Run: 2026-09-23-01M37NYY1YMTW3VESZHZ57MCGV

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Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.020898
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory all the way from Pimlico, riding the back of her delivery bike like a debt collector. By the time she wheeled into the alley behind The Raven's Nest and chained the bike to the railing, her ponytail had given up and her jacket had gone the colour of a drowned cat. The green neon buzzed overhead, painting the puddles the shade of hospital scrubs. She pushed through the door into warmth and the smell of lemon polish and old wood. Tuesday nights were dead. One couple in the corner arguing in whispers over a single glass of wine, a man at the end of the bar nursing a pint he'd clearly been nursing for an hour. Silas stood behind the counter with a cloth in his hand, working a tumbler in slow circles, the silver ring on his right hand catching the lamplight each time it passed. "You look like something the tide left," he told her without looking up. "Cheung had me running to Hampstead twice. In this." She shook water off her sleeve onto the floor mat. "Twice, Si. Same address. The man forgot his own dumplings." "Then you've earned the dubious privilege of the good stuff." He reached for the shelf above the optics, the one he pretended wasn't reserved for people he actually liked. The door opened. Rory felt the change before she understood it. The cold came in, yes, and the noise of the rain, but it was Silas who told her something had happened. The cloth stopped mid-circle. His shoulders went still in a way she'd learned to read over two years of living above his bar — the stillness of a man who had heard a sound in the dark and was deciding whether it was a floorboard or a footstep. The newcomer stood in the doorway, dripping. He was somewhere north of Silas's age but wore it worse — the rain had flattened thin grey hair against his skull, and his coat hung off him the way coats hang off men who used to fill them. One hand gripped a walking stick with a brass head worn bright by a thumb. When he pushed the door shut behind him, his hand shook. Not from the cold. It was a permanent thing, a tremor that lived in him. "Evening," Silas said. His voice was level. Nothing in it. Which, with Silas, meant everything. "Evening." The man looked around the bar the way soldiers look around rooms — exits first, faces second. His gaze settled on the maps covering the far wall. "You always did collect other people's wars." Rory froze with one boot halfway off. She'd never heard anyone talk to Silas like that. "Tom." Silas set the tumbler down. The cloth stayed in his hand, knotted in his fist now. "Hello, Blackwood." The name landed on the bar like a dropped glass. Silas came out from behind the counter, and Rory saw the limp she usually stopped noticing — tonight it announced itself, his left knee refusing to take his weight the way it had refused for two decades. He stopped a pace from the man. Neither of them moved to shake hands. Neither of them stepped back. "You're supposed to be in Lisbon," Silas said. "I was. Lisbon didn't take." "You wrote that you'd married." "I did. She didn't stay." Tom's mouth bent, an expression that had once probably been a grin, the kind that talked its way past doormen and into parties. The ruins of it were still visible. "You'd have liked her. She said I told the same three stories and she could set her watch by them." "I'd have liked her for that alone." A breath of laughter escaped Tom, and some of the tension went out of the doorway with it. He moved to the bar, lowering himself onto a stool with the careful choreography of a man negotiating with his own body. The stick he propped against the counter. Rory noticed he placed it exactly within reach — a habit, she guessed, worn as smooth as the brass head. "Whiskey," Tom said. "The Irish, not that peat you keep for tourists." "You don't get to guess my stock after twenty years." "I don't guess. I remember." Silas poured two. His hand, Rory saw, was steady. She'd have bet money it took effort. She stood there with one boot on and one boot off, invisible in a way that suited her. Then she caught Silas's eye. He gave his head the smallest shake — not dismissal. Stay. She slid onto a stool two down from Tom's and pretended to be furniture. "You kept the ring," Tom said. Silas turned his right hand over. The silver signet caught the light. "You gave it to me." "I know I gave it to you. That's not what I'm asking." Tom lifted his whiskey and held it under his nose for a long moment before drinking. "I'm asking why you kept it. Man like you. Sentiment's supposed to be a liability." "Everything about you was a liability. I made an exception." Tom smiled at the glass. The tremor in his hand made the whiskey shiver. "You know what's funny. I can't drink more than one of these now. Medication. One's my limit." He set it down with exaggerated care. "The Tom Deacon you knew would've found that hilarious. He'd have ordered three and dared the pills to stop him." "He'd have ordered four." "He'd have ordered five and stolen yours." Tom looked over, and for a second the old face surfaced — the charmer, the one who'd talked his way through checkpoints, if the stories Silas never told were anything to go by. Then it sank again beneath the newer one, the thinner one, and he studied the maps on the wall instead of his friend. "Prague still sells those terrible sausages. By the bridge. You remember." "I remember the bridge." "Course you do." Tom's thumb found the rim of his glass and traced it. "I go back every few years. Walk it. Look at the water. You know what I keep waiting for?" Silas didn't answer. "For it to mean something. For standing there to count as an apology." Tom's voice stayed even, conversational, a man discussing weather. "It doesn't, as it turns out. The water doesn't accept apologies. It just goes where it's going." "Tom—" "She was twenty-six, Si." The tremor reached his voice now, just at the edge of it. "Lena was twenty-six and she trusted us because I told her to trust us, and when the radios went down I made the call, and the call was wrong, and I have been wrong every day since. You carrying that leg around — that's the fair part. That's the bill. I never begrudged you the limp." "I never begrudged you the decision," Silas said. "You've begrudged it enough for both of us." The couple in the corner left. The door sighed shut. Rain ticked against the window like something patient. Tom turned on his stool. For the first time he looked straight at Silas, and Rory saw twenty years move between them without a word — the whole distance, Prague to Lisbon to this stool, the wives who left and the knees that failed and the one drink that was now a limit. "You look old," Tom said. "You look worse." "I've had more practice." Silas laughed — a real one, startled out of him, and Tom's face cracked open in answer, and for a moment the two old men in the dim bar were just two young agents who'd