| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1315 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1315 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "absolutely" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 42 | | totalWords | 1333 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove remembers what was taken. Come alone. Come before the frost takes the last of the flowers. — A friend." | | 1 | "quiet" | | 2 | "seen" | | 3 | "telling" | | 4 | "you're overreacting, Rory, nobody's there, you're imagining things, you always imagine things" | | 5 | "show yourself" | | 6 | "come alone" | | 7 | "to" | | 8 | "unfolded" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1187 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Hammersmith | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | June | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Hammersmith" | | 1 | "Isabella" | | 2 | "Plantation" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1333 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 30.3 | | std | 20.26 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 28 |
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| 91.90% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "was taken" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was horrified" |
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| 58.16% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was stepping" | | 2 | "was slamming" | | 3 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "— A friend.*" | | 1 | "She'd taken to wearing it under her jumper ever since the thing had started warming up on its own — a faint, rhythmic heat like a sleeping animal curled against her skin." | | 2 | "The gemstone pulsed — a slow, deep crimson beat, then another, quicker now, like something waking up." | | 3 | "Evan's voice slithered up from the old dark place in her memory — *you're overreacting, Rory, nobody's there, you're imagining things, you always imagine things* — and she ground it down under her heel the way she'd learned to, and she made her feet move." | | 4 | "Not warmed — vanished, like a coat lifted off her shoulders." | | 5 | "The voice had come from behind the farthest stone — a woman's voice, low and pleasant, and it had known her name." | | 6 | "Not warm — hot, hot enough that she hissed and pulled it out of her collar, and the gemstone was glowing through her fingers, its crimson light spilling between them like she'd cupped a coal." | | 7 | "Then, from the darkness between two stones — a darkness deeper than any moonlit shadow had a right to be — something breathed in." | | 8 | "It *unfolded*, joint after joint after joint, more joints than anything living should own, and it stood half-in-shadow with its head — if the smooth pale oval atop it was a head — tilted at an angle that made her stomach drop through the floor of her." | | 9 | "\"Little Carter,\" it said, in the pleasant woman's voice, in a dozen other voices layered beneath it, hers among them — her own voice, saying her own name, from somewhere deep inside its chest." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1161 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, wet, appreciative breath." |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02756244616709733 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0017226528854435831 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 11.49 | | std | 11.08 | | cv | 0.965 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 56.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3879310344827586 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a slip of cream" | | 1 | "Just trees, and the trees," | | 2 | "Somewhere, faint and impossible, she" | | 3 | "Then, from her right this" | | 4 | "Then, from the darkness between" |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 97.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She climbed the railing where" | | 1 | "she murmured to the empty" | | 2 | "She'd taken to wearing it" | | 3 | "Her breath hung in front" | | 4 | "Her own footsteps had gone" | | 5 | "she said, and her voice" | | 6 | "She rounded a gnarled oak" | | 7 | "She checked over her shoulder." | | 8 | "she told the flowers" | | 9 | "She froze, one hand pressed" | | 10 | "Her head snapped toward the" | | 11 | "She turned a slow circle," | | 12 | "She made herself breathe." | | 13 | "She paused at the threshold." | | 14 | "She stepped through." | | 15 | "Her phone was dead in" | | 16 | "She'd charged it on the" | | 17 | "Her whole body locked." | | 18 | "Her voice cracked on it" | | 19 | "She cleared her throat." |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 96.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The park gates had been" | | 1 | "Rory had read it eleven" | | 2 | "— A friend.*" | | 3 | "She climbed the railing where" | | 4 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 5 | "she murmured to the empty" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant hung cold" | | 7 | "She'd taken to wearing it" | | 8 | "Tonight it lay still." | | 9 | "That was something." | | 10 | "That meant she was walking" | | 11 | "The grass gave way to" | | 12 | "Her breath hung in front" | | 13 | "December had stripped the branches" | | 14 | "That was the first wrong" | | 15 | "Her own footsteps had gone" | | 16 | "she said, and her voice" | | 17 | "The second wrong thing was" | | 18 | "Honey and cut grass, thick" | | 19 | "She rounded a gnarled oak" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it breathed around her," | | 1 | "Because the note had said" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a slip of cream paper that had been waiting under her door that morning, and a small drawing of an oak leaf pressed beneath the wax seal." | | 1 | "Every nerve in her body screamed at her to, but the note had said *come alone*, and the pendant had dragged her here glowing like a lit fuse, and she was so tir…" | | 2 | "It *unfolded*, joint after joint after joint, more joints than anything living should own, and it stood half-in-shadow with its head — if the smooth pale oval a…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, and her heart was slamming now, her hands cold despite the summer warmth" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |