Run: 2026-09-23-01M37P1CEQTC72N2SR91ZEKXNJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.022095
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cordon tape flapped against the railings outside Camden Town Tube station, rain-slapped and sagging. Harlow ducked beneath it, flashed her warrant card at the constable shivering under an umbrella, and followed the torch beams down the escalator shaft. The escalator had been dead for eleven years. The steps still held their chrome grooves, slick with condensation, and the smell hit her halfway — damp plaster, rust, and underneath it something sharper. Struck matches. Ozone. "Down here, guv." DS Reyes's voice bounced off the tiled walls. "Platform three. Mind the fourth step, it's gone." She picked her way down. The station had closed in 2015, bricked up and padlocked, and the powers that be had let it rot. Now halogen lamps on tripods lit the platform like a stage, and in the centre of it, a dead man sat propped against a tiled pillar with his legs out straight, as though he'd paused for a rest and forgotten to stand up again. "Male, mid-fifties, no ID yet." Reyes crouched beside the body, his notebook open. "Uniform found him at half six when they chased some kids off the fencing. Doctor puts time of death between two and four this morning." Quinn knelt on the other side of the corpse. Grey. Not pale — grey, the colour of wet cement, from his receding hairline down to his fingernails. His lips were dusted with something fine and pale, and when she leaned close, the ozone smell thickened. "What's on his mouth?" "Doc thinks ash. Cigarette, maybe." "He's got no cigarettes. No lighter." She turned the man's hand over. His fingers were curled around a small brass compass, clenched so tight the tendons stood out like bridge cables. Verdigris bloomed green across the casing. She tilted it toward the light. The face was etched with symbols — not the N, E, S, W she'd grown up with, but interlocking sigils, fine as lacework. "Antique, that." Reyes nodded at it. "Victorian, maybe older. There's a whole community of these urban explorers down here, guv. They film themselves climbing through the tunnels. Half of them nick stuff from sites — the compass is probably lifted from some collector's house. He came down here to hide it, had a heart attack. Simple." "Simple." Quinn set the compass down on the platform edge and looked at the man's shoes. Good leather, recently resoled, laced in a neat double knot. "What's in his pockets?" Reyes checked his notes. "Wallet, two hundred and ten in cash, keys, phone. And a little disc thing, bone or ivory. SOCO's bagged it." She held out her hand. He passed her the evidence bag. Inside lay a disc the size of a two-pound coin, carved from something yellowed and dense, with a symbol scored into its face. She held it beside the compass. The same sigil, or near enough — the same looping knot, closed at the top. "Reyes, if he'd stolen the compass, why is it worth more than two hundred quid in his wallet? Nobody kills him for it. Nobody takes it. He's not robbed, he's not beaten, he's not stabbed." She stood and swept her torch along the platform. "Where's the way he came in?" "Service door at the south end. Pried open with a crowbar — they found the bar in his backpack." "Then let's walk his route." The dust lay thick on the platform, a grey felt of it, undisturbed for years except in one clean line of shoe prints leading from the service door to the pillar. Quinn walked beside them, not on them, torch angled low. The prints marched in — and stopped. She counted. The last print sat a good six feet from the body. "He walked in. Then what? Levitated the rest of the way?" Reyes crouched at the pillar, frowning. "Scuff marks, look. On the tiles behind him. He dragged." "Dragged by what?" She swept the beam in a slow arc. "There's one set of prints. One. His. No second person ever stood on this platform, so far as this dust is concerned — and yet he ends up six feet from his last step with his heels scraped the whole way back." She crouched again, closer to the body this time, and touched the back of her fingers to his neck. Cold. Colder than the air deserved. She pulled a glove off and pressed two fingers to the third rail running the length of the platform. Frost. In August. A skin of white frost over the steel, thickening where it ran toward the tunnel mouth. "Reyes. Come feel this." He pressed his thumb to the rail and jerked it back. "That's — how is that — the power's cut. It's been cut for years." "I know." She checked her watch out of habit — the worn leather band, the cracked face, the hands frozen at 3:14. She'd stopped winding it the week after Morris. It had never run again, and she'd never taken it off. "What time did you say the doctor put it?" "Between two and four." She dug out her phone and thumbed it alive. "What's his phone say?" Reyes retrieved the bagged handset, squinted at the dark screen. "Dead. Battery's drained flat. Weird — it's a new model, those hold charge for days." "His watch." She lifted the dead man's wrist. A cheap analogue watch, the kind you wound by hand. Stopped at 3:14. She let the arm down. "The dust on his lips. Has the lab field-tested it?" "Ran it at the van. Came back negative for everything. Not opiates, not coke, not any cutting agent on the sheet. Doc reckons contamination, maybe mould spores." "Mould doesn't smell like a thunderstorm." She stood, walked to the tunnel mouth, and stood in its shadow. The dark beyond the halogen light breathed cold at her, and for a moment she was back on the river path three years ago, kneeling beside Morris with frost blooming across the wet grass in July and no cause of death on any form she ever signed. She shook it off. Not now. "Reyes. Your theory. Say it again." He sighed and got to his feet. "Urban explorer, guv. Nicks an antique, comes down here to hide it or to gloat over it, takes something — the dust, whatever it is — has a cardiac event, dies. The frost is the tunnel doing weird tunnel things. The prints — he was disoriented, stumbling. It hangs together." "It hangs together like a coat on one nail." She walked back to the compass, crouched, and picked it up by the edges, careful of the prints. "Look at the needle." He leaned over her shoulder. The needle stood rigid, quivering faintly, aimed dead at the