Run: 2026-09-23-01M37P4J8RR6MGZHP13G83N4FW

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Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.012993
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The park gates had been locked for hours, but the note in her pocket said the stones would open for her. Rory had read it eleven times on the night bus from Hammersmith, until the words had worn smooth as river pebbles: *The Grove remembers what was taken. Come alone. Come before the frost takes the last of the flowers. — A friend.* No signature. No return address. Just a slip of cream paper that had been waiting under her door that morning, and a small drawing of an oak leaf pressed beneath the wax seal. She climbed the railing where the fence sagged behind the Isabella Plantation, dropped into the wet grass, and stood listening to the dark. Richmond Park at night was a different animal than the one she cycled through on her deliveries. By day it was families and deer and ice cream vans. Now it breathed around her, vast and unlit, the city glow swallowed by the treeline. "Right," she murmured to the empty air, because silence that thick needed puncturing. "Stones. Find the stones." The Heartstone pendant hung cold against her sternum. She'd taken to wearing it under her jumper ever since the thing had started warming up on its own — a faint, rhythmic heat like a sleeping animal curled against her skin. Tonight it lay still. That was something. That meant she was walking toward nothing worse than a strange note in a dark park. She walked. The grass gave way to bracken, then to a path that wasn't on any map she'd ever seen, bordered by oaks older than the city itself. Her breath hung in front of her face. December had stripped the branches bare, and yet, the further she walked, the more the ground beneath her feet softened and greened, until she was stepping on moss so thick it swallowed the sound of her boots. That was the first wrong thing. Not the moss. The *quiet*. No cars, no planes, no distant hum of London. Her own footsteps had gone missing. She stopped. Lifted one boot. Set it down again. Nothing. "Okay," she said, and her voice came out flattened, like she'd spoken into a pillow. "Okay, that's — that's new." The second wrong thing was the smell. Honey and cut grass, thick as June, in air cold enough to sting her lungs. She rounded a gnarled oak and stopped dead. The standing stones rose out of the clearing ahead, seven of them, oak-dark and rough, arranged in a loose crescent. And between them, carpeting the whole grove in the dead of winter, wildflowers. White ones, blue ones, tiny gold ones she had no names for, all nodding gently in a wind she couldn't feel. She checked over her shoulder. Behind her, the path was gone. Just trees, and the trees, and darkness between the trees. "Nope," she told the flowers. "Absolutely not. This is exactly the sort of thing that gets people in horror films, and I have *seen* horror films, I know how this goes —" The pendant flared hot against her chest. She froze, one hand pressed over her jumper. The gemstone pulsed — a slow, deep crimson beat, then another, quicker now, like something waking up. Like something with a pulse of its own. "That's a Hel portal," she whispered. "That's a Hel portal, you stupid glowing rock, that's what you do, you're *telling* me there's a portal here, which means —" A flower stem snapped somewhere to her left. Her head snapped toward the sound. Nothing. Flowers, stones, moonlight pooling in the clearing like spilt milk. She turned a slow circle, and the turning helped nothing, because the grove was round, and every direction looked the same, and the darkness under the stones was deep enough to hide anything at all. She made herself breathe. In through the nose. Out through the mouth. Evan's voice slithered up from the old dark place in her memory — *you're overreacting, Rory, nobody's there, you're imagining things, you always imagine things* — and she ground it down under her heel the way she'd learned to, and she made her feet move. Toward the stones. Because the note had said the Grove remembered, and because whoever had left the pendant under her door two months ago had known things they shouldn't, and because some stubborn, furious part of her was done with doors that closed and answers she wasn't given. The gap between the two nearest stones was wide enough to walk through. She paused at the threshold. The flowers inside the crescent leaned toward her, all of them, in unison, like a field of small faces turning to watch. "Right," she breathed. "Good evening to you too." She stepped through. The cold vanished. Not warmed — vanished, like a coat lifted off her shoulders. The grove inside the stones was summer-warm and smelled of honey and rain, and the moon overhead was wrong, too large, too close, its craters plain as a thumbprint. Somewhere, faint and impossible, she could hear a river. Richmond Park had no rivers. Her phone was dead in her pocket. She'd charged it on the bus. "Rory." Her whole body locked. The voice had come from behind the farthest stone — a woman's voice, low and pleasant, and it had known her name. Not Aurora. Rory. The name only her friends used. "Hello?" Her voice cracked on it. She cleared her throat. "Hello? Who's there? You left the note — is this you?" Silence. Then, from her right this time, closer, the same voice, gentle as a mother's: "Rory." She spun. Nothing. Flowers. Stones. The huge patient moon. "You're moving," she said, and her heart was slamming now, her hands cold despite the summer warmth. "You're moving around me. That's — fine. That's fine, I can — I'm going to stand very still, and you're going to stop being a coward and *show yourself*." The pendant burned. Not warm — hot, hot enough that she hissed and pulled it out of her collar, and the gemstone was glowing through her fingers, its crimson light spilling between them like she'd cupped a coal. It pulsed faster. Faster. A heartbeat racing toward something. The flowers had gone still. Every last one of them. The wind she'd never felt had stopped pretending to exist, and the grove hung in a silence so complete she could hear the blood in her own ears. Then, from the darkness between two stones — a darkness deeper than any moonlit shadow had a right to be — something breathed in. A long, wet, appreciative breath. The sound of something savouring air it had waited a long time to taste. Rory didn't run. Every nerve in her body screamed at her to, but the note had said *come alone*, and the pendant had dragged her here glowing like a lit fuse, and she was so tired of being the one things happened *to*. She closed her fist around the burning gem and held her ground. "I know you're there," she called, and was horrified to hear how steady her voice came out. "I don't know what you want, but this was an invitation, so — so let's have it." The darkness between the stones unfolded. It didn't step out. It *unfolded*, joint after joint after joint, more joints than anything living should own, and it stood half-in-shadow with its head — if the smooth pale oval atop it was a head — tilted at an angle that made her stomach drop through the floor of her. "Little Carter," it said, in the pleasant woman's voice, in a dozen other voices layered beneath it, hers among them — her own voice, saying her own name, from somewhere deep inside its chest. "You brought my heart back to me." The pendant flared white-hot in her fist, and Rory understood, in one cold clean flash, that the note and the gift had never come from the same hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"rhythmic"
2"footsteps"
3"absolutely"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"charged"
7"warmth"
8"racing"
9"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"was horrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords42
totalWords1333
ratio0.032
matches
0"The Grove remembers what was taken. Come alone. Come before the frost takes the last of the flowers. — A friend."
