| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1259 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1218 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Grove | 10 | | Park | 1 | | October | 4 | | Rory | 8 | | Isolde | 6 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Tube" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed larger in here than the sky outside could account for" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1259 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.13 | | std | 27.67 | | cv | 0.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 110 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 69 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 9 |
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| 93.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been open" | | 2 | "was spoken" |
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| 91.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was starting" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was dripping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it had tugged — there was no other word for it, a gentle directional pull, like a compass needle made of warmth — toward the river, toward the park, toward the Grove." | | 1 | "The Grove opened around her the way it had in October — a bowl of soft ground, ringed by the stones, lit by a moon that always seemed larger in here than the sky outside could account for." | | 2 | "It didn't echo — the Grove swallowed sound, always had — but something at the edge of the clearing gave the impression of an echo, a soft pressure against her ears like a word arriving a half-second after it was spoken." | | 3 | "Not felt — heard, the faint wet squeeze of it, twice, in her own rhythm." | | 4 | "They jumped again while she watched — 10:03." | | 5 | "But Isolde wasn't here, and the Grove knew it, and the Grove — she was starting to suspect — was the kind of place that behaved itself when its keeper was watching." | | 6 | "This was a pulse — a beat, a pause, a beat — deep crimson flaring through the gem with each throb, and it was not in time with Rory's heart." | | 7 | "The ripple spread past the stones, out past her sight, thousands of blooms rotating on their stems with a sound like silk sliding over silk, and the pendant pulsed faster, and the dripping water kept its slow idiot time, plink, plink, and somewhere behind her — close, close enough that the short hairs on her neck stood to attention — something drew in a breath." | | 8 | "The Grove had been sealed and silent since she'd entered, one heartbeat, hers — and now there were two, and the second one smelled of rain on hot stone." | | 9 | "Turning around was what it wanted; she understood that with a cold, sliding certainty, the way you understand a chessboard three moves before the trap closes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1210 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.030578512396694214 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0008264462809917355 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 13.68 | | std | 12.88 | | cv | 0.941 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.40217391304347827 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it had warmed further." | | 1 | "Then it had tugged —" | | 2 | "Somewhere past the fourth stone," | | 3 | "Just one bloom, white, three" | | 4 | "Then the one beside it." | | 5 | "Then five more, then a" |
| | ratio | 0.076 | |
| 63.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hands remembered the climb" | | 1 | "It was on the heat" | | 2 | "She'd tried ignoring it." | | 3 | "She'd hung it on a" | | 4 | "It sat against her collarbone," | | 5 | "She'd assumed that meant she" | | 6 | "She told herself it meant" | | 7 | "She counted them twice on" | | 8 | "She knew that." | | 9 | "she said, to nobody, to" | | 10 | "She could hear her own" | | 11 | "She stepped through." | | 12 | "Her voice came out flat." | | 13 | "It didn't echo — the" | | 14 | "She walked toward the centre." | | 15 | "Her footsteps in the moss" | | 16 | "She heard it." | | 17 | "She stopped walking." | | 18 | "Her phone said 11:47 when" | | 19 | "She turned in a slow" |
| | ratio | 0.392 | |
| 67.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The last Tube had dumped" | | 1 | "Rory went over the top" | | 2 | "Her hands remembered the climb" | | 3 | "It was on the heat" | | 4 | "The pendant hadn't cooled since" | | 5 | "She'd tried ignoring it." | | 6 | "She'd hung it on a" | | 7 | "The pendant had gone quiet" | | 8 | "That was the first wrong" | | 9 | "It sat against her collarbone," | | 10 | "She'd assumed that meant she" | | 11 | "She told herself it meant" | | 12 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 13 | "She counted them twice on" | | 14 | "Eva had walked her here" | | 15 | "The gap between the third" | | 16 | "She knew that." | | 17 | "Isolde had shown her, pressing" | | 18 | "Rory stopped at the threshold." | | 19 | "The air in the gap" |
| | ratio | 0.785 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned in a slow circle, holding the phone up, and the flowers at the edge of its reach lay closed and pale, and her signal was dead, and the battery that h…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, without moving her lips much," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |