Run: 2026-09-23-01M37J0BESE94PAPQRR9WVTK04

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Duration:
40.2s
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$0.020857
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora held the Heartstone against her palm as she stepped between the oak standing stones. Its warmth beat through the silver chain, one pulse for each step. Beyond the stones, the wildflowers of Isolde’s grove bent away from a seam in the air. “Last chance to explain where that opens,” Rory told Isolde. Isolde lifted a strand of silver hair from the seam’s reach. “Into a place where no one goes hungry.” “That sounds suspiciously like a promise.” “It is not one.” Nyx slipped a hand into the distortion. Their fingers vanished at the knuckles, then returned stained gold by a light that faded as Rory watched. “There is ground beyond it,” they whispered. “And a remarkable smell.” Rory caught it too: warm bread, crushed peaches, smoke from a wood fire. Beneath those came the sharp mineral scent that rose from pavement after rain. She drew the Fae blade. Its cold handle settled against her fingers. Isolde glanced at the moonsilver. “Keep that close.” They crossed together. The seam pressed against Rory’s face and chest like water with no wetness to it. For one breath she heard the grove’s bees; for the next, a thousand tiny bells rang above her head. Amber sky stretched over terraced hills. Vines climbed pillars of red stone, crossed overhead and joined one another in leafy arches. Fruit hung from them in clusters Rory had no names for: translucent blue spheres with dark seeds spinning inside, copper-skinned pears that opened and closed along a seam, and small white things that gave off a soft light. The bells came from the vines. Each leaf carried a bright metal vein, and the leaves struck one another in the warm air. Nyx emerged beside her in solid form, tall and dark against the sky. Isolde followed, leaving the earth beneath her bare feet untouched. Rory turned. Behind them, the seam had shrunk to a narrow shimmer between two columns. The Heartstone cooled against her skin. “No signposts,” she muttered. A broad path descended through the vineyard. Pebbles of green glass shifted beneath Rory’s boots, settling into little hollows shaped like her soles. She took another step and watched the path do it again. “Is it watching us?” Nyx crouched and held their hand over the stones. Several pebbles rose towards their fingers. “Feeling us.” “That’s worse.” The path ran past a low wall made from fitted bones of pale stone. Atop it stood a row of empty bowls, each carved from a different material. One was wood. One was black glass. One looked like a shell larger than Rory’s head. Water dripped from a spout above the first bowl, though she saw no pipe feeding it. A drop landed, turned ruby red, and rolled into the next bowl. There it became a seed. By the time it reached the last, a white root had grown long enough to curl over the rim. Rory leaned closer. The root wound towards the scar on her left wrist. She pulled her hand back. “Don’t touch the tableware,” Nyx whispered. Beyond the wall lay an orchard. The trees grew from square beds lined with old mosaics, their trunks twisted around columns and shattered statues. Fruit glowed beneath the branches like lamps behind coloured glass. Somewhere among them, blades struck chopping boards in a quick, tireless rhythm. “Someone’s cooking,” Rory said. “No one’s close.” Nyx turned towards the sound. “I can feel the shade under each tree. Nothing moves in it.” Isolde knelt by the first mosaic. Rory saw figures there, worked in chips of garnet and ivory: people carrying platters up a flight of steps to a seated figure whose face had worn away. Their arms and plates remained sharp, but gaps swallowed half the feast. “Who built this?” Rory asked. Isolde traced the edge of an ivory tile without touching it. “Hands that made splendid things. Hands that wanted feeding afterward.” “That narrows it down.” A gust swept through the orchard. The copper pears clicked open. Their interiors held rows of teeth as fine as fish bones, and each pear sang one clear note. Others answered farther down the hill, turning the orchard into a wavering chord. Rory stood still until the sound passed. Nyx had lifted their head. “I have never heard trees sing for wind.” “Are they trees?” Their violet eyes met hers. “I have never heard those sing either.” The path curved beneath an arch of branches and brought them to a dry canal. Blue tiles lined its bed, each one painted with a fish. Rory stepped over a crack in the stone. At once the fish beneath her boot flicked its tail and vanished into the next tile. A dozen others scattered, their painted scales flashing. She called Isolde over. “Look.” Isolde watched a painted eel coil around a drain. “It has room to swim.” “In a floor?” “The floor has made no complaint.” Rory crouched and followed one fish with her finger above the tile. It followed her back. Its painted mouth opened, and a bead of water rose from the glaze. She caught it on her fingertip. It tasted of salt and lemon. A clatter of boards rang out again, closer now. Rory looked up the canal. No cook stood there. At its far end, steps led down into a roofless hall sunk beneath the orchard. Trees grew along its walls, roots woven through stonework older than the terraces above. Long dining tables filled the hall. White cloth covered them, taut and clean, though fallen leaves gathered everywhere else. “An outdoor dining room,” Rory said. “For guests who never turned up?” They descended. Each step held a shallow groove down its centre, polished by countless feet. Rory brushed one with the side of her boot. The stone gave off heat. Halfway down, Nyx stopped. Their outline thinned, then snapped back into focus. “There’s a boundary across the steps.” Rory saw it when she lowered her eyes: a faint shimmer passing through the air above the next stair. It looked like heat over a summer road, except the air around them remained cool. She brought the Fae blade towards it. A silver line appeared from wall to wall, crossed by tiny