Run: 2026-09-23-01M37P4F4E4VSJJX09213N0029

Run Details

Duration:
59.9s
Cost:
$0.016904
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ladder down into the abandoned station ran forty feet, and Harlow Quinn counted every rung out of habit. Her torch beam carved through dark that smelled of rust, wet concrete, and something else — something sweeter, like flowers left too long in a vase. "Mind the third rung, Detective. It's got more flex than the rest." DS Iyer waited at the bottom, his high-vis jacket the only colour in the tunnel. Behind him, a forensic tech crouched beside a shape on the platform tiles. White suit. White lights on stands. And a body that made no sense. Quinn crossed the platform, her boots ringing on the tile. The victim lay on his back, arms at his sides, as though someone had arranged him. Mid-forties, heavy build, grey suit worth more than her monthly salary. His throat bore a wound that should have painted the tiles red. There wasn't a drop of blood anywhere. "Who found him?" "Network maintenance crew, quarter to six. They cut the padlock on the surface grate." Iyer flipped his notebook open. "Victim's one Dominic Fenwick. Hedge fund manager, Chelsea address. Wife reported him missing Tuesday night." "Tuesday." Quinn crouched beside the body, careful of the markers. "And it's Friday. So he's been dead, what, three days?" "Pathologist's estimate, yes." She held the back of her hand close to the corpse's face. The tech glanced at her, then away. The flesh had the grey-white look of meat left in a freezer, and a fine frost still clung to the collar of the suit. In June. "Anyone want to explain the frost?" Iyer shrugged. "Tunnels run cold. Drafts off the Northern line." "Not this cold. Not four days of London summer." Quinn rose and walked a slow circle around the body. "Wallet?" "Still in his pocket. Two hundred in cash, cards, a Rolex on the wrist." "So not robbery." She stopped at the victim's right hand. The fingers were curled, and wedged between the index and middle finger sat a disc the size of a pound coin, yellowed and porous. She leaned closer without touching. Bone. Carved bone, stamped with a symbol she'd seen once before, on a case file she'd been told to close and forget. "Anything else on him?" Iyer pulled an evidence bag from his kit. Inside sat a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris, its face etched with fine intersecting lines that formed no cardinal directions she recognised. The needle was stationary. "Found it in his trouser pocket. Before you ask — no, it doesn't work. Needle's dead. Probably a novelty piece." "Let me see that." She took the bag. The needle wasn't dead. It was straining — bent a few degrees off plumb, quivering against the glass like a dog on a leash. She turned the bag in her hand. The needle swung, corrected, and settled on the same heading: toward the bricked-up archway at the north end of the platform. "Detective?" "Who's the woman by the arch?" Quinn had spotted her earlier — a short figure in a wool coat, round glasses, a leather satchel clutched to her chest like a shield. She'd been hovering at the tape line for ten minutes, and the uniform on the gate had let her through. "That's the consultant. Museum sent her over when we flagged the symbols." Iyer's mouth thinned. "Kowalski. Research assistant, restricted archives. She's been useful, but she's a bit odd." Quinn crossed to the arch. Up close, the woman had freckles and red curls escaping in every direction, and she was staring at the brickwork with an expression Quinn had seen on witnesses before. Recognition. The kind people tried to hide. "You're Miss Kowalski." "Eva. Doctor, technically, but nobody at the Met reads past 'assistant.'" She tucked a curl behind her left ear. "You're Detective Quinn. They said you'd want the symbols explained." "Walk me through them." Eva led her to the chalk markings on the platform floor, ten metres from the body. A circle, broken in one arc. Symbols inside it — angular, dense, nothing like any alphabet Quinn knew. "First glance, this looks like a summoning circle. That's what your DS thought." Eva crouched, her glasses catching the forensic lights. "He's not wrong to think it. But look at the orientation of the strokes. Every one of these is a