once been the most dangerous thing in any room they entered, and knew it, and had never once needed to say so. Then the moment passed, the way moments do, and Tom lifted his glass and drained the last of his single permitted whiskey. "Stay for another," Silas said. "Water. Coffee. Whatever the pills allow. There's a room upstairs if Lisbon really didn't take." "I'm not staying in your bar, Si." "You've stayed in worse." "That was a different man." Tom set down the empty glass and stood, slowly, taking the counter's weight. He collected his stick. At the door he paused, hand on the brass handle, and looked back — not at Silas, but at the ring. "Same time next year," he said. "The bridge. One of us will be sober enough to remember it." He pulled the door open. The green neon washed over him, and the rain took him back. Silas stood where he'd been left, the cloth still knotted in his fist. Rory counted the seconds — five, six, seven — before he turned back to the counter and picked up Tom's empty glass. He washed it slowly, working the cloth in slow circles, and the ring caught the light each time it passed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The man looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.408
leniency0.816
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.041
89.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"tension"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1485
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Rory noticed he placed it exactly within reach — a habit, she guessed, worn as smooth as the brass head."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1068
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Tom"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Pimlico1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas20
Tom16
Prague1
Lisbon1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Tom"
places
0"Prague"
1"Lisbon"
globalScore0.564
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.673
wordCount1485
matches
0"not at Silas, but at the ring"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean26.52
std23.85
cv0.899
sampleLengths
056
129
267
313
429
529
63
777
887
915
1035
1116
1217
132
1466
158
165
175
1855
197
2067
2112
2210
235
2416
2548
266
2712
285
2943
3010
3158
324
3374
344
3533
363
3739
381
3972
4016
4118
4253
435
443
454
4657
4722
4820
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was deciding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences112
ratio0.098
matches
0"His shoulders went still in a way she'd learned to read over two years of living above his bar — the stillness of a man who had heard a sound in the dark and was deciding whether it was a floorboard or a footstep."
1"He was somewhere north of Silas's age but wore it worse — the rain had flattened thin grey hair against his skull, and his coat hung off him the way coats hang off men who used to fill them."
2"\"Evening.\" The man looked around the bar the way soldiers look around rooms — exits first, faces second."
3"Silas came out from behind the counter, and Rory saw the limp she usually stopped noticing — tonight it announced itself, his left knee refusing to take his weight the way it had refused for two decades."
4"Rory noticed he placed it exactly within reach — a habit, she guessed, worn as smooth as the brass head."
5"He gave his head the smallest shake — not dismissal."
6"\"He'd have ordered five and stolen yours.\" Tom looked over, and for a second the old face surfaced — the charmer, the one who'd talked his way through checkpoints, if the stories Silas never told were anything to go by."
7"For the first time he looked straight at Silas, and Rory saw twenty years move between them without a word — the whole distance, Prague to Lisbon to this stool, the wives who left and the knees that failed and the one drink that was now a limit."
8"Silas laughed — a real one, startled out of him, and Tom's face cracked open in answer, and for a moment the two old men in the dim bar were just two young agents who'd once been the most dangerous thing in any room they entered, and knew it, and had never once needed to say so."
9"At the door he paused, hand on the brass handle, and looked back — not at Silas, but at the ring."
10"Rory counted the seconds — five, six, seven — before he turned back to the counter and picked up Tom's empty glass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1057
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02554399243140965
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006622516556291391
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean13.26
std11.42
cv0.861
sampleLengths
021
135
213
316
44
532
631
713
819
910
1029
113
128
1321
144
1544
167
1739
1815
1911
204
2111
223
234
243
255
2618
2710
287
297
309
316
3211
332
3410
3537
367
377
385
398
405
415
4228
437
4420
457
4618
4722
487
4920
47.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then she caught Silas's eye."
1"Then it sank again beneath"
2"Then the moment passed, the"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences75
matches
0"She pushed through the door"
1"he told her without looking"
2"She shook water off her"
3"He reached for the shelf"
4"His shoulders went still in"
5"He was somewhere north of"
6"It was a permanent thing,"
7"His voice was level."
8"His gaze settled on the"
9"She'd never heard anyone talk"
10"He stopped a pace from"
11"He moved to the bar,"
12"His hand, Rory saw, was"
13"She'd have bet money it"
14"She stood there with one"
15"He gave his head the"
16"She slid onto a stool"
17"He set it down with"
18"He collected his stick."
19"He pulled the door open."
ratio0.28
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"The green neon buzzed overhead,"
2"She pushed through the door"
3"Tuesday nights were dead."
4"Silas stood behind the counter"
5"he told her without looking"
6"She shook water off her"
7"He reached for the shelf"
8"The door opened."
9"Rory felt the change before"
10"The cold came in, yes,"
11"The cloth stopped mid-circle."
12"His shoulders went still in"
13"The newcomer stood in the"
14"He was somewhere north of"
15"It was a permanent thing,"
16"His voice was level."
17"Nothing in it."
18"The man looked around the"
19"His gaze settled on the"
ratio0.853
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"By the time she wheeled"
ratio0.013
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas stood behind the counter with a cloth in his hand, working a tumbler in slow circles, the silver ring on his right hand catching the lamplight each time i…"
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2"He was somewhere north of Silas's age but wore it worse — the rain had flattened thin grey hair against his skull, and his coat hung off him the way coats hang …"
3"Silas laughed — a real one, startled out of him, and Tom's face cracked open in answer, and for a moment the two old men in the dim bar were just two young agen…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.367
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.7033%