knots. “Ward?” she asked. Nyx nodded. “Old.” “What happens if we cross it?” Isolde regarded the empty tables below. “It may ask whether we belong at dinner.” Rory slid the blade under one knot. The silver thread drew tight against its edge, then parted. A smell of burned sugar rushed up the stairs. The other threads collapsed into sparks that winked out before they touched the stone. Nyx passed through first. Rory followed. For a moment the air pressed a question against her skin, too faint to make out, and then released her. In the hall, the chopping grew loud enough to count. Six quick strikes, a pause, six more. It came from beneath the nearest table. Rory bent and lifted a corner of the cloth. Rows of small knives worked across the table’s underside. Each blade rose from the wood, sliced an invisible ingredient, then withdrew. Their handles bore worn marks where hands had once gripped them. As Rory watched, one knife stopped. It turned towards her. She dropped the cloth. “What?” Nyx asked. “Dinner’s still being prepared.” At the centre of the hall stood a stone basin filled with dark soil. A single plant grew there, no higher than Rory’s knee. Its leaves were broad and bruised purple. Between them hung one crimson fruit, small as her thumb. The Heartstone warmed again. Rory took it out from beneath her shirt. The pendant’s inner glow strengthened, painting her fingers red. Nyx moved to the far side of the basin and studied the soil. “There’s a seam below this,” they whispered. “Deep under the stone.” Isolde came to stand beside Rory. “The fruit has a stem,” she observed. “Thank you, Isolde. I’d missed that.” “A stem that holds it to the plant.” Rory looked from the fruit to the pendant, then down at the basin’s rim. Hundreds of names had been cut into the stone. Some had worn to shallow scratches. Others stood crisp enough to read. Each had a small hollow beside it, and in several hollows lay a silver chain. Nyx leaned over the nearest inscription. “Rory.” She found the name they meant. Not hers. Beneath the engraved letters sat a little crescent mark, cut into the stone beside an empty hollow. Rory raised her left wrist. The scar crossed her skin in the same curved shape. She set her hand beside the mark without touching it. Behind her, one of the hidden knives struck its board. Six quick blows, a pause, six more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"remarkable"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"mosaic"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"remarkable"
3"shattered"
4"mosaic"
5"traced"
6"wavering"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1451
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1267
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Isolde11
Rory28
Fae2
Nyx12
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"One"
places(empty)
globalScore0.395
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a shell larger than Rory’s he"
1"looked like heat over a summer road, exce"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1451
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean20.15
std18.84
cv0.935
sampleLengths
043
110
219
36
44
525
611
738
88
937
1059
1123
1223
1321
144
1534
164
1715
182
192
2096
2113
225
236
2446
254
2620
2746
285
2921
304
3142
327
3313
343
3512
3658
375
3814
393
406
4141
4266
4312
4429
4512
466
4753
483
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences167
ratio0.006
matches
0"For one breath she heard the grove’s bees; for the next, a thousand tiny bells rang above her head."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1268
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"inside, copper-skinned pears"
1"small hollow beside it,"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022082018927444796
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean8.69
std5.22
cv0.601
sampleLengths
015
112
216
310
411
58
66
74
87
918
107
114
1213
1313
145
157
165
173
183
1915
2019
216
2215
2338
246
2517
2613
2710
282
2913
306
314
327
3316
3411
354
369
376
382
392
4014
4114
423
434
449
4516
4612
475
4819
493
62.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38323353293413176
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners64
26.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Somewhere among them, blades struck"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences124
matches
0"Its warmth beat through the"
1"Their fingers vanished at the"
2"She drew the Fae blade."
3"Its cold handle settled against"
4"They crossed together."
5"She took another step and"
6"She pulled her hand back."
7"Their arms and plates remained"
8"Their interiors held rows of"
9"Their violet eyes met hers."
10"She called Isolde over."
11"It followed her back."
12"Its painted mouth opened, and"
13"She caught it on her"
14"It tasted of salt and"
15"Their outline thinned, then snapped"
16"It looked like heat over"
17"She brought the Fae blade"
18"It came from beneath the"
19"Their handles bore worn marks"
ratio0.202
64.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences124
matches
0"Aurora held the Heartstone against"
1"Its warmth beat through the"
2"Rory told Isolde"
3"Isolde lifted a strand of"
4"Nyx slipped a hand into"
5"Their fingers vanished at the"
6"Rory caught it too: warm"
7"She drew the Fae blade."
8"Its cold handle settled against"
9"Isolde glanced at the moonsilver."
10"They crossed together."
11"The seam pressed against Rory’s"
12"Amber sky stretched over terraced"
13"Vines climbed pillars of red"
14"Fruit hung from them in"
15"The bells came from the"
16"Each leaf carried a bright"
17"Nyx emerged beside her in"
18"Isolde followed, leaving the earth"
19"The Heartstone cooled against her"
ratio0.79
40.32% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"By the time it reached"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Fruit hung from them in clusters Rory had no names for: translucent blue spheres with dark seeds spinning inside, copper-skinned pears that opened and closed al…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"she observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.25
87.3218%