Run: 2026-09-23-01M37NYHBNFFZH32AD2Q7J9FV1

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Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.019464
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last Tube had dumped her at Richmond half past eleven, and the park gates had been locked for hours, but the chain-link gave where some earlier trespasser had bent it into a handhold. Rory went over the top without breaking stride. Her hands remembered the climb from a hundred deliveries gone wrong, and her mind wasn't on the fence anyway. It was on the heat sitting against her sternum. The pendant hadn't cooled since Tuesday. She'd tried ignoring it. She'd hung it on a nail by the door and gone to bed, and lay awake for three hours listening to Silas's pipes gurgle below her, feeling the stone's pulse through the floorboards like a second heartbeat under the flat. At two in the morning she'd given up, fetched it, and it had warmed against her palm the way a coin does when you hold it too long. Then it had warmed further. Then it had tugged — there was no other word for it, a gentle directional pull, like a compass needle made of warmth — toward the river, toward the park, toward the Grove. So here she was, crossing Richmond Park in the dark, because a piece of rock wouldn't leave her alone. The pendant had gone quiet the moment her feet hit the grass. That was the first wrong thing, though she didn't clock it as wrong until later. It sat against her collarbone, inert, like a snuffed candle. She'd assumed that meant she was close. She told herself it meant she was close. The standing stones rose out of the bracken ahead, seven pale shapes in the moonlight. She counted them twice on the approach. Seven. Good. Seven was right. Eva had walked her here once in October daylight, when the trees were honest and the worst thing in the park was a stag with attitude, and Rory had counted the stones then too, because counting was what she did when the world felt sideways. The gap between the third and fourth stones was the door. She knew that. Isolde had shown her, pressing Rory's hand flat against the grain of the wood-turned-stone until the air in the gap had shivered and let them through. Rory stopped at the threshold. The air in the gap shivered now, all on its own. "Okay," she said, to nobody, to the park, to the pendant. "Okay. I came. I'm here. Show me." The park didn't answer. But no owls called either, and no planes crossed the sky, and the distant hum of the A308 that should have ridden under everything like tinnitus was simply gone. The silence had a texture to it, dense and close, like the inside of a soundproofed room. She could hear her own blood. She stepped through. The Grove opened around her the way it had in October — a bowl of soft ground, ringed by the stones, lit by a moon that always seemed larger in here than the sky outside could account for. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in white and violet, the kind that bloomed here in every season, Isolde had said, because the Grove didn't hold with winter. In October the flowers had been open. Tonight every bloom was closed, heads bowed, petals furled tight as fists. A field of them, thousands, all pointed at the earth. Rory's thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist and pressed until it ached. Old habit. Evan had hated the habit, which was part of why she'd kept it. "Isolde?" Her voice came out flat. It didn't echo — the Grove swallowed sound, always had — but something at the edge of the clearing gave the impression of an echo, a soft pressure against her ears like a word arriving a half-second after it was spoken. She waited. Nothing. She walked toward the centre. Her footsteps in the moss made no sound at all, but behind her, two steps later, the moss compressed twice. She heard it. Not felt — heard, the faint wet squeeze of it, twice, in her own rhythm. She stopped walking. The sound stopped one beat after she did. Her phone said 11:47 when she pulled it out. The screen's glow looked wrong, too white, like stage light. She turned in a slow circle, holding the phone up, and the flowers at the edge of its reach lay closed and pale, and her signal was dead, and the battery that had been at sixty-one percent on the walk from the station read nine percent, and the clock now said 1:12. She watched the numbers. They didn't tick. They jumped again while she watched — 10:03. "Right," she said. "Time's broken. That's fine. Time does that in here." Eva had warned her. An hour inside could be a minute outside or a weekend, and Isolde would always walk you out before it mattered. But Isolde wasn't here, and the Grove knew it, and the Grove — she was starting to suspect — was the kind of place that behaved itself when its keeper was watching. Drip. She turned her head. Somewhere past the fourth stone, water was dripping, a slow metronome, plink, plink, into a pool she couldn't see. There was no water in the Grove. She'd asked Isolde, in October, and Isolde had laughed and said the Grove had no need of water, it drank moonlight. Plink. The pendant woke. Not the slow directional warmth of the walk here. This was a pulse — a beat, a pause, a beat — deep crimson flaring through the gem with each throb, and it was not in time with Rory's heart. Hers was quick now, and the stone's was slow, patient, like something breathing in its sleep. The flowers nearest her opened. Just one bloom, white, three feet from her boot. It unfurled petal by petal in the moonlight, deliberate, and turned its face up at her. Then the one beside it. Then five more, then a whole ring, a widening ripple of white flowers turning toward her across the dark field, and Rory stood in the middle of it and felt her skin try to leave her body. "No," she said. "No, that's — flowers don't do that." They kept doing it. The ripple spread past the stones, out past her sight, thousands of blooms rotating on their stems with a sound like silk sliding over silk, and the pendant pulsed faster, and the dripping water kept its slow idiot time, plink, plink, and somewhere behind her — close, close enough that the short hairs on her neck stood to attention — something drew in a breath. It hadn't been breathing before. That was the thing. The Grove had been sealed and silent since she'd entered, one heartbeat, hers — and now there were two, and the second one smelled of rain on hot stone. Rory didn't turn around. Turning around was what it wanted; she understood that with a cold, sliding certainty, the way you understand a chessboard three moves before the trap closes. Her eyes were bright blue and wide in the moonlight and her thumb was white against her wrist, pressing the crescent scar so hard the old mark stood out pale against the blood-flushed skin around it. "Isolde," she said, without moving her lips much, "if this is you, you've got a hell of a sense of humour." The breath behind her went out, slow and long, stirring the fine hairs at the back of her neck. And every flower in the Grove bowed at once.