Run: 2026-09-23-01M37NYJS2EF24QK7BZ4MCS4HR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.021084
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always stuck, and Rory wrenched it free with her palm just as Ptolemy wound himself between her ankles and yowled at the door like the world was ending. She opened it anyway. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell with rain beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his platinum hair plastered flat on one side where the wind had gotten to it. He'd never let the wind get to it before. His cane hung from his right hand, and his mismatched eyes — one amber, one a black that swallowed the light from her doorway — found her face and stayed there. "You look terrible," Rory told him. "Bonsoir to you too, Carter." She kept her hand on the door. Behind her, Eva's flat spread its chaos of open books and scattered notes across every surface, and the smell of the curry house below had crept up through the floorboards all evening, and none of it explained why a half-demon information broker was standing outside at eleven at night looking like a man who'd walked the whole of East London in the rain. "Three months." She crossed her arms over her vest. "Three months of nothing, and you knock on Eva's door?" "I knocked on four doors before this one. Silas wouldn't tell me where you'd gone. Yu-Fei threatened me with a cleaver. In Cantonese, which was a nice touch." "And yet here you are." "Here I am." He shifted his weight off his left leg, and only then did she notice the tear in his trouser seam, the dark stain beneath it that wasn't rain. Her arms uncrossed before she could stop them. "You're bleeding." "It's a scratch." "Lucien." "It's a scratch that walked up four flights of stairs, so if you could see your way to letting me sit down before I ruin your friend's doormat with any of it, I'd consider it a professional courtesy." Ptolemy yowled again, sharper this time, and butted his head against Lucien's shin. Traitor. The cat had hissed at the postman for two years. Rory stepped back and let him in. He moved past her into the flat, and the whole room seemed to rearrange itself around him — or maybe that was just her, the way her pulse knocked against her ribs just because he'd come close enough that she could smell rain and smoke and something under it, faint and warm, that she'd spent three months training herself to forget. He lowered himself onto the edge of Eva's sofa, clearing a space first, moving a stack of scrolls with the care of a man who knew what it cost to lose research. His cane he laid across his knees. She fetched the first aid kit from under the kitchen sink because it was something to do with her hands. "Trouser leg," she said. He peeled the fabric back from a shallow gash along his calf, and she knelt in front of him with antiseptic and gauze and a jaw set hard enough to crack teeth. He watched her work. She could feel both his eyes on the crown of her head, and she refused to look up. "You went to Silas first," she said. "And Yu-Fei. Everyone but me." "I went to everyone but you on purpose. You were the last resort." "Charming." "You were the last resort," he repeated, quieter, "because coming here was the thing I promised myself I wouldn't do. Your friend's security is good. Three deadbolts, a salt line under the sill, a cat with opinions. But my being seen asking after you undoes all of it. The moment someone connects Lucien Moreau to Aurora Carter, every person who wants leverage on me knows exactly where to apply pressure." The gauze was in her hands. She'd gotten through the antiseptic without flinching for either of them. Now her fingers stopped moving. "So why are you here?" "Because Evan hired someone." He said it plainly, the way he said everything that mattered, stripped of ornament. "A tracker. Not the kind you're thinking — the kind who finds people. He paid half up front, three days ago. He's not looking for a fight, Rory. He's looking for an address." The room went very still. Rain ticked against the window. Somewhere below, the curry house clattered its pans. "How do you know?" "Because the tracker came to me first. It's what I do. People pay me to find things, and this one paid me to find you, and I said yes." Her head came up. "You what?" "So that I would be the one holding your location. So that no one else would be." His voice didn't rise. It never did. That was the worst of it — even now, even bleeding on Eva's sofa, he sounded like a man reading out terms. "I took the contract, Carter. I've been feeding him dead ends for three days. Cardiff addresses. A flat in Bristol that hasn't had your name on the post since April. And it's working, and it will keep working, until either Evan runs out of money or the tracker works out that the man he hired to find you is the same man standing in your doorway at eleven at night with a hole in his leg." She stood. Her knees didn't want to hold her, but she stood, and she put the first aid kit down on a stack of books, and she looked at him from the safety of two steps away. "You took a contract on me." "I took the only contract on you." "That's not — you don't get to do that. You don't get to disappear for three months and then show up and tell me you've been running my life from the shadows like that's a love letter." Something crossed his face then, fast, gone before she could name it. He looked down at the cane across his knees and turned it once, slowly, the ivory handle catching the lamplight. "The morning I put you on that train," he said, "you asked me for one reason to stay. And I gave you a train ticket instead." "I asked you for one honest sentence." "And I gave you a lie of omission, which I've been told is worse." He looked up. The amber eye caught the light; the black one didn't. "Here is the honest sentence, then, three months late. I stayed away because Evan was hunting, and anyone standing next to you became a target, and I could survive being a target. I could not survive being the reason they put their hands on you." "You don't know that." "I know it the way I know everything. I did the research." A laugh broke out of her, cracked and unwilling. "God. You did the research. On yourself. On whether you were allowed to—" "On whether I was safe to want," he said. "Different study. Same conclusion." Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa beside him and settled into the gap between his hip and the armrest, purring like an engine, and Lucien's hand drifted down to stroke the tabby's spine without his seeming to notice. Rory watched that hand move. Gentle. Of course it was gentle. That was the whole problem — he was gentle with everything except her, and even that had been a kind of gentleness, hadn't it, dressed up as cold. "Your friend comes home at midnight," he said. "I'll be gone before then. The tracker will keep chasing Bristol, and you'll never have to see me again, and we can call this what it was — a professional courtesy." "Stop deciding things for me." She stepped closer. One step. The rain filled the silence where his answer should have been. "You did it on the platform. You did it with the contract. You're doing it right now, planning your exit while I'm still standing in front of you." "Rory." "Say the honest sentence again. The real one. Not the version with an escape hatch built into it." His hand had gone still on the cat's back. The amber eye was the one that gave him away — it had gone molten, the way it had that night in his office when he'd reached across the desk and tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear and then apologized like a gentleman, like an idiot, like a man building his own escape hatch in real time. "You know what I was doing the night Evan found my old flat," she said. "I was writing to you. Three lines. I never sent it." "Read it to me." "No. You first." He rose off the sofa. Slow, favouring the leg, but he rose, and suddenly the two steps of safety were one step of nothing at all, and Ptolemy chirped in protest at being abandoned, and the rain kept up its patient ticking against the glass. Lucien's free hand came up — hovered at her jaw, not touching, close enough that she could feel the warmth of it, close enough that her whole body leaned without moving. "I have never once in my life," he murmured, "wanted something I was allowed to keep." Her pulse was everywhere — her wrists, her throat, the old crescent scar. "And now?" His thumb brushed her cheekbone. First contact in three months. She didn't close her eyes. Neither did he.
