Run: 2026-09-23-01M37P3WGTMG9EQ6YZNC6ZY3DR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.028047
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had swept Brewer Street clean of tourists, and the green neon above The Raven's Nest bled its colour into the puddles outside, so that for half a block the gutter ran like a river in an old story. Rory came through the door with her courier bag still damp across her shoulder, shook the water from her jacket, and dropped onto her usual stool at the end of the bar. "You're dripping on my floor," Silas observed, without looking up from the glass he was polishing. "Your floor has seen worse." She hooked the bag over her knee and fished out the last takeaway box of the night, its corner crushed. "Mrs. Okafor's dumplings. She wasn't home. Do I throw them out or do you want them?" "Put them behind the bar. Someone always wants them by closing." She slid the box across, and he set it beneath the till without ceremony, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the lamplight. A Tuesday crowd: two men arguing over a football match in the corner, a woman with a paperback near the window, the radio murmuring something with strings in it. Rory had just got her hands around a pint when the bell over the door gave its small dry cough, and the night changed. The man in the doorway was tall the way a burnt house is tall — all the structure there, none of the warmth. His coat hung off him. Rain had flattened what hair he had left, and he stood on the mat dripping, blinking at the room as though he'd walked out of one century and into the wrong end of another. Silas went still. Rory had seen him still before — the stillness of a man listening, weighing — but this was different. This was a man caught with his hand somewhere it had no business being, twenty-six years too late. "Si." One syllable, and Silas's knuckles whitened around the glass. "Marcus." "You always did pick the corners nobody looks for." The man's voice had a rasp in it now that hadn't been there in whatever version of him Silas kept. "Took me three years to find the place. Another two to make myself come in." Silas set the glass down on the bar with exaggerated care, as if the bar itself might object to noise. "You weren't meant to find it." "No. I don't imagine you were meant to be found at all." Rory kept her eyes on her pint and her ears on everything else. She'd lived above this bar for two years and had never once seen Silas surprised. She was watching him be surprised now, and it was like watching a wall develop a crack. Marcus came to the bar and lowered himself onto a stool with the deliberation of a man negotiating a truce with his own body. Up close the change was worse. There was a tremor in his hands, fine and constant, like a wire humming. He looked at the bottles ranked against the mirror, all that amber light, and Rory watched him look. "Ginger ale," Marcus told the bar top. "If you keep it." "I keep it." Silas turned, took a bottle from the low shelf, and cracked it open. "Eleven years?" "Thirteen." Marcus wrapped both hands around the glass when it came, steadying it. "You always could count." "It's the only thing Prague left me able to do." Silas said it flat, a stone dropped on the bar between them, and waited to see what it would break. Marcus turned the glass a quarter-turn, then another. The bubbles climbed and burst. "I got my file," he said at last. "Medical review board, the after-action, the debriefs. All of it. You have to be dying, these days, before they'll let you read your own life." The radio murmured. In the corner one of the football men laughed at something. Rory didn't move. "And?" Silas's voice could have carried drinks across a room or men across a border; it did neither now. It just sat there, waiting. "You told the board the route was your decision." Marcus's eyes came up. They were pale and wet and furious all at once. "The route through the Old Town, the one Klara took, the one that killed her and finished your knee. You told seven men in grey suits that it was your call. It was mine. I chose it. I told you it was clean because I wanted to believe it was clean, and when it wasn't, you stood up in that room and ate twenty-six years of it so my name would stay off the paper." "Files lie," Silas offered. "This one didn't." Marcus's voice cracked on the second word and he dragged the back of his wrist across his mouth. "I spent two decades thinking you hated me. I built a whole life on it. Divorced twice on it. Drank on it, then didn't drink on it. And the whole time you were—" His jaw worked. "Why?" "Because you had a family." "I had a wife who left and a son who doesn't call. You had a leg that never worked again. That's a poor trade, Si." "It's not a trade." Silas leaned forward, both hands flat on the bar, and for the first time since the man had walked in, he looked at him straight. "Klara was twenty-six. She had a daughter. Whatever we did to each other that winter, it's small change next to what we did to her, and the board couldn't give her back, so I gave them what I had. It was nothing. It was a knee and a career." He straightened. "I'd have given more." Marcus sat with that. The tremor in his hands had travelled up into his shoulders. "Six months," he said, to nobody, to the bottles. "They tell me six months, a year if I'm unlucky enough to want it. So I drove three hundred miles through this—" he gestured at the window, at the rain still needling the glass, "—to say a