tunnel mouth. She rose, walked ten paces to her left. The needle swung, tracking, holding its line on the dark archway. She walked past it, out onto the platform's centre. The needle turned its back on north, on her, on everything, and pointed at the tunnel again. "Needles don't do that," Reyes said. "No. They don't." She carried it to the tunnel mouth, arm extended, and the needle strained forward like a dog on a lead. She played her torch along the archway. The tunnel had been bricked up — a curved wall of old brick, mortared and grimed, exactly the kind of thing you'd expect to find sealing a dead station. Except the frost stopped at its edge in a clean line, and the grime stopped there too. She rapped it with a knuckle. The sound came back flat. "Guv?" She drew her pocket knife, opened the smallest blade, and pressed the tip into a mortar joint. It sank in. Half an inch, no resistance, and what came out on the steel wasn't grit — it was soft white plaster, dusting away like flour. "That's not brick." Reyes's voice had gone up half an octave. "That's — they've painted it? Who paints fake brickwork in a sealed tunnel?" "Someone who wanted this wall to be looked at and walked past." She scraped a slow arc across the face. The blade peeled a curl of painted plaster away, and cold air pushed through the gap, rich with ozone, breathing against her hand. Behind her, the compass needle trembled against its glass, straining toward the opening like it had found its master. Quinn stepped back and looked at the dead man, at the bone token in the evidence bag, at the compass that pointed at nothing a compass should ever point at. "Get the cordon moved back to the ticket hall," she said. "Nobody touches this wall. And Reyes — find me whoever at the museum knows what these symbols mean."
created_at"2026-09-23T17:46:55.847Z" 9/23/2026, 5:46:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
1"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.791
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.093
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1457
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount964
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Reyes"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Reyes"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Reyes8
Quinn4
Good1
Cold1
August1
Morris2
July1
persons
0"Reyes"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
3"August"
4"July"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.686
wordCount1457
matches
0"not the N, E, S, W she'd grown up with, but interlocking sigils, fine as lacework"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean34.69
std24.83
cv0.716
sampleLengths
075
119
268
338
445
54
65
766
856
930
1024
1155
1250
1319
145
1548
1613
1711
1816
1997
2019
214
2225
2350
244
2513
2625
2736
2827
2971
306
3157
3231
3362
346
3587
361
3744
3824
3962
4030
4129
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"were dusted"
1"were curled"
2"was etched"
3"been bricked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences108
ratio0.074
matches
0"The steps still held their chrome grooves, slick with condensation, and the smell hit her halfway — damp plaster, rust, and underneath it something sharper."
1"Not pale — grey, the colour of wet cement, from his receding hairline down to his fingernails."
2"The face was etched with symbols — not the N, E, S, W she'd grown up with, but interlocking sigils, fine as lacework."
3"The same sigil, or near enough — the same looping knot, closed at the top."
4"The prints marched in — and stopped."
5"\"I know.\" She checked her watch out of habit — the worn leather band, the cracked face, the hands frozen at 3:14."
6"The tunnel had been bricked up — a curved wall of old brick, mortared and grimed, exactly the kind of thing you'd expect to find sealing a dead station."
7"Half an inch, no resistance, and what came out on the steel wasn't grit — it was soft white plaster, dusting away like flour."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025052192066805846
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0041753653444676405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean13.49
std11.49
cv0.852
sampleLengths
015
124
28
325
42
51
611
78
85
919
1044
1113
1225
139
141
1517
1618
174
185
1912
2019
216
226
2323
246
2550
2616
2710
284
294
3020
315
326
3323
346
3515
3644
376
3819
395
4031
4110
427
432
4411
4511
466
4710
4811
4961
83.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5092592592592593
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences72
matches
0"She picked her way down."
1"His lips were dusted with"
2"She turned the man's hand"
3"His fingers were curled around"
4"She tilted it toward the"
5"She held out her hand."
6"He passed her the evidence"
7"She held it beside the"
8"She stood and swept her"
9"She swept the beam in"
10"She crouched again, closer to"
11"She pulled a glove off"
12"He pressed his thumb to"
13"She checked her watch out"
14"She'd stopped winding it the"
15"It had never run again,"
16"She dug out her phone"
17"She lifted the dead man's"
18"She let the arm down."
19"She stood, walked to the"
ratio0.444
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences72
matches
0"The cordon tape flapped against"
1"Harlow ducked beneath it, flashed"
2"The escalator had been dead"
3"The steps still held their"
4"DS Reyes's voice bounced off"
5"She picked her way down."
6"The station had closed in"
7"Reyes crouched beside the body,"
8"Quinn knelt on the other"
9"His lips were dusted with"
10"She turned the man's hand"
11"His fingers were curled around"
12"Verdigris bloomed green across the"
13"She tilted it toward the"
14"The face was etched with"
15"Reyes nodded at it"
16"Quinn set the compass down"
17"Reyes checked his notes."
18"She held out her hand."
19"He passed her the evidence"
ratio0.875
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Now halogen lamps on tripods"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Now halogen lamps on tripods lit the platform like a stage, and in the centre of it, a dead man sat propped against a tiled pillar with his legs out straight, a…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Reyes crouched, his notebook open"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.047
leniency0.093
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.4658%