1"quiet"
2"seen"
3"telling"
4"you're overreacting, Rory, nobody's there, you're imagining things, you always imagine things"
5"show yourself"
6"come alone"
7"to"
8"unfolded"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1187
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Hammersmith1
Grove2
Isabella1
Plantation1
Park2
Heartstone1
London1
June1
Rory5
Aurora1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
places
0"Hammersmith"
1"Isabella"
2"Plantation"
3"Park"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1333
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean30.3
std20.26
cv0.669
sampleLengths
063
133
266
317
463
52
671
726
89
91
1020
1130
1254
1321
1432
157
1633
1728
188
1952
2057
2148
2240
238
243
2557
2613
271
2835
2921
3015
311
329
3346
3447
3538
3624
3719
3855
3934
406
4151
4241
4328
91.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"been locked"
1"was taken"
2"was gone"
3"was horrified"
58.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was walking"
1"was stepping"
2"was slamming"
3"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences116
ratio0.086
matches
0"— A friend.*"
1"She'd taken to wearing it under her jumper ever since the thing had started warming up on its own — a faint, rhythmic heat like a sleeping animal curled against her skin."
2"The gemstone pulsed — a slow, deep crimson beat, then another, quicker now, like something waking up."
3"Evan's voice slithered up from the old dark place in her memory — *you're overreacting, Rory, nobody's there, you're imagining things, you always imagine things* — and she ground it down under her heel the way she'd learned to, and she made her feet move."
4"Not warmed — vanished, like a coat lifted off her shoulders."
5"The voice had come from behind the farthest stone — a woman's voice, low and pleasant, and it had known her name."
6"Not warm — hot, hot enough that she hissed and pulled it out of her collar, and the gemstone was glowing through her fingers, its crimson light spilling between them like she'd cupped a coal."
7"Then, from the darkness between two stones — a darkness deeper than any moonlit shadow had a right to be — something breathed in."
8"It *unfolded*, joint after joint after joint, more joints than anything living should own, and it stood half-in-shadow with its head — if the smooth pale oval atop it was a head — tilted at an angle that made her stomach drop through the floor of her."
9"\"Little Carter,\" it said, in the pleasant woman's voice, in a dozen other voices layered beneath it, hers among them — her own voice, saying her own name, from somewhere deep inside its chest."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, wet, appreciative breath."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02756244616709733
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017226528854435831
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.49
std11.08
cv0.965
sampleLengths
021
127
22
310
43
52
63
728
823
917
1011
1115
1213
134
148
1532
164
173
1816
192
2026
218
2237
236
243
252
269
276
282
293
304
311
3215
335
347
3515
368
3720
3813
3921
405
416
4210
435
4427
457
468
4717
488
496
56.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3879310344827586
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences88
matches
0"Just a slip of cream"
1"Just trees, and the trees,"
2"Somewhere, faint and impossible, she"
3"Then, from her right this"
4"Then, from the darkness between"
ratio0.057
97.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences88
matches
0"She climbed the railing where"
1"she murmured to the empty"
2"She'd taken to wearing it"
3"Her breath hung in front"
4"Her own footsteps had gone"
5"she said, and her voice"
6"She rounded a gnarled oak"
7"She checked over her shoulder."
8"she told the flowers"
9"She froze, one hand pressed"
10"Her head snapped toward the"
11"She turned a slow circle,"
12"She made herself breathe."
13"She paused at the threshold."
14"She stepped through."
15"Her phone was dead in"
16"She'd charged it on the"
17"Her whole body locked."
18"Her voice cracked on it"
19"She cleared her throat."
ratio0.307
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences88
matches
0"The park gates had been"
1"Rory had read it eleven"
2"— A friend.*"
3"She climbed the railing where"
4"Richmond Park at night was"
5"she murmured to the empty"
6"The Heartstone pendant hung cold"
7"She'd taken to wearing it"
8"Tonight it lay still."
9"That was something."
10"That meant she was walking"
11"The grass gave way to"
12"Her breath hung in front"
13"December had stripped the branches"
14"That was the first wrong"
15"Her own footsteps had gone"
16"she said, and her voice"
17"The second wrong thing was"
18"Honey and cut grass, thick"
19"She rounded a gnarled oak"
ratio0.727
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now it breathed around her,"
1"Because the note had said"
ratio0.023
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Just a slip of cream paper that had been waiting under her door that morning, and a small drawing of an oak leaf pressed beneath the wax seal."
1"Every nerve in her body screamed at her to, but the note had said *come alone*, and the pendant had dragged her here glowing like a lit fuse, and she was so tir…"
2"It *unfolded*, joint after joint after joint, more joints than anything living should own, and it stood half-in-shadow with its head — if the smooth pale oval a…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, and her heart was slamming now, her hands cold despite the summer warmth"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.3
86.3443%