Run: 2026-09-23-01M37P1EQR5BDQ86ST6R0D3H7M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.019020
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt jammed the way it always did, and Rory wrestled it open with the heel of her hand before pulling the door wide. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell with rain sheeting off his shoulders, his platinum hair plastered against his temple in a way she'd never seen before. No polish. No smirk. Water pooled around the ferrule of his ivory-handled cane on Eva's doormat. "Rory." She started pushing the door shut. The cane's tip shot out and wedged against the frame, and for a moment they were both just leaning — her weight against the wood, his against the brass-handled stick between them. "Three months, Lucien. Three months of nothing, and you show up at eleven at night on a Thursday?" "Three nights ago, a man named Evan Whitmore bought a tracking charm from a broker in Whitechapel." The name hit her like cold water down the collar. Her grip on the door loosened. Not enough to let him in. Enough that he noticed. "Your ex has been asking questions in the wrong places," he went on, and his voice — that low Marseille drawl she'd taught herself to stop hearing in her sleep — stayed level, almost gentle. "The kind of places where the answers come with teeth. He has your photograph. He has your old name. He does not, yet, have your address, because I have been making certain of it." "You've been — what?" She stepped back before she could stop herself, and he crossed the threshold like he'd been invited, shaking rain off his coat onto Eva's stacks of research notes. "You've been watching him? For three months? While you couldn't spare me so much as a text?" "You were safer not knowing." Ptolemy appeared from behind a fortress of folklore textbooks, took one look at the half-demon in the doorway, and wound around his ankles purring like a hair dryer. Traitor. Rory scooped the cat up and held him against her chest like a shield. "You don't get to decide what keeps me safe. That's not — you don't get to do that." "I'm aware." Something in his jaw shifted. "May I sit? It's something of a long story." "You can stand in the rain on the landing, where you've apparently been living." He exhaled through his nose — the closest thing to a laugh she'd gotten out of him in half a year — and moved toward the sofa anyway, and that was when she saw it. The dark stain spreading along his left side, charcoal fabric hiding most of it but not the way he carried the ribs above it, stiff, like the muscles there had turned to poured concrete. "You're bleeding." "It's a scratch." "Lucien." She dumped Ptolemy onto the cushions, grabbed his sleeve, and pulled the jacket open before he could object. The shirt beneath was soaked through, and not with rain. A gash sat just above his hip, shallow but long, the kind a knife makes when someone twists it on the way out. "A scratch. From what?" "From a broker in Whitechapel who felt the price of my questions was insufficient." He lowered himself onto the sofa with a grace that fooled nobody. "His associate disagreed with my exit. Loudly." She was already moving — Eva's bathroom, the first aid kit under the sink, because of course Eva had a proper one, suture thread and iodine and everything, because Rory's life had taught her that every flat she loved came stocked for emergencies. She came back with the kit and a kitchen chair and pointed at the chair. "Shirt off. Sit." "How commanding. The barrister's daughter emerges." "The delivery driver with a needle emerges. Shirt. Off." He undid his buttons one by one, and she busied herself threading the suture while he did it, because watching was not an option. But then the shirt came off and she had to look, had to map the terrain of him — the old scar below his collarbone from the night he'd stepped between her and a man with a gun, the lean muscle of his stomach, the fresh wound weeping red down toward his waistband. "You taught me these stitches," she said, kneeling beside the chair, pressing gauze to the gash. He hissed through his teeth. "On an orange, in the back room of that club in Soho. You said, a person who can sew is never helpless." "I remember." "You said a lot of things that night." She worked the needle through his skin. He didn't flinch, but his hand found the arm of the chair and gripped it until his knuckles went the colour of his hair. "You said you'd teach me how to disappear properly. You said you'd come back the next evening with papers. You said —" she pulled the thread taut, a little tighter than the wound strictly required — "you said you'd be there when I woke up." "Rory." "I made two cups of coffee, Lucien. I drank both of them. It was the worst coffee I've ever had, because Eva's machine is a war crime, and I drank both cups because you were supposed to be in the second one." His free hand came up and closed over hers — over the needle, over the wound, over all of it — and his skin was fever-warm and his mismatched eyes, one amber and one void-black, held hers with a steadiness that made her chest ache. "I watched you sleep," he said. "The last morning. You were on your side, and your hair was across the pillow, and I thought — my father's people found my mother when I was four years old. They found her because someone who loved her got careless. I stood in that doorway and I understood that the most dangerous thing in your life wasn't Evan. It was me, wanting to stay." "So you left." "So I left. I told myself it was noble." His thumb moved across her knuckles, a stroke so light she might have imagined it. "It was cowardice wearing noble's coat." The rain hammered the window. Ptolemy had claimed the far end of the sofa and was watching them with the smug indifference of a creature who had never once been stupid about another person. Rory looked down at their hands, at the needle still pinched between her fingers, at the blood on her glove. "Finish the stitches," she said. "Then you're going to tell me everything about Evan. The broker, the charm, all of it. And then —" her voice cracked, and she hated it, and she pushed through it — "then you're going to say the thing you didn't say that morning. Because I've spent three months building a life around the silence where it should have been, and I'm done furnishing it." He was quiet for a long moment. Then he lifted her hand — the one with the needle, the one with the blood, the one with the little crescent scar on the wrist — and pressed his lips to her knuckles. "Finish sewing me up, Rory," he murmured against her skin, "and I'll say it until you believe me."