thing I've been rehearsing since Calais, and now I'm here I can't find the first word of it." "Then don't." "I owe you—" "You owe Klara. You owe her daughter. You owe me a chess game and an argument about whether the King's Gambit is dead, both of which you cheated me out of in '97." Silas turned, and Rory saw him reach not for the optics but for the bottle at the back of the top shelf, the one she'd never once seen poured. He set two glasses down and measured out two fingers each, unhurried, the ring clicking once against the neck of the bottle. "You don't drink it. I won't either. We'll let it go warm and pretend." Marcus stared at the glass. His hand came out, hovered, and for a moment — for the length of one held breath — the tremor in it stopped. "Her daughter," Marcus said. "Do you know—" "Anna." Silas put the cork back in the bottle. "She's a teacher. Leeds." Marcus put his face in his hands and Rory looked down into her pint, giving the man his privacy, and found she couldn't swallow past the thing that had risen in her own throat. Above the shelves, an old map of Bohemia hung in its frame, its edges brown, its rivers drawn in faded blue. It had been there two years. She'd never once asked about it. "Sit with me a while," Silas told his old friend, pulling a stool around to the near side of the bar for the first time in living memory. "We've got twenty-six years of quiet to break. We might as well start with the weather."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.977
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"warmth"
2"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1298
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount843
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Brewer1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Silas14
Rory8
Marcus10
Calais1
Bohemia1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Marcus"
5"Bohemia"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
globalScore0.67
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.77
wordCount1298
matches
0"not for the optics but for the bottle at the back of the top shelf, the one she'd n"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.08
std28.73
cv0.819
sampleLengths
072
116
241
311
478
562
640
71
89
91
1044
1126
1212
1345
1462
1511
1618
1717
1830
1946
2017
2124
2298
234
2458
255
2625
2784
2879
292
303
3198
3228
337
3413
3567
3644
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
51.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was watching"
2"was like watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences79
ratio0.063
matches
0"The man in the doorway was tall the way a burnt house is tall — all the structure there, none of the warmth."
1"Rory had seen him still before — the stillness of a man listening, weighing — but this was different."
2"\"And?\" Silas's voice could have carried drinks across a room or men across a border; it did neither now."
3"\"They tell me six months, a year if I'm unlucky enough to want it. So I drove three hundred miles through this—\" he gestured at the window, at the rain still needling the glass, \"—to say a thing I've been rehearsing since Calais, and now I'm here I can't find the first word of it.\""
4"His hand came out, hovered, and for a moment — for the length of one held breath — the tremor in it stopped."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount729
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.0205761316872428
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean16.43
std14.31
cv0.871
sampleLengths
040
132
216
325
416
511
625
729
824
923
105
1134
123
1319
1418
151
169
171
1829
1915
2020
216
2212
2313
2415
2517
2624
276
2814
2918
307
314
3216
332
3413
354
3630
378
385
398
4025
413
4211
433
4419
455
4613
4710
4875
494
87.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5316455696202531
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences54
matches
0"She hooked the bag over"
1"She slid the box across,"
2"His coat hung off him."
3"She'd lived above this bar"
4"She was watching him be"
5"He looked at the bottles"
6"he said at last"
7"It just sat there, waiting."
8"They were pale and wet"
9"His jaw worked"
10"he said, to nobody, to"
11"he gestured at the window,"
12"He set two glasses down"
13"His hand came out, hovered,"
14"It had been there two"
15"She'd never once asked about"
ratio0.296
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The rain had swept Brewer"
1"Rory came through the door"
2"Silas observed, without looking up"
3"She hooked the bag over"
4"She slid the box across,"
5"A Tuesday crowd: two men"
6"Rory had just got her"
7"The man in the doorway"
8"His coat hung off him."
9"Rain had flattened what hair"
10"Silas went still."
11"Rory had seen him still"
12"This was a man caught"
13"The man's voice had a"
14"Silas set the glass down"
15"Rory kept her eyes on"
16"She'd lived above this bar"
17"She was watching him be"
18"Marcus came to the bar"
19"He looked at the bottles"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rain had flattened what hair he had left, and he stood on the mat dripping, blinking at the room as though he'd walked out of one century and into the wrong end…"
1"Marcus put his face in his hands and Rory looked down into her pint, giving the man his privacy, and found she couldn't swallow past the thing that had risen in…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She hooked, its corner crushed"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.047
82.0437%