his face. Rory could have kissed him then. The
desire
sat between them,
familiar
and unwelcome, while the woman lay bound only by whatever had happened at the threshold. A scrape came from the other side of the flat. The woman had rolled onto her back. She raised one grey-veined hand and pointed at the window. “Moreau,” she rasped. “The key wasn’t for the door.” The glass behind Rory turned black. Something on the fire escape gripped the window frame and tore it free.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
15
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
86
tagDensity
0.174
leniency
0.349
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1806
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
64.01%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1806
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
2
1
word
"unreadable"
count
1
2
word
"affection"
count
1
3
word
"warmth"
count
1
4
word
"stomach"
count
2
5
word
"silence"
count
1
6
word
"loomed"
count
1
7
word
"flicked"
count
1
8
word
"whisper"
count
1
9
word
"desire"
count
1
10
word
"familiar"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"unreadable"
2
"affection"
3
"warmth"
4
"stomach"
5
"silence"
6
"loomed"
7
"flicked"
8
"whisper"
9
"desire"
10
"familiar"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
171
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
171
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
242
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
30
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1806
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
25
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
26.36%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
89
wordCount
1375
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
2.47
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
21
Moreau
1
Silas
10
Rory
34
London
2
Evan
13
Yu-Fei
1
Cheung
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Cardiff
1
Blood
3
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Silas"
3
"Rory"
4
"Evan"
5
"Yu-Fei"
6
"Cheung"
7
"Blood"
places
0
"London"
1
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.264
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
106
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1806
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
242
matches
0
"hated that he"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
142
mean
12.72
std
12.48
cv
0.982
sampleLengths
0
16
1
4
2
39
3
7
4
1
5
1
6
44
7
7
8
3
9
13
10
39
11
8
12
2
13
4
14
9
15
40
16
3
17
6
18
1
19
4
20
6
21
34
22
2
23
8
24
12
25
44
26
4
27
3
28
6
29
3
30
22
31
2
32
2
33
6
34
9
35
5
36
7
37
5
38
7
39
20
40
3
41
14
42
15
43
2
44
6
45
22
46
6
47
9
48
1
49
27
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
171
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
256
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
242
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1379
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.023930384336475707
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.0007251631617113851
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
242
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
242
mean
7.46
std
4.61
cv
0.617
sampleLengths
0
16
1
4
2
7
3
21
4
11
5
7
6
1
7
1
8
5
9
14
10
11
11
14
12
7
13
3
14
4
15
9
16
18
17
11
18
10
19
8
20
2
21
4
22
9
23
9
24
11
25
12
26
8
27
3
28
6
29
1
30
4
31
6
32
7
33
15
34
12
35
2
36
8
37
12
38
4
39
13
40
17
41
10
42
4
43
3
44
6
45
3
46
7
47
2
48
13
49
2
47.52%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.28512396694214875
totalSentences
242
uniqueOpeners
69
21.93%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
152
matches
0
"Then the light snapped out."
ratio
0.007
91.05%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
49
totalSentences
152
matches
0
"He braced one hand against"
1
"His charcoal suit still fitted"
2
"She heard it in the"
3
"She turned the deadbolt as"
4
"His cane slipped from his"
5
"She fetched the first-aid kit"
6
"He pressed his palm over"
7
"His jaw tightened, and for"
8
"She lifted his shirt."
9
"He had other scars, pale"
10
"His fingertips closed around her"
11
"His thumb rested beside the"
12
"He resisted until someone knocked."
13
"He drew the thin blade"
14
"Her stomach clenched."
15
"His expression changed when he"
16
"He had seen her face"
17
"She raised it towards the"
18
"He had sent flowers to"
19
"She had thrown them into"
ratio
0.322
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
141
totalSentences
152
matches
0
"Rory opened the door against"
1
"He braced one hand against"
2
"His charcoal suit still fitted"
3
"The ivory handle of his"
4
"A door slammed below them."
5
"Rory glanced past his shoulder,"
6
"Music rose through the floorboards,"
7
"Lucien’s gaze stayed on hers,"
8
"The admission cost him."
9
"She heard it in the"
10
"Rory shut the door, slid"
11
"She turned the deadbolt as"
12
"His cane slipped from his"
13
"Blood dripped from his fingers"
14
"She fetched the first-aid kit"
15
"A cut crossed his ribs,"
16
"He pressed his palm over"
17
"His jaw tightened, and for"
18
"Rory set the kit on"
19
"She lifted his shirt."
ratio
0.928
32.89%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
152
matches
0
"By the time she turned"
ratio
0.007
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
62
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"His charcoal suit still fitted as though someone had sewn it onto him, but a dark stain spread beneath his jacket."
1
"Rory glanced past his shoulder, down the narrow staircase that led to Silas’s bar."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
15
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
86
tagDensity
0.151
leniency
0.302
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
86.1257%