created_at"2026-09-23T17:45:24.019Z" 9/23/2026, 5:45:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"could feel"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"could feel"
3"silence"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1573
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount894
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Eva3
East1
London1
Lucien4
One1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"One"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a man reading out terms"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1573
matches(empty)
66.67% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"warm, that she'd"
1"watched that hand"
2"had that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean27.6
std27.32
cv0.99
sampleLengths
035
14
271
36
45
570
619
728
85
931
1010
113
121
1338
1424
157
16100
1720
184
1954
2012
2113
221
2370
2422
255
2651
2718
284
2929
306
31122
3237
336
347
3537
3632
3726
387
3972
404
4112
4222
4313
4476
4539
4649
471
4818
4969
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was ending"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences100
ratio0.08
matches
0"His cane hung from his right hand, and his mismatched eyes — one amber, one a black that swallowed the light from her doorway — found her face and stayed there."
1"He moved past her into the flat, and the whole room seemed to rearrange itself around him — or maybe that was just her, the way her pulse knocked against her ribs just because he'd come close enough that she could smell rain and smoke and something under it, faint and warm, that she'd spent three months training herself to forget."
2"That was the worst of it — even now, even bleeding on Eva's sofa, he sounded like a man reading out terms."
3"The amber eye caught the light; the black one didn't."
4"That was the whole problem — he was gentle with everything except her, and even that had been a kind of gentleness, hadn't it, dressed up as cold."
5"The amber eye was the one that gave him away — it had gone molten, the way it had that night in his office when he'd reached across the desk and tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear and then apologized like a gentleman, like an idiot, like a man building his own escape hatch in real time."
6"Lucien's free hand came up — hovered at her jaw, not touching, close enough that she could feel the warmth of it, close enough that her whole body leaned without moving."
7"Her pulse was everywhere — her wrists, her throat, the old crescent scar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.036076662908680945
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004509582863585118
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean15.73
std16.11
cv1.024
sampleLengths
035
14
231
39
431
56
65
77
863
99
1010
1128
125
1331
148
152
163
171
1838
1913
201
2110
227
2361
2432
257
2620
274
2832
294
3018
317
325
3313
341
3570
366
3711
385
395
4018
4133
425
435
448
454
4629
474
482
4921
67.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
1"Of course it was gentle."
ratio0.036
9.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences55
matches
0"She opened it anyway."
1"He'd never let the wind"
2"His cane hung from his"
3"She kept her hand on"
4"She crossed her arms over"
5"He shifted his weight off"
6"Her arms uncrossed before she"
7"He moved past her into"
8"He lowered himself onto the"
9"His cane he laid across"
10"She fetched the first aid"
11"He peeled the fabric back"
12"He watched her work."
13"She could feel both his"
14"he repeated, quieter"
15"She'd gotten through the antiseptic"
16"He said it plainly, the"
17"Her head came up."
18"His voice didn't rise"
19"It never did."
ratio0.527
14.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences55
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"She opened it anyway."
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"He'd never let the wind"
4"His cane hung from his"
5"Rory told him"
6"She kept her hand on"
7"She crossed her arms over"
8"He shifted his weight off"
9"Her arms uncrossed before she"
10"Ptolemy yowled again, sharper this"
11"The cat had hissed at"
12"Rory stepped back and let"
13"He moved past her into"
14"He lowered himself onto the"
15"His cane he laid across"
16"She fetched the first aid"
17"He peeled the fabric back"
18"He watched her work."
19"She could feel both his"
ratio0.891
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Now her fingers stopped moving."
ratio0.018
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His cane hung from his right hand, and his mismatched eyes — one amber, one a black that swallowed the light from her doorway — found her face and stayed there."
1"Behind her, Eva's flat spread its chaos of open books and scattered notes across every surface, and the smell of the curry house below had crept up through the …"
2"He lowered himself onto the edge of Eva's sofa, clearing a space first, moving a stack of scrolls with the care of a man who knew what it cost to lose research."
3"Slow, favouring the leg, but he rose, and suddenly the two steps of safety were one step of nothing at all, and Ptolemy chirped in protest at being abandoned, a…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he repeated, quieter,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.082
83.7267%