protective sigil. Wards. This isn't someone calling something into the circle." "It's someone keeping something out." "Or buying time against it." Eva stood and pointed to the break in the arc. "And see the smearing here? Chalk dragged outward. Someone drew this fast, then bolted through the gap. Sloppy work, terrified work, but real work. This is the genuine article, Detective. Not theatre." Quinn looked at the circle, then at the body, then down the platform to where the frost ended in a clean, straight line across the tiles. "Iyer." She raised her voice without turning. "Come look at the frost line. Tell me what you see." He trudged over, torch in hand. "Body's cold, so the ground around it's cold. Simple." "The line's straight. Drafts don't cut straight edges. And it runs perpendicular to the tunnel, not along it." She traced the air above the tiles. "Frost forms on the leading edge of something moving. This is a track, not a pool. Something came through here carrying a temperature, moving south to north, and it stopped exactly where the chalk circle is." "Or the body was dragged," Iyer offered. "Killer pulled him along, frost follows the drag path. There's scuffing on the tiles." "Show me the scuffing." He walked her three metres back down the platform. Faint abrasions on the tile, two parallel tracks. Quinn crouched and studied them, then looked up at the ceiling. "Heels would scuff. Drag marks from heels wander. These are parallel, even, and there's no scuffing on the ceiling of a tunnel he'd have been carried through for forty feet. He didn't come down the ladder like we did." She straightened. "And Dominic Fenwick is a heavy man. One killer didn't haul him down a maintenance shaft and across a platform without leaving a trail of sweat, fibres, and half the forensic evidence in London. Where's the second set of footprints in the dust?" Iyer's jaw worked. "The techs found one set of prints. His own." "One set." Quinn turned in a slow circle, torch sweeping the platform. "So he walked in here himself. Alive. In a £3,000 suit. Past three locked gates and a padlocked grate." She looked at Eva. "The bone token in his hand. You've seen that symbol before?" Eva's fingers tightened on the satchel strap. She tucked the same curl behind her ear again, though it hadn't moved. "There are collectors' markets that use tokens like that. Underground trade. Antiquities, forgeries, things that don't appear in customs manifests. The token's a pass. You don't get in without one." "In where?" "That's the part that's going to sound mad." "Miss Kowalski. Three years ago I watched a man walk into a locked room and not come out, and I was told I imagined it. Try me." Eva exhaled through her nose. Then she pointed at the bricked archway at the north end of the platform. "Markets like that don't stay put. They move. And they don't use doors you can see. The token gets you in. The compass—" she nodded at the evidence bag in Quinn's hand, "—that's a Veil Compass. It points to the nearest thin place. Threshold. Whatever you want to call it. And I'd bet my doctorate that needle is pointing at that wall." Quinn lifted the bag. The needle strained toward the archway, quivering, insistent. She walked toward the brickwork, and the needle held its heading. She stopped a metre from the wall. The compass wasn't the only thing pointing. The frost line ran straight to this arch. The chalk circle's broken arc faced it. And the brickwork itself — she ran her torch along the mortar — bore a hairline seam, too straight, too fresh, cutting through mortar that was a century old everywhere else. Behind it, when she pressed her ear close, the wall breathed a faint current of warm air, scented with that sweetness, like flowers in a vase, like a market stall. "Iyer." Her voice came out level. "Get the techs on this wall. And nobody cuts into it until I say so." "It's a wall, Detective. A hundred-year-old wall." "It's a door." She turned the compass over in her gloved hand, the verdigris rough under her fingers, the needle bent toward the brick like it had somewhere to be. "Dominic Fenwick walked in here with a pass and a compass, drew a circle of wards to protect himself, and something found him anyway. And whatever killed him took his blood with it when it left."