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"silk"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"echo"
4"footsteps"
5"throb"
6"silk"
7"pulsed"
8"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1259
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1218
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Richmond2
Tuesday1
Silas1
Grove10
Park1
October4
Rory8
Isolde6
Eva2
persons
0"Tube"
1"Silas"
2"Grove"
3"Rory"
4"Isolde"
5"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed larger in here than the sky outside could account for"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1259
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.13
std27.67
cv0.835
sampleLengths
070
16
2110
319
452
572
640
716
818
956
103
1164
127
1322
1430
151
1649
1743
183
198
2071
2115
2212
2357
241
2551
261
273
2855
295
3067
3110
3269
3338
3466
3521
3619
379
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"been locked"
1"been open"
2"was spoken"
91.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was starting"
1"was watching"
2"was dripping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences92
ratio0.109
matches
0"Then it had tugged — there was no other word for it, a gentle directional pull, like a compass needle made of warmth — toward the river, toward the park, toward the Grove."
1"The Grove opened around her the way it had in October — a bowl of soft ground, ringed by the stones, lit by a moon that always seemed larger in here than the sky outside could account for."
2"It didn't echo — the Grove swallowed sound, always had — but something at the edge of the clearing gave the impression of an echo, a soft pressure against her ears like a word arriving a half-second after it was spoken."
3"Not felt — heard, the faint wet squeeze of it, twice, in her own rhythm."
4"They jumped again while she watched — 10:03."
5"But Isolde wasn't here, and the Grove knew it, and the Grove — she was starting to suspect — was the kind of place that behaved itself when its keeper was watching."
6"This was a pulse — a beat, a pause, a beat — deep crimson flaring through the gem with each throb, and it was not in time with Rory's heart."
7"The ripple spread past the stones, out past her sight, thousands of blooms rotating on their stems with a sound like silk sliding over silk, and the pendant pulsed faster, and the dripping water kept its slow idiot time, plink, plink, and somewhere behind her — close, close enough that the short hairs on her neck stood to attention — something drew in a breath."
8"The Grove had been sealed and silent since she'd entered, one heartbeat, hers — and now there were two, and the second one smelled of rain on hot stone."
9"Turning around was what it wanted; she understood that with a cold, sliding certainty, the way you understand a chessboard three moves before the trap closes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1210
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.030578512396694214
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008264462809917355
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.68
std12.88
cv0.941
sampleLengths
034
18
219
39
46
54
640
728
85
933
1019
1112
1215
1310
147
158
1615
177
181
191
203
2145
2211
233
2426
255
2611
2711
287
294
3029
3117
326
333
3438
3526
367
3712
3810
3915
402
4113
421
435
4441
452
461
475
4820
493
57.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.40217391304347827
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then it had warmed further."
1"Then it had tugged —"
2"Somewhere past the fourth stone,"
3"Just one bloom, white, three"
4"Then the one beside it."
5"Then five more, then a"
ratio0.076
63.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences79
matches
0"Her hands remembered the climb"
1"It was on the heat"
2"She'd tried ignoring it."
3"She'd hung it on a"
4"It sat against her collarbone,"
5"She'd assumed that meant she"
6"She told herself it meant"
7"She counted them twice on"
8"She knew that."
9"she said, to nobody, to"
10"She could hear her own"
11"She stepped through."
12"Her voice came out flat."
13"It didn't echo — the"
14"She walked toward the centre."
15"Her footsteps in the moss"
16"She heard it."
17"She stopped walking."
18"Her phone said 11:47 when"
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.392
67.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences79
matches
0"The last Tube had dumped"
1"Rory went over the top"
2"Her hands remembered the climb"
3"It was on the heat"
4"The pendant hadn't cooled since"
5"She'd tried ignoring it."
6"She'd hung it on a"
7"The pendant had gone quiet"
8"That was the first wrong"
9"It sat against her collarbone,"
10"She'd assumed that meant she"
11"She told herself it meant"
12"The standing stones rose out"
13"She counted them twice on"
14"Eva had walked her here"
15"The gap between the third"
16"She knew that."
17"Isolde had shown her, pressing"
18"Rory stopped at the threshold."
19"The air in the gap"
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She turned in a slow circle, holding the phone up, and the flowers at the edge of its reach lay closed and pale, and her signal was dead, and the battery that h…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, without moving her lips much,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.0274%