created_at"2026-09-23T17:46:58.183Z" 9/23/2026, 5:46:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.056
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"charm"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"charm"
2"stomach"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount748
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Moreau1
Eva4
Marseille1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"say that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean32.46
std24.85
cv0.765
sampleLengths
025
142
21
338
418
517
626
769
849
95
1043
1118
1216
1314
1469
152
163
1756
1833
1958
203
216
229
2377
2443
252
2684
271
2842
2945
3071
313
3230
3354
3470
3541
3618
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"been invited"
79.88% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs111
matches
0"was already moving "
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences66
ratio0.106
matches
0"The cane's tip shot out and wedged against the frame, and for a moment they were both just leaning — her weight against the wood, his against the brass-handled stick between them."
1"\"Your ex has been asking questions in the wrong places,\" he went on, and his voice — that low Marseille drawl she'd taught herself to stop hearing in her sleep — stayed level, almost gentle."
2"He exhaled through his nose — the closest thing to a laugh she'd gotten out of him in half a year — and moved toward the sofa anyway, and that was when she saw it."
3"She was already moving — Eva's bathroom, the first aid kit under the sink, because of course Eva had a proper one, suture thread and iodine and everything, because Rory's life had taught her that every flat she loved came stocked for emergencies."
4"But then the shirt came off and she had to look, had to map the terrain of him — the old scar below his collarbone from the night he'd stepped between her and a man with a gun, the lean muscle of his stomach, the fresh wound weeping red down toward his waistband."
5"His free hand came up and closed over hers — over the needle, over the wound, over all of it — and his skin was fever-warm and his mismatched eyes, one amber and one void-black, held hers with a steadiness that made her chest ache."
6"Then he lifted her hand — the one with the needle, the one with the blood, the one with the little crescent scar on the wrist — and pressed his lips to her knuckles."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount740
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.022972972972972974
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean18.2
std15.49
cv0.851
sampleLengths
025
126
22
32
412
51
66
732
818
917
1010
116
126
134
1435
1534
1632
1717
185
1928
201
2114
2218
237
249
2514
2635
2734
282
293
3019
3110
3223
334
3426
357
3643
3715
383
396
409
4124
4253
4316
445
4522
462
4715
4824
4945
60.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42424242424242425
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners28
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"Then he lifted her hand"
ratio0.026
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences38
matches
0"She started pushing the door"
1"Her grip on the door"
2"he went on, and his"
3"She stepped back before she"
4"He exhaled through his nose"
5"She dumped Ptolemy onto the"
6"He lowered himself onto the"
7"She was already moving —"
8"She came back with the"
9"He undid his buttons one"
10"she said, kneeling beside the"
11"He hissed through his teeth."
12"She worked the needle through"
13"He didn't flinch, but his"
14"His free hand came up"
15"His thumb moved across her"
16"you're going to say the"
17"He was quiet for a"
18"he murmured against her skin"
ratio0.5
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences38
matches
0"The third deadbolt jammed the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"Water pooled around the ferrule"
3"She started pushing the door"
4"The cane's tip shot out"
5"The name hit her like"
6"Her grip on the door"
7"he went on, and his"
8"She stepped back before she"
9"Ptolemy appeared from behind a"
10"Rory scooped the cat up"
11"Something in his jaw shifted"
12"He exhaled through his nose"
13"The dark stain spreading along"
14"She dumped Ptolemy onto the"
15"The shirt beneath was soaked"
16"A gash sat just above"
17"He lowered himself onto the"
18"She was already moving —"
19"She came back with the"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His free hand came up and closed over hers — over the needle, over the wound, over all of it — and his skin was fever-warm and his mismatched eyes, one amber an…"
1"Ptolemy had claimed the far end of the sofa and was watching them with the smug indifference of a creature who had never once been stupid about another person."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His thumb moved, a stroke so light she might have imagined it"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the thing you didn't (do)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.139
leniency0.278
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.111
83.3969%