created_at"2026-09-23T17:48:36.901Z" 9/23/2026, 5:48:36 PM
model"aion-labs/aion-3.5-20260923"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1188
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time59843
tokens_prompt1112
tokens_completion2989
native_tokens_prompt1019
native_tokens_completion2690
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning827
native_tokens_cached1019
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.01690425
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.20.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1790185716-TESe47ra2T7u09QPjbQc"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1790185716-A8udbSljWlvqALFiEcUc"
upstream_id"b0833dd6ba744f93bd7143faaf687be9"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"09b1fc56-3888-42bd-b7a0-926851c7f9d6"
id"b0833dd6ba744f93bd7143faaf687be9"
is_byokfalse
latency1187
model_permaslug"aion-labs/aion-3.5-20260923"
provider_name"AionLabs"
status200
total_cost0.01690425
cache_discount0.00229275
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"AionLabs"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.642
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount829
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
Iyer7
June1
Eva6
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Iyer"
3"Eva"
places
0"June"
globalScore0.716
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1476
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean28.38
std22.45
cv0.791
sampleLengths
045
112
241
349
47
53
634
720
83
945
106
1110
1220
1314
1461
154
1637
1720
184
1956
201
2151
2228
2341
243
2529
264
2734
2852
295
3047
3126
3218
3315
3461
3521
364
3728
3884
3912
4046
4120
4230
432
448
4527
4681
4730
4883
4921
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"were curled"
1"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was straining "
1"was staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences109
ratio0.055
matches
0"Her torch beam carved through dark that smelled of rust, wet concrete, and something else — something sweeter, like flowers left too long in a vase."
1"It was straining — bent a few degrees off plumb, quivering against the glass like a dog on a leash."
2"\"Who's the woman by the arch?\" Quinn had spotted her earlier — a short figure in a wool coat, round glasses, a leather satchel clutched to her chest like a shield."
3"Symbols inside it — angular, dense, nothing like any alphabet Quinn knew."
4"\"Markets like that don't stay put. They move. And they don't use doors you can see. The token gets you in. The compass—\" she nodded at the evidence bag in Quinn's hand, \"—that's a Veil Compass. It points to the nearest thin place. Threshold. Whatever you want to call it. And I'd bet my doctorate that needle is pointing at that wall.\""
5"And the brickwork itself — she ran her torch along the mortar — bore a hairline seam, too straight, too fresh, cutting through mortar that was a century old everywhere else."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount740
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.01891891891891892
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002702702702702703
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.54
std10.76
cv0.794
sampleLengths
019
126
212
315
413
52
64
77
810
916
1011
1112
127
133
1419
1515
1610
1710
183
1912
207
2124
222
236
242
258
2619
271
2814
2910
3024
315
321
3321
344
358
3625
374
3820
394
404
414
4220
437
4421
451
4631
4720
4815
4913
83.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5321100917431193
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners58
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then she pointed at the"
ratio0.015
94.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her torch beam carved through"
1"His throat bore a wound"
2"She held the back of"
3"She stopped at the victim's"
4"She leaned closer without touching."
5"She took the bag."
6"It was straining — bent"
7"She turned the bag in"
8"She'd been hovering at the"
9"She tucked a curl behind"
10"She raised her voice without"
11"He trudged over, torch in"
12"She traced the air above"
13"He walked her three metres"
14"She looked at Eva"
15"She tucked the same curl"
16"she nodded at the evidence"
17"She walked toward the brickwork,"
18"She stopped a metre from"
19"Her voice came out level"
ratio0.313
49.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences67
matches
0"The ladder down into the"
1"Her torch beam carved through"
2"DS Iyer waited at the"
3"Quinn crossed the platform, her"
4"The victim lay on his"
5"His throat bore a wound"
6"Iyer flipped his notebook open"
7"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
8"She held the back of"
9"The tech glanced at her,"
10"The flesh had the grey-white"
11"Quinn rose and walked a"
12"She stopped at the victim's"
13"The fingers were curled, and"
14"She leaned closer without touching."
15"Iyer pulled an evidence bag"
16"The needle was stationary."
17"She took the bag."
18"The needle wasn't dead."
19"It was straining — bent"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The victim lay on his back, arms at his sides, as though someone had arranged him."
1"Inside sat a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris, its face etched with fine intersecting lines that formed no cardinal directions she recognise…"
2"And the brickwork itself — she ran her torch along the mortar — bore a hairline seam, too straight, too fresh, cutting through mortar that was a century old eve…"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva crouched, her glasses catching the forensic lights"
1"Quinn turned, torch sweeping the platform"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3124%